Heres my story. Hope you like it:
Im a normal 11 year old girl. At least thats what I tell myself. ADHD doesn't help much. But, anyway, how about I start with the day I almost died.
So far, my day had been pretty good. I was one of the better students, even with my problems. The teachers knew me, so they knew how to teach me. As for home, I had a mom and dad with two sisters and dog. My life was, well, perfect. I had love, food and and roof over my head. So, I never thought anything could completely mess me up. Wrong.
It started when I was walking home from school. My neighbors live behinds too, so I have to walk through their yard to get to mine. I hated doing that though. Everytime I do, a shiver goes down my back like someone has their eyes glued to me. A creepy feeling of being watched slithers through my mind. Nothing happened ever though. At least until that day.
I heard a crunch. Walking faster, I convinced myself that it was just my imagination. "RAWR!!!!!!" A scream/ growl stopped me dead in my tracks, sending an electric shock down my spine.
The monster behind me was a manish-bull. Waist down, bull. Waist up, ugly, hairy man. The first thought that entered my mind: Wow. He needs a razor.
After I realized he was probably going to kill me, I tried, but failed, to muster up the courage to run, scream, anything. Dropping my bag, I forced my legs to sprint towards my nearby house. "OW!" I collasped in pain, as I feel searing pain down the back of my shin. Looking up, I realized that the monster had made a grab for me, but only managed to cut at least three layers deep. Now, for a person who thinks papercuts hurt, I was in some serious pain. The clawed hand reached out again, and manganed to grabbed me around my waist, crushing my ribs. My screams of protest were muffled, and I soon lost conscience.
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yay! thanks for responding! I'll post more soon!
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Posted at: 10:40 am on December 17, 2011
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Highlight what AquaLion35 posted! I think it was great!!!! Really! Especailly having to walk through a neighbor's yard. When I had to ride a bus home, they wouldn't go to my house. So I had to walk through my neighbor's yard which is a few acres, to get to mine!
This was utterly astonishing! Please oh please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was utterly astonishing! Please oh please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Life is a song and your ♥ writes the lyrics
Be yourself, the world needs oRiginaLity. ✌☮
Somewhere between you and despair, I fell in love with chocolate
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Awesome!
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☥LiVe LiFe In ThE fAsT lAnE☥
Posted at: 5:19 pm on December 17, 2011
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hi aqualion im aquadragon (shakes hand)
Ducks rule!
Lucian rules!
Janus rules!
Tomas rules!
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Madrigal rules!
Vespers stink!
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LOVE IT!
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You've got my attention, I just want to know, will there be Cahills in this story? I don't mind if there aren't, but it would make it even more interesting.
Sorry, ActressExpert is not available to take your call, she is probably out writing stories or sketching- please leave a message at the tone!
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Posted at: 7:43 pm on December 17, 2011
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wow. thx, guys! I didnt know it was that good! and no, it is not a cahill story. It's a half-blood story, but can you still check back here for updates? ill post more right now!
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Posted at: 11:33 am on December 18, 2011
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ok here's the countinuation...(sp?)
I awoke in a cabin much lager than an average house. I tried to sit up, but my head felt like hammers had taken revenge. "Where- Where am I?" My voice sounded raspy, and my throat burned. I was about to yell hello!, but a hand flew over my mouth and a voice hissed, "Shh!"
"MMM!!!!!!" I struggled to protest through a soft, but firm, hand. "Please. Be quiet. Nobody knows you're here yet, and I'd like to keep it that way." A kind voice said, coming from right behind me. Judging by the pitch, the speaker was a girl, maybe around 15, making her three years older than me. I tried to say, "Who are you? Why not?", but it came out more like, "Mm a you? Mmm unt?" For an answer, the hand lifted.
Quickly, I twisted my body so I could see the person behind me. A girl with lucious brown hair stared at me with hazel eyes, filled with concern and fear? She stammered, "I'm not going to h-hurt you. B-but we are not safe. We came across you in front of my mom's house. When he comes back, all of us will go to the camp and only there will we be safe. Okay?"
Pretty much all I got out of that was that there was another person. A boy. I decided I'd find that out later. Instead i asked the simple questiion. "So, where am I? The last thing I remember is... is-" My memory was cut short by a knock on the door.
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Posted at: 11:54 am on December 18, 2011
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come on people! was that a good part? I dont want to write more if no one likes it....
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I was right. Mystery-man was a boy. Judging by the young look in his eyes, and his height, I guessed he was around 13. Only one year older than me. His shaggy black hair covered most of his chocolate brown eyes. He tucked his hands uncomfortably into his aviator jacket. "Nico. Is the path clear? We should leave A.S.A.P. Sadly, she doesn't seem to get we have all formed a- a... friendship." My 'friend' struggled with the last word.
Uncomfortable, I turned away. "Okay. Tell me right now. Who are you, and why are we here? I want to go home to my parents and family!" I tried not to think of the night when my mom had sent me away, telling me to find the teacher. Whatever that means. "Parents?" Nico looked at me curiously and a little wistfully. "You have both a mom and a dad? How strange. Normally, halfbloods have only one parent. A mom or"
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Posted at: 7:31 am on December 22, 2011
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srry that was cut short.... here ill restart the sentance.
"Parents?" Nico asked curiously and a little wistfully. "Both a mom and a dad? How strange. Normally, a halfblood has only one parent. A mom or a dad." Nico looked at the girl nervously. "What- what if she isn't the halfblood we were assigned to find?"
Assigned?
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WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
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only one person?
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Posted at: 10:09 am on December 27, 2011
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more pleae!!! I loved it!!!!
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Roses are white nightlock is blue its called Catching Fire not Hunger Games 2
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Posted at: 10:16 pm on December 27, 2011
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thank you. PLZ GET MORE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!
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more.more.more.now.now.now. please.
I'm katherine cahill. nice to meet you , im just like amy. Im 12 and in 6th grade. I love this clue hunt.Im also know as mandrigalfan.But Im in janus.i love reading.
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After I was healed enough to walk, the girl took me on a walk, to survey the area for.... don't call me crazy, but monsters. "Um, I don't believe I know your name." I said. "Alia." she answered. "Yours?" I sighed. "Annabelle. But call me Anna. Unless you like fists in your face." I said solemnly. Her expression told me she actually that I was serious. I laughed for real, the first time i months since... since... I couldn't even think about it. My smile retreted of my face in seconds. "I'm kidding. Gosh. But don't call me Annabelle." I lifted my hands, showing my innocence. Alia nodded and gave me a dry smile. "Right. I knew that."
Sorry that was shorter than usual. I need to go to get my phone fixed. Write more later.
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Posted at: 2:20 pm on December 30, 2011
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plz contuine and plz visit my story Kaymi by Lily aka LavenderSpirited4.
Nyx - Alter Ego
Roses are white nightlock is blue its called Catching Fire not Hunger Games 2
I may look happy but I'm not, I'm actually very sad.
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WHOA!!!!
IT´S AMEZING!!!
IT´S AMEZING!!!
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thx guys!! can you somehow get more people plz?
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ok, I have news. Idk if its good or bad, but here it is: I might not be able to continue my story. I need help. Soon.
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Posted at: 8:32 pm on January 4, 2012
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Write right now ANNABELLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
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Really cool!
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Lost Holt. Soccer and basketball is my life! And pizza.:P
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PLZ write more
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Please write more
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Write more now please
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ok! Ill do it soon!!
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GRRR!!!! disaster strikes! I lost my ipod which has my written story on it...UGH! IM SO MAD!
P.S. I need you guys to fill out this form if you want to write with me for part of this story. Depending on how "good" I think you are, you might just get the part of Alia :)
Name:
Age:
Writing Personality (mysterious, suspenseful, action, romance etc.):
Stories/POVs (to see how you write I need to go on that thread):
THX!
P.S. I need you guys to fill out this form if you want to write with me for part of this story. Depending on how "good" I think you are, you might just get the part of Alia :)
Name:
Age:
Writing Personality (mysterious, suspenseful, action, romance etc.):
Stories/POVs (to see how you write I need to go on that thread):
THX!
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Name: Jacqueline
Age:10
Writing Personality: Mysterious and Romance
Stories/POVs: You have read my stories so you know how I write.
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
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cool!
WWBS? HWTBA? WWCD?
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Jacqueline I think I want you to be my partner. As for Alia, can you write a POV in Alias view, continueing from where I left off? I just want to see how you'd write for Alia. (Dont you just love that name? Its so pretty to me!)
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Name:Lily
Age:12
Writing Personality (mysterious, suspenseful, action, romance etc.):actually what ever comes to mind. (this is how i write letting my mind do the story not me.)
Stories/POVs (to see how you write I need to go on that thread):Kaymi by Lily aka LavenderSpirited4
Nyx - Alter Ego
Roses are white nightlock is blue its called Catching Fire not Hunger Games 2
I may look happy but I'm not, I'm actually very sad.
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Sure Anna, no prob.
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I could totally see her being his daughter, I thought as I brought Anna into the ‘survey’ arena. I really wished Nico’s father wasn’t the lord of the dead, one of the Big Three, it REALLY irritated me! Can you blame me! I didn’t want to go to the arena again.
Anyway, Anna asked me, “So . . . how is this supposed to work?”
“It’s easy, everyday me or Nico will bring you to the arena to test your monster fighting skills, every day the monster will be harder to fight. Today we will start with easiest monster to fight, the monster is the dracaena,’ I announced. “WHAT!” Anna exclaimed.
“I didn’t say it was the nicest, I said it was the easiest.”
I whistled and quickly going out the entranced closed the door and saw her father, the first god I ever saw was one of the most powerful gods on Olympus.
How do like it? Also I just assumed that you wanted your dad to be the same person you have in all my roleplays. And could you please tell me who you want as Alia's godly parent, please say Poseidon? Anyways thanx for asking me to help you with the story, it is a honor.
Jacqueline
*for who I think you know who* 
Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
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I could totally see her being his daughter, I thought as I brought Anna into the ‘survey’ arena. I really wished Nico’s father wasn’t the lord of the dead, one of the Big Three, it REALLY irritated me! Can you blame me! I didn’t want to go to the arena again.
Anyway, Anna asked me, “So . . . how is this supposed to work?”
“It’s easy, everyday me or Nico will bring you to the arena to test your monster fighting skills, every day the monster will be harder to fight. Today we will start with easiest monster to fight, the monster is the dracaena,’ I announced. “WHAT!” Anna exclaimed.
“I didn’t say it was the nicest, I said it was the easiest.”
I whistled and quickly going out the entranced closed the door and saw her father, the first god I ever saw was one of the most powerful gods on Olympus.
Thanx for inviting me to help with story, it's a honor. Also I just guessed that would have your dad be the same god as you have on all my RP's, sorry if I screwed it up.
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Jacqueline Cahill
I’m me and I’m not ashamed, I’m as unique as ever and I’m glad, I’m who I am so don’t change me , if anything chane the music- Me
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