This week I brought The Dead of Night to Hollywood and saw tons of movie stars! Okay, they all were on billboards. But I did really meet a surprise star, in person, at my next location, Salt Lake City! And I spent a lot of time on freeways. Which made me very, very hungry. More on that later — plus statues, chocolate, a new writing prompt, and a reveal of my mystery location from the last post!But first, what a blast I had reading your prompt responses. I’m impressed by your imaginations, the improvements you’ve made as writers, and the great support you’re showing one another. What an awesome community!Last time I promised Q&A. To those who asked if I could visit their town/city: the tour is packed with more than 75 events, including tons of school visits. It’s all been tightly planned and organized for months by my awesome publisher, Scholastic, and it’s posted here. But I can visit anywhere (yes, including Canada, where I’ve been twice recently) on a school visit — just have your teacher of librarian check out my Author Visits page.CheerfulSeeker1: What was the first book you ever wrote and when was it published?A book of puzzles and games called (oddly enough) Puzzles and Games, in 1983.OnyxTiger45: Do you read all the responses to the story prompts personally or does someone else?I personally read them all. (And I hope someone else reads them too — lots of someone elses!)FightingCobra225: But what do you like to read?Mystery, historical fiction, basically any novel with really good writing. And I make sure to read a lot of nonfiction too.DarkTiger40: Out of all of the 39 Clues and Cahills vs Vespers books you've written so far, which character is the hardest to write about and why?DaintyOfficer1: Was it hard writing about Jake Rosenbloom in The Dead of the Night? I think he's kind of a complicated character.I’ll answer both Dark and Dainty: yes. Jake. I worked hardest on his character for The Dead of Night. Once I figured him out, he became great fun to write.DancingTeam1: I want to be a writer and I'm good at it, but I feel like I'm pulling away from my friends, which I don't want to do. What should I do?Maybe you need a little private time for your ideas. Take the time. But make sure to be kind to your friends and let them know you’ll be back. They’ll be happy you do.OnyxWolf91: When you write stories, what process do you use? Do you write everything down first, or do you carefully plan it?Yes, I outline my books very carefully before I start writing.AmethystButterfly167: Do you have any pets? What is your favorite color? What is your absolute favorite food?Not since the guinea pig died, blue, and chocolate.DragonAdventure181: If you could meet any character from the 39 clues or the Cahills Vs. Vespers, who would it be and why?Buffy the dog, from Book 3, who fascinates me inexplicably.AgentCourier10: You are kidnapped by unknown Vespers, and transported to a desert island. Using your wits and a few coconuts, you are able to contact the Attleboro crew, and the Cahills. They agree to rescue you, but, can only send one agent. Out of the eight agents (Ian, Sinead, Amy, Dan, Evan, Hamilton, Jonah, and Saladin) who would you want to rescue you, and why?Saladin? Really? Let me think about this ... BronzeEagle168: What inspired you to become a writer? What was your favourite book when you were small?I loved reading Jack London. His stories, which took place in the Far North, were so vivid I could feel freezing cold in the dead of summer. I wanted to do what he did!DragonChallenger20: What is your advice for some who has started eight novels, but can't seem to finish? I mean getting started is easy for me. But finishing? You've got to be kidding. How do you handle a writer's creative block?Chocolate, mostly. But really, the only “cure” for writer’s block is to sit there until you finish. Time is your friend. Take it. It could very well be you haven’t found the story that really connects deeply with you yet. But I would recommend picking out one of your stories and trying to outline it — just a brief summary of what will happen, right to the end of the book. Do a couple of drafts of that outline, and then try again. It will feel amazing to finish something.InventorLavender1: I know a lot of people are asking you what it's like to be a writer, etc, etc. But I know that you were also an actor. Had being an actor helped you be an author at any time?Definitely! Especially with dialog. When you’re an actor you get such a strong sense of storytelling and the economy of language.EkaterinaDragon327: When did you want to become a writer?Early on. I don’t even remember not wanting to be a writer!InfiltrateRattlesnake1: Is it true that there is a movie on the clue hunt set to be released?DreamWorks is working on it. We know they have a screenplay but the movie hasn’t been cast, so we’re sitting tight, waiting to hear.BearDeciphering2: Why do you almost ALWAYS wear a red hat? Is it because you're uncomfortable being partly bald?Well, the hat isn’t always red! And I recommend being partly bald — it’s VERY comfortable. But you need to protect your comfortable head against the sun.BreakingHurricane5: In the dead of night, you forgot a comma between Nellie said she sacrificed stuff like food, her iPod tukey and having to listen to Natalie. You forgot the comma in-between turkey and iPod.No, that was done correctly. “Cold turkey” is not an actual turkey. It’s an expression that means “suddenly or without preparation.”SteelBone2: Why is it that everyone's High School/Collage pictures from waaaaayyyyy back in your day make them look hillarious?Ha! Believe it or not, yours will too!OK, DRUMROLL, PLEASE ... Remember that mysterious breathtaking waterfall? To those who figured it out: your research skills humble me. Here’s the reveal. Although I was sad to leave the Pacific Northwest, my pals in Southern California went out of their way to make me feel welcome, including the Aeolian Elementary School ...
The presentation was sponsored by Mrs. Nelson’s Books, which was an amazing place to visit, as always.
I got another great welcome at Barnes & Noble in Huntington Beach, where the bright 7:00 P.M. sun felt like midday. 
Someone in this crowd knows how I feel about chocolate — and look what she presented to me! (Did I mention how much I love being an author? Let me count the ways ... )
Like my HB cap? It stands for Huntington Beach. And no, I didn’t eat all the chocolate. I had to be alert the next day, for Lincoln Elementary School. I didn’t cownt on having to travel to the gym on the back of a red bovine. Unherd of! The school provided an udderly wonderful welcome sign, and the enthusiasm of the kids was quite mooving. I milked this visit for all it was worth. 

Although they did not have a lion statue, they more than made up for it with this:
As if that wasn’t enough excitement, I met a bright, enthusiastic, and warmly welcoming crowd later that day at the Chamlian Armenian School.
All those presentations get a cowpoke mighty hungry. So I galloped into the Eagle Rock neighborhood to find some good grub. When I discovered a huge Filipino community, I let out a YEE-HAH! Our books have many fans in the Philippines — and you know who you are, so here’s a mabuhay to you:
Between the chocolate and the bibingka (a delicious type of rice cake from the Philippines), I was energized to take on Salt Lake City. (And, naturally, I switched caps.)
Once I started eating, there was no stopping me. In Utah my book tour became a food hunt.
In between meals I visited more schools, hosted by the amazing King’s English bookstore ...
...after which I went right back to, well, you know. (This restaurant, the oldest in Salt Lake City, had an entire Thanksgiving meal in a sandwich —turkey, stuffing, and cranberry sauce!)
After that, I needed a long hike. Salt Lake City has some breathtaking views and monster hills. It also has ... STATUES! As always, they taught me well and graciously took all my advice.
After running into Roland Smith in Portland, I hoped to find Linda Sue Park or David Baldacci in L.A. Alas, no such luck. But there was a friendly chap at my hotel in Salt Lake City, who was reading one of my favorite books ... Well, you’ll never believe who this guy really was! (Actually, you probably caught on before I did.) Now we have a mutual fan club.
Next stop, a couple of days in NYC and then Houston! Okay, for the next blog post, I will have a special challenge for all of you, a real 39 CLUES MESSAGE BOARD EXCLUSIVE!I can’t tell you about it yet, but I promise it will be fun! For now, a great big shout-out to ALL of you from around the world who have followed me on this incredible journey. Good to have you with me.
And, before I forget, back by popular demand, here is the newest writing prompt:“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer.
SIGNATURE backward is ERUTANGIS. My signature is actually a signarel.
Posted at: 5:23 pm on April 26, 2012
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Cyber battle! LOL!
And thanks for the reviews, Peter! It probably takes ages to read all of the stories ... I bow to you, sir! I'll even give you virtual chocolate! *gives chocolate to Peter*
And BTW, you should try to win the cyber battle. Just saying ;)
So let’s set the WORLD on FIRE …
We can burn BRIGHTER …
Than the SUN …
Posted at: 11:59 am on May 19, 2012
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Omg I am so pumped right now! Peter lerangis has actually read my response! I am screaming like a little girl right now... and not because I am one. I am currently giving everyone around me high-fives now, even though I don`t know who half of them are, and also break dancing:P
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Posted at: 6:52 pm on May 19, 2012
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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Amy looked down to see Even and Dan fighting over...A penguin? No, A penguin with a snow cone. The penguin grinned and took of its head tv styled. OMG it was...Ian Kabra??? He got down on one knee, holding a ring pop. He ate it. Then his head blew up and Jake appeared in his place. He kissed a giraffe--wait. Where did the giraffe come from? Anyway, Amy threw a coffee pot at the giraffe which turned into a poptart and it blew up. The world turned to ashes and Amy executed Jake. THE END.
Ha! Beat THAT! Yeah, cyber battle! lol
Cmon, Peter. How was that?
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Posted at: 11:04 pm on May 19, 2012
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It could be chainsaw or chain saw. Both are used. But I prefer chainsaw.
If you are the leader of any group or organization, remember this: There is always a path that benefits everyone; all you have to do is find it.
-Jason
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Posted at: 10:14 am on May 20, 2012
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Ya ya ya ya. Peter, I had no idea you posted soooo much!
It would really make my day if you possibly checked out this story I'm writing with ActressExpert (Olivia). It's in my posts. It's called: The dead of night Napped in Mid Night
{~Bella Starling~}
"Don't be afraid. Let's have a little fun instead…" - Rise of the Guardians
Hope. Faith. Love. Joy.
{~Bella Starling~} a.k.a. the XD Queen!
Posted at: 12:12 pm on May 21, 2012
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No one posted so I'm guessing I won! *bows and accepts trophy*
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Posted at: 10:02 pm on May 24, 2012
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"Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Amy looked down to see Even and Dan fighting over...A penguin? No, A penguin with a snow cone and a donut. The penguin grinned and took of its head tv styled. OMG it was...Ian Kabra??? He got down on one knee, holding a ring pop. He ate it with his mouth open. Then his head blew up and Jake appeared in his place. He kissed a giraffe--wait. Where did the giraffe come from? Anyway, Amy threw a coffee pot at the giraffe which turned into a poptart and it blew up. Then Sinead materialized out of thin air like a fairy and ate half of the world. The world turned to ashes and Amy executed Jake. Shocked, Evan killed Amy and Dan and all of the Vespers. Soon, he became King Evan the awesome of Narnia and the rest of the world. THE END.
And no, I won!!!!! MUAHAHA!
So let’s set the WORLD on FIRE …
We can burn BRIGHTER …
Than the SUN …
Posted at: 9:17 am on May 25, 2012
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*sees Stephanie's post*
awwww...
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Posted at: 3:53 pm on May 27, 2012
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Natalie had never imagined such a thing would happen to a girl like her. She was being chased across the world by her mother. Ian of course was with her. Isabel had chased them across all the places they had been during the clue hunt, but know they were cornered. In the exploded ruins of the Gauntlet. "I've got you now!" Isabel taunted.
AND
Misty, Torak, Renn, Wolf and Wolfette were tired, tattered, and torn. They had been chased for the past 10 days, and they had to stop, but they knew if they stopped, they would get caught, and the Soul-eaters would show no Mercy, particularly towards Misty and Torak, for they had a special secret that only they, and the Soul-eaters knew: They were the legendary Spirit Walkers.
~Diamante~
"My truffles? You took them. That's just mean." ~ Opal
I will have my revenge, Artemis Fowl II...
Posted at: 11:36 am on May 28, 2012
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Here's what I think, as the average reader. Ashley is in |||||||, Peter Lerangis is in ||||||, and I am in... yep, you guessed it!!! Red.
8 - Last sentence: '...he tapped an app on the tiny screen. And he began typing a code...' That period should be a comma.
The use of a period is a conscious decision here. It has to do with the rhythm of prose. Sometimes, when the going is tense and quick, I like to shorten sentences as a way to ramp up the tension. Although “rules” would shun the use of a so-called sentence fragment, sometimes it's appropriate (and fun) to use them, especially at the end of action scenes.
Yes, I agree with Peter on this one.
15 - 'The initials of his long-dead father, Arthur Josiah Trent.' I think a (;) would be more appropriate than a period.
A semicolon would not work, alas. (Btw, I used a period after “father” for the same reasons as stated above, but a comma would have worked too, as you have written here). A semicolon is a different kind of break; it separates two independent clauses, i.e., two clauses that could stand alone as sentences (each with a subject and verb). The use of the semicolon in the previous sentence is correct, for example. Semicolons are also used to separate lists whose items contain commas (such as “He took along his old, ripped-up jeans; his red socks; his barely used, shining-green baseball helmet; and a box of Band-Aids.”)
Again, I am with Peter on this one.
31 - 'That's why you become a Madrigal' Why I become a Madrigal? My grammar book says the second you use the word 'You', your story becomes second-person.
Well, not exactly. First, this is an example of “close third person” writing, where we are inside Ted’s head as he’s thinking. The “you” is colloquial here; it doesn’t mean second-person “you,” but “you” as a substitute for “one.” I could have written “That’s why one becomes a Madrigal,” but that would be stiff. This is an example of the glorious flexibility of language. (Grammar books generally don’t dig this deeply, unless they’re written by the amazing Marvin Terban!)
Well, not thinking in a grammatical way, I think the idea becomes just that more effective.
'H' - "Bats bats bats bats bats," *Gasp!* Cheyyenne! Don't you know there's supposed to be commas between words when you say them multiple times???
This also was done on purpose. A comma indicates a pause. Sometimes that pause is necessary for meaning, as in a list. Here, Cheyenne is saying the words super-fast, in a mocking way. She is not pausing between the words. This is important to “hear,” because it occurs in dialog. There are vast differences between, say, “Bats. Bats. Bats. Bats.” and “Bats, bats, bats, bats” and “Bats bats bats bats.” (She could have said “Batsbatsbatsbats,” but that’s harder to read!)
I definetely agree with Peter here. My first thought was the same as yours, Ashley, but after thinking about it I realised it was just more effective.
75 - 'She was talking to...what's his name? ...Tolliver.' I think it should be 'She was talking to - what's his name? - Tolliver.'
An ellipsis ( ... ) indicates a pause in speech. You use an ellipsis in dialog if a character has lost a train of thought or is pondering something. This is exactly what I meant to convey here. If this were a sentence of non-dialog prose, yes, the M-dashes would be correct, to indicate something inserted parenthetically into a sentence.
At first I agreed with Ash, but Peter shed more light on the grammatical use.
89 - "Yes, Saladin, you're here, bully for you." I feel like there should be a period between Here and Bully for you.
Again, a rhythmic choice here. I wanted Ian to say this as one long bored sentence, the whole thing coming out with comma-pauses. It makes it clearer that he really doesn’t mean what he’s saying. With the comma, the “bully for you” is less sincere, which is what I intended for our beloved Saladin-hating Ian!
Agreeing with Peter again.
92-93 - I just wanna say how much I love this scene with Luna. She reminds me here so much of my own amazingly sweet Grandma, which just adds to her creepiness. BRAVO!!!
Aw, thanks!
No comment.
93 - AND YOU REMEMBERED THE '*' IN *NSYNC!!! I had a book - er, I think it was a book - that forgot the '*' and I got really mad XD
Yup.
Without doubt, no comment.
95 - Ah...Italian. I speak very little, but it looks perfect to me :D
Hope so!
Looks okay.
105 - DAN!!! This page was so...creepy!!! It gave me chills! Great job!
Thanks again!
Nothing to say here.
107 - 'But she didn't not like the feeling' ...That's correct and all, but everytime I read it, my brain either cancels out 'Didn't' or 'not' so the message changes. Consider changing. Or, put the 'Not' in italics!
I would not change this. I meant for the reader to slow down and think about this. Italics can be overused by writers. Sometimes they are an indication that the writer doesn’t trust the reader, that the reader needs to knowwhere the emphasis should be or they won’t get it. (You see what I mean.) I like to trust the reader. Sometimes it’s good to just write what you mean.
This time I agree with Ashley. Peter is right as always from a grammatical point of view, but as a reader, Ashley's right. Sometimes perfect grammar does not exactly make a book better.
119 - 'Dan nearly feel out of the car, laughing' There shouldn't be a comma there. The comma makes it 'Dan nearly fell out of the car plus he was laughing. No comma specifies that the reason he almost fell out was because he was laughing.
Actually, if I used no comma, the sentence would not make sense. “Dan nearly fell out of the taxi laughing” is incorrect because the “laughing” is a participle that modifies Dan’s action. Another way to write is could have been this: “Laughing, Dan fell out of the taxi.” Both are OK, both with commas. The distinction as to whether or not Dan’s fall is caused by his laughing isn’t really that important because it’s pretty clearly implied. (The use or non-use of a comma wouldn’t control that. You could write, for example, “Dan was laughing so hard that he nearly fell out of the taxi” to make it ironclad clear, but I don’t think that’s necessary.)
Again, Peter is correct, although as a reader, I do think that no comma would make it easier on the eye.
122 - How dare Dan mock The Beatles???
The nerve!
Indeed!
134 - "I'd say he misses his mom. But I don't think Isabel is missable.' NO PERIOD! Comma! Haha.
Again, this was a style choice. The short sentence set off those words in a punchier way. Because it was dialog, I was intending for the reader to “hear” the way Sinead was saying the words — with an end-of sentence pause, followed by a full-sentence punchline!
As I said, sometimes grammar isn't everything!
141 - 'eye to eye for the first time since the gauntlet' Shouldn't Gauntlet be capitalized? That was the name of the place, after all.
”Gauntlet” is a noun, in this case a variation of “gantlet,” which means “a challenge.”
Hmm, I'd have to say I agree with Ashley on this one. A non-39 Clues fan would agree with Peter, but because we are avid fans, we would immediately think of the Madrigal Gauntlet. And I have my own problem with this one. It is not the first time! Remember Rapid Fire 4???
159 - See above...Gauntlet wasn't capitalized.
160 - I love Ian's GPS LOL
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Vesper One's Message - Dissappointed in Vesper One...'Hello Cahills!' Hey, Vespy? It's ''Hello, Cahills!'
Me too! (And I didn’t write that part ... )
Me three!
~ Red
That's rubbish, rubbish! Where's the green frog?
~ Mark Hadlow
Posted at: 10:46 am on May 30, 2012
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Thanks for posting :)
My name is Chistian I'm 12 years old I am a proud christian I a Ekat my multiple skills will teach those vespers a lesson
Posted at: 1:29 pm on May 30, 2012
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GO SALT LAKE CITY!!!!!
"What? How could Pex be short for Arnold?"
"I dunno. I have a causin his name's Robert and everyone calls him Bobby, that don't make no sense neither."
-Pex and Chips
Posted at: 2:54 pm on May 30, 2012
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"Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Amy looked down to see Even and Dan fighting over...A penguin? No, A penguin with a snow cone and a donut. The penguin grinned and took of its head tv styled. OMG it was...Ian Kabra??? He got down on one knee, holding a ring pop. He ate it with his mouth open. Then his head blew up and Jake appeared in his place. He kissed a giraffe--wait. Where did the giraffe come from? Anyway, Amy threw a coffee pot at the giraffe which turned into a poptart and it blew up. Then Sinead materialized out of thin air like a fairy and ate half of the world. The world turned to ashes and Amy executed Jake. Shocked, Evan killed Amy and Dan and all of the Vespers. Soon, he became King Evan the awesome of Narnia and the rest of the world. He was eaten by a mouse, which was hunted and killed by Aragorn. Then, Voldemort killed him, before Harry Potter came and sold him poisonus toffees. Voldemort died, and Harry promptly blew up with excitement at the new Percy Jackson book. Eventually, after a war lasting hundreds of years, cockroaches took over the earth. And they created new technology, so they went to Mars, and the planet was taken over by Martians. Not knowing what they were doing, they accidentally blew up the Universe. THE END.
That's rubbish, rubbish! Where's the green frog?
~ Mark Hadlow
Posted at: 3:09 pm on May 30, 2012
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RedPuppy47- That was.... original. But soooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!! Love it! but maybe you should have said that Amy woke up. That might make it seem a little more beliveible.
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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer.
"Where is he?" She asked herself. Suddenly, she felt a tingling sensation. The last thing she saw before going black was Evan's face, wearing a snarl.*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~LATER~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Where am I?" She asked. Then she realized tht there were some... familiar faces in the room.
"Y-your C-Casper, and your C-c-cheyenne, and YOU! I don't even want to think about you!" Amy said defiantly.
"Oh yeah? Well, that won't exactly mean pleasant things for you." The one who's name Amy didn't mention snarled.
"We have quite a surprise for you. Good job, Mr. Tolliver! Nice work!" Now Amy realized who it was. It was her own father, Arthur Trent.
He turned to Amy. "Did you really think that he was in love with you? Think again, Amy." Arthur said.
"Mr. Tolliver here is a Vesper, in case you didn't notice. He did exactly as we asked him to." He explained.
Just then, there was a crash, followed by a "Hai ya!".
"What... Who would that be?" Arther inquired.
Amy already knew. It was the Janus, coming to rescue her, as she knew they would, no matter how much they hated her. She knew that they would never let her be tortured by the Vespers. But who were they led by? None other that Misty Cahill, one of Amy's worst enemies.
"Wha-what are you doing here? I thought you hated me!" Amy said to Misty.
"I do. But that doesn't mean I'm letting a Cahill die by the hands of a vesper!" Misty replied.
~TO BE CONINUED!~
*= Sorry Peter! I'm an AmIan! XD
~Diamante~
"My truffles? You took them. That's just mean." ~ Opal
I will have my revenge, Artemis Fowl II...
Posted at: 1:25 pm on June 11, 2012
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