Amy sat there, next to Sinead wishing she had brought a book along with her. They were down at the bank, under the shade of a huge tree, and all Sinead was doing was torturing Amy. She sat there, reading her book, while Amy tried to find something interesting to do.
"What are you reading?" Amy asked.
Sinead didn't respond, she was so engrossed in her book,out of this world. Amy sighed, and eyed some daisies. Maybe she could entertain her self trying to make a crown.
A really messed up one. Her conscience thought.
She sighed, and ignored that comment. Amy stood up, and walked over to the patch of daisies. As she bent down to pick one up, she saw a random white bunny hopping toward her. He had white bunny fur, with blue eyes covered by glasses, but his face looked...oddly looked familiar.
"Evan?" She muttered, and straightened.
"Aw man! I'm going to be so late," Evan the white fluffy bunny groaned.
"Evan!" Amy called out.
Evan the bunny didn't even look at her when he passed by. He kept on muttering "Late. So late..."
Amy glanced at Sinead, and back at Evan.
Should I? She asked herself.
Your bored anyways. Her conscience reponded.
True. She thought, and ran after Evan.
"Evan!" She called out again, hoping he would stop, but he didn't.
Evan suddenly jumped into a man-sized bunny hole.
"What the?" Amy asked herself,and hesitated.
"Well, if Evan jumped in there, I suppose it's safe, right?" She asked herself again. "Yeah, it is."
With that, she jumped in after Evan, forgetting one little problem. How was she going to get out of the man-sized bunny hole afterward?
So, I was bored, and I saw lots of people writing 'Amy in a Cinderella story' and a 'Beauty and the Beast' one... I think, so while I was at party, totally bored, and idea sparked. Why don't I write a story like that? I had in mind Amy in a Snowhite story, but I had some trouble picking the 7 little dwarfs, so I wrote this instead. Please comment, and some feedback is highly apprectiated.Yeah, do you guys like it? Should I continue? Well, it's getting a bit late now, and I gotta finish a homework assignment real quick, so see you around, I guess.
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Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!
My favorite quote from 39 clues books
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OK, here's some more. Amy expected to land on the ground ,after a few seconds, and at least get a bit hurt. Instead, it kept on going, not stopping as fast as she hoped. It was sort of dark, with a bit of light streaming in, and a tunnel-like type, that randomly curved deeper into the Earth. Around her, there were cupboards and bookshelves. How were they suspended on the tunnel walls, Amy had no clue."Evan the bunny has been working hard on his home," Amy muttered. She could'nt do anything besides just fall, and fall. Her mind worked to slow to cling onto a stray branch poking out at random places in the tunnel. Soon, she started to get a bit bored. As she passed a bookshelf, she reached toward it. "Yes," She said, clinging onto the book, hoping against all odds it wouldn't fall out of her arms. She flipped the cover open, and tried to read it, but the tunnel didn't let enough light in. She groaned, a bit mad. "Just when I manage to get a book, the light just doesn't feel like helping me," Amy told herself. She lost track of time soon, and was starting to get a bit hungry. After what seemed an hour or so, her stomach grumbled. Amy looked around, and grabbed at the cupboards. Her hand fastened around a container, and she grabbed on to it. "A mini cookie jar!" Amy said, as she read on the label: 'Choclate Chip Cookies.' She unscrewed the lid, and insterted her hand through the opening, and to her great disappointment, her hand just grabbed at the air inside the cookie jar.Amy groaned, and tossed the cookie jar aside, hoping to hear it clatter and break at the bootom, that'd mean she'd be closer to finishing this falling misery. Craning her ear, she heard nothing, and sighed. After that, Amy just decided to become engrossed in her own thoughts. After what seemed like eternity, she was caught unaware, and landed on the ground. To her great surprise, she landed on her feet. Amy looked around, and caught a glimpse of Evan hopping into another dark tunnel, but this one seemed to go straight foward, not straight down. Following Evan's thomping bunny feet, and the occasional 'Late. So Late!' She wandered throught the tunnel. As Evan turned a corner, Amy could no longer hear him, and she got a bit worried. When she approached it, Evan was no longer there."Lost him," Amy said, miserably. "Guess I'll have to find a way out of...here."She did a full circle, seeing a bunch of doors surrounding her. Amy rushed toward one, and tugged at it. Locked. She tugged at five more, and those to were locked. She continued down the hall, by herself, wondering if she were to ever to get out of there. Soon, she came upon a little wooden table, bunny size, with a key on it. Rapidly, she grabbed the key, hoping it wouldn't dissapear at her touch. Luckily, that didn't happen, and she rushed toward another door. She tried in about ten doors, but none of them opened. The key was to small, or to large. Amy leaned her head against the wall, then her eyes lit up, as she saw a low red velvet curtain she hadn't seen before. Her red Converse thumped against the ground, as she ran toward the door. Amy's hand touched the curtain, and lifted it up, and a small door was revealed to be hidden behind it. "Please fit," Amy said, and inserted the key. It fit perfectly, and when Amy turned the key, the door swung open. Now the problem is, how will you go in it? Her conscience thought. It was getting very annoying. It was correct though, because the door was way to small for her. It was Evan the bunny-sized, and she wasn't Evan the bunny-sized. Amy's head titled, her eyes peeking in throught the door, and she gasped. There were patches of flower, various colors, sizes, and types all over there. Running fountains gurgled all over the place, and there were bushes cut to various shapes. Trees were neatly trimmed, and held the ripest fruit Amy had ever seen."Beautiful," Amy muttered, amazed.She tried to slip her hand through the door, to see if she could at least touch the green grass that seemed so soft, but her hand was to big. Amy sat there, next to the door, wondering what she was going to do. "I'm just wasting time," Amy muttered, and stood up. She walked back toward were she had found the key, hoping something else would help her.
Hope you guys enjoyed it :D I'll try to post often, but we will see. I'm almost on Summer Vacation, so it won't be such a problem.Jacque D.A
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Write more or else!!!
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Yay, more people are reading it! Any ways, here's more, just for you guys.As Amy dragged herself back to the table, she wished she'd stayed with Sinead. Look at her now, stuck in a rabbit hole, by herself, and lonely. She caught a glimpse of the table, with a little bottle on top of it. Amy's feet pounded on the ground as she ran toward the table, with new hope surging through her. The bottle was dark blue, with something written on it: 'Drink me!'
Amy stood there, unsure. Should she, or should she not? As she stood there, her stomach grumbled. Your thirsty, just drink it already! Her conscience scolded at her. Be quiet! Amy shot back.She was indeed hungry and thirsty, so she uncapped the bottle. Slowly, she brought it up to her lips, and drank it. "Tastes like Blueberry or something," Amy muttered, wishing she had some more. It was the best thing she had ever drunk. Amy sadly set the bottle down, and sat down on the chair, which was way to small for her, so small, that not even an infant would've fit on it. Amy waited there, uncomftorable trying to think of a plan to leave."Maybe I can dig a tunnel toward the top," Amy said out loud to no one. "Or maybe...." Amy kept on saying, thinking of plans, but deep inside, she knew they were uselss.While she said something, she felt an unfamiliar feeling. Her voice started got get higher than it actually was, and she was beginning to fit better and better in the chair. The stuff around her no longer seemed small, now it looked around normal size."I'm shrinking?" Amy asked in disbelief. She looked down to her feet and screamed. The chair she was sitting in, which was to small and uncomftorable a few minutes ago, was now to big for her. The chair looked more like a giant to her, and her surroundings looked down at her. They were bigger than anything Amy had ever seen! "I was to big a few seconds ago, now I am to small!" Amy muttered, looking around still a bit amazed. As she looked up at the huge table, she saw a glint of the key. The key, and the garden! Amy looked down, but if she jumped off, it would hurt her greatly. She spun around and gasped out loud when she saw a small glass box. Warily, she walked toward it, eyeing it and siezing it up. She grapped the top, and pulled it off, inside, there was a tiny brownie, just her size. A small white paper with fancy writing written on it said 'Eat me!'Amy grabbed at it, and started eating it. The drink had maked her shrink, what would the brownie do? If she grew a few feet, maybe she'd be able to jump down without hurting herself. If she shrunk, then she would'nt know what to do really, but she pushed that thought aside, and ate the brownie. She pushed away the glass box, and waited. Would she grow taller, or shrink? It all depended on the magic of the brownie and time.OK, there you guys go. I'll try to post some later today, but we will see. Hope you guys enjoyed it! I'm so happy you guys are reading it and like it, keep the feedback coming. Thanks!Jacque D.A
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Posted at: 7:53 pm on May 18, 2012
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No matter what you might say, Jacque, I am not saying this to be nice. Your story is really awesome. I really can't wait to read more! I love the way you write, it's really good. :D
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Just to inform you, Alice was in "Wonderland" because she was diagnosed with the Alice in Wonderland Syndrome. Lewis Carrol was also diagnosed with it, and his psychitrist (I forgot his name) helped hum write the book.
Just letting you know.
Great stry, by the way :), you should write more! Post it n wattpad!
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Posted at: 9:08 pm on May 18, 2012
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this is simply amazing and creative! plz continue!
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FINALY POSTED????????????WHY DIDNT U SEND ME THE OTHER CAHPTERS THOUGH????????
“What you see before you, my friend, is the result of a lifetime of chocolate.”
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Continue! Can you please do these two things please though in the story:1. Stuff Amy in a tea pot like in the Alice in Wonderland of 20102. Put Amy in the little blue dress with the apronI know its kind of weird but I like the little blue dress! Please read this and thank you if you take my suggestion. :)SunKitty Age 10
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Two words. It's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted at: 6:58 am on May 19, 2012
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Cool story.
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@ Sofie~ OK, thank you a bunches. @ Clever Janus 7~ Oh, I never knew that before. Thanks you for telling me such. @Karina~ Oh, you wanted to read some more? Sorry, do you still want me to send them to you, or you'll just read on here?@Lavender Dragon 29~ Thanks a bunches as well. @ Adorable Kitten 51~ Maybe I will put her in her little Blue dress and apron. At some point. The teacup part, I will see how I will fit it in. If I can fit it in, I will put it. Ok to the story. Amy sat there, waiting for the results. Hoping she would get taller, but not to tall. A few seconds later, she felt an odd feeling again, diffrent from the first. She stared down at her feet, and suddenly saw them getting further and futher away from her eye sight. "Yes! I am growing!" Amy said, and waited until she was tall enough to get down. Finally, she could hop down safely, and she ran toward the garden, her hand gripping the key. Her problem was, she didn't know she was still growing. She hadn't stopped, and know she was taller than 7 feet. "Please be there.Please be there," Amy prayed. She got there, and kneeled down to enter the garden. Finally, she realized that she was to big. She seemed about 9 feet tall now. Amy let out a sob. She had been so close to getting into the garden, possibly her only way out, and know she was to big. "Unfair," Amy chocked through sobs, whiping her eyes. By now, she was shedding tears. Those tears seemed to all be a gallon of water as they splashed on the ground next to her. After a few minutes of sobbing, and almost flooding the bunny hole, since it seemed to be about half full of Amy's tears, she heard a sound. Amy cranned her ear to the side, and heard thumping. "Evan's back!" She said, and rapidly dried her eyes again. She had been correct, as Evan the white fluffy bunny came out from the shadows gasping. He had been wearing an elagant suit, and was holding on to a pair of white children gloves. In his other hand, or whatever a bunny's hand was called, he held one of those Chinese fans Amy had seen before on the Clue Hunt. "My house! Oh, that is not important at this moment. The great queen is waiting! Waiting! She'll be outraged if I keep her waiting any longer!" Evan muttered to himself. Now, Amy was desperate for help, and wanted to get out of here as soon as possible. "Evan! Can you-?" Evan turned his blue eyes on her, and his eyes widened in surprise. He dropped his fan and gloves, and ran off into another tunnel. "No! Evan come back!" Amy whined, getting up and picking up Evan's fan. "Help! Please!" Even if Amy pleaded, Evan never did come back, and Amy began to sob again. At random times, Amy would call out softly, "Evan, please.", but most of the time, she would cradle herself in her pool of tears. As she sobbed, and played with Evan's little white glove. "Evan," Amy called out softly again. "Dan, anybody?" Now, Amy sat up. "Why did I say Dan? I'm going mental," Amy said. "He's not even here. He was at Atticus' house." She looked down at her hands, and noticed that the glove fit perfectly on her. "Could it be?" She asked herself, and looked around her. Everything seemed normal size to her, compared to how it was before. "It's either the fan or glove." Amy said, and let go of the glove. She still seemed to be shrinking. Now, she dropped the fan, and she stopped growing. At least she seemed to. Amy ran toward the garden door again, but suddenly slipped and landed on her face. Amy looked around,confused, and remebered that she had cried a pool of tears. "Why did I have to cry so much?" Amy asked, as she swam about. As she swam, trying to estimate where the garden door had been, she heard a muffled sqeak and some splashing somewhere of to her right. Amy's curiosity won over her, and she swam toward it. When she caught a glimpse of it, it looked like a cross between a hippo with a walrus. Now, Amy was more confused, and she managed to finally see what it actually was. It was a mouse, and it looked like...no it couldn't be. Amy shut and opened her eyes, hoping she was just hallucinatating, but she wasn't. "Aunt Beatrice?" Amy asked. Beatrice look up at Amy, and then squeaked madly, " Why are you talking to me?" "Well, I need help, and I'm stuck." Amy explained. "Why should I help you? A stranger!" Beatrice snickered. It had never occured to poor Amy that Beatrice wouldn't know her. Then again, Evan seemed to be acting the same. "I am stuck, and cold. May you help me?" Amy asked again. Beatrice looked away from her, and started to swim away. "Please no!" Amy swam after her. "Can we chat a bit? Maybe, you may learn more from me." Amy suggested. Beatrice stopped and turned around. "Very well. Begin." Amy told her what had happened, and several times Bea would just snicker. Finally, she finished. "How...nice," Beatrice muttered. "Well, sorry I can't help you at this moment-" "No please! I-I- I got a secret weapon and I am not afraid to use it!" Amy stuttered. Bea just turned around, "And what might that be?" "I have a pet cat, Saladin, and he is the best mice hunter I know! He'll come hunting you down in no time if you don't help me!" Amy threatened. That got Beatrice's attention. Bea turned around, pale as a ghost, and gulped. "Fine, I'll tell help you. Just go up to the shore if you please." Amy swammed toward Bea. "Promise?" Amy asked her. Beatrice looked at her, and swam away. "Unfair!" Amy yelled. "I'm going to call for my cat!" Now, Amy had offended Beatrice even more than before, and Bea swam faster. "Did I offend you?" Amy asked, the thought occuring to her just now. "Of course you did! That is why I do not trust you!" Bea said. "I am terribly sorry! I didn't mean too. Please don't go. Let's talk about something else, like dogs! Do you like dogs?" Amy asked. "They seem better than cats," Bea said. "Well, I know this adorable Beagle. He goes and fetches whatever you wish. He's a great guard dog, and keeps the rats away by-" Amy began, then stopped as she saw Beatrice swimming away. "Offended!" Beatrice called over her shoulder at Amy. Amy sighed, and swam toward Beatrice. "We won't talk about either of those two! Please! Why do you hate them so much?" Beatrice turned to face her. "Fine.I'll tell you my history between cats and dogs soon. Let's find some place dry." Amy looked around for the first time, and saw that many animals were entering the pool. They had fallen in here by mistake, and were all going to shore with them. Amy shrugged, and followed Beatrice the Mouse to a dry place.
Here you guys go! Yeah, Aunt Beatrice is the mouse, I don't know why I choose her to be the mouse though... Either way, Enjoy! I'll post some more tomorrow! Adios!
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So what did you guys think about Beatrice being the mousie? Any who, I'll write the next part as promised. They were all a very stange sight for anyone who saw them for sure. As the waddled, crawled, and walked to the dry spot, the water seemed to be soaking into the ground. They had managed to find a dry clearing of dirt somewhere inside the rabbit hole. Everyone followed Beatrice and Amy as they were the first ones to get to 'shore'. Amy observed, as their fur and feathers were all matted against their bodies, and Amy started to twist her hair to get out all of the wetness inside it. The birds flapped their wings, and water landed onto Amy's jeans. She looked up, a bit annoyed, and went back to drying her hair."No fair!" A yellow canary chirped."Look how easy it is for her to get the water off!"Beatrice moved to a rock high enough so everyone could see. "Settle down! Settle down!" Beatrice yelled sternly. All the animals looked up at Beatrice, and waited for her to speak. Amy looked away from her Aunt, and took of her Converse to let them dry. Her socks were soaking wet, so she put them next to her shoes. Amy hadn't noticed that Beatrice was waiting for her to finish, so when Amy turned around, she blushed. Amy never liked being the center of attention.Beatrice cleared her throat. "Very well. We have all of our guests settled down.""Sorry," Amy muttered as Beatrice threw an angry glare her direction when she said 'guests'."Now, make a circle. A large one!" Beatrice instructed. After a few shuffling, moving, and a startled chirp from the yellow canary, they had formed a circle. Beatrice was in the middle, her little whiskers twitching as she snifffed the air."Ahem!" Beatrice said with to get everyones attention. "Everyones ears open? Yes? Very well, I shall telll you a story!""Ummm..." Amy began to say, but got droned out by the cheering of the animals."I was walking through this house, and spotted some chesse," Beatrice begun.The yellow canary nudged Amy on the shoulder. "Here we go again," It said, rolling its eyes. Beatrice turned around, her tail hitting a duckling hard on the face, but Beatrice didn't seem to notice, or care. "Did you say something?" Beatrice asked the Canary."No, I do not," she chirped back.Beatrice turned around, and smacked the duckling again.Amy looked at the canary, trying to see if it resembled anyone she knoew. Perhaps Natalie Kabra, the canary seemed very Natalie Kabraish. As Amy looked harder, she realized it wasn't her.Would'nt the canary be, I dunno, brown? Her conscience thought.It's a weird place her. Don't question, She thought back, but looked at the Canary."Cheyenne Wyoming," Amy gasped. Cheyenne looked at her, and asked, "What?""N-n-nothing," Amy stuttered, backing away from her."And then, I found it!" Beatrice kept on going with her story.Cheyenne looked at Amy and grinned.She raised her wing. "Found what?" Cheyenne asked. "Found it!" Beatrice said angrily. " I know what it is, but that doesn't really help. When I find it, its usually sunflower seed or-""Shush! I am getting to the good part!" Beatrice scolded at Cheyenne. Cheyenne galred at Beatrice, and stayed quiet."Beatrice," Amy begun.Beatrice turned around, but the duckling ducked before the tail could slap him again. "Yes?" Bea asked."I'm still wet. This isn't drying us," Amy spoke. Beatrice looked around, and saw that all the animals were still wet as well."Oh excuse me. Do you have any better suggestions?" She said."I do!" Cheyenne spoke up. "A race! That's what we need! The wind will dry us off for sure!"Everyone nodded in agreement, even Amy. She'd rather run, than sit here shivering to death. Beatrice rolled her eyes. "Very well. Who chooses to run with this bird?"Some started to raise their arms (Wings, or paws, whatever!), but Beatrice hadn't finished. "Or," she continued. "Listen to my fascinating story?"No one said anything at the last comment. Beatrice turned around fast, her tail slapping not only the duckling, but two birds as well."Heartless people!" She said, but sat down under the tree. "I'll sit here and dry, while you guys get dirtier."Amy shrugged, and turned to Cheyenne. Even if she was a Vesper, it was Amy's only choice right now. Plus, she was cold, and the water hadn't vanished fully. If she made it to the other side, what would she do then? She might spend days searching for the garden door.She sighed. "Ok. Cheyenne,, explain the rules."Cheyenne grinned at her. "Follow me!" Yes, I have Vesper 6 in here. (She is Vesper 6, correct?) They have sort of the same characteristics as in the, how do I say it?, real world? In Wonderland, not really. It changes a bit, and such, so don't worry. She wont hurt Amy or any animals during the race.Jacque D.A
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Make more please!!!
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Posted at: 3:56 pm on May 21, 2012
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I love it! When is Dan or Sinead gonna come in? Please write more!
Posted at: 4:34 pm on May 21, 2012
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People, I am sorry I didn't post yesterday. I had to go the park, and we returned at 8. Then, I had to take my Lab out for a walk, and he has a LOT of energy, so I was with him for an hour. Then, it reached 9 PM, so I HAD to take a shower, and go to sleep. Sorry. I posted a bit yesterday on other posts, but not a lot.@ Adorable Kitty~ Of course I will!@ Lavender Dragon~ Do you want me to make Sinead as a Wonderland character? I am still seeing were Dan is going to fit. Should I make him the Cheshire cat? I was thinking of putting Jonah down as that. Maybe Dan the Mad Hatter, I dunno yet. What role should Dan play? Tell me, and I may work it out. Cheyenne flew over to the tree above were Beatrice was sitting, and got some twigs. She did that process for a few minutes, until she had a pile as tall as Amy, and Amy was the tallest there. Beatrice just sat there, glaring at Cheyenne. When Beatrice caught someone's eye, she'd glare at them. Then, mutter under her breath 'My idea was better.' "Set them up in an oval/circle form please," Cheyenne instructed to Amy. Amy didn't know what do do, plus she was really cold, and felt like she was shivering to death. She scooped up some twigs, and went to work. While she did that, other animals helped Cheyenne and Amy. Soon, they were half way dried, running back and forth collecting twigs and setting them up."That's fair enough!" Cheyenne told the animals. They stopped to catch their breath, and walked over to the canary. Cheyenne observed them and nodded, satisfied she was half way done with her task of drying them. Now, she flew over to the middle of the oval, and with her feet, she made a line. "Here," Cheyenne began to explain. "Is where you start, and end. Everyone, get to your positions!" The birds flew over head, settling in random places along the oval. The rest of the animals did the same, and Amy, along with a turtle and a young hare, were at the correct spot. Amy expected Cheyenne to scold at the rest of the animals, but she just nodded, satasfied. She lifted up her wing, and whistled three times in a row, to get everyones attnetion. In the air, her wings hummed with her flapping. "Ready....." Cheyenne chirped. "Set....." Everyone is waiting to take off. "And........GO!" They all bolted, weaving from left to right, avoiding eachother, and kicking up dust. The birds swooped down, and go back up, bragging how much easier it was. The turtle was way behind Amy now, walking slowly and stopping every few seconds. The wind was all in their faces, and each of them were enjoying that. Beatrice just glared at Cheyenne, while she was trying to do referee, but failing once she saw that this hare had already done 5 laps, and that this small pack of mice had done only 3 laps. The birds had done about 7, but all had started at random places, and some just walked out of the oval, layed in shade, and came back in. It didn't work like that, but Cheyenne didn't say anything."Can we stop now?" Someone yelled from the race. Cheyenne nodded, and flew over to the middle, chirped a quick melody, and spoke. "The race has ended!" Amy walked back to the shade, breathless and dried. She glanced at Cheyenne, and grinned at her. "Your much better here than in the real world Vesper 6."Cheyenne tilted her head, "Who? Vesper 6?"Amy just smiled, "Never mind. Forget about it."Cheyenne just shrugged, and waited 'till everyone was seated there. Beatrice inched closer, but stopped when she saw that Cheyenne had taken the spotlight."Great race!" She chirrped."Who won?" some cried from the crowd. Cheyenne hesitated. "Everyone?" "Yes! Everyone!" they cheered."What prize?" They cried.Cheyenne frowned, and flapped her wings nervously. "A, um, a ri-""A story!" Beatrice cried out. A groan was emitted from the crowd."No story! No story!" They chanted, and Amy joined in. Beatrice had little imagination.Beatrice looked hurt, and she stromed off to her tree again. Beatrice scurried up through the branches, and never came back down."Well," Cheyenne said. "She gets offended very easily.""In the real world and here," Amy muttered."The prize?" A cry went on again.Amy looked at Cheyenne, and Cheyenne looked back at her. Ideas please The canary pleaded through her eyes.Amy stepped up nervously. "T-t-the prize i-is that your d-d-dried."All the animals looked at eachother, and nodded in satisfaction. Cheers went on, and they started to leave. "Thanks," Cheyenne told Amy."No problem," Amy replied.There, if Cheyenne seems a bit nice, sorry. This is Wonderland people! XD Any who, should I make Cheyenne like Amy's companion, or someone else? Tell me if I should keep Jonah as the Chesire cat, and Dan as the Mad Hatter. If you disagree, some suggestions. If you want Sinead to be a Wonderland characters, say so. Don't want to disappoint anyone. I'm giving the story a bit of a twist, so it wont be exactly the same OK? Thanks for reading you guys. Jacque D.A
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted at: 8:56 pm on May 22, 2012
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Wow... its only been two days and im dying to read the rest!! CONTINUE QUICKLY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dudes, I am SO sorry! Haven't posted in two days, and that seems like misery for you guys. Look, I had personal errands to attend, then I had to deal with the whole 'End of the School! Yay! Oh no, what about my BFFL's?' thing. You understand, right? Plus, I am recovering from my bunny's death, so don't be mad at me please. I also have to take Snoopy for a walk, and yesterday, he saw his sister. They were playing and it was so adorable! Any who, sorry. One more thing, some of the names here arne't characters, because if I do, I might run out of the 39 clues characters later on in the story. Cheyenne stayed after everyone had left. Amy thought it was for company, since she was feeling very lonely. She just wanted to go home, and rest. Amy felt so lost here. After a few minutes of silence between Amy and Cheyenne, they heard little feet in the distance. Amy stood up, since she had been curled up ready to take a nap, and looked at Cheyenne."Maybe Beatrice came back to tell her story," Amy said, hoping she was wrong. Cheyenne shrugged, and waited to see who it was. They stood, their eyes scanning their surroundings. Amy's face broke into a grin when she saw a familiar white rabbit. "Evan!" Amy whispered. She didn't dare go running to him, he seem to not know her. She was a stranger to him.Cheyenne flew above, maybe a precaution to avoid scaring Evan. As Evan approached, Amy heard him blabbing away again."Oh my whiskers! What will she say? If I am late, I will get myself a good punishment. Now, where did I drop them? Where could they be?" He muttered, stroking his whiskers and looking around desperately.Amy knew in that instant that he was talking about the magic fan and gloves. Amy began looking around,but she couldn't see them. Then again, they could be anywhere now. The water had faded. As Amy searched about, Evan took notice. He frowned, and hopped toward Amy. Halfway there, he yelled across to Amy. "Mary! What are you doing? Stop fooling around and go fetch me my gloves and fan!"Amy looked up, and was taken by suprise, so she ran toward the way Evan was pointing. "Wait, why am I listening to Evan?" She asked herself, but kept on running toward Evan's house. She stopped as she caught her breath, and looked up toward the house. It was painted white, and had a few flower pots around it."Well Evan is rather a plain boy," Amy muttered. "Then again, he is a white rabbit."Amy reached toward the door knob, and opened the door. She stepped inside, ready to begin her search. She had nothing better to do anyways.
Sorry it's short. I need to brainstorm further.I need to figure out the rest of the characters, and I do not want to screw it up. I'll post a longer one tomorrow.
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P.S To all my devoted readers, thank you! it means a lot to me :)
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Posted at: 6:58 pm on May 25, 2012
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Its OK!!! I love the end of school too! IM SO SORRY FOR YOUR AND YOUR BUNNY! I know it must be really hard to lose your bunny!!! Its ok! Dont go rushing yourself just for us!!! I love your story and keep on going! But remember: Dont rush yourself with your bunnys death and your pets and all that JUST for us!! Keep up the good work! ♥♥♥SunKitty
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Posted at: 6:31 pm on May 26, 2012
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@AdorableKitty~Thank you ,like,bunches! Ok, I'll start now. She crept inside, and closed the door after herself. Now, her mission was to find the gloves and fan, but where to start? She began looking in the kitchen, when she didn't find them, she moved on to the living room. No luck there either. She moved toward a tidy little room. It had a bunny sized bed, drawer, and table. On it were four pair of gloves, and two fans. "I'll just take one of each, thank you very much." Amy said, gripping onto the small white gloves, and the fan. She was about the step out of the room, when something caught her eye. She turned around slowly, and saw it was a small bottle. She walked over to it, and eyed it warily. There was no 'Drink me' note on it. Amy looked at it, maybe it could make her return to normal size. Then she could just leave and go home to her normal life. She uncorked it, and brought it up to her lips. Slowly, she drank it, and waited for its magic to get working. No sooner that she had finsihed it, that it was making her grow. She smiled with joy, and walked toward the door. Her smile faded. "Oh no. I think I drunk to much..." Amy said, trying to get out of the door.Oh, but her growth didn't stop there. She kept on growing and growing until she found that she had to bend her neck down in order for it not to get broken. "Please stop," Amy muttered.Now, she needed to kneel, still bending her neck down, but she kept on growing. It didn't stop. Now, she started to panic greatly. She tried to lay down, and curl one hand behind her head, and then her elbow supporting her up. For a minute or two, it seemed to work perfectly, but it didn't last. Soon, her hand had to curl out through the window. She stuck one of her foot into the chimmeny. "I can't do anymore. Whatever happens, well, I guess it'll be darn to happen." Amy said, as she layed there. To her luck, the drink had now unleashed all of it power, and she had stopped growing, but she was still uncomftorable. There seemed to be no way out of this house, and Amy just layed there, thinking of a plan. "I should'nt have followed Evan the bunny. I mean, he was a rabbit! I should've known things would be bad, right?" Amy began asking herself. She was starting to regret all of this.She kept ranting on jibberish, until she heard a voice outside. Amy became quiet, and heard a familiar muttering of rubbish."Mary! Mary! Where are my gloves and fan? You should've brought them to me a long time ago!" Evan yelled. Amy layed there, a bit frightened, forgetting that she was about 7 feet taller than Evan. From the outside, Evan's eyes widened in fear. His house seemed to be in the middle oof an earthquake. It was shaking horribly. Evan walked to his door. Shakingly, he tugged at the door knob. It was shut, and wouldn't open,since it opened to the inside, and Amy was blocking that. "What the?" Evan asked, still pushing hard on the door. "Open...already!"Evan pushed the door inward one more time, but failed."Fine! Just fine! I'll go around and in through the window!" He said angrily, and hopped away. Amy had been hearing all of that, and shook her head, or at least tried too."Good luck with that," She said. There, I dunno if i'll be able to post tomorrow. i have a dentist appointment. Agh. Jacque D.A
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Posted at: 12:49 am on May 29, 2012
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Yay! and your welcome! I hate the dentist... just dont let the stuff get on your tounge and youre fine! I ♥ this story!!!
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Posted at: 3:34 pm on May 29, 2012
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Really great story! Keep it up!
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Posted at: 5:06 pm on May 29, 2012
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Wow this is soo awesome!! write more!!! :D rly good idea I love Alice in Wonderland!
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p.s. rly sorry about your bunny Ik how you feel I used to have 2 myself...
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Posted at: 6:03 pm on May 29, 2012
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great story!!!
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Posted at: 8:10 pm on May 29, 2012
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Is Isabel Kabra going to be the Red Queen???
A dream is a wish your heart makes,
When you're fast asleep.
In dreams you lose your heartaches,
Whatever you wish for, you keep.
Posted at: 10:50 pm on May 29, 2012
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THAT WOULD BE AN AWESOME IDEA!
But of course it`s her (To poster: are you a her?) choice!
Oh and to poster: Do you remember about the dress and teacup/teapot idea? JUst a reminder! KEEP UP THE AMAAAZZZING WORK!!!!!
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Posted at: 1:22 pm on May 30, 2012
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MMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
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OK, so my dentist appointment wasn't bad. I got a cavity and they took longer to prepare the stuff than to refill it -_- After that, I got sick. I was already sick a bit, but when I got home, I was sick for sure. I think it's gone, but I do have a headache. I didn't post because, i was tired recovering from a sleepover (My god, I only slept like 3 hours and almost froze to death!) and when I'm tired, I don't write as good. My friends could totally notice when I was emailing them XD @Actress Black ~ Yup. She is. @ Adorable Kitten~ Yes, I remember. I have an idea when I'll do that.... Yup, I'm a her. Just call me Jacque please. OK, on to the story. (Crowd: Yay! JK)Evan hopped toward the window, and started to open it. Finally, it was opened at the fullest, and he was about to go in, when he saw a hand reach out from inside. It was a huge hand, not a normal one. He fell down, and landed on the pots of flowers, shattering them, with a shriek. "Atticus!" Evan screamed. "What?" Came Atticus' annoyed voice. "Help...me....get...out..of this mess!"Evan choked out with anger. Amy heard glass shattering, and a few 'Ows.' and 'Sorries'"About time!" Evan muttered. "Atticus, what was that?" "Looks like an arm," Atticus said plainly. "I know that!" Evan said."then why'd you ask?""You know what, forget it. Just try to think of a way inside."After that, there was some silence, and Amy heard a few whispers."Of course I don't approve of it. What? Me!" Atticus whispered. "Yes you! Come on, don't be a coward!" Evan whispered back. "Why me!" Moaned Atticus, making his way across to the back of the house. Amy waited to see where he was going to come from, but wasn't sure. She heard another window open, and she was ready with her hand. Again, she only caught some wind in her hand, and Atticus fell onto the pots. Not only did Atticus shriek a bit, so did Evan. After that, Amy heard some voices walking toward the house, with some arguing. "Where're the ladders?" She heard Evan's voice ask. "I don't have them!" Atticus said. "Jake does!""And where is Jake?" "Somewhere behind us," Atticus said. "Jake hurry up!" Evan yelled. "My god, coming! No need to get all mad! You try carrying the ladders." Jake yelled back. Finally, there was some shuffling somewhere around the chimney."Jake tie them together! Atticus, help him!" Evan muttered.Jake and Atticus began to tie the ladders together. "Pass me the rope!" Amy heard someone say. "No! That loose slate is coming down!""Just toss it!""Ok." There was a pause, then a loud shriek from Evan."Told you!" "No you didnt! Put the ladder up!""Who's going down the chimney?""You! No, not me! Your crazy!""FIne, but I'm not going in.""Jake will!" said two voices in usion. Evan and Atticus, Amy guessed."Jake your going in!" Atticus said."Always me!" Jake grumbled. "Be quiet, and take away the arm!" Evan said. Jake began to climb the ladder, and Amy began to panic. What would they do to her?
There. I'll try to post some tomorrow. See ya.Jacque D.A
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Posted at: 6:18 pm on May 30, 2012
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Ok Jacque! ♥♥♥♥♥LOVE♥♥♥♥♥ THIS STORY!!!! Im goig to add it to my signature... as soon as the moderators approve of my old one -_-. Ive been waiting for A WHOLE WEEK FOR
THAT SIG!! AND IT WAS ONLY ONE SENTENCE!!!! Keep up the good work!
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Posted at: 11:46 am on May 31, 2012
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MORE!!!!
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Bump!
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@Lionship1~ OK, I will.@AdorableKitty51~ Thanks a lot! I'd really appreciate it. :P Amy heard scampering inside the chimney. She braced herself, then tried to move around. Her foot was stuck in the chimney."Really?" She asked, annoyed. She tugged at her foot, and it wouldn't come loose. Amy struggled against the resistance. Finally, she kicked up her foot, and hoped that her foot would come unstuck. Instead, she heard a quick yelp of surprise from Jake, and gasps from Atticus and Evan. "There goes Jake!" Atticus said. "Catch him you carrot brain! Don't just stand there!" Evan yelled at Atticus. Amy giggled a bit when Evan said 'carrot brain.' It was an odd word. "Yes! You got him?" Evan asked. "Yup," Atticus said back. "No don't choke him! [Chill mods, nothing to worry about.]Remove your hand from his next! Oh look at him now! He's all purple! I said catch him, not choke him!" Evan said. Atticus looked down at Jake. "Sorry Bro. I thought I was holding you by the hand or leg."Jake just loooked at Atticus speechless, and everyone waited 'till he recovered. Finally, Jake seemed a whole lot better, and Evan couldn't hold back the question anymore. "What was it?" He asked. "Well," Jake began. "Not real sure. I could'nt really catch a good glimpse. I mean-" "You went down there, and didn't catch a glimpse?" Evan asked. "Well, don't blame me! I got launched up in the sky like a rocket ready for take off! Whatever is in there, I don't want to go back in there. Count me out." Jake shot back. Evan looked at Atticus, who was already backing away. "Oh, no! Not me dude! You! You haven't taken any chances.""True!" Jake joined in. "Never mind." Evan muttered, annoyed. "Oh! I have an idea."Jake and Atticus shot him an accusing look. "No it does not involve any of you going inside," Evan grumbled. "Fine, we'll listen." Jake grumbled back.There were whispers, and Amy couldn't make them out. "About what a barrel could carry," Evan said."What?" Amy whispered, confused. "Kill the bird zombies," Atticus joked around. "I don't think that's a bird," Jake muttered."Joking. OK, keep your aim locked, and fire!" Atticus instructed. Amy suddenly felt something hit her knee. "Ow!" She yelped, which was unnecesary, since it didn't hurt. "It's alive!" Evan said, scared. "Duh it's alive! It almost captured you and me," Atticus said, throwing another cupcake. Amy cowered behind her arms. Her jeans were covered in frosting now. Finally, she noticed they were just cupcakes. Hurriedly, she grasped one in midair,and stuffed it in her mouth. Hope it helps me. Amy thought, chewing on the chocolate flavored cupcake. it was, of course. Soon, she was small enough to fit through the the door. She ran outside, and was greeted by a crowd. Jake, Atticus, and Evan were among them. Amy saw Cheyenne in there too, and Beatrice. Had they all been watching? She blushed, and ran as fast as she could away from the crowd. As fast as her feet could carry. She was just sick of all of this growing and shrinking nonsense. Ok, so there. I got one thing to say. All my fellow demigods, Rick Riordan had released the first chapter of the Mark of Athena on his Disney website [Mods, this isn't the link, just stating that it's a Disney website of him. That's all. No link in here, do you see one? Nothing bad here.Just saying Disney.]. It's short, but it's part of the book. I already read it, and it's funny. I think they are going to release the cover this friday, I am not sure. That's all I have for now. Bye!Jacque D.A
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Posted at: 8:04 pm on May 31, 2012
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♥♥♥ I cant get enough! This story is AWESOME!!! ♥♥♥
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After running for what seemed forever, Amy found herself safe in the arms of a sea green forest. She passed by a few tall tress, brushing her hand against the trunk."Now what am I supposed to do? I'm probably lost," She muttered, picking up an old branch. She looked around, and it was true. She was surrounded by trees the size of skyscrapers, and bushes and patches of flowers and fruit. Soft green grass, that reminded her of a beautiful garden. A garden...."The garden!" Amy cried, remembering the beautiful art work engraved in her mind. "I have to find it. That's my main goal right now."She looked down, she was covered in colored frosting and sprinkles. She tried dusting them off, but they just smeared, and know her cloths looked like smears of a rainbow frosting.I need to change cloths. Amy thought, wandering deeper into the heart of the forest. First off though, where's the garden at? Her annoying conscience thought. Now idea. I'll find it somehow though.
As she fought with her conscience, she noticed a sharp yelp. Slowly, she looked up, and found a pair of large deep brown eyes looking down at her. Finally, her mind registered the whole scene, and she scrambled behind a tree trunk. The creature barked, and stretched it paw scratching on the grass. It was trying to touch her. "D-d-don't e-eat me," Amy stuttered.The dog just looked at her, and wagged his tail. Amy came out again, with a branch. She showed it to the dog. Amy gulped, and tried very hard not to stutter. "See the stick?" she waved it infront of the dog's eyes. "Go fetch!"The stick flew somehwhat of a great distance, and Amy saw this was her chance of escape. She sprinted off to the right, and ran 'till she was out of breath, and about to collapse. She leaned against a a bluebell, and grapped a small leaf, and started fanning herself. "I need to grow. It's hard to be small wandering through a forest," Amy said. "Big question is, what will do the right magic?"Amy looked around to find flowers and blades of grass, but none of that looked like they would do the trick. She spotted a mushroom about as tall as her. Maybe that'll do, she thought.She walked toward it, and examined it. Nothing behind it, nothing at it's side. She couldn't see the top, so she got up on her tippitoes, and got greeded by another pair of eyes.
I think we are about half way throught the story. When I finish this, any suggestions of what I should write next?
Jacque D.A
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Posted at: 4:07 pm on June 2, 2012
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OMG! Im sorry im getting impatient! SORRY!! So can you please hurry up! SORRY! Im getting really impatient today for some reason. So sometimes its best not to listen to me.
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Posted at: 5:36 pm on June 2, 2012
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Jacque..... MORE PLEASE!!
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Posted at: 9:54 am on June 3, 2012
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