chapter 1.
zayn pov
am i really the only one without a girlfriend? Harry is with megan,Naill is with ruby,Liam and molly are perfect together and Louis is madly in love with rebecca. and what about me .............no one.
Harrys pov
hey does anyone know were zayn is?
Liam pov
no i didnt even realize he was gone hes always so quite.
Harrys pov
Hey louis lay off on the carrots and help look for zayn
Louis pov
fine but dont go hatin carrots now got it.
Niall pov found him he locked himself in his room, hey zayn we have like
10 min before the shwo starts hurry up!
zayns pov
10 mIn how long have ive been daydreaming iam not ready or a least i dont fell ready. Hold up just a few more min!
Harrys pov
we dont have a few more min
zayns pov
okay iam ready
4 other boys pov
finally!
Olivias pov
I CANT Belive we are about to see one direction live ahhhhhhhhhhh omg omg omg omg i cant calm down.
Andreas pov
can you at least try please for me my eardrums are already damaged enough why did i even agree to this?
Olivias pov well this is a concert ,and you did this because ur my best friend were almost like sisters.
Andrea pov
fine. but when this is over can we go somewere at least quite so my ear ache and headache can go away cause...
olivias pov
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its starting and be quite so i can listen to this angels sing!
andreas pov
someones touchy..
olivias pov
what did i say!!
IDs pov
your insecure dont know what for your turning heads when you walk through the door dont need makeup to coverup being the way that you are is enough..........................baby you light up my world like nobody else the wAY THAT YOU FLIP YOUR HAIR GETS ME OVERWHELMED BUT WHEN YOU SMILE AT THE THE GROUNG IT AINT HARD TO TELL YOU DONT KNOW UR BEAUTIFUL.
ZAYNS POV
ALL I COULD HEAR IS OUR FANS SCFREAMING I LOOKED ALL AROUND AND MY EYES LANDED ON SOMEONE HER EYES AS A GEM HER LIPS SO PINK AND HER FACE ..WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL THIS SONG SHOULD BE ABOUT HER AT LEAST IN MY OPINOIN
ANDREAS POV
THEY SING REALLY GOOD ACTUALLY NO WONDER OLIVIA IS TURNING CRAZY.. AS I WAS LOOKING AT THEM MY EYES STOPPED AT THE DARKER ONE WHAT WAS HIS NAME ....ZAYN WHY WAS HE STARING AT ME?
END OF CAPTER 1 HOPE YOU GUYS LIKED IF YOU DO PLEASE REPLY SO I CAN POST MORE-ANDREA OUT (P.S IAM THE PRETTY ONE IN THE STORY WHO ZAYN SAYS IS BEAUTIFUL HEHE.)
ive been told what to like.....but then ill be like every1 else,ive been told what to wear...but then i woulndt be unique...ive been told to be who i wanna be...thats what iam gonna DO
Posted at: 6:52 pm on May 3, 2012
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It is off to a great start:D I really like where you are coming from! But here are some suggestions to make it easier to read for peoples;
POV means Point Of View, so like, when Zayn/anybody is talking you wouldn't say POV, you could either do Zayn talking to himself like this; Am I really the only one without a girlfriend? Harry is with Megan, Niall is with Ruby, Liam and Molly are perfect together, and Louis is madly in love with Rebecca. But what about me? There is no one. Zayn thought to himself. OR you could do something like this; Zayn thinking to himself; Am I really the only one without a girlfriend? Harry is with Megan, Niall is with Ruby, Liam and Molly are perfect together, and Louis is madly in love with Rebecca. But what about me? There is no one. And when you are having people think, it is easier to do Italics.
And when people are talking, still you don't use POV, you can either do this; Liam; No, I didn't even realise he was gone, he is always so quiet.
Or; "No I didn't even realise he was gone, he is always so quiet." Liam replied. If you don't do it the Liam: way, you have to put quotation marks up, before and after what Liam said (for everybody) eg. "Awesome job!" CobraAzure said.
Now to the part where we can use POV:D Ok, like where you said; ANDREAS POV
THEY SING REALLY GOOD ACTUALLY NO WONDER OLIVIA IS TURNING CRAZY.. AS I WAS LOOKING AT THEM MY EYES STOPPED AT THE DARKER ONE WHAT WAS HIS NAME ....ZAYN WHY WAS HE STARING AT ME?;
That is where you use the POV. but still, when anybody is thinking something you should do the above mentioned things.....I hope I helped, and please don't get mad at me! I am not trying to hurt your feelings, or otherwise stop you from writing this amazayn story;0) Please write more?
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Posted at: 2:42 pm on May 8, 2012
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I love Zayn!!!!!
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Posted at: 4:56 pm on May 8, 2012
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well thanx for liking the story and for the tips its just i had to hurry up and finish cuz i was supposed to be asleep and thats why i did not proof read it and i already put zayns love pt 2 and you might be upset cause i cinda did the same thing sorry please read my interview with one direction andrea out
ive been told what to like.....but then ill be like every1 else,ive been told what to wear...but then i woulndt be unique...ive been told to be who i wanna be...thats what iam gonna DO
Posted at: 7:43 pm on May 8, 2012
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me too !!1d rules
ive been told what to like.....but then ill be like every1 else,ive been told what to wear...but then i woulndt be unique...ive been told to be who i wanna be...thats what iam gonna DO
Posted at: 7:44 pm on May 8, 2012
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I love it!
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Posted at: 6:43 am on May 11, 2012
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No problem, Ah, I see............I did read your interview, it was quite romantic.
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