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the story part 2
i walked over to the theater with Dan, holding hands. he payed for the tickets and we entered the room. nobody was there. we were alone. we smiled at the same time and said,"we are so lucky." about halfway through the movie, i noticed that the ceiling was...weird. i looked again and realised that there was a poison needle pointed at Dan. i saw it fall. i pulled Dan towards me. the needle hit his chair. Dan looked confused so i pointed at his chair. he gasped and grabbed my hand. we ran up the stairs towards the ceiling. i took out a rope and swung it at the ceiling. i tugged at the rope. tight.i thought. i swung as Dan screamed at me,"don't leave me!!!!" he grabbed the rope. i swung us up and held on to the ceiling. a hole of course. Dan was above me, so he climbed up first. i felt my fingers. needles. how did i not notice? i felt faint, but i fought the feeling. Dan pulled me up as i bleeded non-stop. when he saw me like that, he took out the needles and took out bandages from his bag. he bandaged me as i looked at him. i felt someone pull me back. i fell. down the hole. it was a long drop. i saw Dan fighting someone. he had held that person's hand and ran down with that person towards me."Dan! i'm sorry. i thought she was an imposter. a vesper." i heard that person shouting. Dan took out his mobile and called the hospital. i was bleeding alot. the person leaned against me. the last person i saw before i blacked out was Amy Cahill. i woke up. Dan was holding my hand. i smiled."Dan.." i muttered.Dan smiled and said,"Sunnie! you're alive! the doctor said you nearly died! i was so worried and i thought you were dead then i was relieved. Amy pushed you off. and the needles on your hand did have a lot of poison. Amy had gone on a shopping trip and she forgot that she was supposed to tell me and she was camping here. the first needle. the one on my seat was supposed to be for you. but Amy aimed wrongly." i felt pain and coughed. Dan's expression changed and shouted,"DOCTOR MCFEY!! SHE'S COUGHING!!DOCTOR!!" a doctor rushed in and checked me. i heard him say"she is in critical condition, but she just has a cold. she can be discharged. but don't let her do extreme stunts. i can't believe it's been only 3 days. a miracle." Dan jumped up and down and held me up. i didn't feel any pain when i saw his eyes. i got up and walked to him. i hugged him. i asked,"wh-where is A-Amy?" Dan said she was with Evan persuading him to tell her something. for protection, Dr Mc.Fey drove us to Dan's place. i walked slowly, holding Dan's hand and opened the door. i saw Evan and Sinead. i had only 3 bandages. one on my arm, one under my shirt, and one on my leg. Amy looked at me in horror when i saw her. she kept saying"sorry. i'm so sorry. so so sorry!" Sinead kept staring at me until i felt uncomfortable. Evan looked sad. i wonder why?
I am Sunnie Cahill,
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and the cahill agent for the job!
"whatevs!"yours truly,Sunnie
Posted at: 5:19 am on October 13, 2011
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the story part 2
OMG!!!! YOU NEED TO CONTINUE!!!! DON'T STOP!!!!! YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!
Could you read my story too...I'm trying to get people to comment to see if I should continue it or not...please read it...link is below...thanks!!!
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/3580 :D
Could you read my story too...I'm trying to get people to comment to see if I should continue it or not...please read it...link is below...thanks!!!
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/3580 :D
"NO JIMMY PROTESTED!"-Louis
"Simple, but effective"-Harry
"Vas Happenin?" -Zayn
"POTATO!"-Niall
"1, 2, 3, flick " -Liam
Posted at: 7:15 am on October 14, 2011
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the story part 2
Wait...never mind what I just wrote...but I can say I added more...:D
"NO JIMMY PROTESTED!"-Louis
"Simple, but effective"-Harry
"Vas Happenin?" -Zayn
"POTATO!"-Niall
"1, 2, 3, flick " -Liam
Posted at: 7:17 am on October 14, 2011
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the story part 2
i stared at everyone. "Guys,.....you're getting creepy...." Dan started to walk towards Amy and said," why is Evan like that?" Amy replied,"he told me everything he knew about the vespers." i glanced at Sinead. she was still staring at me."Cut it out Sinead!" but she was still staring. i kicked her. she was still staring."Sinead?..."i whispered. i walked around her. Needles.i plucked them all out and let her sit on a chair."Evan!! do you have any idea who did this?!" he stared at me and said,"um....uh...the vispers?" "Vespers."Dan corrected.wow. i thought. his acting skills are really god. then again, what could you not be in a vesper? i suddenly realised something. WE CANNOT LOSE ANOTHER STARLING. we've already rescued Natalie. we can't let Sinead die. she's the only starling we have. the twins were captured. somehow. anyways, i shouted,"GET SINEAD TO THE HOSPITAL!! OR MAYBE, YOU CAN GET HER TO HAMILTON AND IAN!! JUST GET HER TO SOMEONE WHO KNOWS HOW TO TAKE OUT POISON!!" Dan and Amy rushed to Sinead and carried her out. "Stay safe."whispered Dan. i nodded. i asked Evan some questions. by the end of the last question, i was almost convinced that Evan was just a normal bystander. but i decided to ask one question."what is your father's name?" he was surprised and said,"Gregory Tolliver." i was thinking back. i heard that name before. but where? i remembered. my mom mentioned him to me a few years back... with a letter.
Dear Sunnie,
we are sorry for leaving you behind. i have something to say to you. stay away from the Tollivers. Greg Tolliver especially. do whatever you can to stay away from them. they are dangerous. they could easily use tungsten to kill you. stay with Shannon. the cahills will protect you. we love you.
i never realised that tungsten was a clue. Suddenly, someone punched me but given the skills of a lucian, i blocked it and started to fight the person. it was Hamilton."what are you doing here Hamilton, and why did you punch me?!" Hamilton stood up and said,"you have to come see Sinead. now." i didn't hesitate. but i stopped halfway, saying"what about Evan?" Hamilton said to just leave him there. as i walked into the room, i saw Sinead walking around, smiling. "something is wrong with her. there was something inside the needles. not poison but something else." i walked to Sinead and tapped her on the shoulder."who are you people?" she had lost her memories."where's Ted and Ned?" i sighed. we would have to explain everything to her....again.
I am Sunnie Cahill,
author
singer
and the cahill agent for the job!
"whatevs!"yours truly,Sunnie
Posted at: 11:05 pm on October 16, 2011
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