Heres my story. Hope you like it:
Im a normal 11 year old girl. At least thats what I tell myself. ADHD doesn't help much. But, anyway, how about I start with the day I almost died.
So far, my day had been pretty good. I was one of the better students, even with my problems. The teachers knew me, so they knew how to teach me. As for home, I had a mom and dad with two sisters and dog. My life was, well, perfect. I had love, food and and roof over my head. So, I never thought anything could completely mess me up. Wrong.
It started when I was walking home from school. My neighbors live behinds too, so I have to walk through their yard to get to mine. I hated doing that though. Everytime I do, a shiver goes down my back like someone has their eyes glued to me. A creepy feeling of being watched slithers through my mind. Nothing happened ever though. At least until that day.
I heard a crunch. Walking faster, I convinced myself that it was just my imagination. "RAWR!!!!!!" A scream/ growl stopped me dead in my tracks, sending an electric shock down my spine.
The monster behind me was a manish-bull. Waist down, bull. Waist up, ugly, hairy man. The first thought that entered my mind: Wow. He needs a razor.
After I realized he was probably going to kill me, I tried, but failed, to muster up the courage to run, scream, anything. Dropping my bag, I forced my legs to sprint towards my nearby house. "OW!" I collasped in pain, as I feel searing pain down the back of my shin. Looking up, I realized that the monster had made a grab for me, but only managed to cut at least three layers deep. Now, for a person who thinks papercuts hurt, I was in some serious pain. The clawed hand reached out again, and manganed to grabbed me around my waist, crushing my ribs. My screams of protest were muffled, and I soon lost conscience.
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My First Story....Plz read livelyjade1 and Amberproud
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NAME:NICOLE CAHILL
AGE:12
WRITING PERSONALITY:MYSTERY
STORYS/POV:HAVENT MADE 1 YET.YET (HAVE MADE 1 BUT HASNT SUBMITTED YET)
AGE:12
WRITING PERSONALITY:MYSTERY
STORYS/POV:HAVENT MADE 1 YET.YET (HAVE MADE 1 BUT HASNT SUBMITTED YET)
I am awesome
I am unique
I am different
I am ME-Me and my friend
If people forgave Ian why can't they forgive Sinead?
Writer From the Future, Reader From the Past!
Posted at: 10:34 am on February 5, 2012
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I woke with Alia's hand shaking my shoulder. I groggily (sp?) sat up. "What?" I whined. Oh right. The Camp. Pulling the quilt off of me, I stuck my feet into my converse. "C'mon. Nico's waiting." Alia opened the door of my room, allowing fresh, clean air to wash over me. I sighed and stepped out. Nico came out of the shadows of the cabin, and started going down the hill.
********
An hour past before Alia allowed a breakfast break. We ate our egg and cheese on wheat in silence. I didn't mind. The sandwich was probably the best thing I've had since I signed my death warrant. I, Anna, agree to die by the hands of being a demigod... Finally, Nico ended the no-talking mode. "Time?" "About 7:30 am" said a strange voice. Alia instinctively balled her fists and turned around. Nico unsheathed his sword, grinding his perfect teeth. My hand went to my dagger's hilt. A jingle sounded when I moved my left hand. What in the world...? Nico noticed me. He slapped his wrist, silently explaining what to do. I did what he signaled and out came a silver shield, the head of Medusa in the middle. "Who-" Alia's confused voice brought me back. Before us stood an 18-year-old boy, dressed in tan shorts and a sky blue shirt. "Sayter from camp. Mr. D. predicted you were dead, but when he found out he was wrong, he sent me. Naturally." Nico rolled his eyes. "Alia, Anna, meet Ty. The stupidest excuse for a sayter ever." Ty held up his hands. "Hey, let the sayter be. Besides. You need my help. Sorta." Alia balled her hands again. "We don’t need anyone’s help. Camp is only 5 miles away, and there is such a thing as a cab." Ty smirked and climbed up a ladder on a nearby apartment building, with natural human strength. In a moment’s notice, he was gone. Nico clapped his hands and rubbed them together. "Well. Shall we call a taxi?"
********
Only 15 minutes later, the car stopped in front of a forest. Alia handed the driver 20 bucks then scooted out of the leather- seated car. "You sure you want off? Nothings here." I nodded. When we were all out and the cab had sped away, I grumbled. "Great. Another hill." Nico smiled and took the lead as we climbed. In no time Alia, Nico and I were standing beside a tree on the tip of the hill. I took a deep breath and stepped forward into the boundaries of Camp Half-Blood. I thought I had seen it all until a man, no horse, no man-horse, came up to me and smiled warmly. It was too much. Alia, Nico, and the messed-up man went black.
There. How was that?
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Posted at: 3:02 pm on February 5, 2012
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Name: EmilyMayer
Age: 12
Personality: shy, nice, vicious to enemies, ect.
Apperence: long wavy brown hair, brown eyes, freckles, braces, glasses
Godly Parent: Athena (Is it Roman?)
Weapon: dagger, sword, bow/arrows
Friend or Enemy: don't care
Age: 12
Personality: shy, nice, vicious to enemies, ect.
Apperence: long wavy brown hair, brown eyes, freckles, braces, glasses
Godly Parent: Athena (Is it Roman?)
Weapon: dagger, sword, bow/arrows
Friend or Enemy: don't care
The thief comes only tostealandkillanddestroy;
I have come that they may havelife,and have it to thefull
~John10:10
Posted at: 3:51 pm on February 5, 2012
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no its not a roman thing. I want it to be like without the romans. Before all that. And guys! Was it really that good?!? THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!!
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Posted at: 5:19 pm on February 6, 2012
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Sorry I wasnt able to post but I will post as soon as I can. Also I actually can't post today (sorry only have 30 min. on computer) I will HAVE to post on friday I am about to post on 'Daughter of the Sea God'.
Jacqueline
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I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 7:14 pm on February 6, 2012
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S'ok Jackie. Looking foward to it!
Emily, do you want to be like a Clarrise for me? And its weird cause I know a girl named Grace who has an older sister with your exact name....
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Posted at: 3:33 pm on February 7, 2012
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I really like your story. Could I be in it?
Name: Brie Anne
Age: 13
Personality: Smart, funny, make fun of my name well the person didn't make it,fun to be around, athelic,crazy, really hard worker, talks a lot once you get her goin', really strong, don't ever make her mad though she has a very nasty temper, never to far from trouble( it follows her wherever she goes), always wins at everything no matter what, hates bullies, loves to read, really hyper(don't ever give her suger or caffine it makes her go nutzo!!!), great swordfighter, great at chess, great swimmer (fastest swimmer on the high school team), don't ever question her ideas or plans no matter how crazy they always seem to work(somehow), loves the water, hates when people make fun of the way she walks & talks, talks very country(tries to hide it though REALLy shows when's mad), hates ballet & ballerinas, will do almost anything to win(she won't cheat ever), she almost always knows what the enemy will do before it happens, she hates the colr pink, loves to write(wants to be an author someday), and she loves the colors blue and geen (all shades).
Apperence: 5 foot 4, Short dark almost black hair w/ blue highlights, sea blue eyes, always in black converse hi-tops, dresses really causal, wears contacts,never seen without her lime green bandana being worn in some way, skinny but not too skinny, sorta pale but never really tans or gets sunburnt, sorta pretty but she doesn't see it, always walks on her tiptoes, and hardly ever wears any jewlery except for a leather neaklace her dad gave her that has a small silver circle and all of her 9 camp beads.
Godly Parent: Posedeon
Weapons: a sword and knife given to her by her father for her thirteenth birthbay, both are a light blue color instead of the regular sliver color
Friend or Enemy: Friend, unless you make me mad
Other: Great at tricking people in to doing what she wants them to do, can breathe underwater, and can control water
Please, let me be in your story, but if you can't, I understand.
Name: Brie Anne
Age: 13
Personality: Smart, funny, make fun of my name well the person didn't make it,fun to be around, athelic,crazy, really hard worker, talks a lot once you get her goin', really strong, don't ever make her mad though she has a very nasty temper, never to far from trouble( it follows her wherever she goes), always wins at everything no matter what, hates bullies, loves to read, really hyper(don't ever give her suger or caffine it makes her go nutzo!!!), great swordfighter, great at chess, great swimmer (fastest swimmer on the high school team), don't ever question her ideas or plans no matter how crazy they always seem to work(somehow), loves the water, hates when people make fun of the way she walks & talks, talks very country(tries to hide it though REALLy shows when's mad), hates ballet & ballerinas, will do almost anything to win(she won't cheat ever), she almost always knows what the enemy will do before it happens, she hates the colr pink, loves to write(wants to be an author someday), and she loves the colors blue and geen (all shades).
Apperence: 5 foot 4, Short dark almost black hair w/ blue highlights, sea blue eyes, always in black converse hi-tops, dresses really causal, wears contacts,never seen without her lime green bandana being worn in some way, skinny but not too skinny, sorta pale but never really tans or gets sunburnt, sorta pretty but she doesn't see it, always walks on her tiptoes, and hardly ever wears any jewlery except for a leather neaklace her dad gave her that has a small silver circle and all of her 9 camp beads.
Godly Parent: Posedeon
Weapons: a sword and knife given to her by her father for her thirteenth birthbay, both are a light blue color instead of the regular sliver color
Friend or Enemy: Friend, unless you make me mad
Other: Great at tricking people in to doing what she wants them to do, can breathe underwater, and can control water
Please, let me be in your story, but if you can't, I understand.
Only boring people get bored for more than 10 minutes-Myself
The Vespers stand no chance against the UNITED Cahills, but only the UNITED family.
Brie Anne, 13
Posted at: 9:10 pm on February 7, 2012
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Sure, I can be like Clarisse.
-Emily
-Emily
The thief comes only tostealandkillanddestroy;
I have come that they may havelife,and have it to thefull
~John10:10
Posted at: 2:56 pm on February 8, 2012
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Brie, youre in! Ok, so people who post their application after this post, im sorry, but you aren't in. There are 6 people who signed up, and thats enough. Brie Anne is the last person. Sorry. :/ You can just read the story and post comments. Hope you'll still stay.
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Posted at: 4:50 pm on February 8, 2012
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Also, about the weird name thingy- Emily's a popular name. In 2nd grade there were THREE Emily's (including me) in my class. Then one of the Emily's moved in 3rd grade.
-Emily
-Emily
The thief comes only tostealandkillanddestroy;
I have come that they may havelife,and have it to thefull
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Posted at: 5:00 pm on February 8, 2012
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Emily, That is weird!
Everyone, (mostly Jackie) Im leaving for the weekend on a church retreat, and this is the last time I'm going to be able to post on this. It's new for me, since I go on every single day.. But in my next post, Im going to post the whole story from the very beginning.
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Posted at: 3:07 pm on February 9, 2012
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Here it is:
Anna: I’m a normal 11 year old girl. At least that’s what I tell myself. ADHD doesn't help much. But, anyway, how about I start with the day I almost died.
So far, my day had been pretty good. I was one of the better students, even with my problems. The teachers knew me, so they knew how to teach me. As for home, I had a mom and dad with two sisters and dog. My life was, well, perfect. I had love, food and roof over my head. So, I never thought anything could completely mess me up. Wrong.
It started when I was walking home from school. My neighbors live behinds too, so I have to walk through their yard to get to mine. I hated doing that though. Every time I do, a shiver goes down my back like someone has their eyes glued to me. A creepy feeling of being watched slithers through my mind. Nothing happened ever though. At least until that day.
I heard a crunch. Walking faster, I convinced myself that it was just my imagination. "RAWR!!!!!!" A scream/ growl stopped me dead in my tracks, sending an electric shock down my spine.
The monster behind me was a mannish-bull. Waist down, bull. Waist up, ugly, hairy man. The first thought that entered my mind: Wow. He needs a razor.
After I realized he was probably going to kill me, I tried, but failed, to muster up the courage to run, scream, anything. Dropping my bag, I forced my legs to sprint towards my nearby house. "OW!" I collapsed in pain, as I feel searing pain down the back of my shin. Looking up, I realized that the monster had made a grab for me, but only managed to cut at least three layers deep. Now, for a person who thinks paper cuts hurt, I was in some serious pain. The clawed hand reached out again, and managed to grab me around my waist, crushing my ribs. My screams of protest were muffled, and I soon lost conscience. I awoke in a cabin much larger than an average house. I tried to sit up, but my head felt like hammers had taken revenge. "Where- Where am I?" My voice sounded raspy, and my throat burned. I was about to yell hello! but a hand flew over my mouth and a voice hissed, "Shh!"
"MMM!!!!!!" I struggled to protest through a soft, but firm, hand. "Please. Be quiet. Nobody knows you're here yet, and I'd like to keep it that way." A kind voice said, coming from right behind me. Judging by the pitch, the speaker was a girl, maybe around 15, making her three years older than me. I tried to say, "Who are you? Why not?", but it came out more like, "Mm a you? Mmm unt?" For an answer, the hand lifted.
Quickly, I twisted my body so I could see the person behind me. A girl with luscious brown hair stared at me with hazel eyes, filled with concern and fear? She stammered, "I'm not going to h-hurt you. B-but we are not safe. We came across you in front of my mom's house. When he comes back, all of us will go to the camp and only there will we be safe. Okay?"
Pretty much all I got out of that was that there was another person. A boy. I decided I'd find that out later. Instead i asked the simple question. "So, where am I? The last thing I remember is... is-" My memory was cut ort by a knock on the door short by a knock on a door. I was right. Mystery-man was a boy. Judging by the young look in his eyes, and his height, I guessed he was around 13. Only one year older than me. His shaggy black hair covered most of his chocolate brown eyes. He tucked his hands uncomfortably into his aviator jacket. "Nico. Is the path clear? We should leave A.S.A.P. sadly, she doesn't seem to get we have all formed a- a... friendship." My 'friend' struggled with the last word.
Uncomfortable, I turned away. "Okay. Tell me right now. Who are you, and why are we here? I want to go home to my parents and family!" I tried not to think of the night when my mom had sent me away, telling me to find the teacher. Whatever that means Parents?" Nico asked curiously and a little wistfully. After I was healed enough to walk, the girl took me on a walk, to survey the area for.... don't call me crazy, but monsters. "Um, I don't believe I know your name." I said. "Alia." she answered. "Yours?" I sighed. "Annabelle. But call me Anna. Unless you like fists in your face." I said solemnly. Her expression told me she actually that I was serious. I laughed for real, the first time in months since... since... I couldn't even think about it. My smile retreated of my face in seconds. "I'm kidding. Gosh. But don't call me Annabelle." I lifted my hands, showing my innocence. Alia nodded and gave me a dry smile. "Right. I knew that." "Both a mom and a dad? How strange. Normally, a half-blood has only one parent. A mom or a dad." Nico looked at the girl nervously. "What- what if she isn't the half-blood we were assigned to find?"
Assigned? Alia: I could totally see her being his daughter, I thought as I brought Anna into the ‘survey’ arena. I really wished Nico’s father wasn’t the lord of the dead, one of the Big Three, it REALLY irritated me! Can you blame me! I didn’t want to go to the arena again.
Anyway, Anna asked me, “So . . . how is this supposed to work?”
“It’s easy, everyday me or Nico will bring you to the arena to test your monster fighting skills, every day the monster will be harder to fight. Today we will start with easiest monster to fight, the monster is the dracaena,’ I announced. “WHAT!” Anna exclaimed.
“I didn’t say it was the nicest, I said it was the easiest.”
I whistled and quickly going out the entranced closed the door and saw her father, the first god I ever saw was one of the most powerful gods on Olympus. Anna: He was dressed in a navy blue, button down shirt, with a white tie. Cream colored pants and brown loafer covered the bottom part of his muscled body. The man stroked his medium-length silver white beard, staring me down. I shifted uncomfortably with the attention. Alia looked surprised, and cursed herself in some strange language I didn’t recognize. I caught one word, though. Immortals.
"My Lord." Alia said, bowing. he nodded at her, not letting his eyes leave mine. "Such beautiful eyes. Child, do you know who I am?" I stared straight into his eyes, and I realized I was looking into my eyes. The same electric blue, with a black outline. I didn't believe it, but, "Dad?"
The man almost smiled. "I see the brains of your mother came to you. Sadly, I cannot take part in that. I seem to of given you, ah, the worst part." Alia cut in. "Sir, we were just about to test her for monster training. She needs training." Dad looked at the caged monster, only a few yards away. "Too easy. A child of mine needs a challenge." He snapped his fingers and a large, blue monster appeared. Alia made a squeaking sound. “Lord Zeus, she is too young and inexperienced! It will kill her!" Zeus didn't reply and we realized that he had left. "Some dad." I grumbled. Stalking towards the monster, I decided that I was going to prove to someone that I wasn't weak. I was STRONG. The monster yelled. "RAWR!!!!! Freeze!" Alia: How could he do this to his daughter? How could he?, I thought as I saw the most dangerous monster in mythology standing right in front of my trainee. This was bad.
I ran for the exit and quickly shut the door behind me. I needed to find Nico QUICK!
I ran into Nico so quickly I didn’t even know what I was doing. When Nico and I were dust off I told him what happened seconds before.
“The person I could ever expect to fight a monster as strong as that is Percy, and still that is a slim chance because they are like the skeletons; only someone with extreme power can kill those type of monsters,” Nico said.
“I know,” I said frightfully. Anna: I rolled out of the way as blue wind blew towards me from out of the monsters mouth. Where I was standing was a giant patch of ice. Great. He can freeze things. I. Am. Dead. Ducking again, I jumped between his legs and stabbed the back of his knee. Golden blood gushed out from the wound. The monster roared again and raised its blue hand to swipe me away. Instead, I jabbed my dagger in front of me, and Blue Boy got a hand of pain. He tilted his head confused. Then, in the whish of the wind, exploded into dust. Alia barged in, Nico at her heels. She looked at the dust and stared at me. "You- you..." I retrieved my weapons and waved a slightly. "Uh, hi." That’s when my world went dark- again. Alia: Nico picked up Anna when I noticed something new on her left wrist, it read ‘Aegis the Third’ in ancient Greek, in translation it is ‘Aegis the Third’.
“Nico, doesn’t Thalia have Aegis, you know the shield that has Medusa in the middle?” I asked.
“Yes, why?” “I’m just wondering because there is something new on Anna’s wrist that reads ‘Aegis the Third’.”
“What!” Nico exclaimed, almost dropping Anna.
“Dude, if you’re going to drop her, let me take her to her room. We don’t need you to break your foot again, now do we?”
“Be quiet, you tree nymph,” Nico snaps.
“I’m not a tree nymph, Death Boy!” Anna: I awoke in a dark room. Pulling the heavy quilt off of me, I climbed out of the too-comfortable bed and almost collapsed. "Wow, there." said a voice, hands catching me. "Who-" I began to say. The mysterious, but strangely familiar voice said, "Lights!" Alia stood before me. "Ohh. It's just you." I sighed in relief. Looking around, I asked, "Where's Nico? Did he leave or something?" Alia pointed towards the door. "No, he's outside. Didn't want intrude or something." I nodded, blushing. Following Alia out the door, I thought of yet another question. "How did I get up here? We were in the arena, way down there." I said, pointing. Alia just cleared her throat and waved her hand at the approaching Nico. Without another word, we all walked down the steep hill. What if Nico brought me up? He seems stronger than Alia, even though she looks 15 and he is probably my age, 12. I was so lost in my thoughts that I didn't even notice Nico gasp in fear. "That can't be. The barriers-" "Were broken." Alia interrupted. "A chimera. Beware the teeth, tail, and about... everything else." I gulped. Monsters can kill me. You don't realize how scary that is until you're looking Death in the face... Well, if you know Nico, you have done it a couple times, but, ahh. You get the point. "Let's move." I walked down the rest of the hill, my hand closing around the hilt of my dagger. Alia: One second everything was fine next second you see one of the most deadly monsters you can ever think of. Does that sound normal? Well, even for me NO!
I stood frozen, I was scared. The Chimera must have sensed it, it pounced. I yelled RUN! Knowing that it was not needed, we all knew we had to run.
We had all scattered in different directions but the Chimera knew that it would be easier to kill me, a weaponless tree nymph. I winced. Anna: The Chimera pounced on Alia, claws at her throat. Nico turned into shadows, invisible, then reappeared on the monsters back. Ignoring Alia, the Chimera turned around faster than I thought possible. It attacked Nico, who continued to roll out of the way as the bloody-mouthed killer ran after him. Alia stumbled towards me, a 2-layer deep cut on her neck. "You okay?"I asked lamely. Of course she wasn't. One of the most deadly monsters had been seconds away of slitting her throat. With a shaking breath, Alia nodded. "Nico. Where'd Nico go?" I pointed towards the hill. "Great. That idiot is going to get himself killed." She murmured as we sprinted toward the way he went down. When we stopped, Nico stood there, gasping, his deadly black blade in his hand. In front of him was a golden coat, shimmering in the sun. Alia looked at Nico in awe. "The mouth." He said, blushing. "It was nothing. But, right now, we need to get to camp A.S.A.P. It's not safe here." After a long pause, Alia nodded. "Tomorrow morning, at the break of dawn. It is only a few miles. For now, let's go to sleep. We could all use it." I nodded, and went to my cabin in a zombie mode. Falling into a dreamless sleep, I remember one thing. Hearing a man's raspy voice say: My little pawn has grown into a fighter, hmm? Well, you will be a part of my side soon, kid. Watch your back. The voice laughed, and I fell asleep. Anna: I woke with Alia's hand shaking my shoulder. I groggily (sp?) sat up. "What?" I whined. Oh right. The Camp. Pulling the quilt off of me, I stuck my feet into my converse. "C'mon. Nico's waiting." Alia opened the door of my room, allowing fresh, clean air to wash over me. I sighed and stepped out. Nico came out of the shadows of the cabin, and started going down the hill.
********
An hour past before Alia allowed a breakfast break. We ate our egg and cheese on wheat in silence. I didn't mind. The sandwich was probably the best thing I've had since I signed my death warrant. I, Anna, agree to die by the hands of being a demigod... Finally, Nico ended the no-talking mode. "Time?" "About 7:30 am" said a strange voice. Alia instinctively balled her fists and turned around. Nico unsheathed his sword, grinding his perfect teeth. My hand went to my dagger's hilt. A jingle sounded when I moved my left hand. What in the world...? Nico noticed me. He slapped his wrist, silently explaining what to do. I did what he signaled and out came a silver shield, the head of Medusa in the middle. "Who-" Alia's confused voice brought me back. Before us stood an 18-year-old boy, dressed in tan shorts and a sky blue shirt. "Sayter from camp. Mr. D. predicted you were dead, but when he found out he was wrong, he sent me. Naturally." Nico rolled his eyes. "Alia, Anna, meet Ty. The stupidest excuse for a sayter ever." Ty held up his hands. "Hey, let the sayter be. Besides. You need my help. Sorta." Alia balled her hands again. "We don’t need anyone’s help. Camp is only 5 miles away, and there is such a thing as a cab." Ty smirked and climbed up a ladder on a nearby apartment building, with unnatural human strength. In a moment’s notice, he was gone. Nico clapped his hands and rubbed them together. "Well. Shall we call a taxi?"
********
Only 15 minutes later, the car stopped in front of a forest. Alia handed the driver 20 bucks then scooted out of the leather- seated car. "You sure you want off? Nothings here." I nodded. When we were all out and the cab had sped away, I grumbled. "Great. Another hill." Nico smiled and took the lead as we climbed. In no time Alia, Nico and I were standing beside a tree on the tip of the hill. I took a deep breath and stepped forward into the boundaries of Camp Half-Blood. I thought I had seen it all until a man, no horse, no man-horse, came up to me and smiled warmly. It was too much. Alia, Nico, and the messed-up man went black.
Ok, so its long. But its all there!
The life of a writer is difficult, cut-throat,and sometimes painful, but the rewards are beyond measure.
~Anna~
Posted at: 3:10 pm on February 9, 2012
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Good first story! If you want, I have two stories you can read. One is Evan's side of Amian and the other is the Truth revealed.
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Posted at: 5:03 pm on February 9, 2012
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AWESOME! Please write more!:D I loooove your story.! :D
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I am Dianne Kate Cahill. :D
Posted at: 7:41 pm on February 9, 2012
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Hi it's Cea-Cea. Am i going to be in your story? If not, that's okay, I just wondered.
Cea-Cea
Cea-Cea
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 5:17 pm on February 10, 2012
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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
by the way, highlight to see what I just wrote.
I REALLY like half-blood stories!!!
by the way, highlight to see what I just wrote.
I REALLY like half-blood stories!!!
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
Posted at: 10:30 pm on February 10, 2012
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Nico caught Anna while I started talking to Chiron. “Hi, Chiron, we have already found out her godly parent. Surprisingly it’s Zeus. Also have you heard anything about where he is, even I really want to kill him, but I want to give him a piece my mind first.”
“No, Poseidon hasn’t contacted me but I would go visit Percy because you know Poseidon doesn’t like talking directly to you and your family,” Chiron replied.
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 10:21 am on February 11, 2012
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ok good. My turn then.
"Pass out again, kid? A hero of your kind should be more tough. Is she really the one Phobes?" A voice inside my head said mockingly. "You idiot!" Another voice yelled. "Don't give away names!" The first voice was silent for a long moment. "Yeah. But anyway, Girlie, better pick up your game. As for your future quest, beware. We have our own powers."
I woke up in a large mable room, with a door leading to another fairly-sized room, probably the bathroom. In the center of the marble floor, was a giant statue of a god, holding a lightning bolt. It seemed he was staring right at me, with those cold, heartless eyes. I promised myself that I would move to the bunks behind the statue A.S.A.P. Groaning, I swong my numb legs over the side of the bed, and slowly got to my feet. When I opened the door of my cabin, I shielded my eyes from the shining sun. I guessed it was about noon, considering the sun's placement. While I was checking out the other cabins, blood red, golden, silver, Nico came up behind me. "Eeepp!" I screamed and punched him teasily. "Why must you do that?" Nico chuckled. "Hey, as long as you don't pass out again." Pass out again. The fragment hung in my mind. The dream. A man named Phobes. My smile retreated off of my face. Nico immediatly turned serious and put his hand on my shoulder. "Hey, what's wrong?" I tried to look in his eyes but couldn't. Choosing to stare at the ground, I said, "Nothing. I'm fine. Let's go meet Alia. I have a feeling somethings up." Nico attempted to find answers in my face, but when he realized nothing would pop out, he stopped. We continued down the road.
"Pass out again, kid? A hero of your kind should be more tough. Is she really the one Phobes?" A voice inside my head said mockingly. "You idiot!" Another voice yelled. "Don't give away names!" The first voice was silent for a long moment. "Yeah. But anyway, Girlie, better pick up your game. As for your future quest, beware. We have our own powers."
I woke up in a large mable room, with a door leading to another fairly-sized room, probably the bathroom. In the center of the marble floor, was a giant statue of a god, holding a lightning bolt. It seemed he was staring right at me, with those cold, heartless eyes. I promised myself that I would move to the bunks behind the statue A.S.A.P. Groaning, I swong my numb legs over the side of the bed, and slowly got to my feet. When I opened the door of my cabin, I shielded my eyes from the shining sun. I guessed it was about noon, considering the sun's placement. While I was checking out the other cabins, blood red, golden, silver, Nico came up behind me. "Eeepp!" I screamed and punched him teasily. "Why must you do that?" Nico chuckled. "Hey, as long as you don't pass out again." Pass out again. The fragment hung in my mind. The dream. A man named Phobes. My smile retreated off of my face. Nico immediatly turned serious and put his hand on my shoulder. "Hey, what's wrong?" I tried to look in his eyes but couldn't. Choosing to stare at the ground, I said, "Nothing. I'm fine. Let's go meet Alia. I have a feeling somethings up." Nico attempted to find answers in my face, but when he realized nothing would pop out, he stopped. We continued down the road.
The life of a writer is difficult, cut-throat,and sometimes painful, but the rewards are beyond measure.
~Anna~
Posted at: 6:03 pm on February 12, 2012
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I like it :)
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
Posted at: 7:36 am on February 13, 2012
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thx
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Posted at: 3:41 pm on February 13, 2012
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No problem. :)
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
Posted at: 2:37 am on February 15, 2012
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I CANT WAIT ANY LONGER!!!!!!! SRRY IM REALLY IMPATIENT SOMETIMES!!!!! (like right now)
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Posted at: 4:01 pm on February 16, 2012
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@SilverHunter66, YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER!!!!
“Give a girl the right shoes and she can conquer the world.”
-Marilyn Monroe
Posted at: 1:09 am on February 17, 2012
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I was sitting by the lake when I heard foot steps behind, it was Percy. “Hey, Seaweed Brain,” I said. “Have you met the new half-blood?”
“No,” he replied. “But there’s a rumor going around saying she’s Zeus kid, is that true?”
“Yeah, oh, um has Poseidon said anything about his whereabouts?” I said hopefully.
“Yeah, but he didn’t really give me a exact location. All he said was that he is the place you least expept.”
“Oh.” I suddenly heard feet pound on the soft yet hard grass.
“Hey, Percy this is Anna. Anna this is Percy, our cousin,” Nico said.
“Our cousin?” Anna asked.
“I’m Poseidon’s son so in a way we are cousin’s because Zeus and Poseidon are brothers,” Percy explained.
“Oh,” Anna said.
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 2:10 pm on February 17, 2012
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THX ACTRESS AGENT!!!! AND THX JACKIE FOR WRITING!!!!!! I WILL WRITE SOON
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Posted at: 4:42 pm on February 17, 2012
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My head pounded as I followed Alia to the Big House. Percy had been sent to get us so Chiron, who apparently was the mess-up man, could talk to us. Soon, we stopped in front of the screen door. Chiron came out and greeted us in wheelchair form. Alia sat down on a couch on the porch, and i followed her lead. "So, Chiron, what's so urgent that it couldn't wait until we settled in?" The horse-man closed his eyes and sighed, like what he was going to say was hard for him to get out. "A- A disturbence has been going on outside of Camp. Two minor gods are angry." Alia chuckled. "Thats it? Minor gods are always mad. It's natrual." Chiron wrung his fingers together. "These aren't regular minors. They are sons of Ares. They can control minds and make fear. They can make people mad from images that enter their minds. And these gods are getting more powerful with Hecate and many others on their side. A lot of them are sorcerers, or enchantresses. Like Circe." I groaned. I've heard of her in English class when we were learning about Greek Myths. She was simply one of the most dangerous people. Great. "So, how-" I was interuppted by stomping feet and a country accent. In came a girl, probably 13, with short dark hair, with blue highlights going down some strands. "Chiron! Sydney stole my knife!" Her face was bright red, like a juicy beet. In a second, another girl came running in, panting. "I..did...not." She said breathing hard. This girl looked 15, with strawberry blond hair covering her face until she blew it away. "Brie Anne! I told you I didn't!" She pleaded. Brie Anne turned to her. "Oh yeah, Sydney? Then where is it?" "Not with her, I bet! When has she ever actually taken something?" said yet another voice. The girl was also probably 15, with auburn hair like mine. "Beisdes, I told you he was with the newbie!"
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~Anna~
Posted at: 2:28 pm on February 19, 2012
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oh oops, sorry that was cut. I'll continue.
Chiron cleared his throat. "Brie, Sydney, and Cea-Cea. I am very busy. Please leave. And Cea-Cea, can you warn Rebecca that Anna will be with her soon? Thank you." Cea-Cea nodded and left with Sydney and Brie. "All right, as I was saying, we need a quest. If you agree, then it will be you two, accompanied by Nico. Do you agree?" Well, I had to think about it. Okay, so I'd be chased by deadly monsters that want to kill me, tracked by powerful gods that can turn me to ash, while I could be perfectly safe at Camp, cuddled up with hot chocolate in warm blankets. Hmmm...tough choice. But then again, it was going to saave the world, which included my family. "Fine. Lets do it. When are we leaving?" Chiron gave a dry, forced smile. "Tomorrow morning. You only have 11 days to complete the task at hand." Alia gulped and asked a question. "What are we exactly going to do?" Chiron turned to me. "Anna, time to go to the oracle. Rebecca will take you. I need to talk to Alia."
I sat there for a minute, but then quickly got up and left. I needed to think.
Jackie, can you go on our page about the story? What will the quest be about?
Chiron cleared his throat. "Brie, Sydney, and Cea-Cea. I am very busy. Please leave. And Cea-Cea, can you warn Rebecca that Anna will be with her soon? Thank you." Cea-Cea nodded and left with Sydney and Brie. "All right, as I was saying, we need a quest. If you agree, then it will be you two, accompanied by Nico. Do you agree?" Well, I had to think about it. Okay, so I'd be chased by deadly monsters that want to kill me, tracked by powerful gods that can turn me to ash, while I could be perfectly safe at Camp, cuddled up with hot chocolate in warm blankets. Hmmm...tough choice. But then again, it was going to saave the world, which included my family. "Fine. Lets do it. When are we leaving?" Chiron gave a dry, forced smile. "Tomorrow morning. You only have 11 days to complete the task at hand." Alia gulped and asked a question. "What are we exactly going to do?" Chiron turned to me. "Anna, time to go to the oracle. Rebecca will take you. I need to talk to Alia."
I sat there for a minute, but then quickly got up and left. I needed to think.
Jackie, can you go on our page about the story? What will the quest be about?
The life of a writer is difficult, cut-throat,and sometimes painful, but the rewards are beyond measure.
~Anna~
Posted at: 2:46 pm on February 19, 2012
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Wow, you did me really great:
I have athsma,
I am the only hermes kid who dosen't steal or prank people (much),
I have an annoying long fringe (sp.?) that goes in to my face a lot,
I hate it when people say I did something bad when I didn't,
I olny tell people That I trust with my secret (being a lotus eater).
But I am:
fast,
I have winged shoes,
always has bubble-gum in her mouth.
Please continue with the story!
I have athsma,
I am the only hermes kid who dosen't steal or prank people (much),
I have an annoying long fringe (sp.?) that goes in to my face a lot,
I hate it when people say I did something bad when I didn't,
I olny tell people That I trust with my secret (being a lotus eater).
But I am:
fast,
I have winged shoes,
always has bubble-gum in her mouth.
Please continue with the story!
Georgia
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I read books, manga and anime
Vocaloid's Len, Kaito and Gakupo= a "real" boy band!
Posted at: 3:56 am on February 21, 2012
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ok thanks for responding. Wow, you practically described exactly what I said! I was just guessing on the hair and asthma thing! Ill add Rebecca next, then everyones added. Cant wait till Friday!
The life of a writer is difficult, cut-throat,and sometimes painful, but the rewards are beyond measure.
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Posted at: 10:20 am on February 21, 2012
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I LOVE this story!!! Anna you are so talented!!! Do you think maybe you could go to my half-blood story? Here's the link;
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/14609
I 'd love it if you and anyone else would read it.
Cea-Cea
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/14609
I 'd love it if you and anyone else would read it.
Cea-Cea
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 6:02 pm on February 21, 2012
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Anna, sorry I have not posted today, sad thing is I sort of can't because I can't find my flashdrive that has the next part and I'm also injured and if you want a VERY violent next part, I didn't think so.
Jacqueline
P.S. (Anna could you please put on my other Demigod stories that I probably won't be able to post for a week at least, please? If you could that would be awesome!)
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 7:53 pm on February 24, 2012
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ok i will tomorrow. And I'll post the next part tomorrow
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Posted at: 10:24 pm on February 25, 2012
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I think your injury is fatal since you can't write! SAD! Oh, and Anna:
CONTINUE!!!!!
CONTINUE!!!!!
Comin Back Baby, Comin Back.
Oh Yeah
Posted at: 3:21 am on February 26, 2012
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“Alia, Poseidon sent me a message about 20 minutes ago, he said that your brother is working with two minor gods that he thinks are declaring war against Olympus. He’s not sure which two minor gods but he knows that two minor gods are causing a lot of chaos,” Chiron said.
“Michael is really making his hole deeper and deeper,” I said in a very oblivious voice.
“Alia I will warn you that there has been somebody- or something- wandering in the shadows and I think you know who it is.”
“Chiron it can’t be HIM! He betrayed me with that 12 year old Deborah and I also told him that if he ever tried to butter me up again then I’d literally find some sort of weapon and kill him with it!” I exclaimed.
I heard somebody cough from right. It was Zach.
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 10:22 am on February 26, 2012
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Guys, I still can write, just the way I am when I write affects the story and I didn't want to write a bad part and just be the laughing stalk of the message board because I didn't take time to settle from the pain so,(my knee hurts worse than when I got bit by this dog one time) I just take a break from writing to get my emotions back together.I'm actually quite fine just I can't run, dance, really do anything that takes a big toll on my knee. Part of the reason I wrote today is because I don't want to be too far behind on my stories.
Jacqueline
P.S. (Anna, thanks for posting on my other stories that I won't be able to write, write now I seriously don't think I will be able to write because I'm pretty sure I have P.E. tomorrow at school which means I will feel like poop. Also, I posted on our thread about the story. *shreaks* Just bumped my knee on my desk, bye.)
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
Posted at: 4:22 pm on February 26, 2012
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Good job! How the heck did you, uh how do I say this, KILL YOUR POOR KNEE??!!!!!! jk! but still, how?!
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Posted at: 5:29 pm on February 27, 2012
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Another thing.... who is Zach?
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Posted at: 5:30 pm on February 27, 2012
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that was really good and I hope you write more.
Clara
if Vespers find you scream as loud as you can if that dosn't work yell loder if that dosn...VESPER!!!!!!GOT TO GO BYE!!!!!!AAAAAAHHHH!!!!
messageboard/15951
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Posted at: 10:47 pm on February 27, 2012
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clara
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Clara
if Vespers find you scream as loud as you can if that dosn't work yell loder if that dosn...VESPER!!!!!!GOT TO GO BYE!!!!!!AAAAAAHHHH!!!!
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Posted at: 10:53 pm on February 27, 2012
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