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Cahills: shipwrecked
Hello everyone who is reading this. I wanted to write a story, and I came up with this idea. It is only my second story, so please give me pointers, but be nice! :) hope you enjoy CAHILLS: SHIPWRECKED!!!
Amys pov
Amy awoke with the worst headache of her life. It felt as if someone was hitting her head with a hammer. This, by far, had to be the worst moment of her life, and that's a lot to say considering Amys awful life.
Well, not awful, Just hard. Amy had adventures, seen the world, been on top of mount Everest, and had succeeded in the greatest prize ever known to any Cahill that has ever lived: the 39 clues.
Amy had thought that her adventures would be over by then, but it turned out there was another family. The vespers.
Long- story short, they kidnapped seven of their closest friends and family, and made them steal priceless artifacts.
They had eventually defeated the vespers and got all of their family back, safe and sound, untill now. Amy still didn't know where she was. Her eyes were still closed, and she knew it would take all of her energy just to open them. But, Amy couldnt stay lieing there for hours, she had to open them. On the count of three, Amy thought,
One............two.............three!!!!!!!
Amys eyes opened slowly, and she found herself staring at something blue. Blue. Blue is the color of the ocean. The ocean has boats. I was on a boat.
Amy suddenly remembered everything that had happened. They were celebrating the defeat of the vespers, by going on one of jonahs yachts. They would go on a one week cruise. On day two, the storms hit. There were huge waves, lightning, and monstrous hail.
Amy tried to remember who was on the boat. The seven hostages, Nellie, fiske, Natalie, Reagan, Phoenix, alister, and Ted, Ian, Evan, sinead, and Dan!!
Dan!!!! That gave Amy enough energy to sit up. She was now looking at an island. She was on a beach, with palm-trees and she had been looking at the clear blue sky. But, she was alone.
Amy saw the ruined boat realizing how badly it was damaged. About how even an ekat couldn't fix it. Not even Katherine herself could fix it!!!
That's when she heard someone yell "Amy!!!!"
Please tell me if I should continue. I'm going to write a pov for all the people who were on board!!! Please be easy on me and I hope you like my story!!!
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Posted at: 11:10 pm on May 5, 2012
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Hey guys!!! Please post!!! I need the feedback!!!
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CONTINUE!!!
There is power in unity
Smile is the beginning of PEACE.
One person is of more value than the whole world
-Lhanaya Faith Cahill
(Please call me Lhany)
Posted at: 3:32 am on May 7, 2012
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awesome! please continue!
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
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Ok, so yeahhhhhhhhh!!!! You guys liked it!! Hooray! So, this is dans pov waking up from the shipwreck!!! Hope you all enjoy.
Dans pov
Dan thought he was dead. He was the only one who didn't pass out when they crashed. He saw the whole thing. Amy running to get him, but her never getting there. Seeing the blood drip down nellies forehead as she got hit in the head with the anchor. The cry of horror on sineads face when she saw Ted pass out!
The scene would traumatize him for months, maybe even years. After he saw everyone lying in the ground blood-soaked, he felt a large thump on his head. Then everything went black. So, he thought he mus be dead!! Was there any other possible explanation??
Yes, that he was alive. And he was! Dan knew that, but he didn't want to live. He knew that the others were dead. And he knew, it would take a lot to kill him. Because he took the serum!
There was no other way he could defeat the vespers, it was just the serum! Amy didn't know he had taken it. He thought he should have told her, now that she was dead. 'I could just sit here' Dan thought, 'sit here and starve myself'
But, he knew he couldn't. Not after fighting to survive. Dan wanted to live. He didn't want to die at age 13. So he opened his eyes. He was still inside the ship. Well if you would call it a ship.
He was in the middle of the shaddered ruble. He knew not even sinead could fix it. If sinead lived. If anyone of them had lived.
It was a terrifying thought. To know that you could be alone on this island. Left to rot slowly by your dead sister and cousins........
Dan let the thought drift. Knowing that he wouldn't want o finish the disturbing thought. Dan decided to stand, but not walk or say anything. If he walked, he would fall, if he fell he would land on glass, if he landed on the glass he would damage his leg. If he damaged his leg he wouldn't be able to walk. If he couldn't walk, he would die.
Dan couldn't die. So, he stood. Right foot, left foot, Dan thought. Once he stood up he could see Amy. She was lying with her eyes closed and Dan could tell, she was probably dead.
Her face was covered in blood. Worse then when they were in the Bahamas. But, then a miracle happened. Her eyes opened!!!!! It was abrupt and jerking and she was staring and the sky. Dan could she her grab at the sand.
"Amy" Dan called.
Dans pov
Dan thought he was dead. He was the only one who didn't pass out when they crashed. He saw the whole thing. Amy running to get him, but her never getting there. Seeing the blood drip down nellies forehead as she got hit in the head with the anchor. The cry of horror on sineads face when she saw Ted pass out!
The scene would traumatize him for months, maybe even years. After he saw everyone lying in the ground blood-soaked, he felt a large thump on his head. Then everything went black. So, he thought he mus be dead!! Was there any other possible explanation??
Yes, that he was alive. And he was! Dan knew that, but he didn't want to live. He knew that the others were dead. And he knew, it would take a lot to kill him. Because he took the serum!
There was no other way he could defeat the vespers, it was just the serum! Amy didn't know he had taken it. He thought he should have told her, now that she was dead. 'I could just sit here' Dan thought, 'sit here and starve myself'
But, he knew he couldn't. Not after fighting to survive. Dan wanted to live. He didn't want to die at age 13. So he opened his eyes. He was still inside the ship. Well if you would call it a ship.
He was in the middle of the shaddered ruble. He knew not even sinead could fix it. If sinead lived. If anyone of them had lived.
It was a terrifying thought. To know that you could be alone on this island. Left to rot slowly by your dead sister and cousins........
Dan let the thought drift. Knowing that he wouldn't want o finish the disturbing thought. Dan decided to stand, but not walk or say anything. If he walked, he would fall, if he fell he would land on glass, if he landed on the glass he would damage his leg. If he damaged his leg he wouldn't be able to walk. If he couldn't walk, he would die.
Dan couldn't die. So, he stood. Right foot, left foot, Dan thought. Once he stood up he could see Amy. She was lying with her eyes closed and Dan could tell, she was probably dead.
Her face was covered in blood. Worse then when they were in the Bahamas. But, then a miracle happened. Her eyes opened!!!!! It was abrupt and jerking and she was staring and the sky. Dan could she her grab at the sand.
"Amy" Dan called.
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Please someone reply!!!!!!!!!!!! I need feedback to become a better writer, and I would really like to hear if people like or don't like my idea!!!!!
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No ones posting!!!
Anyway, I will continue to right, although no ones gonna look at it!!! Please read.
Reagons pov
Reagons motto was always, no pain no gain. But even she had to admit, this was waaaaayyyyyy too much pain!! Like, it was worse than when the weight had been thrown on her head. Of course, she wasn't going to lay around like a weenie.
She opened her eyes and got up. She looked around. The only other person she saw was Ian. Ugh..... He was such a stuck up snob, and the worst part is Reagon knew she could beat him up. One day he would push her too far, and she would have to punch him in the stomache. Nothing big, just knock him out for a week.
Although Reagon wanted to lay back down, she knew you don't get into the olympics by laying down, you don't climb mount Everest by sitting!!!! You got to get up and grip through the pain. Reagon decided, why not share the pain with Ian. She thought that that was a good idea.
She went over and kicked Ian in the leg. Nothing. She kicked him in the head. Nothing. She punched him in the stomache. He awoke.
He gasped and the first words out of his mouth were, "ow.......my sweater it's ruined!!!!"
"wow, you're soooooo manly" Reagon smirked.
"I don't need any of your sass Reagon dolt" Ian snapped.
Reagon just stuck her tongue out at him. Ian stayed laying, looking at the sky.
"Well" Reagon sayed
"well..... What?" Ian asked.
"aren't you gonna get up so we can find the others," Reagon asked as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, WHICH IT WAS!!!!!!
"hahahah you can" Ian said "I'm staying here"
"wow, is that a snake?" Reagon pointed just beyond where Ian was laying. Ian jumped up screaming,
"where!!!!!! Where is the snake get it off me, get it OFF ME!!!!!!!!!"
Reagon was laughing so hard she almost couldn't hear someone scream, "Amy"
Almost.
Please someone read this!!!! No one is!!!!!
- Melissa
Anyway, I will continue to right, although no ones gonna look at it!!! Please read. Reagons pov
Reagons motto was always, no pain no gain. But even she had to admit, this was waaaaayyyyyy too much pain!! Like, it was worse than when the weight had been thrown on her head. Of course, she wasn't going to lay around like a weenie.
She opened her eyes and got up. She looked around. The only other person she saw was Ian. Ugh..... He was such a stuck up snob, and the worst part is Reagon knew she could beat him up. One day he would push her too far, and she would have to punch him in the stomache. Nothing big, just knock him out for a week.
Although Reagon wanted to lay back down, she knew you don't get into the olympics by laying down, you don't climb mount Everest by sitting!!!! You got to get up and grip through the pain. Reagon decided, why not share the pain with Ian. She thought that that was a good idea.
She went over and kicked Ian in the leg. Nothing. She kicked him in the head. Nothing. She punched him in the stomache. He awoke.
He gasped and the first words out of his mouth were, "ow.......my sweater it's ruined!!!!"
"wow, you're soooooo manly" Reagon smirked.
"I don't need any of your sass Reagon dolt" Ian snapped.
Reagon just stuck her tongue out at him. Ian stayed laying, looking at the sky.
"Well" Reagon sayed
"well..... What?" Ian asked.
"aren't you gonna get up so we can find the others," Reagon asked as if it were the most obvious thing in the world, WHICH IT WAS!!!!!!
"hahahah you can" Ian said "I'm staying here"
"wow, is that a snake?" Reagon pointed just beyond where Ian was laying. Ian jumped up screaming,
"where!!!!!! Where is the snake get it off me, get it OFF ME!!!!!!!!!"
Reagon was laughing so hard she almost couldn't hear someone scream, "Amy"
Almost.
Please someone read this!!!! No one is!!!!!
- Melissa
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Hey!!!, I love it!!! CONTINUE!!!! I love it. It's nice that you still have the mystery of Dan and the serum in it!!! CONTINUE, and let me say it again, CONTINUE, let this motivate you to write another part, CONTINUE!!!
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I'm still reading it! Continue!
There is power in unity
Smile is the beginning of PEACE.
One person is of more value than the whole world
-Lhanaya Faith Cahill
(Please call me Lhany)
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Omg!!!!! Someone is actually reading this!!!! I'll write more later!!! Have to do stooping homework!!!!!! Anyway thank 4 the feedback. Need 2 hurry sry 4 the txt language. Must hurry!!!!
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It is soooo beautiful! Please check my siggy adn keep writing!
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Omg!!! This is on the first page!!! Mwahahahaha!!!
Heehee. Anyway, homework is done and I can post!!! So here it is:
Nellies pov
Nellie woke up to the murmuring of a voice. It was a voice she had heard before..... But she couldn't pinpoint who it was exactly. Her ears hurt to bad. Actually her head hurt so much the quiet murmuring gave her the biggest headache she ever had. And it took a lot to give Nellie a headache considering the volume she set her music. But the ringing in her head was louder than any other song she ever heard.
The voice was murmuring, "she's dead. Shes dead. She's dead. She's dead"
The voice just kept repeating those words over and over. It was kind of creepy in a way. Nellie thought, I can't just sit here. I have to get up.
Nellie, reluctantly, opened her eyes. Next to her was Natalie. She was curled up into a small ball staring at a rock. She was still murmuring, "she's dead, she's dead"
"Natalie" Nellie groaned.
Natalie just looked at Nellie. She stared at her. As if nellie hadn't mattered. She looked as if she could kill her.
"I'm not dead Natalie. I'm fine"
Natalie murmured something that Nellie couldn't hear. But Nellie realized the rock Natalie was staring at looked, just a little bit,like her mom. Isabel. Isabel had been vesper one. The one who had kidnapped Natalie and shot her on the foot. Nellie knew being confined in a small place with 6 other people had been hardest on Natalie. So, It didn't help much to find out that her mom was the one who had kidnapped them.
But, then Arthur came in and tried to stop Isabel. But, died trying. Dan, out of anger, killed Isabel. Nellie felt bad for the kiddo. After seeing his dead father, he killed vesper one. And Nellie knew Dan couldn't stand being a murderer. Even if it was the most evil person on earth.
Natalie stared at Nellie again and whispered, "it's sinead. She died"
Nellie couldn't answer. But Natalie wasn't done.
"i got up to find the others and sinead had died. I checked her pulse. There was nothing. She wasn't breathing." by now natalie was screaming. "she helped us get out of that box, and now she is dead. We will all die soon. Ian, Amy, you, me. EVERYONE OF US WILL DIE!!!!" Natalie was beginning I have a nervous breakdown.
"Natalie-" Nellie started
"no!!!!! Shut up!!!!! I don't want to hear what you have to say!!!!!! Someone has died!!!!! And the others are probably all dead as well!!!!!"
No one said anything after that. Not until, they heard someone call, "Amy"
And they followed the voice.
Hope you like!!!! Sorry for making Natalie a kind of weirdo!!!!! Didn't mean to, but...... I don't know! Oh, and sorry for killing sinead. Wow I should stop saying I'm sorry. Hope you like!!!!!
- Melissa, who's glad people are actually reading this. Not a lot, but people are reading it!!!!
Heehee. Anyway, homework is done and I can post!!! So here it is:Nellies pov
Nellie woke up to the murmuring of a voice. It was a voice she had heard before..... But she couldn't pinpoint who it was exactly. Her ears hurt to bad. Actually her head hurt so much the quiet murmuring gave her the biggest headache she ever had. And it took a lot to give Nellie a headache considering the volume she set her music. But the ringing in her head was louder than any other song she ever heard.
The voice was murmuring, "she's dead. Shes dead. She's dead. She's dead"
The voice just kept repeating those words over and over. It was kind of creepy in a way. Nellie thought, I can't just sit here. I have to get up.
Nellie, reluctantly, opened her eyes. Next to her was Natalie. She was curled up into a small ball staring at a rock. She was still murmuring, "she's dead, she's dead"
"Natalie" Nellie groaned.
Natalie just looked at Nellie. She stared at her. As if nellie hadn't mattered. She looked as if she could kill her.
"I'm not dead Natalie. I'm fine"
Natalie murmured something that Nellie couldn't hear. But Nellie realized the rock Natalie was staring at looked, just a little bit,like her mom. Isabel. Isabel had been vesper one. The one who had kidnapped Natalie and shot her on the foot. Nellie knew being confined in a small place with 6 other people had been hardest on Natalie. So, It didn't help much to find out that her mom was the one who had kidnapped them.
But, then Arthur came in and tried to stop Isabel. But, died trying. Dan, out of anger, killed Isabel. Nellie felt bad for the kiddo. After seeing his dead father, he killed vesper one. And Nellie knew Dan couldn't stand being a murderer. Even if it was the most evil person on earth.
Natalie stared at Nellie again and whispered, "it's sinead. She died"
Nellie couldn't answer. But Natalie wasn't done.
"i got up to find the others and sinead had died. I checked her pulse. There was nothing. She wasn't breathing." by now natalie was screaming. "she helped us get out of that box, and now she is dead. We will all die soon. Ian, Amy, you, me. EVERYONE OF US WILL DIE!!!!" Natalie was beginning I have a nervous breakdown.
"Natalie-" Nellie started
"no!!!!! Shut up!!!!! I don't want to hear what you have to say!!!!!! Someone has died!!!!! And the others are probably all dead as well!!!!!"
No one said anything after that. Not until, they heard someone call, "Amy"
And they followed the voice.
Hope you like!!!! Sorry for making Natalie a kind of weirdo!!!!! Didn't mean to, but...... I don't know! Oh, and sorry for killing sinead. Wow I should stop saying I'm sorry. Hope you like!!!!!
- Melissa, who's glad people are actually reading this. Not a lot, but people are reading it!!!!
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I'm reading your awesome story! Keep going! :) :D
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Awesome!!! This is AMAZINGLY EPIC.
In the light of the virgin morning
In the shade of the chestnut tree
If I leave this unhappy bliss
Where will my Eden be?
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Cool! :) keep goin'!
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Ugh!!! I'm such a clutz!!! Well CONTINUE!!! Pwetty, pwease?
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This story is amazing! I bet a bunch of other people are reading, just not posting. Keep on going! You're doing great! I feel like I'm known here by me posting on fanfics that they are awesome and junk. Hmmm. Oh well. Keep going! Will there be any romance? I'll keep readong even if there wasn't any, but I'm just asking. I have a specialty for Amians. Just saying.
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Omg!!!!!!!! This isn't one of those posts that die!!!!! Anyway, no. There will be no romance because I'm Evamy and I there are a ton of Amians. I just don't want people to not like it just cause I don't like Ian. So, no. But, I will continue because of the beautiful people out there reading this!!!!! Oh, and please do not judge the story just because I'm Evamy. Please judge on how good or bad it is. Hopefully good.
Evans pov
Evan had never known that he could be in so much pain. He had never really been in any real serious pain before. He just stayed behind the computer. He had never been in a real life threatening situation, until now!
Then he came to his senses. Amy, he thought. What happened to Amy? He would never forgive himself if something bad happened to her. He loved her.
Amy was all the persuasion Evan needed to get up. He blocked out everything on his mind. The only thing he needed to think about was Amy. Her hair, her smile, the way her eyes light up as she solves a puzzle or sees his face.
As soon as Evan got up, he saw a sight that would torture him. Haunt his nightmares for all eternity. It was the grossest, most gruesome thing he had ever seen in his 16 years of life.
Pheonix was lieing on the ground, soaked in blood. And a foot away from his body, lied his hand. Evan could see the bone poking through the bloody flesh. Evan couldn't help it. By now he was puking.
Evan couldn't look at Phoenix, he couldn't. Then he heard a noise. He looked up and saw Ted. He had a small gash on his forehead, but he looked way better off then Phoenix. Phoenix looked terrible.
"who's there?" Ted asked, holding out his arms. He was obviously disoriented.
"Ted, it's Evan. Are you alright?"
"I'm fine. Where are the others" he asked.
"I don't know," Evan said.
All of a sudden, Evan heard a groan. It made him jump. It had come from Phoenix. He was groaning, and making the worst sound Evan had ever heard. But, sound meant breath. Breath meant life. Pheonix was alive.
"Ted, listen. Me and you have to carry Phoenix to the others. He has lost an arm and is very weak" Evan said.
"okay." Ted said. They were starting to pick up Phoenix when they heard someone call, "Amy"
And they carried Pheonix towards safety.
Well, hope you all like!!!!!! Sorry if it's kind of gross!!!!
- Melissa
Evans pov
Evan had never known that he could be in so much pain. He had never really been in any real serious pain before. He just stayed behind the computer. He had never been in a real life threatening situation, until now!
Then he came to his senses. Amy, he thought. What happened to Amy? He would never forgive himself if something bad happened to her. He loved her.
Amy was all the persuasion Evan needed to get up. He blocked out everything on his mind. The only thing he needed to think about was Amy. Her hair, her smile, the way her eyes light up as she solves a puzzle or sees his face.
As soon as Evan got up, he saw a sight that would torture him. Haunt his nightmares for all eternity. It was the grossest, most gruesome thing he had ever seen in his 16 years of life.
Pheonix was lieing on the ground, soaked in blood. And a foot away from his body, lied his hand. Evan could see the bone poking through the bloody flesh. Evan couldn't help it. By now he was puking.
Evan couldn't look at Phoenix, he couldn't. Then he heard a noise. He looked up and saw Ted. He had a small gash on his forehead, but he looked way better off then Phoenix. Phoenix looked terrible.
"who's there?" Ted asked, holding out his arms. He was obviously disoriented.
"Ted, it's Evan. Are you alright?"
"I'm fine. Where are the others" he asked.
"I don't know," Evan said.
All of a sudden, Evan heard a groan. It made him jump. It had come from Phoenix. He was groaning, and making the worst sound Evan had ever heard. But, sound meant breath. Breath meant life. Pheonix was alive.
"Ted, listen. Me and you have to carry Phoenix to the others. He has lost an arm and is very weak" Evan said.
"okay." Ted said. They were starting to pick up Phoenix when they heard someone call, "Amy"
And they carried Pheonix towards safety.
Well, hope you all like!!!!!! Sorry if it's kind of gross!!!!
- Melissa
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Continue!!!!!!!!!
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IT IS AMAZING!!!! Thanks for the great story Melissa!!! BTW, YOUR ON THE FIRST PAGE!!!!!
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Great story! Continue!
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WINNING!
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OMG, WHY????? I was looking *sniff* forward to that!!!! And Evans in this too? I'm sorry but, I just blew a fuse.
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Use more varied language. Otherwise it is great!!!!!!!
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Continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I had a story, but then I accidentally pressed cancel. AGRGRGRGGGHHGHGH!!!!!!!
So, I will have redo the whole thing. Grrrrrrre....... And This is on the first page. Come on Melissa don't hyperventilate. Anyway, I'm happy about that!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, I totally forgot to add Jonah and Hamilton in the list of people on the boat, so from now on, Jonah and Hamilton are in it!!!!
Jonah's pov
Jonah woke up thinking, this is not cool, yo. This hurt worse than the time he didn't run hard enough from his fans. They tore his gangsta clothes and stole his gangsta blang. The sight was not pretty.
But, this hurt worse. Like 100 times worse. he felt he was dead. But, he knew he wasn't dead. The pain made it notable that he was alive. Maybe he was on the verge of death. Or maybe he just couldn't die. He had Gone through many things that would have probably killed many people.
And yet, here he was. Alive and in pain. He thought, why not just lay here. I mean, why do I have to get up. It could end here, until someone found me. Rest. Lie down for a little while. And, when he found the energy, open his eyes and look at the stars. It was a fantasy every Cahill knew would not come true. Yet, he was given the option. To lie there. Not care what happened to the rest of the world. Lie there, and enjoy the rest and the peace.
Peace. John thought. He hasn't had any peace since he was 5. And even then his mom was training him in paint, sculpting, drawing, charcoal, musical instruments, and singing. His mom. Jonahs mom, Cora wizard, had been vesper 2. She had been helping the vespers ever since she disowned him. She had been working with Isabel. Giving the vespers inside information about his weak spots.
Jonah let his mom seep out of his thoughts, she was behind bars now. Locked up. She can't hurt me any more. But, Jonah knew, she would find a way. One way or another she would find a way to torture him. Even if she had died, she would haunt him from he grave. Don't think about mom, Jonah thought.
What to do next. What's next? He thought again about staying there. But then his thoughts went to another scene. Jonah being abanded in a cave. Screaming for help. No one hearing you. Knowing your life is in the hands of people who would stab you in the back as soon as you got the chance. He remembered thinking about how maybe, if he had been a better person, they would come back for him. They would have helped them. If he hadn't been such a jerk. And knowing you couldn't get up. Jonah didnt want to go back to that. The helplessness. The loneliness.
Jonah decided to get up. If the others were dead, he could lay there. He opened his right eye. Sky. He opened his left eye. More sky. He started to sit up, Jonah let out a gasp of pain. It hurt so bad. Next to him was Hamilton. But, he was acting strange. He was staring at the sand with awe and wonder. As if he had never seen sand before. His eyes were distant.
"Hamilton" Jonah said.
"who" Hamilton said. He had a confused look on his face. As if he had never heard his first name before.
"Hamilton are you okay?" Jonah asked
"I don't know who Hamilton is, but who are you?" Hamilton asked.
"Jonah"
"and who am I"
Jonah didn't have time to gasp, because right when he was about to, he heard someone call,
"amy"
Well, hope you all like!!!!! Again soooo cooollll!!! I'm on the first page. Hopefully it stays that way!!! Heehee!
- Melissa
So, I will have redo the whole thing. Grrrrrrre....... And This is on the first page. Come on Melissa don't hyperventilate. Anyway, I'm happy about that!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, I totally forgot to add Jonah and Hamilton in the list of people on the boat, so from now on, Jonah and Hamilton are in it!!!!Jonah's pov
Jonah woke up thinking, this is not cool, yo. This hurt worse than the time he didn't run hard enough from his fans. They tore his gangsta clothes and stole his gangsta blang. The sight was not pretty.
But, this hurt worse. Like 100 times worse. he felt he was dead. But, he knew he wasn't dead. The pain made it notable that he was alive. Maybe he was on the verge of death. Or maybe he just couldn't die. He had Gone through many things that would have probably killed many people.
And yet, here he was. Alive and in pain. He thought, why not just lay here. I mean, why do I have to get up. It could end here, until someone found me. Rest. Lie down for a little while. And, when he found the energy, open his eyes and look at the stars. It was a fantasy every Cahill knew would not come true. Yet, he was given the option. To lie there. Not care what happened to the rest of the world. Lie there, and enjoy the rest and the peace.
Peace. John thought. He hasn't had any peace since he was 5. And even then his mom was training him in paint, sculpting, drawing, charcoal, musical instruments, and singing. His mom. Jonahs mom, Cora wizard, had been vesper 2. She had been helping the vespers ever since she disowned him. She had been working with Isabel. Giving the vespers inside information about his weak spots.
Jonah let his mom seep out of his thoughts, she was behind bars now. Locked up. She can't hurt me any more. But, Jonah knew, she would find a way. One way or another she would find a way to torture him. Even if she had died, she would haunt him from he grave. Don't think about mom, Jonah thought.
What to do next. What's next? He thought again about staying there. But then his thoughts went to another scene. Jonah being abanded in a cave. Screaming for help. No one hearing you. Knowing your life is in the hands of people who would stab you in the back as soon as you got the chance. He remembered thinking about how maybe, if he had been a better person, they would come back for him. They would have helped them. If he hadn't been such a jerk. And knowing you couldn't get up. Jonah didnt want to go back to that. The helplessness. The loneliness.
Jonah decided to get up. If the others were dead, he could lay there. He opened his right eye. Sky. He opened his left eye. More sky. He started to sit up, Jonah let out a gasp of pain. It hurt so bad. Next to him was Hamilton. But, he was acting strange. He was staring at the sand with awe and wonder. As if he had never seen sand before. His eyes were distant.
"Hamilton" Jonah said.
"who" Hamilton said. He had a confused look on his face. As if he had never heard his first name before.
"Hamilton are you okay?" Jonah asked
"I don't know who Hamilton is, but who are you?" Hamilton asked.
"Jonah"
"and who am I"
Jonah didn't have time to gasp, because right when he was about to, he heard someone call,
"amy"
Well, hope you all like!!!!! Again soooo cooollll!!! I'm on the first page. Hopefully it stays that way!!! Heehee!
- Melissa
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JadeAgent24, I'm sorry this isn't an Amian, but it never said that this was an Amian. And yes, Evan is in it. I'm sorry if you dont agree, but this IS my story. But, please still read. Do not judge my story based on who we think Amy should be with.
Alister's pov
I'm too old for this, alister thought as he woke up. He had thought it a hundred times before, yet he never quit. Why? Waking up in pain, not knowing where he was. What continent? What city? What country? He had been wondering this since he started the clue hunt. But, although he never told anyone, this was better than being hostage for vesper 1.
That had really messed up his mind. He had to stay strong and if he had stayed another day in that box, he would have cracked. He had felt his mind slipping, he was starting to go crazy. Many nights, although he wasn't proud of it, he had actually had plots about murdering different people in there. So he could enjoy the silence. The solitary. He had almost fulfilled one of his plans, but then stopped himself. He always had. Right before he was about to fulfill his plans, he stopped. And then guilt came over him.
Now he was going back to his humane side. Enjoying the presence of loved ones and not plotting to kill. But as he opened his eyes, he realized that he was alone again. This time not in a room, but in an island and he would be starting to go crazy again. He was ashamed of himself. He knew he couldn't help that their boat crashed, but he couldn't kill someone. It was as if there was evil deep down inside him, and it only came out when he wasnt carefully. When he was starting to go insane.
Alister shuddered thinking about being Locked with those people. Alone. With no one. And the nightmare was starting over again.
Alister was awoken from his thoughts when he heard someone scream next to him. Although it was loud, it was somewhat quiet. Alister turned around to see fiske Cahill standing behind him. His face held unbearable pain. It was the face of agony. A face that said, I would rather die than go through this pain. That is exactly how alister felt.
"fiske, are you alright" Alister asked. Hoping he would just say,of course I'm fine. Fiske was probably the reason alister hadn't gone insane while being held hostage. One other adult. Well, unless you counted Nellie. But, Nellie was...... How to put this nicely, special. Different. Unique. Fiske was the only other normal, reasonable adult.
"no." the look on his face said that just saying no, gave him so much grief.
"what's wrong?" alister asked. He felt guilty making fiske answer, but he needed to know. He had a medical degree. Although, alister was pretty sure, it wouldn't help.
"I think I'm paralyzed. I can't move my legs."
Alister sat for moment. Was it possible fiske would never walk again? I mean, this was fiske. He had survived many things. He was a top madrigal. He was a shy person who was devoted to Amy and Dan, and he would never be able to walk. But alister knew he couldn't sit here dwelling on the fact that fiske was paralyzed. He had to go on. Fiske being paralyzed should be a motivator.
"fiske, I will go and try and find the others. Oh have to stay here." alister said.
"just go." fiske said.
But before alister had a chance to go they heard someone call, "Amy"
And alister followed leaving fiske behind.
Alister's pov
I'm too old for this, alister thought as he woke up. He had thought it a hundred times before, yet he never quit. Why? Waking up in pain, not knowing where he was. What continent? What city? What country? He had been wondering this since he started the clue hunt. But, although he never told anyone, this was better than being hostage for vesper 1.
That had really messed up his mind. He had to stay strong and if he had stayed another day in that box, he would have cracked. He had felt his mind slipping, he was starting to go crazy. Many nights, although he wasn't proud of it, he had actually had plots about murdering different people in there. So he could enjoy the silence. The solitary. He had almost fulfilled one of his plans, but then stopped himself. He always had. Right before he was about to fulfill his plans, he stopped. And then guilt came over him.
Now he was going back to his humane side. Enjoying the presence of loved ones and not plotting to kill. But as he opened his eyes, he realized that he was alone again. This time not in a room, but in an island and he would be starting to go crazy again. He was ashamed of himself. He knew he couldn't help that their boat crashed, but he couldn't kill someone. It was as if there was evil deep down inside him, and it only came out when he wasnt carefully. When he was starting to go insane.
Alister shuddered thinking about being Locked with those people. Alone. With no one. And the nightmare was starting over again.
Alister was awoken from his thoughts when he heard someone scream next to him. Although it was loud, it was somewhat quiet. Alister turned around to see fiske Cahill standing behind him. His face held unbearable pain. It was the face of agony. A face that said, I would rather die than go through this pain. That is exactly how alister felt.
"fiske, are you alright" Alister asked. Hoping he would just say,of course I'm fine. Fiske was probably the reason alister hadn't gone insane while being held hostage. One other adult. Well, unless you counted Nellie. But, Nellie was...... How to put this nicely, special. Different. Unique. Fiske was the only other normal, reasonable adult.
"no." the look on his face said that just saying no, gave him so much grief.
"what's wrong?" alister asked. He felt guilty making fiske answer, but he needed to know. He had a medical degree. Although, alister was pretty sure, it wouldn't help.
"I think I'm paralyzed. I can't move my legs."
Alister sat for moment. Was it possible fiske would never walk again? I mean, this was fiske. He had survived many things. He was a top madrigal. He was a shy person who was devoted to Amy and Dan, and he would never be able to walk. But alister knew he couldn't sit here dwelling on the fact that fiske was paralyzed. He had to go on. Fiske being paralyzed should be a motivator.
"fiske, I will go and try and find the others. Oh have to stay here." alister said.
"just go." fiske said.
But before alister had a chance to go they heard someone call, "Amy"
And alister followed leaving fiske behind.
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JadeAgent24, I'm sorry this isn't an Amian, but it never said that this was an Amian. And yes, Evan is in it. I'm sorry if you dont agree, but this IS my story. But, please still read. Do not judge my story based on who we think Amy should be with.
Alister's pov
I'm too old for this, alister thought as he woke up. He had thought it a hundred times before, yet he never quit. Why? Waking up in pain, not knowing where he was. What continent? What city? What country? He had been wondering this since he started the clue hunt. But, although he never told anyone, this was better than being hostage for vesper 1.
That had really messed up his mind. He had to stay strong and if he had stayed another day in that box, he would have cracked. He had felt his mind slipping, he was starting to go crazy. Many nights, although he wasn't proud of it, he had actually had plots about murdering different people in there. So he could enjoy the silence. The solitary. He had almost fulfilled one of his plans, but then stopped himself. He always had. Right before he was about to fulfill his plans, he stopped. And then guilt came over him.
Now he was going back to his humane side. Enjoying the presence of loved ones and not plotting to kill. But as he opened his eyes, he realized that he was alone again. This time not in a room, but in an island and he would be starting to go crazy again. He was ashamed of himself. He knew he couldn't help that their boat crashed, but he couldn't kill someone. It was as if there was evil deep down inside him, and it only came out when he wasnt carefully. When he was starting to go insane.
Alister shuddered thinking about being Locked with those people. Alone. With no one. And the nightmare was starting over again.
Alister was awoken from his thoughts when he heard someone scream next to him. Although it was loud, it was somewhat quiet. Alister turned around to see fiske Cahill standing behind him. His face held unbearable pain. It was the face of agony. A face that said, I would rather die than go through this pain. That is exactly how alister felt.
"fiske, are you alright" Alister asked. Hoping he would just say,of course I'm fine. Fiske was probably the reason alister hadn't gone insane while being held hostage. One other adult. Well, unless you counted Nellie. But, Nellie was...... How to put this nicely, special. Different. Unique. Fiske was the only other normal, reasonable adult.
"no." the look on his face said that just saying no, gave him so much grief.
"what's wrong?" alister asked. He felt guilty making fiske answer, but he needed to know. He had a medical degree. Although, alister was pretty sure, it wouldn't help.
"I think I'm paralyzed. I can't move my legs."
Alister sat for moment. Was it possible fiske would never walk again? I mean, this was fiske. He had survived many things. He was a top madrigal. He was a shy person who was devoted to Amy and Dan, and he would never be able to walk. But alister knew he couldn't sit here dwelling on the fact that fiske was paralyzed. He had to go on. Fiske being paralyzed should be a motivator.
"fiske, I will go and try and find the others. Oh have to stay here." alister said.
"just go." fiske said.
But before alister had a chance to go they heard someone call, "Amy"
And alister followed leaving fiske behind.
Hope you all like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm pretty sure I'm done for all the povs of waking people up from the crash!!! Yeah!!!! Oh, and I forgot the name of the person who told me I should use bigger words. First, thank you for your honest opinion. It means a lot. But, I'm really stupid. So, I tried using bigger words I really did. But, when it comes to vocab I stink!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, this was my try at bigger words. Couldn't tell could you??? Yeah I knew you couldn't!!!!! WHY MUST I BE AN IDIOT!!!!!! Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
- Melissa, an idiotic girl who can only use small words.
Alister's pov
I'm too old for this, alister thought as he woke up. He had thought it a hundred times before, yet he never quit. Why? Waking up in pain, not knowing where he was. What continent? What city? What country? He had been wondering this since he started the clue hunt. But, although he never told anyone, this was better than being hostage for vesper 1.
That had really messed up his mind. He had to stay strong and if he had stayed another day in that box, he would have cracked. He had felt his mind slipping, he was starting to go crazy. Many nights, although he wasn't proud of it, he had actually had plots about murdering different people in there. So he could enjoy the silence. The solitary. He had almost fulfilled one of his plans, but then stopped himself. He always had. Right before he was about to fulfill his plans, he stopped. And then guilt came over him.
Now he was going back to his humane side. Enjoying the presence of loved ones and not plotting to kill. But as he opened his eyes, he realized that he was alone again. This time not in a room, but in an island and he would be starting to go crazy again. He was ashamed of himself. He knew he couldn't help that their boat crashed, but he couldn't kill someone. It was as if there was evil deep down inside him, and it only came out when he wasnt carefully. When he was starting to go insane.
Alister shuddered thinking about being Locked with those people. Alone. With no one. And the nightmare was starting over again.
Alister was awoken from his thoughts when he heard someone scream next to him. Although it was loud, it was somewhat quiet. Alister turned around to see fiske Cahill standing behind him. His face held unbearable pain. It was the face of agony. A face that said, I would rather die than go through this pain. That is exactly how alister felt.
"fiske, are you alright" Alister asked. Hoping he would just say,of course I'm fine. Fiske was probably the reason alister hadn't gone insane while being held hostage. One other adult. Well, unless you counted Nellie. But, Nellie was...... How to put this nicely, special. Different. Unique. Fiske was the only other normal, reasonable adult.
"no." the look on his face said that just saying no, gave him so much grief.
"what's wrong?" alister asked. He felt guilty making fiske answer, but he needed to know. He had a medical degree. Although, alister was pretty sure, it wouldn't help.
"I think I'm paralyzed. I can't move my legs."
Alister sat for moment. Was it possible fiske would never walk again? I mean, this was fiske. He had survived many things. He was a top madrigal. He was a shy person who was devoted to Amy and Dan, and he would never be able to walk. But alister knew he couldn't sit here dwelling on the fact that fiske was paralyzed. He had to go on. Fiske being paralyzed should be a motivator.
"fiske, I will go and try and find the others. Oh have to stay here." alister said.
"just go." fiske said.
But before alister had a chance to go they heard someone call, "Amy"
And alister followed leaving fiske behind.
Hope you all like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm pretty sure I'm done for all the povs of waking people up from the crash!!! Yeah!!!! Oh, and I forgot the name of the person who told me I should use bigger words. First, thank you for your honest opinion. It means a lot. But, I'm really stupid. So, I tried using bigger words I really did. But, when it comes to vocab I stink!!!!!!!!!!!!! So, this was my try at bigger words. Couldn't tell could you??? Yeah I knew you couldn't!!!!! WHY MUST I BE AN IDIOT!!!!!! Anyway, thanks for the feedback.
- Melissa, an idiotic girl who can only use small words.
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Melissa!!! I highly doubt you are an idiot, an idiot would NOT have been able to write that work of art :) Keep going. And I love how you made Cora vesper two. Very fitting, except I doubt she would have been made V2 unless she was working with the organization for a while.
Keep up the good work!
~Nami!!!
Keep up the good work!
~Nami!!!
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Amazing! ;)
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No stranger would it be
If we met up at midnight
In the hanging tree.
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PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLKZPLZPLZPLZ
PLZPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Continue!
PLZPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Continue!
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Darn it!!!! The story posted twice!!!!! Anyway, thanks for not calling me an idiot!!!!!! I just really dont have a big vocabulary. Unlike my friend, who got a big book of words for her birthday and LOVED it! Can't post the rest of the story now, sorry guys!!! But, I'm on the first page again!!!!! Hooray!!! I'm getting ready for bed And my moms yelling at me so..... Yeah, can't post the rest now!!!! Sorry.
- Melissa
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Hmmm, Dan drank the serum, Sinead is dead, Pheonix lost some body parts, Hamilton forgot who he is, and Fiske is paralyze.........
WHATS GOING ON!!!!
WHATS GOING ON!!!!
You knew what happen a while ago,
You know whats happening now,
But who knows what will happen in the FUTURE?
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Hey guys!!!!!!!!! Well, I've decided to continue my story. Hooray!!!!! I've just been crying so if it's not good I can blame it on that.
Amy's pov
Amy turned around swiftly to see Dan standing up smiling at her. He actually didn't look that bad. Well...... Everything but his eyes. His eyes were full of alarm. Like he had been through the most traumatizing moment of his life. Maybe he had. But, you would think after everything they've been through, this wouldn't be so bad. Not after almost being eaten by sharks, bitten by poisonous snakes and spiders, being run over by a subway, and almost falling off a cable car. You would think that after everything, this would be as big of a problem as a mosquito bite.
But, it wasn't. It was more than that. All the other times, it had been someone. It had been a living breathing person who had tried to kill them all those times. People had mercy. People had souls. Nature has no mercy. It has no soul. You can't bribe nature. This was all at the mercy of fate. And Amy hated being at the mercy of fate. Because fate had not been kind to her.
Just as Amy was about to say, "Dan" someone came running through screaming, "KIDDOS!!!!!!!!!! Hello?!?!"
Although Amy's muscles were screaming, she got up and ran to Nellie.
"Nellie your alive!!" Amy cried, hugging Nellie. Next to her was natalie. And if Amy had thought Dan looked shooken up, Natalie looked a million times worse. She looked half-crazed. Like she was on the verge of going insane. It scared Amy. That look had was on the face of shopping, loving, Natalie. She had turned into....... Well, now Amy was thinking about it, Dan. They both had that look. Like they were searching to find the motivation to live. Like, sometimes they would just want to give up and say, okay, I'll die. Who cares.
Amy can't afford to think like that. She couldn't die. If so everything she had done to survive, every near-death Expierience Amy had been through, had been for nothing. Amy wanted her life to have a purpose. She didn't want to quit at the very end.
As Amy was about to ask about Natalie. She heard someone scream her name.
"Amy!!!!!" Evan screamed. Amy ran over to him abandoning the tramautized Natalie. Ted and Evan were carrying pheonix. At first, Amy didn't know why. Then she saw his hand. Or, she didn't see his hand. It wasn't there. Gone. Ripped off. Now looking at Evan and Ted, they both had severe head injuries.
"Evan, what happened?"
"I woke up and found him like this" Evan said.
But before Amy could say anything, Reagon and Ian came up. Reagon looked like she was about to die.
"WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP IAN!!!!!!!!!! I mean do you NEVER stop complaining. Oh, my shirt is ruined, oh I'm in pain, I feel like I'm gonna die, I'm stuck on an island with poor people." Reagon mimicked with a British accent."I get it. You're having a bad day. But, guess what????? We are going through the same stuff you are so, SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!"
"at least there are no cats on this island" Ian mumbled. Then he looked around and saw Natalie and hugged her.
"Natalie! Are you okay???" Ian asked. Amy could see the concern for his sister. It amazed to see Ian like that. Concerned for someone other than himself. The way he held natalie, just to make sure she was okay.
"no I'm not." Natalie said. "I was just in a shipwreck, and your asking me if I'm okay??"
Natalie ran off. Ian almost went after her but Amy stopped him and said, "let her have some space."
Ian looked at Amy, with this look that said, I trust you more than myself. He knew with uttmost confidence that I was right.
Amy turned away. And when she did she saw Jonah.
He was guiding Hamilton over to her and he said to Hamilton, "this is Amy. She is a friend." he said it real slow as if Hamilton had gone deaf.
Wait, Amy thought. Maybe he had gone death. " ummmm..... Is Hamilton...... Deaf???" Amy asked hoping it would be no.
"hahahah" Jonah laughed. "he only has amnesia." "only???" Amy asked. " he ONLY has amnesia. That is very serious Jonah."
"I know. I've been trying to refill his memories. Like telling him names of his family. But, you know what's strange? On the way here, we were running, and he stopped. He got this look on his face as if he were trying to remember something, then he said, 'I know who did this to us' and then he kept running as If he hadnt had said anything. It makes me wonder what he meant."
Amy knew what it meant, though she was scared of what it. It meant there were enemies out there. Still lurking about. Waiting for us to put are guard down to murder us in the most painful way possible. The enemies would find us one way or another. And they would be ready while we will be unprepared. Amy realized, it's not over. There will always be bad guys. No matter how fast you run, how hard you hide, they will find you. And you can't escape. Some one crashed their ship.
"help!!!!!!!!!! Help someone. Amy!!! Dan!!! Nellie!!!! Jonah!!!! Anyone!!!!"
It was uncle alister. He was screaming for help. Alister saw Amy and scrambled his way toward her.
"Amy" he said. "please help me. Fiske is paralyzed. I need help."
Hope you like!!!!!!!! I'm REALLLY tired right now and I just finished crying so...... Yeah it's probably not that good. My brain Is mush!!!!!!!
- Melissa
Amy's pov
Amy turned around swiftly to see Dan standing up smiling at her. He actually didn't look that bad. Well...... Everything but his eyes. His eyes were full of alarm. Like he had been through the most traumatizing moment of his life. Maybe he had. But, you would think after everything they've been through, this wouldn't be so bad. Not after almost being eaten by sharks, bitten by poisonous snakes and spiders, being run over by a subway, and almost falling off a cable car. You would think that after everything, this would be as big of a problem as a mosquito bite.
But, it wasn't. It was more than that. All the other times, it had been someone. It had been a living breathing person who had tried to kill them all those times. People had mercy. People had souls. Nature has no mercy. It has no soul. You can't bribe nature. This was all at the mercy of fate. And Amy hated being at the mercy of fate. Because fate had not been kind to her.
Just as Amy was about to say, "Dan" someone came running through screaming, "KIDDOS!!!!!!!!!! Hello?!?!"
Although Amy's muscles were screaming, she got up and ran to Nellie.
"Nellie your alive!!" Amy cried, hugging Nellie. Next to her was natalie. And if Amy had thought Dan looked shooken up, Natalie looked a million times worse. She looked half-crazed. Like she was on the verge of going insane. It scared Amy. That look had was on the face of shopping, loving, Natalie. She had turned into....... Well, now Amy was thinking about it, Dan. They both had that look. Like they were searching to find the motivation to live. Like, sometimes they would just want to give up and say, okay, I'll die. Who cares.
Amy can't afford to think like that. She couldn't die. If so everything she had done to survive, every near-death Expierience Amy had been through, had been for nothing. Amy wanted her life to have a purpose. She didn't want to quit at the very end.
As Amy was about to ask about Natalie. She heard someone scream her name.
"Amy!!!!!" Evan screamed. Amy ran over to him abandoning the tramautized Natalie. Ted and Evan were carrying pheonix. At first, Amy didn't know why. Then she saw his hand. Or, she didn't see his hand. It wasn't there. Gone. Ripped off. Now looking at Evan and Ted, they both had severe head injuries.
"Evan, what happened?"
"I woke up and found him like this" Evan said.
But before Amy could say anything, Reagon and Ian came up. Reagon looked like she was about to die.
"WILL YOU JUST SHUT UP IAN!!!!!!!!!! I mean do you NEVER stop complaining. Oh, my shirt is ruined, oh I'm in pain, I feel like I'm gonna die, I'm stuck on an island with poor people." Reagon mimicked with a British accent."I get it. You're having a bad day. But, guess what????? We are going through the same stuff you are so, SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!"
"at least there are no cats on this island" Ian mumbled. Then he looked around and saw Natalie and hugged her.
"Natalie! Are you okay???" Ian asked. Amy could see the concern for his sister. It amazed to see Ian like that. Concerned for someone other than himself. The way he held natalie, just to make sure she was okay.
"no I'm not." Natalie said. "I was just in a shipwreck, and your asking me if I'm okay??"
Natalie ran off. Ian almost went after her but Amy stopped him and said, "let her have some space."
Ian looked at Amy, with this look that said, I trust you more than myself. He knew with uttmost confidence that I was right.
Amy turned away. And when she did she saw Jonah.
He was guiding Hamilton over to her and he said to Hamilton, "this is Amy. She is a friend." he said it real slow as if Hamilton had gone deaf.
Wait, Amy thought. Maybe he had gone death. " ummmm..... Is Hamilton...... Deaf???" Amy asked hoping it would be no.
"hahahah" Jonah laughed. "he only has amnesia." "only???" Amy asked. " he ONLY has amnesia. That is very serious Jonah."
"I know. I've been trying to refill his memories. Like telling him names of his family. But, you know what's strange? On the way here, we were running, and he stopped. He got this look on his face as if he were trying to remember something, then he said, 'I know who did this to us' and then he kept running as If he hadnt had said anything. It makes me wonder what he meant."
Amy knew what it meant, though she was scared of what it. It meant there were enemies out there. Still lurking about. Waiting for us to put are guard down to murder us in the most painful way possible. The enemies would find us one way or another. And they would be ready while we will be unprepared. Amy realized, it's not over. There will always be bad guys. No matter how fast you run, how hard you hide, they will find you. And you can't escape. Some one crashed their ship.
"help!!!!!!!!!! Help someone. Amy!!! Dan!!! Nellie!!!! Jonah!!!! Anyone!!!!"
It was uncle alister. He was screaming for help. Alister saw Amy and scrambled his way toward her.
"Amy" he said. "please help me. Fiske is paralyzed. I need help."
Hope you like!!!!!!!! I'm REALLLY tired right now and I just finished crying so...... Yeah it's probably not that good. My brain Is mush!!!!!!!
- Melissa
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