Prologue:
My heart was cold despite the blazing smoke and fire wafting in the air. The world felt silent despite the screams of terror and panic piercing the air. Everthing didn't seem to exist except for the fact that my family ancestral home was going up in flames my family still inside.
Hands fell on my shoulder trying to comfort the girl that was losing everything. The girl they had known their whole lives being left alone over the burning ashes of the place where she once loved and lived. My hands trembled as much as I stuggled to make them still, my breath was heaving in my chest as much as I forced myself to be calm.
Time seemed to slow as a single dark ashened figure emerged from the burning building cries of pain retching from the person's mangled body. My heart beat ever faster. I rushed forward as time seemed to come back to me, my own heart spluttered with anxiety as I ran towards the ash covered figure.
My arms circled the person, my fingers cutting clean lines in the soot that powdered over the person's body. The screams of joy surrounding me, mean nothing. I don't comprehend anything, just the shallow breathing of the person in my arms and the pain of seeing her so helpless. "Mom," I whisper stroking the long dark brown hair from her face. A tender smile arches across her face, but her eyes show know sign of recognition, just a dazed milky gaze of emerald green.
"Lissette, my brave little girl," she says in a semi-sleeping trance.
"Mom, I'm here mom, I won't leave you," I promise. She frowns at my words.
"But I must, my time has come Lissette," she whispered reaching up to stroke my hair blindly.
"Mom, don't talk like that!" I begged holding her closer to me.
"When they find you dear, don't tell them. Don't tell them who we were, don't tell them who your family was," she whispered not paying attention to what I had just said.
"Who? Who will find me? Why shouldn't I tell them?" I ask unexpected curiosity coursing through me.
"The men of shadows, don't let them know. Don't tell them," she whispered desperatley clawing at my arms and then her hands suddenly go limp.
"Mom!? MOM!?" I scream shaking her body in my arms the tears are already spilling over. Sobs wracked my body pain sweeped over me. If mom died as quickly as that from this accursed fire. How could the rest of my family have lived? It was a lost cost to hope, it was childish, but it's always true. As much as you've accepted that somethings not gonna happen, there's still a part of you that keep riding that useless hope. Making it harder to accept when it's finally gone.
I stand up. I can bare to watch anymore. I layed her body down on the grass, brushing away stray tears as they start pouring down my face. "Come with us," a cold metallic voice snarls from behind me putting a hand on my shoulder clad with metal. I freeze but don't resist as the person pulls me from my home, my pain, my life.
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The Darkness Within
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
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Posted at: 8:48 am on May 21, 2012
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Wow, Elziana! Keep going!
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I am light. I am Nur.
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Chapter One:
I sling my bag over my shoulder as I exit my dorm room, my dormmates are still sleeping. Not suprising really. It's only 4:00 a.m. A quick smile flitters over my lips. I'm not a "people person" if you know what I mean. I tend to stay away from crowds and all that. Most people haven't seen me out of the classroom most of the time.
I walk into the classroom brushing my thick, dark brown hair out of my eyes, but failing miserabley as the ceiling fan blows it back infront of my face. I give an exasperated sigh and sit down in my desk fiddling with my hair. "Morning Katya," Mrs. Krint says waving at me from her desk which she has just emerged from. She's a plump woman, with auburn hair that falls in waves around her face and bluish-gray eyes that remind you of stone underwater, and then there's of course the obvious marking over what we are. Metallic brown marks that start from the left side of her face down to her left wrist.
The marking of a demon. Everyone has there own pattern of markings. Mrs. Krint? Her marking, like I said are metallic brown and run in cracklike patterns. They set in when we're about thirteen. I was eleven when the fire happened my marking hadn't set in, I hadn't had the gifts that came with the markings and my parents weren't there to help me through the pain that came with it. When they brought me hear I told them my name was Katya Le Fay and I was an orphan who came scrambling to the Darkwing manor when the first sirens started blaring and naturally they believed me.
"Are you planning on going to the..." Mrs. Krint says her voice trailing off. She's referring to the ball, every end of term the school has a ball, something to really get ourselves to dress up and get excited. I never attend. I've been going to Crimson Thorne Academy for five years and I've never once in those five years have attended the ball. I tend to just wander the halls, well one year I technically went, but I didn't dance or "mingle" I was just there to play they violin for one of the songs, then I "escaped" alright maybe just a little to weak of a word. I literally fled the room.
"No, I really doubt I am, here's my assignment," I say looking away from her sliding the stack of papers towards her. She blinks at me, with awe and confusion. She takes that stack of papers and I can see from the corner of my eyes her eyes zooming across the page. I don't exactly know how long I watch her do this, but by the time she finishes, one of my fellow classmates named Lucas comes in so I can assume it's been around two hours.
"You finished a thousand-five hundred-seventy-three in four days!" Mrs. Klint says throwing her hands in the air and staring at me like I'm a freak, which technically I am, but she is one too.
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UGH! This chapter is so actionless it's so messed up!
I sling my bag over my shoulder as I exit my dorm room, my dormmates are still sleeping. Not suprising really. It's only 4:00 a.m. A quick smile flitters over my lips. I'm not a "people person" if you know what I mean. I tend to stay away from crowds and all that. Most people haven't seen me out of the classroom most of the time.
I walk into the classroom brushing my thick, dark brown hair out of my eyes, but failing miserabley as the ceiling fan blows it back infront of my face. I give an exasperated sigh and sit down in my desk fiddling with my hair. "Morning Katya," Mrs. Krint says waving at me from her desk which she has just emerged from. She's a plump woman, with auburn hair that falls in waves around her face and bluish-gray eyes that remind you of stone underwater, and then there's of course the obvious marking over what we are. Metallic brown marks that start from the left side of her face down to her left wrist.
The marking of a demon. Everyone has there own pattern of markings. Mrs. Krint? Her marking, like I said are metallic brown and run in cracklike patterns. They set in when we're about thirteen. I was eleven when the fire happened my marking hadn't set in, I hadn't had the gifts that came with the markings and my parents weren't there to help me through the pain that came with it. When they brought me hear I told them my name was Katya Le Fay and I was an orphan who came scrambling to the Darkwing manor when the first sirens started blaring and naturally they believed me.
"Are you planning on going to the..." Mrs. Krint says her voice trailing off. She's referring to the ball, every end of term the school has a ball, something to really get ourselves to dress up and get excited. I never attend. I've been going to Crimson Thorne Academy for five years and I've never once in those five years have attended the ball. I tend to just wander the halls, well one year I technically went, but I didn't dance or "mingle" I was just there to play they violin for one of the songs, then I "escaped" alright maybe just a little to weak of a word. I literally fled the room.
"No, I really doubt I am, here's my assignment," I say looking away from her sliding the stack of papers towards her. She blinks at me, with awe and confusion. She takes that stack of papers and I can see from the corner of my eyes her eyes zooming across the page. I don't exactly know how long I watch her do this, but by the time she finishes, one of my fellow classmates named Lucas comes in so I can assume it's been around two hours.
"You finished a thousand-five hundred-seventy-three in four days!" Mrs. Klint says throwing her hands in the air and staring at me like I'm a freak, which technically I am, but she is one too.
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UGH! This chapter is so actionless it's so messed up!
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
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Chapter Two:
Mrs. Klint starts the class eyes flickering to me now and again seeing as I've already covered the topic in my report. Then the intercome is blaring on interrupting Mrs. Klint in the middle of explaining something. It's Headmaster Mevric . "All students from sections: G-Levroc; H-Klint; D- Klint; and E-Hanton are to meet at the entrance hall this instant!" I can almost see his nostrils flare and it's pretty obvious what he's so steemed about. The Hunt.
The Hunt is practically held every year by dozens of people who are aware of our existance. It's like a sporting game for the humans, but the stakes are high. They could bring one of us down and earn our powers or fail in the attempt. Probably the latter, we are really, really, really hard to kill. We're immortal, we've got our abilities and extincts to guide, and of course there are the transformations. Another perk to being a demon, everyone is different so everyone has their own transformation, it's a part of who we are.
We are forced to participate in the hunt to draw major damage away from the young. Meaning the ones who still have no control over their powers, when we are more of a danger to ourselves rather than our enemies.
I stand up and sling my bag across my shoulder, reaching down to set my right hand on the hilt of one of the daggers strapped to my belt. The green turtle neck I'm wearing disguises the knives that are strapped into my belt. Technically we're aloud to bring weapons, but I doubt the teachers would be pleased if I stabbed sombody who bumped into me while walking to class.
I'm out the door before most of the kids have reacted. I speed down the corridor my hair whipping behind me. My marks showing, silver vine specked with specks of cerulean blue. A hand grabs my shoulder from behind and then all my training from The Hunt starts kicking in as the grip on my shoulder tightens. I swivel around thrusting the poing of the dagger under the person's throat when I see who it is I give a small shriek of surprise and pull the dagger away. It's Headmaster Mevric. "We need to talk," he whispers pulling me down the corridor half frozen in shock.
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Cliffhanger, well I guess. You wanna know what he's gonna stay? *crowd leans forward* WELL I'M NOT GONNA TELL YOU!!!
Mrs. Klint starts the class eyes flickering to me now and again seeing as I've already covered the topic in my report. Then the intercome is blaring on interrupting Mrs. Klint in the middle of explaining something. It's Headmaster Mevric . "All students from sections: G-Levroc; H-Klint; D- Klint; and E-Hanton are to meet at the entrance hall this instant!" I can almost see his nostrils flare and it's pretty obvious what he's so steemed about. The Hunt.
The Hunt is practically held every year by dozens of people who are aware of our existance. It's like a sporting game for the humans, but the stakes are high. They could bring one of us down and earn our powers or fail in the attempt. Probably the latter, we are really, really, really hard to kill. We're immortal, we've got our abilities and extincts to guide, and of course there are the transformations. Another perk to being a demon, everyone is different so everyone has their own transformation, it's a part of who we are.
We are forced to participate in the hunt to draw major damage away from the young. Meaning the ones who still have no control over their powers, when we are more of a danger to ourselves rather than our enemies.
I stand up and sling my bag across my shoulder, reaching down to set my right hand on the hilt of one of the daggers strapped to my belt. The green turtle neck I'm wearing disguises the knives that are strapped into my belt. Technically we're aloud to bring weapons, but I doubt the teachers would be pleased if I stabbed sombody who bumped into me while walking to class.
I'm out the door before most of the kids have reacted. I speed down the corridor my hair whipping behind me. My marks showing, silver vine specked with specks of cerulean blue. A hand grabs my shoulder from behind and then all my training from The Hunt starts kicking in as the grip on my shoulder tightens. I swivel around thrusting the poing of the dagger under the person's throat when I see who it is I give a small shriek of surprise and pull the dagger away. It's Headmaster Mevric. "We need to talk," he whispers pulling me down the corridor half frozen in shock.
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Cliffhanger, well I guess. You wanna know what he's gonna stay? *crowd leans forward* WELL I'M NOT GONNA TELL YOU!!!
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 8:31 am on May 24, 2012
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Amazing please keep going!
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Chapter Three:
"So what?" I ask him, we're in his plush and enormous office. He blinks for a moment as if he's forgotten I'm there.
"What?"
"Why am I here? What do you want to talk to me about? If it's only trivial may I please go sir because I'll be late for the trasnportation to The Hunt," I say. I sound much more rude and arrogant than I mean.
"You cannot fo on the hunt Katya," I start protesting, but he hold up a hand. "Because they have chosen Givensdale as the scene of The Hunt." My jaw dropped, Givensdale, they city of my birth and where I was "supposedly" orphaned. Memories, places, and people. It's obvious why he doesn't want me to go. The memories could render me useless and even though it is unavoidable to have casualties every year, it would be insane of them to let me go if the memories did do that.
"I can handle it and why on earth would they choose a city that is still striving?" I ask my voice is lifeless and I struggle to keep it that way. Any sign of pain and they're sure to not let me go.
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GOTTA GO ASAP SORRY!!!!
"So what?" I ask him, we're in his plush and enormous office. He blinks for a moment as if he's forgotten I'm there.
"What?"
"Why am I here? What do you want to talk to me about? If it's only trivial may I please go sir because I'll be late for the trasnportation to The Hunt," I say. I sound much more rude and arrogant than I mean.
"You cannot fo on the hunt Katya," I start protesting, but he hold up a hand. "Because they have chosen Givensdale as the scene of The Hunt." My jaw dropped, Givensdale, they city of my birth and where I was "supposedly" orphaned. Memories, places, and people. It's obvious why he doesn't want me to go. The memories could render me useless and even though it is unavoidable to have casualties every year, it would be insane of them to let me go if the memories did do that.
"I can handle it and why on earth would they choose a city that is still striving?" I ask my voice is lifeless and I struggle to keep it that way. Any sign of pain and they're sure to not let me go.
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GOTTA GO ASAP SORRY!!!!
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 8:46 am on May 26, 2012
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WOW! THAT IS LIKE TOTALLY AWESOME~!
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I'll read tomorrow it's bed time so yah bye ~Maria Anna~
RIP Mum Dad Alex Layla Bert Tony Onyx Ana and my little Georgie
not a day passes when I don't think of all of you, see you all someday~Mia
Nothing is impossible with god~Mia
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CONTINUE PLEASE SO GOOD!!
~Nur~
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I am the ambient sun at its zenith,
I am the radiant red of the sunset.
I am light. I am Nur.
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Wow! THIS IS AMAZING!
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this is an amazing story!
i realy truely and absolutly amazing!!!
keep writting please!!
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keep writting please!!
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue your killing me with the suspence!
U DONT NEED TO KNOW MY NAME I WAS NEVER HERE!
is it bad if a vacume really sucks?
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awesome story, please continue!!
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
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love it!!!
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
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Chapter Three (continuation)
"I'll be fine," I say waving my hand in the air dismissivley. "I really will be!" I exclaim as he throws me an untrusting look, but something about my expresion must be fierce enough to change his mind, because he sighs and with exagerated slowness hand me a single slip of paper saying the following:
Katya Le Fay
Year three of experienced seesion, sixteen-years-old, dorm room G- Ninenty Five.
Hereby given permission to lead groups: 2R; 6T; 3B; and any select group of her choosing
"Your asking me to lead?" I ask him. Usually students my age aren't given groups at all, teachers always choose the more experienced students, but now they've given me the most experienced groups of this school. The pride and joy of Crimson Thorne Academy and I know if any of them get hurt it'll be my fault, but I can't think of that now.
"Of course, Givensdale is you home terf, you know this terrain the best, you know it inside and out and if we know the hunter even the slightest, they'll be trying to flush you out into the city so a word of warning try to position your troops and send them into attack patterns that will drive them away the city not towards it," he said his face solemn.
"Why? We could easily siddle along the population, why can't we?" I ask.
"Just don't!" He snaps at me and then his voice softens. "I'm sorry, but you must listen. Your weapons has been set out for you meet up with your respected groups in the entrance hall and call your individual recruits." I nod and exit the room once I'm out I look back at him through the open door and see he's shooting me a weary expression.
Chapter Four
I fiddle with a lock of my hair as I wald. To batons are strapped to my back, the flat edges of both of the blades are pressed on the small of my back. My belt of knives strapped around my waist. I'm about to claim my groups and I'm alreadys re-considering. These kids are older than me, what do they think of me being the one leading them into battle? Will they resent me for it? No stop thinking that. Like it or not I'm still they're leader.
I walk forwards inside the giant oak doors and take my seat. Mrs. Klint is reading off the list of groups and she just has apparently called mine. "May I have all members of group 2R, 6T, and 3B?" I see them most of the older students stand up and take their place in a neat formation of the transporter. "May I have their leader Katya Le Fay and her selected six?" She asks again her voice tainted with an edge of anxiety. To late to turn back now. I step forward and so do my requested six.
I can almost feel the tension in the whole room.
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CONTINUE LATER!!!! Oh and please review! It feeds my soul... *eye twitches* sorry I think I went into a moment right there, but please review and I just might post again in a few hourse
"I'll be fine," I say waving my hand in the air dismissivley. "I really will be!" I exclaim as he throws me an untrusting look, but something about my expresion must be fierce enough to change his mind, because he sighs and with exagerated slowness hand me a single slip of paper saying the following:
Katya Le Fay
Year three of experienced seesion, sixteen-years-old, dorm room G- Ninenty Five.
Hereby given permission to lead groups: 2R; 6T; 3B; and any select group of her choosing
"Your asking me to lead?" I ask him. Usually students my age aren't given groups at all, teachers always choose the more experienced students, but now they've given me the most experienced groups of this school. The pride and joy of Crimson Thorne Academy and I know if any of them get hurt it'll be my fault, but I can't think of that now.
"Of course, Givensdale is you home terf, you know this terrain the best, you know it inside and out and if we know the hunter even the slightest, they'll be trying to flush you out into the city so a word of warning try to position your troops and send them into attack patterns that will drive them away the city not towards it," he said his face solemn.
"Why? We could easily siddle along the population, why can't we?" I ask.
"Just don't!" He snaps at me and then his voice softens. "I'm sorry, but you must listen. Your weapons has been set out for you meet up with your respected groups in the entrance hall and call your individual recruits." I nod and exit the room once I'm out I look back at him through the open door and see he's shooting me a weary expression.
Chapter Four
I fiddle with a lock of my hair as I wald. To batons are strapped to my back, the flat edges of both of the blades are pressed on the small of my back. My belt of knives strapped around my waist. I'm about to claim my groups and I'm alreadys re-considering. These kids are older than me, what do they think of me being the one leading them into battle? Will they resent me for it? No stop thinking that. Like it or not I'm still they're leader.
I walk forwards inside the giant oak doors and take my seat. Mrs. Klint is reading off the list of groups and she just has apparently called mine. "May I have all members of group 2R, 6T, and 3B?" I see them most of the older students stand up and take their place in a neat formation of the transporter. "May I have their leader Katya Le Fay and her selected six?" She asks again her voice tainted with an edge of anxiety. To late to turn back now. I step forward and so do my requested six.
I can almost feel the tension in the whole room.
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CONTINUE LATER!!!! Oh and please review! It feeds my soul... *eye twitches* sorry I think I went into a moment right there, but please review and I just might post again in a few hourse
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
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can we plz make characters?the story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz write more!!!!
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
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love it and the whole feeds my soul thing was funny!!
i agree can we make characters and the first six to make can be part of your team,group etc.
if yes then here's mine, if no then just ignore this form.
NAME:Alice Crest
AGE:15
LOOKS:long black hair pulled back into a ponytail. misty grey eyes .i also have little specks of glitter, silver too, on the egdes of my eyes. Grey runes on my arms legs and on the left cheek. swirly runes like wind.
PERSONALITY:im mysterious and shy, dont like to talk to people that much.im also a great fighter
WEOPON OF CHOICE: i only use two twin daggers and a bow with silver tipped arrows.my bow is slung onto my back.
i also have a Grey pearl around bracelet around one wrist and a thin silver chain around the other.
i agree can we make characters and the first six to make can be part of your team,group etc.
if yes then here's mine, if no then just ignore this form.
NAME:Alice Crest
AGE:15
LOOKS:long black hair pulled back into a ponytail. misty grey eyes .i also have little specks of glitter, silver too, on the egdes of my eyes. Grey runes on my arms legs and on the left cheek. swirly runes like wind.
PERSONALITY:im mysterious and shy, dont like to talk to people that much.im also a great fighter
WEOPON OF CHOICE: i only use two twin daggers and a bow with silver tipped arrows.my bow is slung onto my back.
i also have a Grey pearl around bracelet around one wrist and a thin silver chain around the other.
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NAME:Violet Connely
AGE:17
LOOKS:long, dark brown, soft, wavy hair, large deep brown eyes, slim, graceful, beautiful, paleish skin, light blue and silver markings curling gracefully from my left cheek, down my right arm and to my left foot
PERSONALITY:sweet, really shy, smart, intelleget, strategist,
WEOPON OF CHOICE:daggers for throwing and hand to hand combat. im really good at fighting and im really fast
AGE:17
LOOKS:long, dark brown, soft, wavy hair, large deep brown eyes, slim, graceful, beautiful, paleish skin, light blue and silver markings curling gracefully from my left cheek, down my right arm and to my left foot
PERSONALITY:sweet, really shy, smart, intelleget, strategist,
WEOPON OF CHOICE:daggers for throwing and hand to hand combat. im really good at fighting and im really fast
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
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Alright *everybody still keeps sending in forms*. Alright! *no change* ALRIGHT!!!! STOP IT!!!! Okay so since (most) everyone is dying to get into the story here's the form. Can I ask please don't be mad at me, but no one. Absolutely no one has the same coloring for markings. Lissette AKA Katya has silver and blue. So no coloring like that, colors very depending on persanily experiences before you get your marking and purity. Silver and gold are the two strongest when it comes to young demons, then if you have well exercised you powers and have achieved nobility (great acts) to the highest rank at the age of demon adult hood (50 years old [what? I said we were immortal]) the council (will be explained later in the story) can grant with the ever changing aura (will be explained also). Markings vary depending on what your personality is like your experiences. Curved marking are very rare when young, it only can be gained at the young age if you are from a line of a sacred demon family (The Darkwing family for instance ), a prophesized futue, or is a descandant of one of the council members.
Okay I think I've ranted enough, so here's the form:
Name:
Age:
Looks (do not write markings):
Personality:
Memorable Experiences in you life:
Family:
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three:
If runaway fake name:
Other:
Sooner or later you'll get your anwser on what you marking look like. Oh and the marking depending if your right or left handed. If your right handed you marking will be from you left cheek down to you left arm to your wrist. Oh and if you need to know your markings are the same color as you eyes...
Okay enjoy! Chapter up in an hour or two, maybe tomorrow not sure, but bye!
Okay I think I've ranted enough, so here's the form:
Name:
Age:
Looks (do not write markings):
Personality:
Memorable Experiences in you life:
Family:
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three:
If runaway fake name:
Other:
Sooner or later you'll get your anwser on what you marking look like. Oh and the marking depending if your right or left handed. If your right handed you marking will be from you left cheek down to you left arm to your wrist. Oh and if you need to know your markings are the same color as you eyes...
Okay enjoy! Chapter up in an hour or two, maybe tomorrow not sure, but bye!
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 8:12 am on May 30, 2012
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NAME:Violet Connely
AGE:17
LOOKS:long, dark brown, soft, wavy hair, large deep brown eyes, slim, graceful, beautiful, paleish skin
PERSONALITY:sweet, really shy, smart, intelleget, strategist,
WEOPON OF CHOICE:daggers for throwing and hand to hand combat
memorable expirience:getting orphaned, having siblings
family:mike connely (dad), Rose connely (mom), luke connely (baby brother), iris connely (little sister)
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three:an orphan with siblings
other:love music, reading, writing, running, good stratigest, great fighter
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
Posted at: 4:13 pm on May 30, 2012
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I have no words except OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!
I'm Adara!!
kingdomkeeper, Starcatcher,writer, proud geek!, n.o.u.s member, chirstan!:)
www.the39clues.com/show/34144 check it out!!
SKY ARMY 4EVEA!!!!!!!!
Posted at: 6:12 pm on May 30, 2012
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im changin my eye color to stormy gray
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
Posted at: 10:00 pm on June 1, 2012
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Rachel Kape ( hi buddy :))
16
Chestnut hair with light brown highlights, electric blue eyes, running shoes, and skinny
Nice, can be mean, tomboy, quiet, shy, can be girly, sneaky, and a good follower
Her family and friends
Rayla (12), Roland (48), Ruth (47) that is it
Runaway
Hannah Turner
Friends?
16
Chestnut hair with light brown highlights, electric blue eyes, running shoes, and skinny
Nice, can be mean, tomboy, quiet, shy, can be girly, sneaky, and a good follower
Her family and friends
Rayla (12), Roland (48), Ruth (47) that is it
Runaway
Hannah Turner
Friends?
Comin Back Baby, Comin Back.
Oh Yeah
Posted at: 11:36 am on June 3, 2012
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I'm changing my hair to slightly toned raven black curls
In a land of myth and a time of magic, the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young man. His name... Merlin.
Posted at: 10:51 pm on June 6, 2012
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Been forever since I last posted and I'm sorry, but you guys just have to be patient so please be and I will post very soon 
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 11:34 pm on June 13, 2012
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Name: kendra jenner
Age:13
Looks (do not write markings): skinny, dark clothes,really dark brown hair, large round glasses
Personality: slightly shy, genius
Memorable Experiences in you life: i'll get back to you later, i don't really get this part
Family: little bro Joey
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three: orphan
If runaway fake name: Eo'wyn Correllia
Other:
Age:13
Looks (do not write markings): skinny, dark clothes,really dark brown hair, large round glasses
Personality: slightly shy, genius
Memorable Experiences in you life: i'll get back to you later, i don't really get this part
Family: little bro Joey
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three: orphan
If runaway fake name: Eo'wyn Correllia
Other:
Trust me. I am more dangerous than you think- Me
Everybody is weird, some people just don't admit it - Me
π=3.141592653579....
Beware the KIWI!!!!!
Posted at: 3:52 pm on June 14, 2012
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oops! i forgot to tell you, my eyes (and markings) are sort of dark silverish (is that a color?)
-kendra
-kendra
Trust me. I am more dangerous than you think- Me
Everybody is weird, some people just don't admit it - Me
π=3.141592653579....
Beware the KIWI!!!!!
Posted at: 4:05 pm on June 15, 2012
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Hey, it's Lauren from that PEOPLE CHOSEN FOR STORY thing by BullBull. Well, I wrote to him or her that we're all ready for the story and BullBull replied, telling me that he or she will post the story at lat. I just came here to tell you to keep your eyes open for it.
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376
Posted at: 6:39 am on June 20, 2012
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This is awesome!
I'm Adara!!
kingdomkeeper, Starcatcher,writer, proud geek!, n.o.u.s member, chirstan!:)
www.the39clues.com/show/34144 check it out!!
SKY ARMY 4EVEA!!!!!!!!
Posted at: 11:43 am on June 20, 2012
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Hey, you know that magic story you signed up for BullBull...IT'S HERE!
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/25924
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376
Posted at: 8:25 am on June 22, 2012
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hello? anybody here? please post the next part soon!
-HiddenIndigo1
-HiddenIndigo1
Trust me. I am more dangerous than you think- Me
Everybody is weird, some people just don't admit it - Me
π=3.141592653579....
Beware the KIWI!!!!!
Posted at: 9:59 pm on July 7, 2012
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EVERYONE! Elzianna is out right now and won't return in about a couple of weeks (or months...)
Comin Back Baby, Comin Back.
Oh Yeah
Posted at: 1:37 pm on July 15, 2012
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HEY! Guess what? BullBull is back and he or she has just explained what we're meant to do for his story in PEOPLE CHOSEN FOR STORY LOOK HERE.
Come and see!
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/25924
Turns out it was this link, not the one you checked out before. There were two with the same name, the link above is the one BullBull replied to.
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376
Posted at: 10:05 am on August 3, 2012
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BULLBULL97 IS BACK! COME HERE NOW!
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/25924
PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376
Posted at: 10:12 am on August 4, 2012
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OH, OH I WANTA BE IN!! i'm really, really sorry if i'm late but your story is just SO GREAT i have to be in it, even if i'm not in i'll still read it! it kind of reminds me of a story i read called 'the hunt', werid huh?
Name:rasine alcox
Age: 11 if not alound than 12
Looks (do not write markings): dark brown hair, brown eyes, pale skin, five small freckles on the left check( next to the nose)
Personality: shy, but once you get to know quite bossy and bostful
Memorable Experiences in you life: her best friend died right before her eyes
Family: mother, father and younger sister
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the three: family
If runaway fake name:none
Other: a people person, loves sport, really, really wants to be in the hunt!
“In my world, everyone's a pony and they all eat rainbows and poop butterflies!” – Dr Seuss
Posted at: 3:40 pm on August 4, 2012
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Name:Amelia Awall
Age:14
Looks:Brown hair in pony tail, brown eyes, 4'11,
Personality:Happy, excitable, likes to sing, likes to act, random, has a temper, is not nice when angered, girly girl.
Memorable experiences in your life:Parents were diagnosed with cancer, are currently having treatment done.
Family:Parents, little sister Kaitlen.
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the 3:Runaway
If runaway fake name:Victoria Vrone
Other:Ranaway because was so sad seeing parents so weak, still corrosponds with her aunt.
Can I please have my markings up and down my legs?
Age:14
Looks:Brown hair in pony tail, brown eyes, 4'11,
Personality:Happy, excitable, likes to sing, likes to act, random, has a temper, is not nice when angered, girly girl.
Memorable experiences in your life:Parents were diagnosed with cancer, are currently having treatment done.
Family:Parents, little sister Kaitlen.
Orphan, Runaway, Family or any mix of the 3:Runaway
If runaway fake name:Victoria Vrone
Other:Ranaway because was so sad seeing parents so weak, still corrosponds with her aunt.
Can I please have my markings up and down my legs?
I am leaving the message boards! Find out more here: http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/40689
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Posted at: 9:39 pm on August 4, 2012
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Is it too late for me to join? Here's my form: name: showleen stars. Age:16. Looks: long curly black hair, bright blue eyes.personality:quiet,sweet,smart,persuasive,and a can be dangerous when forced to. Memerable experiences in your life: been taught how to use powers properly, and trained. Have almost drowned in a lake, during one of the hunts-ever since then been afraid of bodies of water. Family: mom-katherine, dad-Christopher, sister-kamilia(17), brother-justin(14). orphan,runaway, or family: family. Other: loves to read, and sing. Uses a silver sword that glints in the moonlight as a weopan.--------------------------------------------I'm using my iPod for this so it's small.
SHOWLEEN CAHILL
WRITER OF THE IMPOSSIBLE QUEST: 26293
YOU SHOULDN'T JUDGE SOMEONE UNLESS YOU KNOW THEIR FULL STORY-ME
Posted at: 10:43 pm on August 4, 2012
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ooh....
"Just when you think my character can't get any cooler, I do." -Legolas
legolas greenleaf
Posted at: 12:44 am on August 5, 2012
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I'M BACK I WAS IN THE HOSPITAL FOR TWO &##^#$@ MONTHS OMG I'M AN AWFUL PERSON AND THIS POST IS PROBABLY DEAD BUT I AM SO NOT GIVING UP ON THIS POST IT'S MY CROWN JEWEL THIS POST IS NOT DYING!!!!!
Chapter Five:
I clear my throat the most amazing squads being under the control of a minor like me is a chance of slim to none, but still I wasn't given this post for nothing. "Violet Connely," she smirks, but it somehow is sweet is loving before skipping up onto the platform and linking arms with me. I give her an appreciative smile, brushing a lock dark brown hair from her face, "R-Hannah Turner," me and Hannah or Rachelle revealed our secrets to eachother and Hannah not being from a family that openly showed their demon heritage didn't know who she was really was so her secret as Lissette Darkwing as really known that much to the demon world at that time. She gives me a pointed look, but comes forward also.
"Alice Cresta, Eo'wyn Correllia, Rasine Alcox, and Amelia Awell," I finish in a rush blushing darkly. Mrs. Klint tells us to be safe and hold up the honor of Crimson Thorne Academy and activates the portal. I place my hand over it and we all teleport the minute my feet hit the earth, something has grabbed me by the neck and pushed me up the trunk of the tree.
"Why are you leader?" The girl screams shrilly fangs baring darkly. "What did you do? Bribe the Headmaster? Oh wait, you can't because you're an ORPHAN!"
"Let go of her!" Hannah screams grabbing the girl who I realize as Tiffany Mesbreded.
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Gotta go
Chapter Five:
I clear my throat the most amazing squads being under the control of a minor like me is a chance of slim to none, but still I wasn't given this post for nothing. "Violet Connely," she smirks, but it somehow is sweet is loving before skipping up onto the platform and linking arms with me. I give her an appreciative smile, brushing a lock dark brown hair from her face, "R-Hannah Turner," me and Hannah or Rachelle revealed our secrets to eachother and Hannah not being from a family that openly showed their demon heritage didn't know who she was really was so her secret as Lissette Darkwing as really known that much to the demon world at that time. She gives me a pointed look, but comes forward also.
"Alice Cresta, Eo'wyn Correllia, Rasine Alcox, and Amelia Awell," I finish in a rush blushing darkly. Mrs. Klint tells us to be safe and hold up the honor of Crimson Thorne Academy and activates the portal. I place my hand over it and we all teleport the minute my feet hit the earth, something has grabbed me by the neck and pushed me up the trunk of the tree.
"Why are you leader?" The girl screams shrilly fangs baring darkly. "What did you do? Bribe the Headmaster? Oh wait, you can't because you're an ORPHAN!"
"Let go of her!" Hannah screams grabbing the girl who I realize as Tiffany Mesbreded.
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Gotta go
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 1:56 pm on October 6, 2012
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