Era:The Story of a Futuristic Cahill/Vesper World
*sighs* Wouldn't it be something if there was a world without wars? Without the fight between Cahills and Vespers, where Cahills and Vespers lived in harmony? Well, that's just a wonderful dream...
Or is it? This dream comes true in this fanfic! Era takes place in the year 5000, a futuristic world/year. By this time, the Cahills and Vespers have tired of the fighting, and have lived 3000 years without anymore wars. And they have changed human history.
The Ekats have invented all of the futuristic things that we can only dream of: invisibility, time travel, ESP, flying cars, multi-terrain trucks, mind erasing, etc. The Janus have innovated art as we know it: designing outrageous looking building, recreating the Twin Towers, and completely changing pop culture. (For you JB and MC haters, there are no more washed out bad singers who are famous anymore!) The Lucians have led the world, occupying presidential jobs in many different countries. The Tomas have dominated sporting events, trekking to outlandish places, setting world records, and even founding a new country in Antarctica, Panem. (Recognize the THG reference? I want to be Katniss for Halloween!) The Madrigals have secured world peace; there have been no wars since the wars in the Middle East have ceased. And the Vespers have become downrigfht criminals, but have ceased their ways- so far.
Era is about the life of the Cahill and Vesper children during this period. But there is an unrest between the rivals. Something is stirring. An old rivalry is uncovered from a Madrigal library, the only ones who have kept the previous war from the new generation...and the fight begins.
Will there ever be a thing called peace? Or will life be destroyed as we know it? And will the Cahills and Vespers finally come out of the shadows and reveal themselves to the world? Only we Cahills can find out, in this fanfic.
Wow, that was very dramatic. Anyway, I have one character named Wren Harding, but have writers block for the rest! Wren is a Madrigal. If you are interested in this fanfic, please submit a charrie for me to use. Thank you.
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There is no future, there is no past, I live this moment as my last.
-The immortal words of Jonathan Larson
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Okay what about if we take turns! So it could go.
Me: (Adrienne)
IvyStorm1: (Anastisia.)
BrilliantAuthor12: (Isis) So If thats Okay, Than it be BrilliantAuthor12 Turn!!!!!!!
Me: (Adrienne)
IvyStorm1: (Anastisia.)
BrilliantAuthor12: (Isis) So If thats Okay, Than it be BrilliantAuthor12 Turn!!!!!!!
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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Me (Adrienne)
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BrilliantAuthor12(Isis)
RedPuppy47(Gary)
Is this Okay with you guys? If it is, BrilliantAuthor12(Isis) Would still Right next!!!
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*takes a deep breath...* Hi, guys. I'm back.
First off, I want to tell you guys that I'm SO sorry about leaving you hanging like this. I guess fanfiction.net basically took up all my allotted computer time and I sort of forgot about T39C...but that's not really an excuse. Well...and I have this TERRIBLE habit of starting something and leaving it hanging. I always feel terrible about leaving stories hanging, but I eventually forget about it, but this...
You guys were so supportive, and were so, well, INTO it. Unlike a few fics that I tried to write over on FF.net. Then came the days of obsessing over Team Starkid...which I still kind of do. :P
I'm going to try to post more of the story, once I'm done with another dystopian sci-fi story that I'm writing for a contest at school. I SOLEMNLY SWEAR. Then I'm going to try to figure out what to do with all the new characters that people have sent since I last checked...they probably won't end up in the story.
So many things are driving me crazy these days, too. See, I started junior high around the time I started this board. Most of my friends were my friends from back in elementary. But then...I don't know. Most of us just sort of...drifted apart would be the right word. Only three of them I still see on a regular basis, and I've got a crazy packed schedule after school - skating, and glee, and homework, and CCD, and rehearsing songs that I'm working on, and...and....Most of my friends now are friends from other towns, and I can't just walk across town to hang out like I used to with my old friends.
So, anyway, while I'm still trying to build up my social life, I think I'll come back to this. Although, if you guys want to write your chapters, too (which I am totally okay with!), you can write them first, while I plan out what I want to do next (i.e., which charries POV would it be, what MAJOR events would happen, etc.).
You guys doing okay? I really should be doing my homework right now, but I had to say this. Also, I'll try to finish the Amyan songfic, but I'm putting Era first. Okay? *takes another deep breath* I'm going to change my sig now to something that fits the mood here...
There is no future, there is no past, I live this moment as my last.
-The immortal words of Jonathan Larson
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YAY YOUR BACK FROM THY DEAD!!!!
My Brain-"WATCH OUT SHES A ZOMBIE!" Stop tryiong to Cuze Trouble Brain!!!!!! *Sighs* Sorry about that... Now. You'll have to fill out a Form and we'll Decide if you can come back..... Joking! Haha. Sorry I'm Hype up on Pepise!!!!! Haha. No Seroilsy! Its Okay!!!!
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uh, say...
how's Chapter 6 doing? :D
how's Chapter 6 doing? :D
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Well..... Ivy(K if I call you that?) Looks like everyone has Abndoned this Thread Again. *Sighs* Do you want to wright the next Chap, Or do you want me to do it?
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
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So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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Hmm...whoever has the inspiration I guess..besides, I have exams this week.
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Which one of us is doing Chapter 6, and what's it about?
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Thats fine! I'll do it! Besides I hae noething Better to do... Stuck home with a Cold.
Chapter 6: Everything Sucks
Adrienne
The sound Drove me off my Chair. I fell too the Ground. I felt Dizzy. I look up to see a HUGE hole in the wall. A boy and Girl came in Wearing Mask. The boy in a way Look famialer, But I couldnt see his face. Someone Pulled me up. And we started running. But were Quickly stop when a piece of the Ceiling fell in front of my feet. The Girl and Boy were heading for the Madrigal Files.
"Oh no you dont." I said under my breath, Running away from my friedns and heading for the Boy and Girl. I went straight for the girl.
"Sorry to bother you, But This area is for Arthorzied(sp?) Personnel only!" I say smugly, Blocking the door. The girls eyes Narrowed. I could see them though the mask. and she Kick me in the side.
"Oh! YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT!" Anastsia said, as they ran over.
"Now I'm Angry!" I yell head butting her in the Stomach. I knock her to the ground, When we here the Police Sirans.
"We need to get out of here!" Wen Yelled. We start Running, When the Boy grabs my arm. When I look in his eyes.... They look like Damion. I yank my arm away, And run. I look back to see him stareing at me. He then Leans down and Picks up the Moring Girl, And runs out the Back door.
When we got outside me all start Coughing from the Smoke in there. And I watch the Boy run out, And tare off his Mask. And the Girls and Dissapper into the Crowed. It was Damion.
Chapter 6: Everything Sucks
Adrienne
The sound Drove me off my Chair. I fell too the Ground. I felt Dizzy. I look up to see a HUGE hole in the wall. A boy and Girl came in Wearing Mask. The boy in a way Look famialer, But I couldnt see his face. Someone Pulled me up. And we started running. But were Quickly stop when a piece of the Ceiling fell in front of my feet. The Girl and Boy were heading for the Madrigal Files.
"Oh no you dont." I said under my breath, Running away from my friedns and heading for the Boy and Girl. I went straight for the girl.
"Sorry to bother you, But This area is for Arthorzied(sp?) Personnel only!" I say smugly, Blocking the door. The girls eyes Narrowed. I could see them though the mask. and she Kick me in the side.
"Oh! YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT!" Anastsia said, as they ran over.
"Now I'm Angry!" I yell head butting her in the Stomach. I knock her to the ground, When we here the Police Sirans.
"We need to get out of here!" Wen Yelled. We start Running, When the Boy grabs my arm. When I look in his eyes.... They look like Damion. I yank my arm away, And run. I look back to see him stareing at me. He then Leans down and Picks up the Moring Girl, And runs out the Back door.
When we got outside me all start Coughing from the Smoke in there. And I watch the Boy run out, And tare off his Mask. And the Girls and Dissapper into the Crowed. It was Damion.
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
Posted at: 8:59 pm on February 19, 2012
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As you can see I did the next one. So who ever wants can do the next one,"RILLY STOP CLIMBING ON ME WHILE I'M TYPEING" Sorry my Moms cat is laying on me.
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
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So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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nice one Adrienne!
and its *authorized :)
i'll try to post when I'm less busy
whew! -_-"
and its *authorized :)
i'll try to post when I'm less busy
whew! -_-"
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can we post out of order? depnding on who has an inspiration at the time?
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Yes! I just did the order because people were wanting to post! But it kinda seems we're the only ones right now....... So please if you have an idea..... Go ahead! (And sorry if I'm sounding bossy!)
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i actually shouldn't even be posting since its finals week, but whatever! XD
Chapter 7: Just when you've thought you've seen it all...
Gary
We thought of bolting rigth away when the polive arrived. But then again, we completely forgot about the paralawyers--who we should be actually watching out for. So here we are, stuck in the clinic, being treated for scars and bruises that are clearly nonexistent.
And worst of all, they might call our parents. Geez, we're 14-16 year old students here! Its not like we can't take care of ourselves...
"And that's exactly why we're calling your parents young man." The nurse told me sternly. Oops, I forgot that almost everyone who practices medicine also has ESP now. I sank down in my seat. At least this couldn't get any worse--for me at least. Anastasia and Adrienne were probabaly the most badly injured compared to the rest of us. Well, who wouldn't be after trifling with the little jerks? Annie was hundced over her seat, clearly sulking.
"Miss, can we go now? Besides, you won't be able to call my parents at home--they're on a business trip. I'm the most legal guardian in my house--I still have to pick up my siblings. Its not like we can slip between your fingers anyway, we have relatives who work in the hospital too, you know." Anastasia said to the scary-looking nurse. I don't know what she was being so agitated over--we just went through a close scrape in the library. Adrienne is still lost in thought...we were still in pretty bad shape.
She thought for maybe a full three minutes before she said, "Alright. You kids are off the hook. But we still have your medical records with the DNA imprints--your parents will still hear about this." We rose quickly and made a beeline for the doors. "Yeah, yeah..." I just couldn't help myself from keeping that little annoying remark to myself. i feel the nurse's eyes bore a hole through me.
Why do I have a feeling I'm no longer welcome to the clinic? Beats me.
We were all given strict orders to go home immediately--with the exception of Anastasia who still has to 'pick up' her younger siblings (not fair at all--she was fibbing about that!). But we kept in touch, here's another transcript of our chat:
WrenBird: Is every1 okay? At home? W/ the exception of Annie of course...
FeistyA: Get off my back, I had 2 lie! I couldn't bear 2 stay another minute in there--& I can't focus while being followed home either.
Jademin: She has a point. I was tempted to kick the guy who was 'escorting' me home too.
IsisofEgypt: Yeah, we weren't even that beaten up.
DAdrienne: Did u guys notice anything familiar w/ those guys earlier?
GaryCV: W/ch of those guys, the library staff or the thugs?
FeistyA: Gary, I swear that if u make another sarcastic remark, i'll wring your neck 1st thing tomorrow morning.
Jademin: Quit it, guys. Now that u mention it Adrienne, they actually look sorta familiar.
WrenBird: Do u think they could be...Vs from school?
IsisofEgypt: Well, who else could know so much about the lib other than the students?
FeistyA: I don't know--on other unrelated news: Are u ok Adrienne? U were spacing out earlier. Again.
GaryCV: Guys, I think u forgot 1 minor detail--what happened to Annie's date?
DAdrienne: -_-" u didn't even give me the chance 2 reply!
Jademin: Oh, yeah..
FeistyA: U'RE DEAD MEAT! And he's NOT my date!
IsisofEgypt: I'm sry 4 the guy, but I actually didn't even remember him.
WrenBird: oh, u didn't notice? he wa just beside Anasatasia earlier in the clinic, keeping to himself. Other than that, i think we need 2 steer clear from him. Especially u Annie.
DAdrienne: ???
IsisofEgypt: Well, i'm over at Wren's house actually & we looked into his files. It says that he's the younger brother of the Draco Knight...
Jademin: Mr. 'girls are swarming me & poop'?
WrenBird: Yeah, that guy
GaryCV: Oh, i remember him. Annie once KOed him when we were in grade school, right?
IsisofEgypt: let me finish guys! & that their parents are one of the V high ranking officers. Might even be part of the Council of 6
DAdrienne: ...
Jademin: ...
GaryCV: ...too bad. I thought he&Annie looked good together.
FeistyA: I'm not even bothering about the Annie thing anymore. u know y? Cause i'm paying for your funeral.
GaryCV: Just kidding! U guys r way 2 serious. What's ur deal anyway?
DAdrienne: Oh & i'm perfectly fine Anastasia-no worries.
FeistyA: that tears it. i'm sleeping over @ ur house 2nite
Jademin: Oh no, not another 'forced' sleepover! XD
FeistyA: Oh, pls. Like u didn't enjoy the last time ;)
GaryCV: I didn't. U threw all the pancakes at me!
FeistyA: XD Don't worry. its just me and Adrienne this time.
WrenBird: XD Gd luck Adrienne.
DAdrienne: 0_0
IsisofEgypt: we're using 'XD' quite a lot aren't we? LOL!
*FeistyA and DAdrienne has signed off.*
If Annie's doing another one of her 'mandatory' sleepovers, something was definitely up. But then again, Adrienne and her are pretty tight and they probably had a hundred of unforeseen sleepovers. But just to be safe...
GaryCV: Ok, serious topic guys. Something's definitely up w/ those 2. Here's the plan...
~~~anyone continue :) was it ok?
Chapter 7: Just when you've thought you've seen it all...
Gary
We thought of bolting rigth away when the polive arrived. But then again, we completely forgot about the paralawyers--who we should be actually watching out for. So here we are, stuck in the clinic, being treated for scars and bruises that are clearly nonexistent.
And worst of all, they might call our parents. Geez, we're 14-16 year old students here! Its not like we can't take care of ourselves...
"And that's exactly why we're calling your parents young man." The nurse told me sternly. Oops, I forgot that almost everyone who practices medicine also has ESP now. I sank down in my seat. At least this couldn't get any worse--for me at least. Anastasia and Adrienne were probabaly the most badly injured compared to the rest of us. Well, who wouldn't be after trifling with the little jerks? Annie was hundced over her seat, clearly sulking.
"Miss, can we go now? Besides, you won't be able to call my parents at home--they're on a business trip. I'm the most legal guardian in my house--I still have to pick up my siblings. Its not like we can slip between your fingers anyway, we have relatives who work in the hospital too, you know." Anastasia said to the scary-looking nurse. I don't know what she was being so agitated over--we just went through a close scrape in the library. Adrienne is still lost in thought...we were still in pretty bad shape.
She thought for maybe a full three minutes before she said, "Alright. You kids are off the hook. But we still have your medical records with the DNA imprints--your parents will still hear about this." We rose quickly and made a beeline for the doors. "Yeah, yeah..." I just couldn't help myself from keeping that little annoying remark to myself. i feel the nurse's eyes bore a hole through me.
Why do I have a feeling I'm no longer welcome to the clinic? Beats me.
We were all given strict orders to go home immediately--with the exception of Anastasia who still has to 'pick up' her younger siblings (not fair at all--she was fibbing about that!). But we kept in touch, here's another transcript of our chat:
WrenBird: Is every1 okay? At home? W/ the exception of Annie of course...
FeistyA: Get off my back, I had 2 lie! I couldn't bear 2 stay another minute in there--& I can't focus while being followed home either.
Jademin: She has a point. I was tempted to kick the guy who was 'escorting' me home too.
IsisofEgypt: Yeah, we weren't even that beaten up.
DAdrienne: Did u guys notice anything familiar w/ those guys earlier?
GaryCV: W/ch of those guys, the library staff or the thugs?
FeistyA: Gary, I swear that if u make another sarcastic remark, i'll wring your neck 1st thing tomorrow morning.
Jademin: Quit it, guys. Now that u mention it Adrienne, they actually look sorta familiar.
WrenBird: Do u think they could be...Vs from school?
IsisofEgypt: Well, who else could know so much about the lib other than the students?
FeistyA: I don't know--on other unrelated news: Are u ok Adrienne? U were spacing out earlier. Again.
GaryCV: Guys, I think u forgot 1 minor detail--what happened to Annie's date?
DAdrienne: -_-" u didn't even give me the chance 2 reply!
Jademin: Oh, yeah..
FeistyA: U'RE DEAD MEAT! And he's NOT my date!
IsisofEgypt: I'm sry 4 the guy, but I actually didn't even remember him.
WrenBird: oh, u didn't notice? he wa just beside Anasatasia earlier in the clinic, keeping to himself. Other than that, i think we need 2 steer clear from him. Especially u Annie.
DAdrienne: ???
IsisofEgypt: Well, i'm over at Wren's house actually & we looked into his files. It says that he's the younger brother of the Draco Knight...
Jademin: Mr. 'girls are swarming me & poop'?
WrenBird: Yeah, that guy
GaryCV: Oh, i remember him. Annie once KOed him when we were in grade school, right?
IsisofEgypt: let me finish guys! & that their parents are one of the V high ranking officers. Might even be part of the Council of 6
DAdrienne: ...
Jademin: ...
GaryCV: ...too bad. I thought he&Annie looked good together.
FeistyA: I'm not even bothering about the Annie thing anymore. u know y? Cause i'm paying for your funeral.
GaryCV: Just kidding! U guys r way 2 serious. What's ur deal anyway?
DAdrienne: Oh & i'm perfectly fine Anastasia-no worries.
FeistyA: that tears it. i'm sleeping over @ ur house 2nite
Jademin: Oh no, not another 'forced' sleepover! XD
FeistyA: Oh, pls. Like u didn't enjoy the last time ;)
GaryCV: I didn't. U threw all the pancakes at me!
FeistyA: XD Don't worry. its just me and Adrienne this time.
WrenBird: XD Gd luck Adrienne.
DAdrienne: 0_0
IsisofEgypt: we're using 'XD' quite a lot aren't we? LOL!
*FeistyA and DAdrienne has signed off.*
If Annie's doing another one of her 'mandatory' sleepovers, something was definitely up. But then again, Adrienne and her are pretty tight and they probably had a hundred of unforeseen sleepovers. But just to be safe...
GaryCV: Ok, serious topic guys. Something's definitely up w/ those 2. Here's the plan...
~~~anyone continue :) was it ok?
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That was AWESOME! Haha! I hadnt check this post for awhile cuz it got pushed back on my Posts, so when I check and you had posted it was like a treate!(Wow I'm a dork...) Haha, anyways I'll post later, and Good luck with Finals!
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
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So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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XDDDD Thanks! And thanks for wishing me well on the final exams too--i aced the first three subjects just last Friday! (Science, Health & Home Economics)
So Much Win!
So Much Win!
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i thought we're going to work on our schedule problems...
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....... Yes we are........... Sorry 'bout that..... I kept like going to write the chapter and then someone would call, or I would remember I had to write something or do chors..... Okay I'll post tonight........... So I guess we'll try and take turns? And if any one else whose in it and wants to write! IF YOU SAY YOU WANT T WRITE A CHAPTER YOU HAVE TO ACTUALLY WRITE AND NOT SAY IT AND THEN NOT CHECK THE THREAD AGAIN!!!!!!!!(Not towards you Ivy...) And I'm not being mean... I'm just really LOVE this story and I dont want it to dissapper again!
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
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So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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anybody out there?????? hellooooooooooooo??????????/
someone other than us should really write :/
someone other than us should really write :/
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BUMP BDUMP BDUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP!
sorry for all the bumping, guys. I know it can get very annoying. but seriously--put some effort into this. this story can be really wonderful. we can't just stop now!
sorry for all the bumping, guys. I know it can get very annoying. but seriously--put some effort into this. this story can be really wonderful. we can't just stop now!
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Okay I wrote a message, to both BrillantAuthor12 and RedPuppy asking them to help write! But neither or them have been on in a while, I think BA12 was on last on the 5th or this month... But hopfuly they both see the messages I wrote them.......
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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Chapter 8: Turning Point
Cahill Residence - Anastasia
I knocked repeatedly on Adrienne's door. "Hello? Adrienne? Please open up." I rubbed my hands against my arms in a vain attempt to keep myself warm. The temperature seems to drop along with my mood. "I'm not getting any warmer here!"
"Coming! Coming!" I heard her rapid footsteps and her voice echo. Where was she?
The door opened and I came face to face with an out of breath Adrienne Cahill. "Sorry...I was upstairs listening to music. I didn't quite hear you."
"Its cool. It took a lot of prodding but my mom's allowed me to stay the night. With a little help from dad of course." 'Dad' wasn't actually my biological father. The biological one vanished like soap bubbles when my sister was barely out of her nappies. The one I'm talking about is my stepdad--and no, he's not evil like the stepparents from those hundreds of old fairytales. He practically raised me, and he's one of the few men in the world who have earned my respect.
Sounds like a feminist sort of thinking? Maybe, maybe not. You wouldn't really understand until you've seen it in my own shoes. How messed up my family was that is.
"Are you sure your parents don't mind? With me barging in suddenly?"
She just rolled her eyes. "They're used to it. They're actually glad that I'll have company. Besides, my home is your home." We entered her room and started eating a bag of chips. Even though majority of the people are now paranoid health buffs, mainstream junk food was still popular. Except it's better now since it's 70% chips and 30% air, not the other way around.
~~~please let me continue this. i've got everything written down on a notebook. this chapter's not finished yet. i just really have to sleep right now because i have violin lessons tomorrow. Goodnight! =)
Cahill Residence - Anastasia
I knocked repeatedly on Adrienne's door. "Hello? Adrienne? Please open up." I rubbed my hands against my arms in a vain attempt to keep myself warm. The temperature seems to drop along with my mood. "I'm not getting any warmer here!"
"Coming! Coming!" I heard her rapid footsteps and her voice echo. Where was she?
The door opened and I came face to face with an out of breath Adrienne Cahill. "Sorry...I was upstairs listening to music. I didn't quite hear you."
"Its cool. It took a lot of prodding but my mom's allowed me to stay the night. With a little help from dad of course." 'Dad' wasn't actually my biological father. The biological one vanished like soap bubbles when my sister was barely out of her nappies. The one I'm talking about is my stepdad--and no, he's not evil like the stepparents from those hundreds of old fairytales. He practically raised me, and he's one of the few men in the world who have earned my respect.
Sounds like a feminist sort of thinking? Maybe, maybe not. You wouldn't really understand until you've seen it in my own shoes. How messed up my family was that is.
"Are you sure your parents don't mind? With me barging in suddenly?"
She just rolled her eyes. "They're used to it. They're actually glad that I'll have company. Besides, my home is your home." We entered her room and started eating a bag of chips. Even though majority of the people are now paranoid health buffs, mainstream junk food was still popular. Except it's better now since it's 70% chips and 30% air, not the other way around.
~~~please let me continue this. i've got everything written down on a notebook. this chapter's not finished yet. i just really have to sleep right now because i have violin lessons tomorrow. Goodnight! =)
"What measure is a non-human?"
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Hey!! I'm still reading, just don't have time to do any POV's. high school is sooOoOoOoOoO hard!! awesome POVs!!!!
The Sword Thief = The Birth of AmIan
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We munched on the comfort food for a while until I got impatient. Junk food is nice and all, but this is not why I'm here. I sat on one of the chairs in Adrienne's room and faced her. "Are you okay?"
"What? Of course I'm okay." She averted her eyes.
"You've never been a very good liar so please stop trying."
"So...how are the twins?"
"Don't sidetrack me, mon amie." I poked her nose. "I asked first. You seemed a little off after the explosion at the library. What's wrong?"
She sighed. Yes! I win. "Didn't you...recognize the two kids earlier in the library?"
"You mean the little jerks?" She flinched. Oops. "No...did you?" I said more softly this time.
She opened her mouth, then hesitated. "The two was Aislyn and Damion." I felt my blood go cold. "Are you absolutely sure?"
"Positive."
"Then this could spell trouble--no, disaster--to all of us. I'm calling the others." I reached for my phone on her desk but she stopped my hand midair. "Please...wait." She looked close to tears. That just made me even angrier. "No, I'm calling them now." When I see Damion at school, I am going to gut him. Better yet, push him out the bus before it stops. No one makes my best friend cry and gets away with it. No one.
Cahill Residence - Jasmine
"Ow, Wren! You're stepping on my face!" Gary exclaimed from way below me. I feel Wren adjusting her weight so she was stepping on Gary's shoulders--not his nose.
"I can't say I'm sorry though." Wren grit her teeth. "You're the one who got us into this mess!"
"Will you can it, you guys? Do you want us to get caught?" Isis said above me. Easy for her to say. She was at the top of our human tower, so she doesn't have to be worried about being stepped on. On the other hand, if we do topple over, she'll be the one in trouble. If we topple over. I struggled to get a firm grip on her feet. She's not the only one who's in trouble if we lose our balance. Wren was below me.
"Are we even supposed to do this, Gary?" I said. "It doesn't feel right to spy on our own friends."
"Something's definitely up with Annie and Adrienne. We're just resorting to drastic measures!" I can almost imagine that silly grin on his face.
"Yeah, well your face will get a full amount of 'drastic measure' when Anastasia's fist connects with it once she finds out you called her Annie and deviced this insane plan."
"That's why we need to keep our mouth shut." Isis said while she was peering through the window, with a stethoscope pressed to the glass.
"Then why didn't we just planted a bug on the window or something?" Wren asked. She didn't want to be here either. Like me, the right thought would be that Isis and Gary dragged us here.
"Because, the whole outside of every house is covered with a thin layer of anti-surveillance shield. If we had planted a chip, the chip would've been fried, and then they'll track down the signal to wherever we are. That's why we're doing this the old fashioned way." I sighed. It was already dark and so far, we still have nothing. I was wearing both a hoodie and a jacket, but the icy night air just went through them like they were nonexistent. "Can we go now?" I whispered through chattering teeth. "I could really use a mug of hot choco right now."
"Are you kidding? We're camping out here...Shhh! I hear something!" Isis said. "Oh no..."
"What is it?" Gary said, shifting with excitement. Our human tower swayed side-to-side. "Whoah!"
CRASH!
Good news--I didn't crack my head open on the pavement. Bad news--I landed on top of Gary, I felt the blood rise up to my cheeks. "S-Sorry!"
"N-No! Its okay!"
Isis groaned. I think she had it worse--she had fallen on a shrub of roses.
"Gary! You were supposed to keep us steady! What an amazing job you did there Mr. Enthusiastic!"
"Forget that, Isis. What did you hear?"
Caper Falls High - Luke
To call, or not to call?
My finger hovered over the call button. On the screen was a number I got from the school records. I've been staring at it for maybe two hours now. I've always wanted to get her number, but it didn't occur to me that it would be in this situation. I held my breath and pressed the button. I almost lost my nerve at the third ring when I got ansnwer.
"Hello? Who is this?"
"Uh...An-" Not Annie. "-astasia. Hello. Um, this is Luke. I know you might be already sleeping but-"
I could almost hear in my imagination a bullet clicking in a gun's chamber like in those old wild west movies. "You've got 10 seconds to explain before I hang up."
Cahill Residence - Anastasia
I nearly killed myself when I heard the phone's loud ringtone. I had been so surprised I fell out of bed. Who would be calling at this indecent hour?
"Hello? Who is this?" I said groggily. This better be important and not just one of those crank calls.
"Uh, An-" Hesitation. "-astasia. Hello. Um, this is Luke. I know that you might be already sleeping but-"
I was suddenly wide awake like I had drunk three coffee shakes. "You've got 10 seconds to explain before I hang up."
Silence.
"You are wasting my time, If you're not going to speak, then call me in the morning. Good night."
"Wait!"
"Alright, Luke. Eight seconds."
We munched on the comfort food for a while until I got impatient. Junk food is nice and all, but this is not why I'm here. I sat on one of the chairs in Adrienne's room and faced her. "Are you okay?"
"What? Of course I'm okay." She averted her eyes.
"You've never been a very good liar so please stop trying."
"So...how are the twins?"
"Don't sidetrack me, mon amie." I poked her nose. "I asked first. You seemed a little off after the explosion at the library. What's wrong?"
She sighed. Yes! I win. "Didn't you...recognize the two kids earlier in the library?"
"You mean the little jerks?" She flinched. Oops. "No...did you?" I said more softly this time.
She opened her mouth, then hesitated. "The two was Aislyn and Damion." I felt my blood go cold. "Are you absolutely sure?"
"Positive."
"Then this could spell trouble--no, disaster--to all of us. I'm calling the others." I reached for my phone on her desk but she stopped my hand midair. "Please...wait." She looked close to tears. That just made me even angrier. "No, I'm calling them now." When I see Damion at school, I am going to gut him. Better yet, push him out the bus before it stops. No one makes my best friend cry and gets away with it. No one.
Cahill Residence - Jasmine
"Ow, Wren! You're stepping on my face!" Gary exclaimed from way below me. I feel Wren adjusting her weight so she was stepping on Gary's shoulders--not his nose.
"I can't say I'm sorry though." Wren grit her teeth. "You're the one who got us into this mess!"
"Will you can it, you guys? Do you want us to get caught?" Isis said above me. Easy for her to say. She was at the top of our human tower, so she doesn't have to be worried about being stepped on. On the other hand, if we do topple over, she'll be the one in trouble. If we topple over. I struggled to get a firm grip on her feet. She's not the only one who's in trouble if we lose our balance. Wren was below me.
"Are we even supposed to do this, Gary?" I said. "It doesn't feel right to spy on our own friends."
"Something's definitely up with Annie and Adrienne. We're just resorting to drastic measures!" I can almost imagine that silly grin on his face.
"Yeah, well your face will get a full amount of 'drastic measure' when Anastasia's fist connects with it once she finds out you called her Annie and deviced this insane plan."
"That's why we need to keep our mouth shut." Isis said while she was peering through the window, with a stethoscope pressed to the glass.
"Then why didn't we just planted a bug on the window or something?" Wren asked. She didn't want to be here either. Like me, the right thought would be that Isis and Gary dragged us here.
"Because, the whole outside of every house is covered with a thin layer of anti-surveillance shield. If we had planted a chip, the chip would've been fried, and then they'll track down the signal to wherever we are. That's why we're doing this the old fashioned way." I sighed. It was already dark and so far, we still have nothing. I was wearing both a hoodie and a jacket, but the icy night air just went through them like they were nonexistent. "Can we go now?" I whispered through chattering teeth. "I could really use a mug of hot choco right now."
"Are you kidding? We're camping out here...Shhh! I hear something!" Isis said. "Oh no..."
"What is it?" Gary said, shifting with excitement. Our human tower swayed side-to-side. "Whoah!"
CRASH!
Good news--I didn't crack my head open on the pavement. Bad news--I landed on top of Gary, I felt the blood rise up to my cheeks. "S-Sorry!"
"N-No! Its okay!"
Isis groaned. I think she had it worse--she had fallen on a shrub of roses.
"Gary! You were supposed to keep us steady! What an amazing job you did there Mr. Enthusiastic!"
"Forget that, Isis. What did you hear?"
Caper Falls High - Luke
To call, or not to call?
My finger hovered over the call button. On the screen was a number I got from the school records. I've been staring at it for maybe two hours now. I've always wanted to get her number, but it didn't occur to me that it would be in this situation. I held my breath and pressed the button. I almost lost my nerve at the third ring when I got ansnwer.
"Hello? Who is this?"
"Uh...An-" Not Annie. "-astasia. Hello. Um, this is Luke. I know you might be already sleeping but-"
I could almost hear in my imagination a bullet clicking in a gun's chamber like in those old wild west movies. "You've got 10 seconds to explain before I hang up."
Cahill Residence - Anastasia
I nearly killed myself when I heard the phone's loud ringtone. I had been so surprised I fell out of bed. Who would be calling at this indecent hour?
"Hello? Who is this?" I said groggily. This better be important and not just one of those crank calls.
"Uh, An-" Hesitation. "-astasia. Hello. Um, this is Luke. I know that you might be already sleeping but-"
I was suddenly wide awake like I had drunk three coffee shakes. "You've got 10 seconds to explain before I hang up."
Silence.
"You are wasting my time, If you're not going to speak, then call me in the morning. Good night."
"Wait!"
"Alright, Luke. Eight seconds."
"What measure is a non-human?"
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AHHHHH! CLIFF HANGER IVY!!!!! AHHHHHHH! That was GREAT! Okay on to bussiness..(Sorry if I sound bossy):
I'm thinking we need to have an order of posting, But First... RedPuppy so do you want to start help writing? I think both Ivy and I would Appirate it! Everyone who wants to help post say so and then we'll all agree on an order? Let me know! (And sorry if I sound bossy again!)
I'm thinking we need to have an order of posting, But First... RedPuppy so do you want to start help writing? I think both Ivy and I would Appirate it! Everyone who wants to help post say so and then we'll all agree on an order? Let me know! (And sorry if I sound bossy again!)
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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no worries Adrienne. I appreciate your concern. I sound bossier (is that a word?) in real life XD
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Yeah, that's fine Adrienne. I'll try and fit it in my busy schedule!
But first things first, you 2 don't really seem to be discussing the story. How do you know what's going to happen? (Or is that the idea?)
But first things first, you 2 don't really seem to be discussing the story. How do you know what's going to happen? (Or is that the idea?)
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RedPuppy- I dont know.... I think we both just kinda write it!.... I think if we talked about, it would take longer for stuff to come out..... And I dont know... I kinda like not knowing whats going to happen! Anyways...
So an Order.... How 'bout, Ivy, Then Me(Adrienne) And then Redpuppy47...... Sound good to everyone? If so, I wont be able to post till, Tusday, Cause I'm going to go see my family (Blah...)
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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Chapter 9: Not to listen or not to care?
Adrienne's POV
I woke up to Annie's phone ringing, her into her, "This must be a boy calling, and this is really strange that he is," voice comeing through.... I was trying to decide to listen or go back to sleep...... I decided to listen.....
After a good 10 seconds I had nothing, because I couldnt hear who was on the other side of the convorstion, and then when Annie went to replie, she shoot me a look, noticeing I was awake, and walked out of my room, and into my bathroom........ AWW COME ON! I mumbled something under my breath, and rolled back on to my other side, trying to go back to sleep, when my phone rang, I groaned, and rolled back over, fumbling around on my desk trying to find the phone by feel. I find it, and grab it hitting the gree: 'ACSEPT' button, and holding it up to my ear.
"If this is some stupid prank call, I will hunt you done, and hurt you BADLY!" I mutter in a sleepy voice. I hear Jasmine on the other end.
"I CANT BELIEVE YOU DIDNT TELL US AISLYN AND DAMION WERE THE LITTLE PUNKS THAT BROKE IN!" She yelled..... Dang it.
Damion's POV:
I was up late working on a rpoject for school. I dont really even care, but if I get one more strick I get expelled, and my parents say if I get expelled more one time this month, I cant do target practice for a month!..... Plus I promised my Project partuner I would finish it by tonight..... And I could tell Adrienne didnt trust me to finish it.... And I want to show her I can. I smile jus thinking about that stutter of hers. I shake my head, to get the thoughts away. I hear my phone vibert, and see Aislyn is calling.
"Hey Babe." I say.
"Get over here now! We need to talk!"
Adrienne's POV:
"Sorry I- WAIT HOW'D YOU KNOW?" I yell. The line went quite.
"Ahh......" Jasmine responsed.
"YOU LITTLE PUNKS WERE SPYING ON US WERENT YOU?" I yell bloting up right in my bed.
"NO! We ah-" she starts to say, but I can hear the others in the back ground trying to tell her what to say.
"ANASTASIA WE HAD SPYS!" I yell, at her. She blots out of the bathroom.
"NO!" She yells. I hang up on the mess cairous that was going on in the background of the other line.
"Yep..... They know..... Well I think they just know about Damion and Aisyln... But I dont think they know about... Well..." I sigh. Annie comes over giving me a pat on the back....... And I turn and looked at her.
"We're SO getting them back tomorrow arent we?" I ask. ANd I can already see the plan forming in her mind. I smile.
Yea! I wrote it.... Okay well there we go.... Hope it was okay!
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
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Gregory Cahill intelegent sneaky peacekeeper
70%ekat
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ALL Madrigal!
(mymoms ekat,my dads lucian and i chose to be a madrigal)
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Name: Monica cahill.
Age: 16 (not real)
Branch: Ekat
Background: Mother died when monica was 5, father walk out on family when she was 2, only has one brother and sister.
Looks: Brown chocolate hair, sea blue eyes, has hair either in a high pony tail or down, wears tights and tops and tennis shoes.
Personality: out going, dorky, snappy when people talk about her parents,
Likes: Ian (even though they have only met a couple times), animals,
Dislikes: dresses, skirts, make-up. Basically anything too girly and Evan.
Skills: Acting, persuading, shooting, science, maths, history, experiments.
Age: 16 (not real)
Branch: Ekat
Background: Mother died when monica was 5, father walk out on family when she was 2, only has one brother and sister.
Looks: Brown chocolate hair, sea blue eyes, has hair either in a high pony tail or down, wears tights and tops and tennis shoes.
Personality: out going, dorky, snappy when people talk about her parents,
Likes: Ian (even though they have only met a couple times), animals,
Dislikes: dresses, skirts, make-up. Basically anything too girly and Evan.
Skills: Acting, persuading, shooting, science, maths, history, experiments.
Love and loyalty run deeper than blood...
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Gary, are you posting? cause if not, i sorta already have an idea for the next chapter
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You can go.
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Chapter 10: A Web of Lies? That's an understatement.
Cahill Residence -- Anastasia
After the sudden interruption to mine and Adrienne's beauty sleep (what with Luke giving me disturbing news, and finding out that our friends trusted us sooo much they had to spy on us), we crashed back to bed after 30 minutes of major planning. Not.
I silently put on some decent clothes and put on my tan boots. Adrienne can be quite a light sleeper so I knew I had to be quiet. If she even hears a sound of a zipper, I'm done for. The zipper on my coat was giving me trouble so I gave up on it and just wrapped it around me as best I could. I'm going back to sleep, I said. I'll need to be fully awake tomorrow to kick Damion's butt all over the place, I said.
I am such a liar.
I climbed out of the chimney and use the retractable hook I had in my pack to get down safely. My heart was skipping beats. That was usually a bad sign. This better be worth it or else I know the next person in my hit list after Damion and Aislyn.
I arrived at the back of Caper Falls High. I hear a dark figure in a thick sweater I know too well gasp. "You came."
"No Captain Obvious, I didn't." I rolled my eyes. I saw him shift a little by my remark. I bit my tongue. I didn't mean to insult him. But its also a mystery to my why he'd be intimidated--he's older! "Anyway, good evening. That call you gave me proved...very unsettling I suppose." Great, I'm sounding like my mother. "Are you absolutely sure? Because if this is just some hearsay, then you'll die five times tomorrow."
"Seriously, Anastasia! Wasn't the explosion earlier enough proof for you?" He said exasperated. I was taken aback a little by this different side of him. He's usually so...reserved.
"Okay. You first." I gestured toward the door. I knew it lead directly to a secret chamber in the school, containing lots of wicked crazy information. But like the way I don't cut class, I don't want to snoop. He entered the complicated code like he's done it a million times before and we earned our entrance. The stairway was quite old...made of cement, cold, dark and narrow. First thing in my head was I usually wouldn't be in close quarters with a Vesper, much less a boy.
Second thing was hoping I wouldn't get an anxiety attack from my claustrophobia.
"Are...we...there yet?" I struggled for air. I clenched and unclenched my fists to try calm down. He noticed my discomfort and he looked a little worried. "You're claustrophobic?"
~~~ i'll post the rest tomorrow its midnight here and i need to sleep.
Chapter 10: A Web of Lies? That's an understatement.
Cahill Residence -- Anastasia
After the sudden interruption to mine and Adrienne's beauty sleep (what with Luke giving me disturbing news, and finding out that our friends trusted us sooo much they had to spy on us), we crashed back to bed after 30 minutes of major planning. Not.
I silently put on some decent clothes and put on my tan boots. Adrienne can be quite a light sleeper so I knew I had to be quiet. If she even hears a sound of a zipper, I'm done for. The zipper on my coat was giving me trouble so I gave up on it and just wrapped it around me as best I could. I'm going back to sleep, I said. I'll need to be fully awake tomorrow to kick Damion's butt all over the place, I said.
I am such a liar.
I climbed out of the chimney and use the retractable hook I had in my pack to get down safely. My heart was skipping beats. That was usually a bad sign. This better be worth it or else I know the next person in my hit list after Damion and Aislyn.
I arrived at the back of Caper Falls High. I hear a dark figure in a thick sweater I know too well gasp. "You came."
"No Captain Obvious, I didn't." I rolled my eyes. I saw him shift a little by my remark. I bit my tongue. I didn't mean to insult him. But its also a mystery to my why he'd be intimidated--he's older! "Anyway, good evening. That call you gave me proved...very unsettling I suppose." Great, I'm sounding like my mother. "Are you absolutely sure? Because if this is just some hearsay, then you'll die five times tomorrow."
"Seriously, Anastasia! Wasn't the explosion earlier enough proof for you?" He said exasperated. I was taken aback a little by this different side of him. He's usually so...reserved.
"Okay. You first." I gestured toward the door. I knew it lead directly to a secret chamber in the school, containing lots of wicked crazy information. But like the way I don't cut class, I don't want to snoop. He entered the complicated code like he's done it a million times before and we earned our entrance. The stairway was quite old...made of cement, cold, dark and narrow. First thing in my head was I usually wouldn't be in close quarters with a Vesper, much less a boy.
Second thing was hoping I wouldn't get an anxiety attack from my claustrophobia.
"Are...we...there yet?" I struggled for air. I clenched and unclenched my fists to try calm down. He noticed my discomfort and he looked a little worried. "You're claustrophobic?"
~~~ i'll post the rest tomorrow its midnight here and i need to sleep.
"What measure is a non-human?"
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continuing!
I just rolled my eyes at his concern. You don't need to be Sherlock Holmes to see that. Fine, I'm harsh. People should know that by now. He's eyebrows were knitted and we stopped while he stared at me. "Let's just...continue...please." I said. I slightly pushed him forward so he'd continue leading the way. "And you'de better not breathe a word to anyone aout this." It would be really bad if the people at school found out--especially the Power Couple. The only two people who even knew I was claustrophobic was Adrienne and my mom. If word got out, my reputation as a tough chick is finished.
"Alright, we're here." He opened an antique mahogany door (with the old doorknob and keyhole--its probably ancient) and the familiar scent of books calmed me. I'll do okay in this place. I looked up to see tall shelves brimming with books and a dozen computers or so against the walls on the right, and a dozen file cabinets to te left. It was amazingly vast. I shook my head. "How did you know about this," I said in disbelief. "You're not even supposed to be here--yet you've entered that passcode like you've done it countless times...Who are you, Luke Knight?"
He looked a little nervous. He then proceeded towards a file cabinet. "Hold it." I held a dagger in place between his shoulder blades. "What do youthink you're doing? You said we'll only talk. You didn't say anything about scanning through files."
"I seriously wouldn't do that if I were you." He said. I was cinfused and he pointed to a knife that he was also pointing to me. I went rigid. When did he even unsheathe that?
"Fair enough." We both dropped our weapons. This is going to be a long night.
~~~~~***~~~~~
After a long explanation of what has been happenning, he gave me files to scan and I was hocked by what I read. I shook my head and murmured, "This can't happen again..." He was browsing through some documents that he hacked (we're both dead if anyone finds out, but under these present circumstances, we're already good as rotten corpses anyway) when I just realyl had to ask him. Just because of a few words of sincerety doesn't mean I'm letting my guard down.
Besides, he's a boy.
Why would you want to help us?" He stopped reading. "I know about your family. I know that you're a Vesper. If this is some sort of trap, then I'll have to warn you that I'm prepared for anything."
He smirked. "You don't know everything about me. And just because my family are Vespers doesn't mean I have to act like them. I'm not like them." I raised an eyebrow. He's not lying...
The door then suddenly slammed open and a female voice echoed from the shadows. "Why hello! Fancy seeing you here...Annie." I recognized th voice. My blood went cold.
"No..." Luke whispered. "What's she doing here? Get out of here Annie--get out!" He shoved me but it was already too late. I feel a projectile sink into my neck and the world around me changed and shifted like oatmeal. I collapsed as the familiar sense of dread filled me. Closed places... Dark places... Whatever was in that needle now controls what my mind sees. I'm incapacitated. Voices penetrated the void.
NO! Come on Annie, get up!! Hey, get away from me!
A shadow loomed over me. Hmmm...pity I had to shoot him too. Too bad he decided to be a traitor. Now what shall we do with you, Ms. Baker? Every agent of ours lost will need a hefty price...The girl's voice echoed until I finally succumbed to concoction's effects--being trapped in my weaknesses.
Next Morning, Caper Falls High -- Wren
I yawned a bit while leaning on the lockers. When Isis said we'de be camping out, she was serious. And I barely slept a wink. I was able to stand on both my feet though because of our find.
Damion and Aislyn are the library incident culprits. This would prove to be very challenging. Because of their power over the school, most of the teachers even choose to just ignore them. When someone with guts reports to the principal, they tolerate the behavior. Not to mention that Adrienne has been acting weird around Damion lately. I looked at the couple as they parted another sea of students. Days ago, I might have considered trying to make peace with them. Now, it seems like I imagined that very thought.
Speaking of Adrienne, she and the gang walked towards me. They all seemed to look fine, but worry was the only thing plastered on Adrienne's face. "Hey guys..." Time for a head count... "Hey where's Anastasia?"
"I don't know either." Adrienne started biting her nails. "She left a note in my room saying she went home in the middle of the night but her stuff are still at my place. I also called her cell and her home number. I got the electronic lady's annoying voice on the former, Pandora on the latter. She says she haven't called yet."
"That's not right. She usually calls first thing in the morning after a sleepover to give her mom a heads up that she's still alive." Gary frowned.
"Maybe she's sick?" Jasmine asked hopefully. Annie's little sis, Pandora has been known to pull practical jokes that are not funny at all. "Maybe little Dory is just pulling our leg?"
"I'll call her cell." Isis said. After a few seconds she said, "Nothing. Just the electronic lady's annoying beep." We call the computer who answers when the person cannot be reached the annoying electronic lady because her voice was very static and once deafened a guy because of the feedback. Why they just didn't record a real person's voice, I don't know.
The final bell rang and students started making way for their respective classes. Annie's usually late, but not final bell late. She always arrives at least 10 seconds before the final bell to get her things from her locker. And we always have the time to either help her, or laugh at her (usually both) while she fumbles to stuff her books in her bag. Where could she be? She's not exactly sickly either.
"Wait! I know. I have Chemistry later with her. I'll inform you if she shows up or not." Isis said.
"And if she doesn't?" Gary asked, one of those few times when he's very serious.
"Then I fear the worst." She grimaced.
~~~~okay, that wraps it up. someone post next! And please include Alafara, Marissa, Aislyn, Draco and other charries' POVs. We need their insights other than the first main charries'.
I just rolled my eyes at his concern. You don't need to be Sherlock Holmes to see that. Fine, I'm harsh. People should know that by now. He's eyebrows were knitted and we stopped while he stared at me. "Let's just...continue...please." I said. I slightly pushed him forward so he'd continue leading the way. "And you'de better not breathe a word to anyone aout this." It would be really bad if the people at school found out--especially the Power Couple. The only two people who even knew I was claustrophobic was Adrienne and my mom. If word got out, my reputation as a tough chick is finished.
"Alright, we're here." He opened an antique mahogany door (with the old doorknob and keyhole--its probably ancient) and the familiar scent of books calmed me. I'll do okay in this place. I looked up to see tall shelves brimming with books and a dozen computers or so against the walls on the right, and a dozen file cabinets to te left. It was amazingly vast. I shook my head. "How did you know about this," I said in disbelief. "You're not even supposed to be here--yet you've entered that passcode like you've done it countless times...Who are you, Luke Knight?"
He looked a little nervous. He then proceeded towards a file cabinet. "Hold it." I held a dagger in place between his shoulder blades. "What do youthink you're doing? You said we'll only talk. You didn't say anything about scanning through files."
"I seriously wouldn't do that if I were you." He said. I was cinfused and he pointed to a knife that he was also pointing to me. I went rigid. When did he even unsheathe that?
"Fair enough." We both dropped our weapons. This is going to be a long night.
~~~~~***~~~~~
After a long explanation of what has been happenning, he gave me files to scan and I was hocked by what I read. I shook my head and murmured, "This can't happen again..." He was browsing through some documents that he hacked (we're both dead if anyone finds out, but under these present circumstances, we're already good as rotten corpses anyway) when I just realyl had to ask him. Just because of a few words of sincerety doesn't mean I'm letting my guard down.
Besides, he's a boy.
Why would you want to help us?" He stopped reading. "I know about your family. I know that you're a Vesper. If this is some sort of trap, then I'll have to warn you that I'm prepared for anything."
He smirked. "You don't know everything about me. And just because my family are Vespers doesn't mean I have to act like them. I'm not like them." I raised an eyebrow. He's not lying...
The door then suddenly slammed open and a female voice echoed from the shadows. "Why hello! Fancy seeing you here...Annie." I recognized th voice. My blood went cold.
"No..." Luke whispered. "What's she doing here? Get out of here Annie--get out!" He shoved me but it was already too late. I feel a projectile sink into my neck and the world around me changed and shifted like oatmeal. I collapsed as the familiar sense of dread filled me. Closed places... Dark places... Whatever was in that needle now controls what my mind sees. I'm incapacitated. Voices penetrated the void.
NO! Come on Annie, get up!! Hey, get away from me!
A shadow loomed over me. Hmmm...pity I had to shoot him too. Too bad he decided to be a traitor. Now what shall we do with you, Ms. Baker? Every agent of ours lost will need a hefty price...The girl's voice echoed until I finally succumbed to concoction's effects--being trapped in my weaknesses.
Next Morning, Caper Falls High -- Wren
I yawned a bit while leaning on the lockers. When Isis said we'de be camping out, she was serious. And I barely slept a wink. I was able to stand on both my feet though because of our find.
Damion and Aislyn are the library incident culprits. This would prove to be very challenging. Because of their power over the school, most of the teachers even choose to just ignore them. When someone with guts reports to the principal, they tolerate the behavior. Not to mention that Adrienne has been acting weird around Damion lately. I looked at the couple as they parted another sea of students. Days ago, I might have considered trying to make peace with them. Now, it seems like I imagined that very thought.
Speaking of Adrienne, she and the gang walked towards me. They all seemed to look fine, but worry was the only thing plastered on Adrienne's face. "Hey guys..." Time for a head count... "Hey where's Anastasia?"
"I don't know either." Adrienne started biting her nails. "She left a note in my room saying she went home in the middle of the night but her stuff are still at my place. I also called her cell and her home number. I got the electronic lady's annoying voice on the former, Pandora on the latter. She says she haven't called yet."
"That's not right. She usually calls first thing in the morning after a sleepover to give her mom a heads up that she's still alive." Gary frowned.
"Maybe she's sick?" Jasmine asked hopefully. Annie's little sis, Pandora has been known to pull practical jokes that are not funny at all. "Maybe little Dory is just pulling our leg?"
"I'll call her cell." Isis said. After a few seconds she said, "Nothing. Just the electronic lady's annoying beep." We call the computer who answers when the person cannot be reached the annoying electronic lady because her voice was very static and once deafened a guy because of the feedback. Why they just didn't record a real person's voice, I don't know.
The final bell rang and students started making way for their respective classes. Annie's usually late, but not final bell late. She always arrives at least 10 seconds before the final bell to get her things from her locker. And we always have the time to either help her, or laugh at her (usually both) while she fumbles to stuff her books in her bag. Where could she be? She's not exactly sickly either.
"Wait! I know. I have Chemistry later with her. I'll inform you if she shows up or not." Isis said.
"And if she doesn't?" Gary asked, one of those few times when he's very serious.
"Then I fear the worst." She grimaced.
~~~~okay, that wraps it up. someone post next! And please include Alafara, Marissa, Aislyn, Draco and other charries' POVs. We need their insights other than the first main charries'.
"What measure is a non-human?"
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Era, my new fanfic, coming soon to the Cahill Command Messsage Board...
I guess tecnially it be your turn again, Ivy. Or RedPuppy you can go. Or me... I dont care... Just tell me if I should go.
Name: Adrienne Cahill. Age: 14
Come to the semi, Dark, semi Bright side..... We have CUPCAKES!
So I was like-... UNICORNS!
Posted at: 12:20 pm on April 30, 2012
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