ohk guys im starting to write my own story of ian and amy......n also evan's there.....so here i start
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AMY'S POV
amy just sat in her study,her homework in front of her, while she was totally lost in her dreams of evan smiling and looking at her.suddenly,her dream was interrupted as she heard a noise of something falling......"what was that??....oh prbably Dan,trying to do some ninja steps...."she again started floating in his dreams when her mobile rang...."urghh!! what is up with everybody......""IAN'S MEASSAGE""....ian?? really ??..." she opened up the message "HI AMY.....WHATCHA DOING??....SINEAD NEEDS SOME HELP IN SORTING SOME CONFIDENTIAL FILES N THEN, WE CAN ALSO TALK AS YOU JUST KEEP IGNORING ME THESE DAYS"......what!! i dont ignore him!....i just did not want to talk to him......(after some thinkin) ohkk....i do ignore him REPLY-"OHK I AM ON MY WAY.....N.....WE CAN TALK ALSO" SEND......................urghhh!!! why did you send this!!.....dont you remember amy,you already have a BF!! ohk....now that the damage id done,you have to talk to him,no more ignoring
suddenly her mobile rang again
EVAN'S MEASSAGE "HI!!....I JUST GOT OFF FROM DOING MY HOMEWORK.....WE CAN GO OUT"......what,now!!???........GREATT ...........REPLY "SORRY EVAN CANT COME.....BUSY WITH NELLIE"
IAN'S POV
AMY'S REPLY "OHK I AM ON MY WAY......N.....WE CAN TALK ALSO"...........so she's coming to talk to me.....actuallu sinead , without that snogish boyfreind of hers.......JUST HOPING THAT SHE COMES!!!
AMY'S POV
(sitting in the car)......great amy.....look at wat you just did!......you just ignored your own boyfriend for sinead........no.......for ian.
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keep going it is so awesome.
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DecipheringEnthusiastic5, I would like to propose me being your official spell checker/editor/format revisor. No offense, and your writing is really good, but your spelling is kinda iffie. Here's my application:
Name: AgentDecoy50
Age: 13
Experience: English 1 Writing/Research Class essay
Here's a sample...
Evan's POV
I'm gonna ask her right now about it. She's gotta answer me!!!
"Hey, Amy! I wanna ask you something...," I said
"Go on...," she replied.
"What's with that new guy," I asked, "Ian?"
"Umm," she hesitated, "Evan, that explaining is gonna take some time."
"Amy, please don't lie again."
Amy's POV
OMG!!! What should I say to Evan now?
What do you think? Please consider me for the job, Thank You!
Name: AgentDecoy50
Age: 13
Experience: English 1 Writing/Research Class essay
Here's a sample...
Evan's POV
I'm gonna ask her right now about it. She's gotta answer me!!!
"Hey, Amy! I wanna ask you something...," I said
"Go on...," she replied.
"What's with that new guy," I asked, "Ian?"
"Umm," she hesitated, "Evan, that explaining is gonna take some time."
"Amy, please don't lie again."
Amy's POV
OMG!!! What should I say to Evan now?
What do you think? Please consider me for the job, Thank You!
IAN n AMY.....n EVAN!!
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IAN n AMY.....n EVAN!!
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Posted at: 7:34 pm on October 17, 2011
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heyy guyzzz....i'm sooo sorry i havent been writing!!>....i dont know what happened....i sent my last entry ....but it wasnt there!!!...........here's the new piece!!
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AMY'S POV
evan "amy....whats with you and the new guy??...."
amy "evan.....its just.....ohkkk....umm"
evan "amy....plzz dont lie to me again..."
amy "look,evan,ohkk...i have a past....get it???and i swear,i have gotten over it....if you knwo what i mean"
evan "but amy....look,i get it,but i like ypu a lot!!...ohk,im not letting go of you"
amy "i promise evan i wont let ian get between us...."
evan "ohkk....so bye....we're both late for class"
<amy enters her class>
oh my goddd!!...why is there always no seat for me!!....am i like the lonely freak who has no friends!!!???......god,i guess its because of ian.speaking of him,where is he??....oh yea,there with christie........
<after school> (amy and christie are talking)
amy "soooo.....ian kabra??huh??"
christie "what do you mean??<smiles>"
amy "come on.....you know what i mean...."
christie "of course....but right now,,,we're just friends........speaking of which,why were you two talking soo much and smiling in the first period??"
amy "umm....he was just cracking some jokes...."
christie "reall??....you know,he's just really charming but i didnt know he was funny.....hey,there's nothing between you two,is there???
amy "what??....are you like....kidding??....i dont even know him....."
christie "good..."
<amy recieves a msg from ian>
chrstie "what is it..?"
amy "umm....just evan....you know"
christie "<smiles>...ohkk,biee!!"
IAN'S MSG "HEY AMY,...WANNA GO OUT TONIGHT??"
AMY'S REPLY "WITH WHOM??..(AND DONT SAY 'YOU')"
IAN'S REPLY "COME ON AMY!!....JUST ONE TIME..."
AMY'S REPLY "OH YEA...VERY FUNNY"
IAN'S REPLY "THAT I AM...:) :)"
AMY'S REPLY "CANT COME.HOMEWORK."
IAN'S REPLY "HAHA AMY.....HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN THAT I GO TO YOUR SCHOOL NOW?"
AMY'S REPLY "I HAVE TO GO WITH EVAN"
IAN'S REPLY "TOLLIVER AGAIN??....CANT HE LUST LEAVE"
AMY'S REPLY "HUH....WHATEVER"
IAN'S REPLY "ANYWAYS,AT LEAST TELL ME WHERE ARE YOU GOING??"
AMY'S REPLY "TO THE NEW CAFE IN PACIFIC MALL......"
IAN'S REPLY "WHAT!!....YOU'RE NOT COMING??!!!!!"
IAN'S REPLY "YOU KNOW I THOUGHT FIRST THAT I SHOULDNT BUT NOW.............I'M SOOO COMING"
AMY'S REPLY "I HATE YOU IAN!!!!!!"
oh my goddd!!....now ian is gonna come and totallly ruin my date!!!!"
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plzzz telll me how it izz!!!
anyways,,,
hey agent decoy 50....i dont mind....you can be editor....and i know that i just miss some words while writing...
and deciphering assassin 46....you still havent told me which name!!??
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AMY'S POV
evan "amy....whats with you and the new guy??...."
amy "evan.....its just.....ohkkk....umm"
evan "amy....plzz dont lie to me again..."
amy "look,evan,ohkk...i have a past....get it???and i swear,i have gotten over it....if you knwo what i mean"
evan "but amy....look,i get it,but i like ypu a lot!!...ohk,im not letting go of you"
amy "i promise evan i wont let ian get between us...."
evan "ohkk....so bye....we're both late for class"
<amy enters her class>
oh my goddd!!...why is there always no seat for me!!....am i like the lonely freak who has no friends!!!???......god,i guess its because of ian.speaking of him,where is he??....oh yea,there with christie........
<after school> (amy and christie are talking)
amy "soooo.....ian kabra??huh??"
christie "what do you mean??<smiles>"
amy "come on.....you know what i mean...."
christie "of course....but right now,,,we're just friends........speaking of which,why were you two talking soo much and smiling in the first period??"
amy "umm....he was just cracking some jokes...."
christie "reall??....you know,he's just really charming but i didnt know he was funny.....hey,there's nothing between you two,is there???
amy "what??....are you like....kidding??....i dont even know him....."
christie "good..."
<amy recieves a msg from ian>
chrstie "what is it..?"
amy "umm....just evan....you know"
christie "<smiles>...ohkk,biee!!"
IAN'S MSG "HEY AMY,...WANNA GO OUT TONIGHT??"
AMY'S REPLY "WITH WHOM??..(AND DONT SAY 'YOU')"
IAN'S REPLY "COME ON AMY!!....JUST ONE TIME..."
AMY'S REPLY "OH YEA...VERY FUNNY"
IAN'S REPLY "THAT I AM...:) :)"
AMY'S REPLY "CANT COME.HOMEWORK."
IAN'S REPLY "HAHA AMY.....HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN THAT I GO TO YOUR SCHOOL NOW?"
AMY'S REPLY "I HAVE TO GO WITH EVAN"
IAN'S REPLY "TOLLIVER AGAIN??....CANT HE LUST LEAVE"
AMY'S REPLY "HUH....WHATEVER"
IAN'S REPLY "ANYWAYS,AT LEAST TELL ME WHERE ARE YOU GOING??"
AMY'S REPLY "TO THE NEW CAFE IN PACIFIC MALL......"
IAN'S REPLY "WHAT!!....YOU'RE NOT COMING??!!!!!"
IAN'S REPLY "YOU KNOW I THOUGHT FIRST THAT I SHOULDNT BUT NOW.............I'M SOOO COMING"
AMY'S REPLY "I HATE YOU IAN!!!!!!"
oh my goddd!!....now ian is gonna come and totallly ruin my date!!!!"
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plzzz telll me how it izz!!!
anyways,,,
hey agent decoy 50....i dont mind....you can be editor....and i know that i just miss some words while writing...
and deciphering assassin 46....you still havent told me which name!!??
Smriti
Catching Fire~ November 22,2013
“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
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please write more and could you but Kurt in some how?
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KEEP WRITING! OH MAN IM YELLING ARENT I? TO MUCH COFFE FOR MEH! ANYWAY KEPP WRITING!
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Thanks. You won't regret it and I promise I will do my best to get the revised version in as soon as possible. Here we go!
Amy's POV
"Amy," Evan asked, "what's with you and that new guy?"
"Evan...ok, umm...," Amy started, about to recite her hastily put together excuse, but it seemed Evan sensed it.
"Amy, please don't lie to me again."
"Look, Evan, I have a past, get it? But I swear, I've gotten over it, if you know what I mean," Amy said.
"But Amy...look, I understand it, I really do. But I like you a lot, you know that. So you should know that I'm not letting go of you."
"I promise Evan, I won't let Ian get between us," Amy responded.
"Alright, Amy. We're both late for class so, I'll see you later," Evan said before walking down the hallway. Amy entered her classroom and looked for a seat.
Oh my gosh, why is there always no seat for me? Am I like the lonely freak who has no friends? I guess it's because of Ian. Speaking of whom, where is he? Oh yeah, over there with...Christie?
After school, Amy and Christie are talking.
"So...Ian Kabra, huh?
"What do you mean?" Christie replies, smiling.
"Come on, you know what I mean," Amy responded.
"Of course," Christie said. "But right now, we're just friends. Speaking of which, why were you two talking and smiling so much in first period?"
"Oh. Umm...he was just cracking some really funny jokes."
"Really? " Christie asked. "I know he's really charming, but I didn't know he was funny too. Hey, there's nothing going on between you two, is there?"
"What?" Amy responded pretending to be surprised. "Are you like, kidding? I don't even know him..."
"Good."
Amy receives a text message from Ian.
"Who is it?" asks Christie.
"Just Evan, you know."
"Okay. Bye!"
Ian's message: Hey Amy, wanna go out tonight?
Amy's Reply: With who? (and when I ask who, I mean don't say you).
Ian's Reply: Come on, Amy! Just one time.
Amy's Reply: Oh, yeah. Very funny.
Ian's Reply: That, I am. :)
Amy's Reply: Can't come. Homework.
Ian's Reply: Haha Amy. Have you forgotten that I go to your school now?
Amy's Reply: I have to go with Evan.
Ian's Reply: Tolliver, again? Can't he just leave or something?
Amy's Reply: No!
Ian's Reply: Come on. At least tell me where you're going.
Amy's Reply: To that new cafe in Pacific Mall. You're not coming, right?
A certain length of time passed before Ian replied again.
Ian's Reply: ...You know what? I thought that I shouldn't at first but now, I'm so going.
Amy Reply: I hate you!
Now Ian's going to totally ruin my date!
Amy's POV
"Amy," Evan asked, "what's with you and that new guy?"
"Evan...ok, umm...," Amy started, about to recite her hastily put together excuse, but it seemed Evan sensed it.
"Amy, please don't lie to me again."
"Look, Evan, I have a past, get it? But I swear, I've gotten over it, if you know what I mean," Amy said.
"But Amy...look, I understand it, I really do. But I like you a lot, you know that. So you should know that I'm not letting go of you."
"I promise Evan, I won't let Ian get between us," Amy responded.
"Alright, Amy. We're both late for class so, I'll see you later," Evan said before walking down the hallway. Amy entered her classroom and looked for a seat.
Oh my gosh, why is there always no seat for me? Am I like the lonely freak who has no friends? I guess it's because of Ian. Speaking of whom, where is he? Oh yeah, over there with...Christie?
After school, Amy and Christie are talking.
"So...Ian Kabra, huh?
"What do you mean?" Christie replies, smiling.
"Come on, you know what I mean," Amy responded.
"Of course," Christie said. "But right now, we're just friends. Speaking of which, why were you two talking and smiling so much in first period?"
"Oh. Umm...he was just cracking some really funny jokes."
"Really? " Christie asked. "I know he's really charming, but I didn't know he was funny too. Hey, there's nothing going on between you two, is there?"
"What?" Amy responded pretending to be surprised. "Are you like, kidding? I don't even know him..."
"Good."
Amy receives a text message from Ian.
"Who is it?" asks Christie.
"Just Evan, you know."
"Okay. Bye!"
Ian's message: Hey Amy, wanna go out tonight?
Amy's Reply: With who? (and when I ask who, I mean don't say you).
Ian's Reply: Come on, Amy! Just one time.
Amy's Reply: Oh, yeah. Very funny.
Ian's Reply: That, I am. :)
Amy's Reply: Can't come. Homework.
Ian's Reply: Haha Amy. Have you forgotten that I go to your school now?
Amy's Reply: I have to go with Evan.
Ian's Reply: Tolliver, again? Can't he just leave or something?
Amy's Reply: No!
Ian's Reply: Come on. At least tell me where you're going.
Amy's Reply: To that new cafe in Pacific Mall. You're not coming, right?
A certain length of time passed before Ian replied again.
Ian's Reply: ...You know what? I thought that I shouldn't at first but now, I'm so going.
Amy Reply: I hate you!
Now Ian's going to totally ruin my date!
IAN n AMY.....n EVAN!!
smriti, this is sooo awesome totally masto
i knew u were writing but thisssss good????
i never knew u were an author
just keep writing and thriling us all
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i knew u were writing but thisssss good????
i never knew u were an author
just keep writing and thriling us all
love your posts
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PLZ, PLZ, PLZ, WRITE MORE! A.S.A.P.!
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continuing!!!...plzzz comment!!
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AMY'S POV
oh my god!!!...look at me!!!...my dress is ruined!!...i look horrible.and now my date is gonna be ruined by that cobra.!!..the creep.
suddenly her phone rang..
EVAN'S MSG "ready?? :)"
AMY REPLY "yeah...:)"
stupid smily face.i just wish that i could be like that.it was almost like i could see the future.....her date being ruined.evan angry.ian laughing.amy crying.
<into the car,talking to evan>
evan "hey....how r u???...."
amy "im good<smiles>"
evan "you look worried"
amy "im not worried...."
evan "hey....you're my girlfrnd.....i know when you''re worried"
amy "its nothing..."
evan "there is something,isnt it??"
<amy loses it suddenly and starts wailing>
amy "evan,im soo sorry...!!!..."
evan "amy whats up??<horrified>"
oh my god amy!!....stop it!!...you cant tell him....!!plzzz stop it!!
amy "umm....my dress got ruined!!!"
evan "you look wonderfull!!...and you're dressdoesnt look ruined"
amy "umm....<spills coffee on her dress>now it is"
evan "amy......r u losing it???...do you wanna go back??"
amy "im good.....i just feel sooo....sick"
evan "ohkk...then we go back.lets leave the date"
amy "nah....its alright."
evan "get a tissue"
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AMY'S POV
oh my god!!!...look at me!!!...my dress is ruined!!...i look horrible.and now my date is gonna be ruined by that cobra.!!..the creep.
suddenly her phone rang..
EVAN'S MSG "ready?? :)"
AMY REPLY "yeah...:)"
stupid smily face.i just wish that i could be like that.it was almost like i could see the future.....her date being ruined.evan angry.ian laughing.amy crying.
<into the car,talking to evan>
evan "hey....how r u???...."
amy "im good<smiles>"
evan "you look worried"
amy "im not worried...."
evan "hey....you're my girlfrnd.....i know when you''re worried"
amy "its nothing..."
evan "there is something,isnt it??"
<amy loses it suddenly and starts wailing>
amy "evan,im soo sorry...!!!..."
evan "amy whats up??<horrified>"
oh my god amy!!....stop it!!...you cant tell him....!!plzzz stop it!!
amy "umm....my dress got ruined!!!"
evan "you look wonderfull!!...and you're dressdoesnt look ruined"
amy "umm....<spills coffee on her dress>now it is"
evan "amy......r u losing it???...do you wanna go back??"
amy "im good.....i just feel sooo....sick"
evan "ohkk...then we go back.lets leave the date"
amy "nah....its alright."
evan "get a tissue"
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“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
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Haha sweet! lovin it!:D
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AWESOME!
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The universe is cracked... The Pandorica shall open, and Silence will FALL
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Finally, someone who gets my view on Evan! Cheers, cousin.
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heyy plzzz.....have you all stopped reading my posts????.....reply plzzzz!!
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EVAN'S POV
man,what is up with my girlfriend???....she's just lost it!!!....i mena,its just a date!!!
evan "amy,you alright now??"
amy "yeah....."
evan "what happened"
amy "its just......nthng"
evan "nthng what???"
amy "its the new guy.....ian kabra"
evan "what bout him??....is he stalking you??"
amy "noooo!!!....he isnt stalking me!!!!!!"
woah!!!.....why isnt she chillin??....dude,i just know there is smething wrong with that kabra.....i cant believe i thought that he was nice.
AMY'S POV
oh my godd!!!....evan thinks ian is stalking me????....is he kiddin???.....omg,how did he know!!!!!!im gonna kill ian when i find him at the cafe!!!!no,im gonna burn him steadily,take his ashes and feed those ashes to the mice that live outside the school garden!!!!!.....omg....i have got to chill out....im not like this and now probably evan things that im psycho.....well i'll tell him im notinterested in ian....he has to believe me....or else.....we'll get to that later .....
IAN'S POV
this is soooo gonna be funn!!!!....i can just see it all happeningg!!.....yo,tolliver,here i come to get my girl back!!!
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howz it???? plzz telll meee!!!
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EVAN'S POV
man,what is up with my girlfriend???....she's just lost it!!!....i mena,its just a date!!!
evan "amy,you alright now??"
amy "yeah....."
evan "what happened"
amy "its just......nthng"
evan "nthng what???"
amy "its the new guy.....ian kabra"
evan "what bout him??....is he stalking you??"
amy "noooo!!!....he isnt stalking me!!!!!!"
woah!!!.....why isnt she chillin??....dude,i just know there is smething wrong with that kabra.....i cant believe i thought that he was nice.
AMY'S POV
oh my godd!!!....evan thinks ian is stalking me????....is he kiddin???.....omg,how did he know!!!!!!im gonna kill ian when i find him at the cafe!!!!no,im gonna burn him steadily,take his ashes and feed those ashes to the mice that live outside the school garden!!!!!.....omg....i have got to chill out....im not like this and now probably evan things that im psycho.....well i'll tell him im notinterested in ian....he has to believe me....or else.....we'll get to that later .....
IAN'S POV
this is soooo gonna be funn!!!!....i can just see it all happeningg!!.....yo,tolliver,here i come to get my girl back!!!
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howz it???? plzz telll meee!!!
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SOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY!! WRITE MORE PLEASE!!
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I love that Amy takes the cofee and dumps it all over herself! I can`t stop laughing!
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Yo,tolliver,here i come to get my girl back!!!??? LOL so funny ;)
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ohk here i cont.....hey,n plzz can anybody gimme some ideas for the story to make it keep going???
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AMY'S POV<amy and evan enter the mall)
ohk amy....chill!!!....maybe ian wont be able to make it and when he comes....we would be gone!!!god,i so much wish i hadnt come here.....why didnt i listen when evan told to me to go back!!....ohk...here's the cafe....well,it looks kinda empty.....just two old ladies,one more couple,a weird-looking man n.....a teenager wearing a light coloured armani suit.good ian,you're sooo on time.....and now,im dead.
<waitress adresses amy n evan and evan asks for a toble for two>
waitress "come with me sir"
heyy,,she's taking us to that table.....its sooo near to ian's!!!
amy "(shouts)not that one!!"
evan "umm...amy why??...it coesnt matter"
amy "i just ....dont like sitting near the window...."
wiatress"ohk...so you can have that one,on the other side"
dude,that one id directly opposire to ian's!!!
amy "heyy...i dont like sitting near the door either.....could we please sit on that one<points to a table very much away>"
waitress "sorry ma'am....its reserved."
urgghhh!!>....great.....
amy "ohk then we'll just sit on that one"
IAN'S POV
oh amy....always trying to ignore me.....but i'll always follow you around!!!you're totally not getting rid of me that fast!!...just wait and watch.
EVAN'S POV
what is up with amy!!....she may think that i dont understand things but dude ....im not a stupid geek.she is trying to take a table away from that person in the white suit.....who is he??....i did catch a glimpse of him....man he looked familiar,didnt he??
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heyy....i wrote this one reallly nicely....plzz comment on this one!!!
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AMY'S POV<amy and evan enter the mall)
ohk amy....chill!!!....maybe ian wont be able to make it and when he comes....we would be gone!!!god,i so much wish i hadnt come here.....why didnt i listen when evan told to me to go back!!....ohk...here's the cafe....well,it looks kinda empty.....just two old ladies,one more couple,a weird-looking man n.....a teenager wearing a light coloured armani suit.good ian,you're sooo on time.....and now,im dead.
<waitress adresses amy n evan and evan asks for a toble for two>
waitress "come with me sir"
heyy,,she's taking us to that table.....its sooo near to ian's!!!
amy "(shouts)not that one!!"
evan "umm...amy why??...it coesnt matter"
amy "i just ....dont like sitting near the window...."
wiatress"ohk...so you can have that one,on the other side"
dude,that one id directly opposire to ian's!!!
amy "heyy...i dont like sitting near the door either.....could we please sit on that one<points to a table very much away>"
waitress "sorry ma'am....its reserved."
urgghhh!!>....great.....
amy "ohk then we'll just sit on that one"
IAN'S POV
oh amy....always trying to ignore me.....but i'll always follow you around!!!you're totally not getting rid of me that fast!!...just wait and watch.
EVAN'S POV
what is up with amy!!....she may think that i dont understand things but dude ....im not a stupid geek.she is trying to take a table away from that person in the white suit.....who is he??....i did catch a glimpse of him....man he looked familiar,didnt he??
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heyy....i wrote this one reallly nicely....plzz comment on this one!!!
Smriti
Catching Fire~ November 22,2013
“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
Posted at: 1:29 pm on October 22, 2011
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LOL WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted at: 6:30 pm on October 22, 2011
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Hey I like your story and can you please look at my story its called Amy and Ian story (made by me and my friend)
Please comment and tell me if you like it
P.S.Umm..... can you also reccomend this to other people
-AgentArrow3 :)
Please comment and tell me if you like it
P.S.Umm..... can you also reccomend this to other people
-AgentArrow3 :)
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UNICORNS!!! :D
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Posted at: 9:06 pm on October 22, 2011
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I love it sooo much!
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Posted at: 11:23 pm on October 22, 2011
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hurry up and write more.................
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Posted at: 12:49 am on October 23, 2011
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This one was a lot easier to read! Keep it up! I'll post some ideas on I Need Help from K.A.31 and D.E.5. Hopefully, they help. Love the story!!! It's so FUNNY!!! I just LOVE Ian! And poor Amy! She's so frazzled!!! I'm laughing so hard I almost fell out of the chair! Please continue! As Ian would say, "Lovely." ;)
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Posted at: 8:01 am on October 23, 2011
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I really want Amy and Ian to be a couple, but its your story, so just keep on going!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted at: 5:03 pm on October 23, 2011
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AMY'S POV
im gooodd.....just dont take any tension now or else you'll lose it again amy like you did in the car........dude,look what i did!!...that was sooo expensive....well,its not like im poor or anything......whatever,ian has this menu that he is holding in front of his face....i just wish he keeps it like that allll the time!!....
why is that cobra leaning....he certainly doesnt want evan to see him
omg.....the creep!!!....he just cant lean out and start winking at me......he's gonna be soo dead tomorrow at school!!>...but not now,school.
evan definitely wont know if he sits in that chair.....if ian doesnt want to show himself.
(to amy)..."ma'am...that person there.. is calling you"
amy "what??.....you must be joking"
evan "ohk....i'll settle it"
amy "nooo!!....no evan i dont need you to come between!!"
evan "what??.....what r u talking about...??"
amy "ohk....evan,thats ian..."
evan "ian who....??"
amy "the new guy....school,remember"
evan "whats that foriegner doing here??"
ian you're now totallllly dead!!>.....why the heck are you ruining my life!!!!!!!!!.........just leave me.
EVAN'S POV
man,what is up with my girlfriend..??.....is she going behind my back??.....im sooo stupid .....i should've known before....cant believe it her!!....and also after she has being lying to me for soo much time about the cahill thing!!!dude,i love her.im just wishing she would stop lying to me like that.....
amy "lets go evan....there are more places."
evan "amy,tell that ex'boyfriend of yours to keep away!!!...im not letting him anywhere near you now!!!"
amy "evan chill...ohk....we'll go now."
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how it is??...plzz tell me!!
im gooodd.....just dont take any tension now or else you'll lose it again amy like you did in the car........dude,look what i did!!...that was sooo expensive....well,its not like im poor or anything......whatever,ian has this menu that he is holding in front of his face....i just wish he keeps it like that allll the time!!....
why is that cobra leaning....he certainly doesnt want evan to see him
omg.....the creep!!!....he just cant lean out and start winking at me......he's gonna be soo dead tomorrow at school!!>...but not now,school.
evan definitely wont know if he sits in that chair.....if ian doesnt want to show himself.
(to amy)..."ma'am...that person there.. is calling you"
amy "what??.....you must be joking"
evan "ohk....i'll settle it"
amy "nooo!!....no evan i dont need you to come between!!"
evan "what??.....what r u talking about...??"
amy "ohk....evan,thats ian..."
evan "ian who....??"
amy "the new guy....school,remember"
evan "whats that foriegner doing here??"
ian you're now totallllly dead!!>.....why the heck are you ruining my life!!!!!!!!!.........just leave me.
EVAN'S POV
man,what is up with my girlfriend..??.....is she going behind my back??.....im sooo stupid .....i should've known before....cant believe it her!!....and also after she has being lying to me for soo much time about the cahill thing!!!dude,i love her.im just wishing she would stop lying to me like that.....
amy "lets go evan....there are more places."
evan "amy,tell that ex'boyfriend of yours to keep away!!!...im not letting him anywhere near you now!!!"
amy "evan chill...ohk....we'll go now."
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how it is??...plzz tell me!!
Smriti
Catching Fire~ November 22,2013
“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
Posted at: 2:34 am on October 24, 2011
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DAN'S POV
whre was amy??...she had left her mobile on her bed and left for her date with ian,sorry....evan!....anyways,i got to read her messages!!...and of course i know what kind of havoc amy would be in right now....but,im thoroughly enjoying myself!!!....it doesnt even matter now,buti just wish that cobra would go.speaking of which,i thought that natalie would be coming here too....which is kind of good.....but still,,,....it doesnt matter,and when did i get my interest in girls,and especially fashionable ones like natalie who dont even know about ninja moves and martial arts???
hey,here is a msg from ian.he must be thinking amy has her mobile with herself....this is gonna be fun.
the msg read "HEY,AMY...ENJOYING YOU DATE??YOU DRESS LOOKS AWESOME,WITH THAT COFFEE SPILLED ALL OVER IT :P"
the creep!!...hey,how dare he look at my sister like that.
<dan replies...but to ian,it looks as if amy is replying>
REPLY "I DONT CARE IAN,AND I KNOW MY DRESS IS LOOKING AWESOME....JUST THINKING HOW YOUR SUIT WOULD LOOK WITH COFFEE ALL OVER IT??PROBABLY BETTER THAN NY DRESS :P:P:P"
let him enjoy now....
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whre was amy??...she had left her mobile on her bed and left for her date with ian,sorry....evan!....anyways,i got to read her messages!!...and of course i know what kind of havoc amy would be in right now....but,im thoroughly enjoying myself!!!....it doesnt even matter now,buti just wish that cobra would go.speaking of which,i thought that natalie would be coming here too....which is kind of good.....but still,,,....it doesnt matter,and when did i get my interest in girls,and especially fashionable ones like natalie who dont even know about ninja moves and martial arts???
hey,here is a msg from ian.he must be thinking amy has her mobile with herself....this is gonna be fun.
the msg read "HEY,AMY...ENJOYING YOU DATE??YOU DRESS LOOKS AWESOME,WITH THAT COFFEE SPILLED ALL OVER IT :P"
the creep!!...hey,how dare he look at my sister like that.
<dan replies...but to ian,it looks as if amy is replying>
REPLY "I DONT CARE IAN,AND I KNOW MY DRESS IS LOOKING AWESOME....JUST THINKING HOW YOUR SUIT WOULD LOOK WITH COFFEE ALL OVER IT??PROBABLY BETTER THAN NY DRESS :P:P:P"
let him enjoy now....
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Catching Fire~ November 22,2013
“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
Posted at: 2:45 am on October 24, 2011
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Omg! Luv it sooo much!
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AMY'S POV
what is evan going to do???omg,she's going over to ian's table!!!!>....god,im dead!!!
amy "evan,evan....stop!!"
evan "what.....amy twll ian to shut up or i will do it."
amy "you go sit...i'll talk "
<evan maintains a stern face>amy "please....."
evan "ohkkk....tell him to behave.....and please not like an idiot this time"
<amy goes over to ian>
amy "what are you doing???....are you mad!!!ian i swear,im going to kill you tomorrow in school."
ian "chill amy.....i was just talking to your ex-boyfriend"he said smiling.
amy "haha...very funny....now please go from here....or else my life would probably end!!"
ian "could you please chill??....and im not going....i mean it...."
amy "Welll then....im going!!!....you both go to hell!!!..."
with saying this,amy stomped out of the cafe and ran away......she hated ian and evan....she didnt need any boyfriend!!!....evan ran after her but amy simply ignored......
i dont care about ian or evan.....im just gonna go to a new city,and a new school and make new friends and a new loyal boyfriend......urghh,which i know is not going to happen!!!.....but dude,what should i do!!!.....i cant face evan now.
(morning)
EVAN'S POV
ohk...today amy will come to school and i will apologize to her .....though i know its not my mistake....but still.and that ian better mind it.....he got to stay away from my girl!!....ohk,here amy comes.....just be col and chill...
evan "hii...how are you??"
amy "what,evan???didnt you break up with me yesterday??"
evan "noo!!...look,i know it isnt your fault...."
amy "so why are you here??....to give me sympathy???"<sarcastically>
evan "no!...im just here to see my girlfriend....."
amy "yeah....soo??"
evan "soo??....ohk...there's this play....you wanna audition for it??"
amy "what play??"
evan "shakespeare,romeo juilet,i think"
amy "im not good at acting ,you do it....."
evan "ohk....i mean....no...you should audition...."
amy "only idiotic and fashionable girls audition for that....and luckily, i am none."
<amy goes away>
oh man....look what you did!!....and whats this play,huh??....i saw this play's poster......
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plzz comment???howzz the story soo far??
what is evan going to do???omg,she's going over to ian's table!!!!>....god,im dead!!!
amy "evan,evan....stop!!"
evan "what.....amy twll ian to shut up or i will do it."
amy "you go sit...i'll talk "
<evan maintains a stern face>amy "please....."
evan "ohkkk....tell him to behave.....and please not like an idiot this time"
<amy goes over to ian>
amy "what are you doing???....are you mad!!!ian i swear,im going to kill you tomorrow in school."
ian "chill amy.....i was just talking to your ex-boyfriend"he said smiling.
amy "haha...very funny....now please go from here....or else my life would probably end!!"
ian "could you please chill??....and im not going....i mean it...."
amy "Welll then....im going!!!....you both go to hell!!!..."
with saying this,amy stomped out of the cafe and ran away......she hated ian and evan....she didnt need any boyfriend!!!....evan ran after her but amy simply ignored......
i dont care about ian or evan.....im just gonna go to a new city,and a new school and make new friends and a new loyal boyfriend......urghh,which i know is not going to happen!!!.....but dude,what should i do!!!.....i cant face evan now.
(morning)
EVAN'S POV
ohk...today amy will come to school and i will apologize to her .....though i know its not my mistake....but still.and that ian better mind it.....he got to stay away from my girl!!....ohk,here amy comes.....just be col and chill...
evan "hii...how are you??"
amy "what,evan???didnt you break up with me yesterday??"
evan "noo!!...look,i know it isnt your fault...."
amy "so why are you here??....to give me sympathy???"<sarcastically>
evan "no!...im just here to see my girlfriend....."
amy "yeah....soo??"
evan "soo??....ohk...there's this play....you wanna audition for it??"
amy "what play??"
evan "shakespeare,romeo juilet,i think"
amy "im not good at acting ,you do it....."
evan "ohk....i mean....no...you should audition...."
amy "only idiotic and fashionable girls audition for that....and luckily, i am none."
<amy goes away>
oh man....look what you did!!....and whats this play,huh??....i saw this play's poster......
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plzz comment???howzz the story soo far??
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Catching Fire~ November 22,2013
“Meeting you was fate, becoming your friend was choice, but loving you was beyond my control...”
Posted at: 3:35 am on October 25, 2011
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I see where this is going.. *grinning misheviously* Please continue! Total HUGE fan!
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