Hi every one.
I am Jessica, (you might have looked at my previous posts, but there are hardly any...) and I just wanted to ask you guys something.
First off, I really want to become a famous writer, and I want to know if I am any good. I just NEED TO KNOW, will you read this and comment on my writing if it isn't even about the 39 clues?
Please let me know.
(First one to tell me what they think about this, I might add you to my story! XD)
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Posted at: 12:16 pm on December 3, 2011
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Okaaaayyy... soooooo...... no one's responded yet.
I might as well give you a basic summary of the story so you know what will be up here........
The main character is a girl named Lexy who has green eyes and curly red hair with the ability if strength (will be explained if you guys comment on this or if I get bored). She is 16 years old and lives in The Strange Demension (part of the Quadruple Demensionaverse[4 demensions that work together to go on...])... Hey! Should I really be giving away everything that is in the story? (i.e. THAT WOULD BE GIVING AWAY MY STORY!!!)
LET ME KNOW IF YOU WANT TO LEARN MORE ABOUT LEXY'S STORY!!! XD
I might as well give you a basic summary of the story so you know what will be up here........
The main character is a girl named Lexy who has green eyes and curly red hair with the ability if strength (will be explained if you guys comment on this or if I get bored). She is 16 years old and lives in The Strange Demension (part of the Quadruple Demensionaverse[4 demensions that work together to go on...])... Hey! Should I really be giving away everything that is in the story? (i.e. THAT WOULD BE GIVING AWAY MY STORY!!!)
LET ME KNOW IF YOU WANT TO LEARN MORE ABOUT LEXY'S STORY!!! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
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Posted at: 9:01 pm on December 5, 2011
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Seems interesting! I am a writer on the website, I am not that famous and not too many people post on my stories, but Lively Jade 1 is the most popular and famous writer here. She wrote at least fifteen different stories! :D
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I think that there is a secret meaning in this story. Lexy is a Tomas and the four dimensions are the family branches.
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Posted at: 5:20 pm on December 6, 2011
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Honestly, it sounds really interesting! I'd read it. The 4 dimension idea is really unique!
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Posted at: 5:29 pm on December 6, 2011
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I want to be a famous author too!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not just on this website, though. I mean like a BESTSELLING AUTHOR!!!!!! Nobody really cares about what I write though.
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Posted at: 5:32 pm on December 6, 2011
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@BearAqua420
Would you read my story if I posted it on here?
Also, would you like to be part of my story for if I need any more characters?
If so, I will need this info;
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Oddball or Plastic:
(If oddball)
Hair color:
Eye color:
Ability*:
*Abilities are like super powers
Ability choices:
-Strength(usually goes with red/blonde hair)
-Painless
-Speed runners
-transformer
-mind reader
-Knower
-mind controller
-teleporter
-Animal whisperer
-see'er
-hypnotizer
-multiplyer
-dissappearer (of self/objects and can also re-appear)
-transformer of objects
-Changer (of clothes on self/others) (really fast)
-Soul free'er (can free plastics only) (always is paired with another ability)
WANNA BE PART OF A BOOK I WANNA WRITE???
Would you read my story if I posted it on here?
Also, would you like to be part of my story for if I need any more characters?
If so, I will need this info;
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Oddball or Plastic:
(If oddball)
Hair color:
Eye color:
Ability*:
*Abilities are like super powers
Ability choices:
-Strength(usually goes with red/blonde hair)
-Painless
-Speed runners
-transformer
-mind reader
-Knower
-mind controller
-teleporter
-Animal whisperer
-see'er
-hypnotizer
-multiplyer
-dissappearer (of self/objects and can also re-appear)
-transformer of objects
-Changer (of clothes on self/others) (really fast)
-Soul free'er (can free plastics only) (always is paired with another ability)
WANNA BE PART OF A BOOK I WANNA WRITE???
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 6:13 pm on December 6, 2011
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I'll comment on your posts in when you start the story so far it sounds complicated with the demesions and all but interesting. I wrtite with LivelyJade1 on a story(hiphop&sheakspear) but i like to give constructive critismism I don't beleive in bashing people over the head with my own opinions. So write whatever your soul desires and I will give my honest opinion. I'm going to major in creative writing when I go to colege and already have been taking some courses on the subject if that gives me any crediblitiy. I really am 18 but don't let that weird you out. I really am a nice person. Would you like me to ask LivelyJade1 to take a look or would you rather ask her yourself?
I'd like to help any way I can. Just let me know.
I'd like to help any way I can. Just let me know.
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Posted at: 7:10 pm on December 6, 2011
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Hey Jessica! Weird, we have the same name. Don't worry, I go as Angela, a different translation of my middle name and I'll read your story. I'm a writer too, although I write better poetry than stories. :P
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Posted at: 1:57 am on December 7, 2011
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WrtierGirl1: You asked me for my opinion so here I am!IT SOUNDS AWESOME!!!!I would love to read your story so even if no one else likes it you have to post it for me.OK?:)I cant wait for to post the story and I was wondering if I could make a character for you to put in it...It would be awesome.And I agree with SlyRaven.If you like writing just keep practicing and dont listen when people try to put you down.Do you know how many people told my not to write ames and jonah!?!?!...?But I keep on writing it and now I have more fans on there then I do haters.So If you like writing keep at!Post your story soon or I might die becuase I have to wait.And I want to be a profecional writer too!I send much luck to you Jessica.
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Posted at: 9:24 am on December 7, 2011
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Posted at: 3:32 pm on December 7, 2011
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SlyRaven13,
I have been trying to come up with a good prologue for like a year now, and I finally got it!
When I get stuck, I can look to you for help, am I right?
and if you want to ask LivelyJade1 to read this, go ahead! I could use some Ideas for this.
EVERYONE!!!
Alexa (Lexy) is not a cahill (though she could pass off as one). And I'll explain the whole Idea of my story (which I have been working on for about a year now) in another post (maybe today, maybe tomorrow) so that you have a better Idea of where this story is headed. If you have any ideas, you can post them. I check responses every day after school to see if there are any questions and I'll try to respond to all of them.
I will be posting my synopsis (fancy word for basic summary) of the story some time soon.
I have been trying to come up with a good prologue for like a year now, and I finally got it!
When I get stuck, I can look to you for help, am I right?
and if you want to ask LivelyJade1 to read this, go ahead! I could use some Ideas for this.
EVERYONE!!!
Alexa (Lexy) is not a cahill (though she could pass off as one). And I'll explain the whole Idea of my story (which I have been working on for about a year now) in another post (maybe today, maybe tomorrow) so that you have a better Idea of where this story is headed. If you have any ideas, you can post them. I check responses every day after school to see if there are any questions and I'll try to respond to all of them.
I will be posting my synopsis (fancy word for basic summary) of the story some time soon.
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 3:35 pm on December 7, 2011
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CatSecret9,
It does not matter what others think... IT ONLY MATTERS WHAT YOU THINK!!! If you think your writing is good, THEN IT'S GOOD!!!
It does not matter what others think... IT ONLY MATTERS WHAT YOU THINK!!! If you think your writing is good, THEN IT'S GOOD!!!
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 3:38 pm on December 7, 2011
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ClassifiedAdept15,
Why do you go as Angela?
Why do you go as Angela?
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
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Posted at: 3:40 pm on December 7, 2011
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Okay, so here's the synopsis of my story.
There are 4 demensions; The Strange demension, The Confusing demension, The Dangerous demension, and the Secret demension (the one no one except the royal families knows about).
I'll explain each demension for you guys.
THE STRANGE DEMENSION!!!
In this demension, you are either an oddball or a plastic. Plastics all look exactly the same (i.e. all the girls look the same, all the boys look the same.)
Oddballs are like normal people, none of them look identical (except identical twins! DUMMIE[<-- at myself]) Oddballs also have abilities (for example; Lexy has strength). The royal family are plastics and they are free (as in they have their own souls) and they hate oddballs, so they make all of the plastics hate them too.
Only 5 oddballs are born every year, (and if it is a leap-year, 10 are born), and they are moved into "oddball centres" to live in. All oddballs have to work starting at age 5 and must go to school every day of the week from age 3, (WHAT?!? NOT EVERYTHING COMES IN 5'S!)
THE CONFUSING DEMENSION!!!
Everyone here is a mythical creature with the power of that mythical creature. There is no segregation in this demension. I can't really think of anything else to put here.
THE DANGEROUS DEMENSION!!!
Here, everyone is a dragon with the ability to talk, AND shapeshift!
THE SECRET DEMENSION!!!
Here, everyone is a ghost/spy! they have secret pathways between the demensions that only the can use!
So, that is my synopsis on the different demensions. Thank you!
There are 4 demensions; The Strange demension, The Confusing demension, The Dangerous demension, and the Secret demension (the one no one except the royal families knows about).
I'll explain each demension for you guys.
THE STRANGE DEMENSION!!!
In this demension, you are either an oddball or a plastic. Plastics all look exactly the same (i.e. all the girls look the same, all the boys look the same.)
Oddballs are like normal people, none of them look identical (except identical twins! DUMMIE[<-- at myself]) Oddballs also have abilities (for example; Lexy has strength). The royal family are plastics and they are free (as in they have their own souls) and they hate oddballs, so they make all of the plastics hate them too.
Only 5 oddballs are born every year, (and if it is a leap-year, 10 are born), and they are moved into "oddball centres" to live in. All oddballs have to work starting at age 5 and must go to school every day of the week from age 3, (WHAT?!? NOT EVERYTHING COMES IN 5'S!)
THE CONFUSING DEMENSION!!!
Everyone here is a mythical creature with the power of that mythical creature. There is no segregation in this demension. I can't really think of anything else to put here.
THE DANGEROUS DEMENSION!!!
Here, everyone is a dragon with the ability to talk, AND shapeshift!
THE SECRET DEMENSION!!!
Here, everyone is a ghost/spy! they have secret pathways between the demensions that only the can use!
So, that is my synopsis on the different demensions. Thank you!
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 4:06 pm on December 7, 2011
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You know what?
I'll post the prologue today.
(Remember, all names are fake!)
Lexy sat in the police car, staring at the clouds. They looked like pieces
of white cotten candy floating in the sky. Lexy looked back at what had
happened.
Sam is going to kill me, she thought.
She had beat up a cop for agitating her. After her reputation, the royal
family was not going to let this off lightly. They hated her as if she was their
mortal enemy, so she hated them right back. Especially their son, Jason
Saunders.[FAKE NAME]
Lexy hated his guts!
All of the plastic girls around his age, and a few of the oddballs, were
crazy about him! He was a spoiled brat, was really stupid, and he even had his
own FAN CLUB!
Who could like this guy?!?
Really? WHO?!?!?!?
Mary Collins [FAKE NAME], that's who.
I'm really sorry, but I gotta go do my homework before I go to my modern class.
I'll post the rest tomorrow!
And hey? Try give me a unique answer to "Who could like this guy?!?"
Bye! XD
I'll post the prologue today.
(Remember, all names are fake!)
Lexy sat in the police car, staring at the clouds. They looked like pieces
of white cotten candy floating in the sky. Lexy looked back at what had
happened.
Sam is going to kill me, she thought.
She had beat up a cop for agitating her. After her reputation, the royal
family was not going to let this off lightly. They hated her as if she was their
mortal enemy, so she hated them right back. Especially their son, Jason
Saunders.[FAKE NAME]
Lexy hated his guts!
All of the plastic girls around his age, and a few of the oddballs, were
crazy about him! He was a spoiled brat, was really stupid, and he even had his
own FAN CLUB!
Who could like this guy?!?
Really? WHO?!?!?!?
Mary Collins [FAKE NAME], that's who.
I'm really sorry, but I gotta go do my homework before I go to my modern class.
I'll post the rest tomorrow!
And hey? Try give me a unique answer to "Who could like this guy?!?"
Bye! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 4:45 pm on December 7, 2011
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I'm looking forward to reading it and yes, you are entirely right I will help you if you get stuck. I'll adivse her(LivelyJade1) to check it out she is very susportive of new and aspiring writers and a remarkably kind person. I'll tell her about it but she's really buisy with her a million stories so it might be a while.
I'm glad you have decided to post stories. I think its great that so many are trying to get better at a truely unique craft. My creative writing teacher said it best "In art you can see, in film you can see and hear, but in writing its blacks marks on a page that can make you feel emotions, hear, smell, touch, and taste. " Isn't that aweswome! Words strung together in our heads and writen down can influence and take people to an entirely different place far beyound anything in a movie.
Those are my random words of encouragment for you and all writers. Have fun with the words you choose and characters you build. I'm looking forward to reading it, a year is a long time you have a great amount of patience.
I'm glad you have decided to post stories. I think its great that so many are trying to get better at a truely unique craft. My creative writing teacher said it best "In art you can see, in film you can see and hear, but in writing its blacks marks on a page that can make you feel emotions, hear, smell, touch, and taste. " Isn't that aweswome! Words strung together in our heads and writen down can influence and take people to an entirely different place far beyound anything in a movie.
Those are my random words of encouragment for you and all writers. Have fun with the words you choose and characters you build. I'm looking forward to reading it, a year is a long time you have a great amount of patience.
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Posted at: 5:02 pm on December 7, 2011
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SO i just finished my homework and I still have some time before my modern dance class, so just add this on to my previous post...
She's the person of which whom Jason's parents have selected to be the next queen (when Jason becomes King), and she is OBSESSED with him, and he loves the attention he gets from her. So basically, their obsessed with each other!
Lexy even saw him pull Mary into an alley way once!
That time was just now as the police car drove past.
Sam used to do that with me, Lexy frowned.
Sam's been acting strange lately, pushing Lexy away almost all the time, but Lexy loved him so much that she would not let go.
Lexy looked down one of the alley ways when they came to a red light; specifically, her's and Sam's.
There was some guy down there with some girl, but Lexy couldn't tell who it was. She guessed that she and Sam haven't been down there in so long that those to thought it was open.
Lexy looked away, she knew that sam was probably going to dump her for getting into trouble AGAIN! Unless of course, if she didn't tell him? ...
So that's the end of the prologue. Let me know if you like it and if you want me to go on.
BYE! XD
She's the person of which whom Jason's parents have selected to be the next queen (when Jason becomes King), and she is OBSESSED with him, and he loves the attention he gets from her. So basically, their obsessed with each other!
Lexy even saw him pull Mary into an alley way once!
That time was just now as the police car drove past.
Sam used to do that with me, Lexy frowned.
Sam's been acting strange lately, pushing Lexy away almost all the time, but Lexy loved him so much that she would not let go.
Lexy looked down one of the alley ways when they came to a red light; specifically, her's and Sam's.
There was some guy down there with some girl, but Lexy couldn't tell who it was. She guessed that she and Sam haven't been down there in so long that those to thought it was open.
Lexy looked away, she knew that sam was probably going to dump her for getting into trouble AGAIN! Unless of course, if she didn't tell him? ...
So that's the end of the prologue. Let me know if you like it and if you want me to go on.
BYE! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 5:38 pm on December 7, 2011
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What's the deal with my agent card............? I made one!
I am part Ekatrina, part Janus, part Madrigal.
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Posted at: 5:59 pm on December 7, 2011
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Ok so first, Chilllllll. I think you are worrying way to much. Just post something and see what the people think. If they don't like it then just move on.
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creative as a Janus
fierce as a Tomas
brilliant as a Ekat,
as brave as a Madrigal
and a Jesus Freak!!
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Seems intresting. I want to be a FAMOUS writer too if you look at my posts there is some about a story named FATE click it and PLEASE comment!!
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It sounds good. I would definatly read it!
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Hey :) I'm a writer too, if you ever need help just ask.
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Posted at: 11:17 pm on December 7, 2011
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You should wait for LivelyJade1 to post. She is the Writer President anyway. :)
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Okay, hi! This sounds great!!! If you want to get famous for the story, don't post it on the message board. Then someone might take your idea. I'm writing a story on the side, (in other words, it's not on the m.b.) and I don't think it's good. But then again, most of the time I'm wrong about stuff that applies to me.
Anyways, you seem to have this very well thought out. :) I think you can be a famous writer. You just have to believe, work hard, trust yourself, and you can achive. If you want to be the most famous on the message board, go right ahead. I don't know how I came to be the most popular, but....... Anyways, never stop writing!!!! Good luck! :D
Anyways, you seem to have this very well thought out. :) I think you can be a famous writer. You just have to believe, work hard, trust yourself, and you can achive. If you want to be the most famous on the message board, go right ahead. I don't know how I came to be the most popular, but....... Anyways, never stop writing!!!! Good luck! :D
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I would Love to read your work. I will try to give you pointers if you need them. I am part of a mock newbery club so I have a bit of experience with this. Happy to help if you need it!
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Nice work. The demsions sound cool but I have a couple questions.
If only the Royals can use the secret demension and all the demensions are seperate then what do they contribute to the plot and movement of the the story? (*Every story needs conflict* it isn't enough for them not to like eachother, There has to be a challenge or threat from one to the other.)
Did I misunderstand that the plastics and oddballs can movearound to these other dem.?
Does this character lead some rebellion or something?
These are just a few things to consider while you're writing. What is the purpose of each demension and how do they effect eachother?
It sound truely unique and don't worry about the number of responces. You have determination to get better than nothing in the world should stop you if this is what you want to do.
If you don't get what I mean just ask.Sometimes I don't make sence. :)
If only the Royals can use the secret demension and all the demensions are seperate then what do they contribute to the plot and movement of the the story? (*Every story needs conflict* it isn't enough for them not to like eachother, There has to be a challenge or threat from one to the other.)
Did I misunderstand that the plastics and oddballs can movearound to these other dem.?
Does this character lead some rebellion or something?
These are just a few things to consider while you're writing. What is the purpose of each demension and how do they effect eachother?
It sound truely unique and don't worry about the number of responces. You have determination to get better than nothing in the world should stop you if this is what you want to do.
If you don't get what I mean just ask.Sometimes I don't make sence. :)
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Random little thing I want to tell you. Write even if no one sais they are going to read it. I have a post the only one person has read(Lol maybe thats cause the title isn't very good, Random story, Hmm maybe thats not a seller :D) I think but I still enjoy writting it so I will keep writing. Just say Keep it up even if no one else gives you feed back
Name: Megan, 18
Sacordian and Green Rider.
"Punctuation saves lives!" Or else the panda eats,shoots, and leaves. My question is who gave the panda a gun?
Posted at: 3:42 pm on December 8, 2011
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I'll be posting chapter 1 tommorow after school. sorry I can't get it up today. I tried to, but I had some computer problems...
See you tomorrow.
XD
See you tomorrow.
XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 5:36 pm on December 8, 2011
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LivelyJade1,
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LOOKING AT THIS!!!
Really, it means a lot to me because people keep saying that your the most "famous" writer on here!!!
so,... thank you for look ing at this! XD
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LOOKING AT THIS!!!
Really, it means a lot to me because people keep saying that your the most "famous" writer on here!!!
so,... thank you for look ing at this! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 5:41 pm on December 8, 2011
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Hey WriterGirl1!!! I know just how you feel!!
I have one story in the message board. But it took me ages to have the guts to post it...and more to keep writing it.
My advise is start writting something and post it. If someone posts keep it up, even if it is only one person (thats what happened with mine). Eventualy people will start posting (trust me). And then suddenly people start commenting your story and more people read it!!!
The thing you need to remember is to not stop posting.
Hope this stuff helps you!!!!
PS: Guys could you read my story. Just click on View All Posts (its under my agent card).
I have one story in the message board. But it took me ages to have the guts to post it...and more to keep writing it.
My advise is start writting something and post it. If someone posts keep it up, even if it is only one person (thats what happened with mine). Eventualy people will start posting (trust me). And then suddenly people start commenting your story and more people read it!!!
The thing you need to remember is to not stop posting.
Hope this stuff helps you!!!!
PS: Guys could you read my story. Just click on View All Posts (its under my agent card).
Ana
13, Daughter of Posseidon, Writer and Artist
Love to Andrea, Cecy, Karla, Laura, Ainoa and Caro for beign on my side in good times and bad times.
Posted at: 6:20 pm on December 8, 2011
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Your welcome and SlyRaven13 is right. It doesn't matter if you don't get many posts because we all hit ruff patches. Even I have a story that no one reads anymore, but I still continue. :D
Katelin
Mischief Managed
You say it best, when you say nothing at all.
I wish I may, I wish I might, Have the dream I dream tonight
Posted at: 7:28 am on December 9, 2011
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SlyRaven13,
I have decided to answer your questions to the best of my ability, (BEACAUSE I DON'T WANT TO GIVE AWAY TOO MUCH OF MY STORY!!! XD) So, ... yeah.
First! The royals can hire the ghost spies to spy on the other demensions, (because all of the other demensions kinda hate each other for certain reasons but are forced to play nice by the Quadruple Demensionaverse council!) So the Strange demension sends their spies over to the confusing demension (and the confusing demension does vice versa) and they end up in a war! Lexy wants her freedom so badly, and Jason feels sorry for her because all of the oddballs that work are being forced to fight the plastics war, so Lexy and Jason run away to the nuetral land and start figuring out a plan to stop the war.
Secondly, everyone can move through out the demensions by first going to the nuetral land. This land connects all of the demension and keeps them from falling apart. the oonly demension not connected to the nuetral land is the secret demension, they are kind of ... underground? and to get to the nuetral ground, they must go through on of the other demensions.
Third, Lexy does sort of lead a small rebellion, in some ways. She and Jason rebell agains the natural order of things and rebell against Jason's parents ways!
Lastly, the 4 demensions need each other to exist because in the sequal(?) [maybe(?)] I might have another demension (not any of the listed 4)come attack the Quadruple demensionaverse and they will all have to work together!!! Also, if one demension is destroyed, it will be like a chain reaction and all of the others will be destroyed too.
So, that's it! and if any one else has any questions, please feel free to ask!
Here's an example of a question and answer;
12345: What is the meaning of LIFE?
WriterGirl1: 42, cupcakes, pie, and pi (3.141592.......)
Oh yeah, I need help with a character!
So, Lexy has a little sister and I need help with her little sister's best friend. I can't think of a good name for her! (She is 3 years old)
AND... If you guys would like to,... I might need more characters so if you want to fill out the form above I'll pick the most interesting one and use that one. I'll wait untill December 24th and check them all out on christmas and choose the best one then and post the winner by the 26th. Also, if some of you girls want to be obsessive Jason Saunders fans, just let me know the name of your character! And if you guys have any ideas for new ability possibilities, let me know too!
So I'll be posting chapter 1 later today.
PEACE OUT SOUR CROUT!!! XD
I have decided to answer your questions to the best of my ability, (BEACAUSE I DON'T WANT TO GIVE AWAY TOO MUCH OF MY STORY!!! XD) So, ... yeah.
First! The royals can hire the ghost spies to spy on the other demensions, (because all of the other demensions kinda hate each other for certain reasons but are forced to play nice by the Quadruple Demensionaverse council!) So the Strange demension sends their spies over to the confusing demension (and the confusing demension does vice versa) and they end up in a war! Lexy wants her freedom so badly, and Jason feels sorry for her because all of the oddballs that work are being forced to fight the plastics war, so Lexy and Jason run away to the nuetral land and start figuring out a plan to stop the war.
Secondly, everyone can move through out the demensions by first going to the nuetral land. This land connects all of the demension and keeps them from falling apart. the oonly demension not connected to the nuetral land is the secret demension, they are kind of ... underground? and to get to the nuetral ground, they must go through on of the other demensions.
Third, Lexy does sort of lead a small rebellion, in some ways. She and Jason rebell agains the natural order of things and rebell against Jason's parents ways!
Lastly, the 4 demensions need each other to exist because in the sequal(?) [maybe(?)] I might have another demension (not any of the listed 4)come attack the Quadruple demensionaverse and they will all have to work together!!! Also, if one demension is destroyed, it will be like a chain reaction and all of the others will be destroyed too.
So, that's it! and if any one else has any questions, please feel free to ask!
Here's an example of a question and answer;
12345: What is the meaning of LIFE?
WriterGirl1: 42, cupcakes, pie, and pi (3.141592.......)
Oh yeah, I need help with a character!
So, Lexy has a little sister and I need help with her little sister's best friend. I can't think of a good name for her! (She is 3 years old)
AND... If you guys would like to,... I might need more characters so if you want to fill out the form above I'll pick the most interesting one and use that one. I'll wait untill December 24th and check them all out on christmas and choose the best one then and post the winner by the 26th. Also, if some of you girls want to be obsessive Jason Saunders fans, just let me know the name of your character! And if you guys have any ideas for new ability possibilities, let me know too!
So I'll be posting chapter 1 later today.
PEACE OUT SOUR CROUT!!! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 3:47 pm on December 9, 2011
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Love the intruduction of your story...
Can i be in your story??
Can i be in your story??
Andrea
13 years, Ravenclaw, Sibuna Member, Daughter of Poseidon!
Love to Ana,Cecy,Gaby,Karla,,Laura and Caro for being always there.
Posted at: 1:10 pm on December 10, 2011
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How about Dani? For the 3yr old sister. Or Emmie? Or Sadie? :) :D :)
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You say it best, when you say nothing at all.
I wish I may, I wish I might, Have the dream I dream tonight
Posted at: 1:13 pm on December 10, 2011
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I want to be part of your story.
Name. Andrea
Age. 12 years
Gender. Female
Hair color. Black
Eye color. Brown
Looks. Pale with pink cheeks. *go to my description in my friends story. the twins*
Ability. Teleporter and also Knower.
Ekat.
Name. Andrea
Age. 12 years
Gender. Female
Hair color. Black
Eye color. Brown
Looks. Pale with pink cheeks. *go to my description in my friends story. the twins*
Ability. Teleporter and also Knower.
Ekat.
Andrea
13 years, Ravenclaw, Sibuna Member, Daughter of Poseidon!
Love to Ana,Cecy,Gaby,Karla,,Laura and Caro for being always there.
Posted at: 1:16 pm on December 10, 2011
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SecretAgent852,
you have to choose one ability unless the form says otherwise, only specific abilities have to be pared with another. And I'm sorry if that sounds rude, really I am.
you have to choose one ability unless the form says otherwise, only specific abilities have to be pared with another. And I'm sorry if that sounds rude, really I am.
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 4:07 pm on December 10, 2011
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LivelyJade1,
I need a name for Lexy's sisters BEST FRIEND, but I really like those names so I might use them for Rebecca's (Lexy's sister) friend!
That's okay right?
I need a name for Lexy's sisters BEST FRIEND, but I really like those names so I might use them for Rebecca's (Lexy's sister) friend!
That's okay right?
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 4:10 pm on December 10, 2011
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I decided to edit the form so that I can do better with choosing a character, so here's the new form! (if you already filled out the form, just make a new post with the stuff you don't have and the stuff you want to change [if there is stuff you want to change] and post it here!)
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Odd-ball or plastic?:
(if oddball...)
Hair color:
Eye color:
Ability: (one that's on the list and only one unless the ability says it goes with another) (if you want to come up with your own ability, make sure you describe it to me so I know exactly how it works!)
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Allergies (if any):
Friends with:
Enemies with:
favorite food:
Favorite color:
Favorite activities to do in free time:
Favorite genre of book:
favorite class:
Favorite way to drive enemies (if any) crazy:
Favorite ice-cream topping:
Anything else you want to throw in:
General description of their life to this point:
So please fill this out and remeber, the due date for these is the 24th of December and I'll choose the winner on Christmas and post that by the end of the day (unless I forget). BYE!!! XD
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Odd-ball or plastic?:
(if oddball...)
Hair color:
Eye color:
Ability: (one that's on the list and only one unless the ability says it goes with another) (if you want to come up with your own ability, make sure you describe it to me so I know exactly how it works!)
Personality:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Allergies (if any):
Friends with:
Enemies with:
favorite food:
Favorite color:
Favorite activities to do in free time:
Favorite genre of book:
favorite class:
Favorite way to drive enemies (if any) crazy:
Favorite ice-cream topping:
Anything else you want to throw in:
General description of their life to this point:
So please fill this out and remeber, the due date for these is the 24th of December and I'll choose the winner on Christmas and post that by the end of the day (unless I forget). BYE!!! XD
I may be a janus...
BUT ONLY WILL THE VESPERS GO DOWN IF ALL THE BRANCHES COME TOGETHER!!!
-WriterGirl1
Writer and dancer. :)
Posted at: 4:26 pm on December 10, 2011
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