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SPARTAN RP
OK, so Im writing a story that takes place in ancient Sparta. I need characters for the story. If you want to be in my story, fill out this RP. I'll try to post the story regularly, feel free to give any ideas on the story.
Name (Make one up if you want):
Age:
Gender:
Looks:
Personality:
Family (make it up) (optional):
Skills:
Weapon of choice:
Patron God/Goddess from Greek Mythology:
Other:
Here's my RP.
Name: Alcestis
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Looks: Black wavy hair, green eyes, olive-skinned, fit, 5'6
Personality: Short-tempered, tough, fun to be around usually, rebellious
Family: Older brother Xavier, little sister Helena, mother Sybilline, father Tiresias, baby brother Xenon, slave Roxane
Skills: Archery, combat, climbing, running, fighting with dagger, swimming
Weapon of choice: Bow & arrows
Patron God/ Goddess from Greek mythology: Athena, goddess of wisdom and battle strategy
Other: Im a rebellious person so Ill be doing stuff in the story I'm not allowed to do
Also tell me if their are changes in the story you'd like when I start writing it. I'll try to do a lot of POV's. I'll be needing atleast 8 or 9 RPs. Thanks!
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Posted at: 2:29 pm on May 19, 2012
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your right sneakingalliance8 english pronounceiations of greek names and places are different some examples:minos in english: mine-ohs in greek english:meen-ohs aphrodite in english:afro-die-ty in greek english:afro-dee-ty zeus in english: zuus in greek english:zey-uus those are only 3 of many,many examples.antonius
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SneakingAlliance8, please calm down. How are we supposed to 'stop saying Greek stuff' on a Spartan RP? Sorry, I for one am not going to learn Greek just so this RP is 100% authentic! Maybe you should write a story in Greek on your OWN thread. But please quit complaining about the RP!
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Posted at: 3:32 pm on May 28, 2012
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Emily-...Really? Me thought that was Selene. Oh well...
Wrought by a queen for the hand of the chosen
From fish scale and currents, and winters reply
Brought from the deep by a prophet who knows
In the arms of the water again it will lie
Posted at: 4:12 pm on May 28, 2012
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can we just hear the story?
Olive
Never in nature does a creature born to be a Dove turn into an Osprey. It is only amongst men.
-Les Miserables
Posted at: 4:17 pm on May 28, 2012
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Woops, sorry for yelling. That lag is annoying. Nice start to the story. And if i'm correct this isn't a Role Playing Game(RPG) at all. It's just a story that we submitted our characters to be in.
Olive
Never in nature does a creature born to be a Dove turn into an Osprey. It is only amongst men.
-Les Miserables
Posted at: 5:26 am on May 29, 2012
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That's very kind of you!Thank you,because I couldn't stand hearing it Sparta.It sounds too English when it's Greek!
"Greeks don't fight like heroes, heroes fight like Greeks" (Churchill) I am PROUD to be Greek.
Posted at: 10:13 am on May 29, 2012
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@CottonBrilliant1-oh, your right, sorry, I mixed this up with another story. But if anyone wants to add something to the story, they are welcome to.
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Posted at: 4:02 pm on May 29, 2012
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I forgot to add this to the RP form, but can you add a background of yourself, so I can write your POVs.
-Ayesha
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Posted at: 9:29 pm on May 29, 2012
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What exactly do you mean?
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Never in nature does a creature born to be a Dove turn into an Osprey. It is only amongst men.
-Les Miserables
Posted at: 7:42 am on May 30, 2012
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Yeah well,Zeus is Thias(th like that,not thumb)
"Greeks don't fight like heroes, heroes fight like Greeks" (Churchill) I am PROUD to be Greek.
Posted at: 10:49 am on May 30, 2012
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I can't.I wrote something in Greek and they didn't accept it.
"Greeks don't fight like heroes, heroes fight like Greeks" (Churchill) I am PROUD to be Greek.
Posted at: 10:50 am on May 30, 2012
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So what about the next part??
"Not every girl is weak. Ever heard of me?"
Posted at: 2:14 pm on May 30, 2012
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I mean add a background of yourself, for example, my background is that everyone in my family is lost, and I come from a respected family.
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Posted at: 5:30 pm on May 30, 2012
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I will add my background for Katherine
Background: When she was 7 Katherine started to have visions of Aphrodite. Her father brought her to the temple and abandoned her there. She trained to become a priestess and now Aphrodite speaks through her (sorta like an oracle). Sometimes Katherine's dreams are reliving the goddess' life
Hey can I delete the part about being in love and change it to sought out by Apollo.
SneakingAlliance8: Katherine was the first thing I could think of. I don't want to argue, but chill out
Background: When she was 7 Katherine started to have visions of Aphrodite. Her father brought her to the temple and abandoned her there. She trained to become a priestess and now Aphrodite speaks through her (sorta like an oracle). Sometimes Katherine's dreams are reliving the goddess' life
Hey can I delete the part about being in love and change it to sought out by Apollo.
SneakingAlliance8: Katherine was the first thing I could think of. I don't want to argue, but chill out
Melody
"Don't tell me cause it hurts"
"Puny God"
"Cause after all the city never sleeps tonight"
"Hello, My name is Anigo Montoya, You killed my father prepare to die"
Posted at: 7:37 pm on May 30, 2012
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Oh, okay I'll shall write her background now.
She barely made it through infanthood, and wasn't practicularly good at the physical things that she was taught to do but was good at dancing and the like. She now lives at her families manor-home preparing for a life as someone importants wife.
Her family: Mother, father, 4 older brothers, 2 older sisters, one younger sister (deceased), and one younger brother
She barely made it through infanthood, and wasn't practicularly good at the physical things that she was taught to do but was good at dancing and the like. She now lives at her families manor-home preparing for a life as someone importants wife.
Her family: Mother, father, 4 older brothers, 2 older sisters, one younger sister (deceased), and one younger brother
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Never in nature does a creature born to be a Dove turn into an Osprey. It is only amongst men.
-Les Miserables
Posted at: 11:06 pm on May 30, 2012
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Name (Make one up if you want):Amphrite (Am-fright-ee)Marine
Age:13
Gender:female
Looks: black hair, green eyes, small, slender, strong(but dosen't look it) really pretty,
Personality: a rebel, smart, sarcastic and distrusting until she trusts you, nice when she does
Family (make it up) (optional): twin sister,Aphrodite,
Skills: fighting, stealth, perseverance, persuasion, etc.
Weapon of choice: poisend knife, hangs from girdle
Patron God/Goddess from Greek Mythology: Poisden and his wife(my namesake), Athena
Other: You have SO read the Pandora series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Oh my......BOB!"
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Dauntless, Greek daughter of Kronos, District 4 Victor,Terces member, Gallagher Girl
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Posted at: 7:07 pm on May 31, 2012
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Okay Katherine, here's your POV:
Chapt. 1: Katherine's POV
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Posted at: 8:02 pm on May 31, 2012
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Sorry about that:)
Katherine's POV
"Approach, seeker.What do you seek from the Glorious Aphrodite?" Aphrodite spoke through Katherine.
The young woman infront of Katherine let out another sob. After a while she finally seemed to be able to speak: "Oh Great Priestess, I have been assigned to a husband, but my heart belongs to another," she let out another sob. "What should I do?"
Katherine stirred. "Go after your true love. You decide the first step, and if you do the right thing, I'll direct you from there. Now leave."
The young woman nodded, her tears gone, and bowed. "Thank you, oh Glorious One." Then she left.
Katherine collapsed. She woke up a few seconds later. The last thing she remembered before Aphrodite took over was a young woman weeping uncontrollably.
When Katherine was 7, Aphrodite started showing her visions, either about the goddess herself, or about others' love lives. When she told her father, he took her to the temple and abandoned the innocent girl there. The kind priests took her in and made her a priestess. When Katherine was 14, she found out Apollo sought after her.
Katherine got up and turned to the priest to her right, he nodded his head and she left the temple for a walk. She didn't really mind answering people's problems, but it was kind of overwhelming. As Katherine was about to walk back to the temple. She sensed something wrong. She instinctively turned around. The second she did, a heavy force slammed into her with the speed of lightining and she went down.
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Hope you like it. La la la!!! Sorry, listening to music. and tell me if I need to add more action to the POVs, please, I don't think I'm adding enough
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Posted at: 8:43 pm on May 31, 2012
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Friday is supposed to be my field day, the only day of the year we go outside doing whatever we like and eat junkfood all day long in school, and we probably won't go outside cause it will probably rain. This sucks BIG TIME!!! I WANT TO STRANGLE SOMEONE!!!
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Posted at: 8:51 pm on May 31, 2012
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Great can I please write my next one though? Oh, and I loved the way you wrote that.
Melody
"Don't tell me cause it hurts"
"Puny God"
"Cause after all the city never sleeps tonight"
"Hello, My name is Anigo Montoya, You killed my father prepare to die"
Posted at: 7:32 am on June 1, 2012
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When's the next part????
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Posted at: 12:48 pm on June 1, 2012
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What's the big force?
Melody
"Don't tell me cause it hurts"
"Puny God"
"Cause after all the city never sleeps tonight"
"Hello, My name is Anigo Montoya, You killed my father prepare to die"
Posted at: 6:18 pm on June 1, 2012
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@ExpertHeroine1: Ofcourse you can write your POV, but first you have to add your background. By the way, turns out field day didn't suck so much.
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Posted at: 6:28 pm on June 1, 2012
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Oh, by the way, we have another RP, Amphrite Marine, and yes I did read the Pandora series, if you mean the Pandora gets Jealous series
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Posted at: 6:50 pm on June 1, 2012
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Im sorry Katherine I told you to write your background when you already did, sorry.:)
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Posted at: 6:54 pm on June 1, 2012
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Ok, here is Ariadne's POV:
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Ariadne took a deep breath, determined, and threw the javelin. It sailed a few meters before it veered off fell flat. Ariadne was dismayed, but not very surprised.
"Ariadne!" the trainer barked. "Are you a Spartan? Why can't you throw that javelin straight?!"
Ariadne hung her head but didn't say anything. "If you can't throw it properly by next week, I'm going to report you." With that said, the trainer left. Ariadne slowly turned around and headed back to the dorms.
As she shut the door, a voice spoke out behind her. "So how'd training go?" Alcestis, or Alcie, as she was known to her friends, asked.
"How do you think it went?" Ariadne replied, slumping against the wall. Sierra, Chrysanthe, and Jessalyn were there, too, sitting on their sleeping pallets.
"Why are you so upset over it?" Alcie asked. "I'm not that good at javelin throwing, either."
Ariadne sighed. "But you are good at other stuff. You're amazing at archery. I'm not good at anything. Anything that has to do with physical activities, anyways."
Nobody said anything, probably trying to find a way to respond. Before they could answer, she asked: "Where are the others?"
"Training, or whatever they are doing," Sierra replied. "By the way, I saw Katherine this morning."
"Who's Katherine?" Ariadne was completely baffled.
"She's a priestess of Aphrodite," Chrysanthe explained. Suddenly, someone was banging on the door. Ariadne jumped up, and so did Jessalyn and Chrysanthe. Only Sierra and Alcie seemed unpertubed. Chrysanthe's hand was clutched to her heart. Alcie rolled her eyes and got up to open the door.
In the doorway was Amphritite, doubled over and trying to catch her breath. Amphritite was the youngest of them, but probably the most practical. Ariadne raised an eyebrow. "What is wrong?"
"All of us...all of us have..to," she said, panting. "All of us have to go to the edge of the forest, now, I'll explain later. Just. Get. Out. There!!!"
Since none of them were one's to ignore warnings, they all got to there feet immediately. Five minutes later they had reached the edge of the forest. Ariadne looked around her, but didn't see anyone. Alcie looked like she was going ot stab Amphitrite. She already her dagger out. Amphitrite looked around her: "I...but...where-?"
Before she could finish, everyone suddenly passed out. The last thing Ariadne saw was the sunset. The last thing she felt was someone's hands dragging her off.
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Hope you like it!!! A lot of you still need to add your backgrounds, or else I can't write your POVs.
-Ayesha
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Posted at: 8:45 pm on June 1, 2012
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Jessalyns background...
I swung my feet up and down over a cliff. Zane, Lily, and Lucas were at my side.
"Zeus...he wanted to train, to be the best," I sighed, "Why?" I asked them.
Zane didn't say anything, but Lily said, "Your his daughter, all of Zeus's
children are strong, he wants them to be the best," She told me. I didn't buy it,
"Why not you guys then?" I asked. Zane got mad, "Its because!" He yelled, "You're
the one with more power!" He panted like he was running. I blinked, "Me?"
"Of course you," Lucas said tiredly, "Or he wouldn't even bother to talk to us,"
I nodded, "Fine,"
Hope this helps!!
I swung my feet up and down over a cliff. Zane, Lily, and Lucas were at my side.
"Zeus...he wanted to train, to be the best," I sighed, "Why?" I asked them.
Zane didn't say anything, but Lily said, "Your his daughter, all of Zeus's
children are strong, he wants them to be the best," She told me. I didn't buy it,
"Why not you guys then?" I asked. Zane got mad, "Its because!" He yelled, "You're
the one with more power!" He panted like he was running. I blinked, "Me?"
"Of course you," Lucas said tiredly, "Or he wouldn't even bother to talk to us,"
I nodded, "Fine,"
Hope this helps!!
"Not every girl is weak. Ever heard of me?"
Posted at: 1:09 pm on June 2, 2012
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can we make our backround a story?
if yes then heres mine if not ill write another one.
delphobai 1st persian war
sword and spears clashed in all direction's the persian's had broken through the spartan phalanax and chaos raged across the battlefield.but Praetonius claudias fought with all his might he threw his javelin at a persian soldier then drew his sword and cut down any persians that dared approached him.But he was tiring soon he would drop his sword.And eventually he did drop his sword but,he didnt stop when he dropped his weapon.Using,his armored feet and hands he lashed out feroicously but it wasnt enough.A persian archer stood on his chariot and knocked an arrow.the archer shot.the iron tip flashed toward praetonius and he fell to the ground.
sparta after the battle of delphobai
a soldier marched up to the house of Iphegnia Claudias and her 2 sons Flavius and Antonius.The soldier paladedes was his name said to Iphignia.Lady Claudias im afraid your husband was killed while fighting in the battle of delphobai.Lady Claudias broke the news to her children.
i hope this was ok
if yes then heres mine if not ill write another one.
delphobai 1st persian war
sword and spears clashed in all direction's the persian's had broken through the spartan phalanax and chaos raged across the battlefield.but Praetonius claudias fought with all his might he threw his javelin at a persian soldier then drew his sword and cut down any persians that dared approached him.But he was tiring soon he would drop his sword.And eventually he did drop his sword but,he didnt stop when he dropped his weapon.Using,his armored feet and hands he lashed out feroicously but it wasnt enough.A persian archer stood on his chariot and knocked an arrow.the archer shot.the iron tip flashed toward praetonius and he fell to the ground.
sparta after the battle of delphobai
a soldier marched up to the house of Iphegnia Claudias and her 2 sons Flavius and Antonius.The soldier paladedes was his name said to Iphignia.Lady Claudias im afraid your husband was killed while fighting in the battle of delphobai.Lady Claudias broke the news to her children.
i hope this was ok
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I do mean the Pandora gets Jealous series!
-A.A.134/ Amphrite Marine
"Oh my......BOB!"
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Dauntless, Greek daughter of Kronos, District 4 Victor,Terces member, Gallagher Girl
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Posted at: 4:40 pm on June 2, 2012
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Amphrite Marine's Background:
She was a daughter of a priestess of Amphrite (the goddess) and a priest of Posiden . When she was 10 , people who where angry with her parents (the angry people wanted Posiden to make an earthquake to hurt some innocent people ) burnt down the temples ,where Amphrite and Aphrodite(my identical twin) lived with their parents. Only the twins (Amphrite and Aphrodite) got out in time. Amphrite was blessed with Amphrite and Poiseden speaking through her ,but Aphrodite was blessed with being able to heal someone completely with sea water.
Thx!
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She was a daughter of a priestess of Amphrite (the goddess) and a priest of Posiden . When she was 10 , people who where angry with her parents (the angry people wanted Posiden to make an earthquake to hurt some innocent people ) burnt down the temples ,where Amphrite and Aphrodite(my identical twin) lived with their parents. Only the twins (Amphrite and Aphrodite) got out in time. Amphrite was blessed with Amphrite and Poiseden speaking through her ,but Aphrodite was blessed with being able to heal someone completely with sea water.
Thx!
-A.A.134
"Oh my......BOB!"
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Dauntless, Greek daughter of Kronos, District 4 Victor,Terces member, Gallagher Girl
R A N D O M !
Posted at: 5:18 pm on June 2, 2012
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I don't really mind if you write your backgrounds in story form, but it would make a lot more sense if you didn't.
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Posted at: 10:45 am on June 3, 2012
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Selene was... what? Goddess of the night?
What's pink and fluffy?
-Pink Fluff
What's blue and fluffy?
-Pink fluff holding its breath
yo
Emily :)
Posted at: 8:45 am on June 4, 2012
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Actually, she was more like goddess of the moon
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Posted at: 9:19 pm on June 4, 2012
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ok so is it ok if i keep it like it is or would you like me to write another one?
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@Antonius- No, that's okay, keep it the way it is.
@Everyone- I'm sorry, but I won't be able to write another POV for a day or two because I've been banned from going on my laptop for the longest time.
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Posted at: 8:18 pm on June 6, 2012
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Finally, back to the story. Here's Jessalyn's POV:
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When Jessalyn opened her eyes, it felt like they were covered in opaque paint. she blinked a few times to clear them. She noticed that her head felt like someone was pounding it. Suddenly, everything came back to her. Amphitrite telling them to go to the forest, rushing outside, then suddenly passing out. She immediately sat up.
She realized everything in the room was white. Everything. From the floor she was sitting on to the water basin across from her. She stood up and noticed a door. She tried it, but it was locked. So instead she summoned a lightning bolt and busted the lock open. Being a child of Zeus came handy.
She stepped out into a completely white corridor and wrinkled her nose. All this white made her want to throw up. She walked on for a few minutes until she came to another door. She busted it open, too, and stepped inside. The minute she did, she screamed involuntarily. Sierra, Chrysanthe, Alcie, and everyone who had been in the forest were levitating about 7 feet in the air, sleeping. But her screams woke them up and they crashed to the floor the minute they did. After a few minutes of grumbling and moaning and a lot of swearing from alcie and a few others, they were all on their feet.
Jessalyn looked at them bewildered. "What happened?!"
"No idea," Alcie replied, trying to straighten out her toga. Suddenly she straightened up and turned to Amphitrite. "You were the one who told us to got to the forest. This is your fault. Why did you tell us to go there, anyways?" She asked, glaring murderously. Amphitrite's lower lip quivered like she was going to cry. Ariadne turned and scowled at Alcie, as if to say: Why did you have to make her cry?
This only made Alcie angrier and she stormed towards Ariadne, her hands clenched into fists. Sierra rushed forward. "Alcie, not right now. We can't start arguing if we're going to get out of here."
Jessalyn shook her head. If a wolf was attacking her, she'd be more angrier than afraid, she thought. Alcie had some anger issues.
Suddenly the door she'd busted opened and a boy in his late teens walked in. Everybody froze to the spot. Except for Amphitrite, who jumped forward, plain fury on her face.
"You," she snarled. "You're the one who told me to get everyone out there, that there was a fire spreading through the school."
Jessalyn frowned. What fire? The boy held up his hands as if he was admitting that he was guilty. "Yes, I did," he confessed. "But I needed to get you out. You see, all of you, and a few more, have been summoned by the gods."
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Tell me, is it good or not? Oh, and the rest of you still need to add your backgrounds, so please do, or else I can't write your POVs.
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Posted at: 2:34 pm on June 10, 2012
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Here is Antonius's POV. The plot of the story is coming up, but first I need to add evryone'Pov of getting captured. Which reminds me: SUBMIT YOUR BACKGROUNDS OR I WILL TAKE MY SPARTAN SHIELD AND SLAM IT DOWN ON YOUR FORGETFUL HEADS(JK):)
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Antonius and Bennett were the best of friends. There was no doubt about it. Even though there was a 2 year difference between them, it didn't matter to them. They'd been friends for so long, ever since they'd been dragged off to training school at age seven. They were always cracking jokes and playing pranks together. They were also always getting in trouble together. So it wasn't so surprising to Antonius when all the boys were partnered into groups of two and then cast off into the wilderness for each person to learn how to depend on the other, that Antonius and Bennett were paired together.
It seemed to Antonius that he and Bennett had been cast off to a particularly horrible place. There was not a single bit of green, everything was covered in snow, and the temperature was well below freezing. So first Antonius and Bennett hunted a huge bear and skinned it, using it's thick coat as coats. They cooked some of the meat over a fire and ate, not too much that the filled their stomachs completely, even though their stomachs had been raving for hours. But that's how they'd been trained. After that, they found a small cave that blocked off the wind. Bennett volunteered to take first watch, so Antonius settled down on the cold, hard floor of the cave.
As he put his arms over his head, he thought about how his father would approve of him. Would he be proud of him? Antonius couldn't know. When he had been six, his father had been one of the 300 men king Leonidas had took with him to battle the Persians. Of course, all of them died, except for the messenger king Leonidas had sent back to Sparta to give the news. At first, Antonius had felt very sad, though he hadn't shed any tears, as he had been thought not to. But then, a new feeling had entered him. Hate. And fear. Against the Persians. It had never stirred, but it was inside him. And he swore that if he ever came upon a Persian, he would slay him down. Then Antonius drifted off to sleep.
Antonius woke up with a feeling of dread. Something was wrong. He sat up and looked around. Bennett was nowhere in sight. He stood up and left the cave. Bennett still wasn't there. As he looked around him, he suddenly felt a the edge of a sword blade slide against his neck. Suddenly, a voice whispered next to his ear: "If you want to live and if you want your partner to live, then don't make any sudden moves and walk forward slowly."
Antonius silently obeyed. If it was only him who was being threatened, then he would have immediately spun around and attack, but Bennett's life was hanging to, and he would never let his friend go if he could save him.
After hours of walking, they left the wilderness and came upon a small white house. They entered it and his kidnapper directed him to a door in the center of the house. He opened it as directed and stepped inside. His jaw dropped. Inside the room were several girls who all looked completely shocked, though one of them with black hair and green eyes and was about 14 also looked completely furious. They were all staring at a handsome boy who was about 15 who looked bored. And also staring at him was...Bennett.
The black-haired girl who had looked angry said: "Quit playing with us and let us go home, or I'll slice your head off."
"I'm not playing with any of you, Alcestis," the boy they were staring at replied calmly. The girl -Alcestis-pulled out a dagger from a sheath that seemed to be hidden under her girdle and stormed towards the boy. She pointed the tip of the dagger at his throaght. "I don't know who you are, or who you think you are, thinking it's funny to kidnap people and then play jokes with them. But I will not hesitate to kill you." She looked like she meant it, too.
The boy didn't even flinch. "My name is Alexios, call me Alex for short. And I'm telling the truth. All of you, including myself, have been summoned by the gods to help with an important matter."
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“Zero, you're supposed to be the one that hates vampires more than anyone else...but you need blood more than anyone else.”-Vampire Knight
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Posted at: 3:27 pm on June 10, 2012
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SPARTAN RP
for bennetts background he was first a prankster but after a wile he changed to a serous guy and a leader he also thinks of antonius as a brother,also he neval knew his dad,can you put a love intrest later in the story
bennett
BODY OF A TOMAS,
MIND OF A EKAT
DARKHUNTER
8tH GRADE
Stay STRONG
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son of neptune
Tomas eat broken glass for breakfast,
Posted at: 12:49 am on June 11, 2012
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