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Tour Update: LA, Salt Lake City, special guest author, and NEW writing prompt
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This week I brought The Dead of Night to Hollywood and saw tons of movie stars! Okay, they all were on billboards. But I did really meet a surprise star, in person, at my next location, Salt Lake City! And I spent a lot of time on freeways. Which made me very, very hungry. More on that later — plus statues, chocolate, a new writing prompt, and a reveal of my mystery location from the last post!

But first, what a blast I had reading your prompt responses. I’m impressed by your imaginations, the improvements you’ve made as writers, and the great support you’re showing one another. What an awesome community!

Last time I promised Q&A. To those who asked if I could visit their town/city: the tour is packed with more than 75 events, including tons of school visits. It’s all been tightly planned and organized for months by my awesome publisher, Scholastic, and it’s posted here. But I can visit anywhere (yes, including Canada, where I’ve been twice recently) on a school visit — just have your teacher of librarian check out my Author Visits page.

CheerfulSeeker1: What was the first book you ever wrote and when was it published?
A book of puzzles and games called (oddly enough) Puzzles and Games, in 1983.

OnyxTiger45: Do you read all the responses to the story prompts personally or does someone else?
I personally read them all. (And I hope someone else reads them too — lots of someone elses!)

FightingCobra225: But what do you like to read?
Mystery, historical fiction, basically any novel with really good writing. And I make sure to read a lot of nonfiction too.

DarkTiger40: Out of all of the 39 Clues and Cahills vs Vespers books you've written so far, which character is the hardest to write about and why?
DaintyOfficer1: Was it hard writing about Jake Rosenbloom in The Dead of the Night? I think he's kind of a complicated character.
I’ll answer both Dark and Dainty: yes. Jake. I worked hardest on his character for The Dead of Night. Once I figured him out, he became great fun to write.

DancingTeam1: I want to be a writer and I'm good at it, but I feel like I'm pulling away from my friends, which I don't want to do. What should I do?
Maybe you need a little private time for your ideas. Take the time. But make sure to be kind to your friends and let them know you’ll be back. They’ll be happy you do.

OnyxWolf91: When you write stories, what process do you use? Do you write everything down first, or do you carefully plan it?
Yes, I outline my books very carefully before I start writing.

AmethystButterfly167: Do you have any pets? What is your favorite color? What is your absolute favorite food?
Not since the guinea pig died, blue, and chocolate.

DragonAdventure181: If you could meet any character from the 39 clues or the Cahills Vs. Vespers, who would it be and why?
Buffy the dog, from Book 3, who fascinates me inexplicably.

AgentCourier10: You are kidnapped by unknown Vespers, and transported to a desert island. Using your wits and a few coconuts, you are able to contact the Attleboro crew, and the Cahills. They agree to rescue you, but, can only send one agent. Out of the eight agents (Ian, Sinead, Amy, Dan, Evan, Hamilton, Jonah, and Saladin) who would you want to rescue you, and why?
Saladin? Really? Let me think about this ...

BronzeEagle168: What inspired you to become a writer? What was your favourite book when you were small?
I loved reading Jack London. His stories, which took place in the Far North, were so vivid I could feel freezing cold in the dead of summer. I wanted to do what he did!

DragonChallenger20: What is your advice for some who has started eight novels, but can't seem to finish? I mean getting started is easy for me. But finishing? You've got to be kidding. How do you handle a writer's creative block?
Chocolate, mostly. But really, the only “cure” for writer’s block is to sit there until you finish. Time is your friend. Take it. It could very well be you haven’t found the story that really connects deeply with you yet. But I would recommend picking out one of your stories and trying to outline it — just a brief summary of what will happen, right to the end of the book. Do a couple of drafts of that outline, and then try again. It will feel amazing to finish something.

InventorLavender1: I know a lot of people are asking you what it's like to be a writer, etc, etc. But I know that you were also an actor. Had being an actor helped you be an author at any time?
Definitely! Especially with dialog. When you’re an actor you get such a strong sense of storytelling and the economy of language.

EkaterinaDragon327: When did you want to become a writer?
Early on. I don’t even remember not wanting to be a writer!

InfiltrateRattlesnake1: Is it true that there is a movie on the clue hunt set to be released?
DreamWorks is working on it. We know they have a screenplay but the movie hasn’t been cast, so we’re sitting tight, waiting to hear.

BearDeciphering2: Why do you almost ALWAYS wear a red hat? Is it because you're uncomfortable being partly bald?
Well, the hat isn’t always red! And I recommend being partly bald — it’s VERY comfortable. But you need to protect your comfortable head against the sun.

BreakingHurricane5: In the dead of night, you forgot a comma between Nellie said she sacrificed stuff like food, her iPod tukey and having to listen to Natalie. You forgot the comma in-between turkey and iPod.
No, that was done correctly. “Cold turkey” is not an actual turkey. It’s an expression that means “suddenly or without preparation.”

SteelBone2: Why is it that everyone's High School/Collage pictures from waaaaayyyyy back in your day make them look hillarious?
Ha! Believe it or not, yours will too!

OK, DRUMROLL, PLEASE ... Remember that mysterious breathtaking waterfall? To those who figured it out: your research skills humble me. Here’s the reveal.
 

Although I was sad to leave the Pacific Northwest, my pals in Southern California went out of their way to make me feel welcome, including the Aeolian Elementary School ...

 
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The presentation was sponsored by Mrs. Nelson’s Books, which was an amazing place to visit, as always.
 
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I got another great welcome at Barnes & Noble in Huntington Beach, where the bright 7:00 P.M. sun felt like midday.
 
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Someone in this crowd knows how I feel about chocolate — and look what she presented to me! (Did I mention how much I love being an author? Let me count the ways ... )

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Like my HB cap? It stands for Huntington Beach. And no, I didn’t eat all the chocolate. I had to be alert the next day, for Lincoln Elementary School. I didn’t cownt on having to travel to the gym on the back of a red bovine.  Unherd of! The school provided an udderly wonderful welcome sign, and the enthusiasm of the kids was quite mooving. I milked this visit for all it was worth.
 

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Although they did not have a lion statue, they more than made up for it with this:

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As if that wasn’t enough excitement, I met a bright, enthusiastic, and warmly welcoming crowd later that day at the Chamlian Armenian School.

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All those presentations get a cowpoke mighty hungry. So I galloped into the Eagle Rock neighborhood to find some good grub. When I discovered a huge Filipino community, I let out a YEE-HAH! Our books have many fans in the Philippines — and you know who you are, so here’s a mabuhay to you:

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Between the chocolate and the bibingka (a delicious type of rice cake from the Philippines), I was energized to take on Salt Lake City.  (And, naturally, I switched caps.)

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Once I started eating, there was no stopping me. In Utah my book tour became a food hunt.

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In between meals I visited more schools, hosted by the amazing King’s English bookstore ...

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...after which I went right back to, well, you know. (This restaurant, the oldest in Salt Lake City, had an entire Thanksgiving meal in a sandwich —turkey, stuffing, and cranberry sauce!)

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After that, I needed a long hike. Salt Lake City has some breathtaking views and monster hills. It also has ... STATUES! As always, they taught me well and graciously took all my advice.

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After running into Roland Smith in Portland, I hoped to find Linda Sue Park or David Baldacci in L.A. Alas, no such luck. But there was a friendly chap at my hotel in Salt Lake City, who was reading one of my favorite books ...

 

Well, you’ll never believe who this guy really was! (Actually, you probably caught on before I did.) Now we have a mutual fan club.

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Next stop, a couple of days in NYC and then Houston! Okay, for the next blog post, I will have a special challenge for all of you, a real 39 CLUES MESSAGE BOARD EXCLUSIVE!

I can’t tell you about it yet, but I promise it will be fun! For now, a great big shout-out to ALL of you from around the world who have followed me on this incredible journey. Good to have you with me.

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And, before I forget, back by popular demand, here is the newest writing prompt:

“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer.

SIGNATURE backward is ERUTANGIS.  My signature is actually a signarel.

Posted at: 5:23 pm on April 26, 2012

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My baseball cap is off to SteelBone2, who should perhaps be called “EagleEye1” for her close and careful reading.  I am so impressed by your editorial flare.  (HOW old did you say you were?  Whew, that's some talent!)  You really ought to think about doing this for a living someday.  And I recommend that you get copies of two books: The Chicago Manual of Style and Words into Type, which are the best sources of information about usage.  They will not only give you an idea of how to edit with an eye toward clarity, and when and how to administer (or loosen) “rules.”  They also give insight into the use of commas, which can be complicated and nuanced!  

Since you took the time to do this, I owe you some answers.  And this can be a peek into the writing process for all of you future authors!  

8 - Last sentence: '...he tapped an app on the tiny screen. And he began typing a code...' That period should be a comma.  

The use of a period is a conscious decision here.  It has to do with the rhythm of prose.  Sometimes, when the going is tense and quick, I like to shorten sentences as a way to ramp up the tension.  Although “rules” would shun the use of a so-called sentence fragment, sometimes it's appropriate (and fun) to use them, especially at the end of action scenes.

15 - 'The initials of his long-dead father, Arthur Josiah Trent.' I think a (;) would be more appropriate than a period.  

A semicolon would not work, alas.  (Btw, I used a period after “father” for the same reasons as stated above, but a comma would have worked too, as you have written here).  A semicolon is a different kind of break; it separates two independent clauses, i.e., two clauses that could stand alone as sentences (each with a subject and verb).  The use of the semicolon in the previous sentence is correct, for example.  Semicolons are also used to separate lists whose items contain commas (such as “He took along his old, ripped-up jeans; his red socks; his barely used, shining-green baseball helmet; and a box of Band-Aids.”)

31 - 'That's why you become a Madrigal' Why I become a Madrigal? My grammar book says the second you use the word 'You', your story becomes second-person.  

Well, not exactly.  First, this is an example of “close third person” writing, where we are inside Ted’s head as he’s thinking.  The “you” is colloquial here; it doesn’t mean second-person “you,” but “you” as a substitute for “one.”  I could have written “That’s why one becomes a Madrigal,” but that would be stiff.  This is an example of the glorious flexibility of language.  (Grammar books generally don’t dig this deeply, unless they’re written by the amazing Marvin Terban!)

'H' - "Bats bats bats bats bats," *Gasp!* Cheyyenne! Don't you know there's supposed to be commas between words when you say them multiple times??? 

This also was done on purpose.  A comma indicates a pause.  Sometimes that pause is necessary for meaning, as in a list.  Here, Cheyenne is saying the words super-fast, in a mocking way.  She is not pausing between the words.  This is important to “hear,” because it occurs in dialog.  There are vast differences between, say, “Bats.  Bats.  Bats.  Bats.” and “Bats, bats, bats, bats” and “Bats bats bats bats.”  (She could have said “Batsbatsbatsbats,” but that’s harder to read!)

75 - 'She was talking to...what's his name? ...Tolliver.' I think it should be 'She was talking to - what's his name? - Tolliver.'   

An ellipsis ( ... ) indicates a pause in speech.  You use an ellipsis in dialog if a character has lost a train of thought or is pondering something.  This is exactly what I meant to convey here.  If this were a sentence of non-dialog prose, yes, the M-dashes would be correct, to indicate something inserted parenthetically into a sentence.

89 - "Yes, Saladin, you're here, bully for you." I feel like there should be a period between Here and Bully for you.  

Again, a rhythmic choice here.  I wanted Ian to say this as one long bored sentence, the whole thing coming out with comma-pauses.  It makes it clearer that he really doesn’t mean what he’s saying.  With the comma, the “bully for you” is less sincere, which is what I intended for our beloved Saladin-hating Ian! 
 
92-93 - I just wanna say how much I love this scene with Luna. She reminds me here so much of my own amazingly sweet Grandma, which just adds to her creepiness. BRAVO!!!  

Aw, thanks! 
 
93 - AND YOU REMEMBERED THE '*' IN *NSYNC!!! I had a book - er, I think it was a book - that forgot the '*' and I got really mad XD  

Yup.

95 - Ah...Italian. I speak very little, but it looks perfect to me :D  

Hope so!

105 - DAN!!! This page was so...creepy!!! It gave me chills! Great job!  

Thanks again!

107 - 'But she didn't not like the feeling' ...That's correct and all, but everytime I read it, my brain either cancels out 'Didn't' or 'not' so the message changes. Consider changing. Or, put the 'Not' in italics!  

I would not change this.  I meant for the reader to slow down and think about this.  Italics can be overused by writers.  Sometimes they are an indication that the writer doesn’t trust the reader, that the reader needs to know where the emphasis should be or they won’t get it.  (You see what I mean.)  I like to trust the reader.  Sometimes it’s good to just write what you mean.

119 - 'Dan nearly feel out of the car, laughing' There shouldn't be a comma there. The comma makes it 'Dan nearly fell out of the car plus he was laughing. No comma specifies that the reason he almost fell out was because he was laughing.  

Actually, if I used no comma, the sentence would not make sense.  “Dan nearly fell out of the taxi laughing” is incorrect because the “laughing” is a participle that modifies Dan’s action.  Another way to write is could have been this: “Laughing, Dan fell out of the taxi.”  Both are OK, both with commas.  The distinction as to whether or not Dan’s fall is caused by his laughing isn’t really that important because it’s pretty clearly implied.  (The use or non-use of a comma wouldn’t control that.  You could write, for example, “Dan was laughing so hard that he nearly fell out of the taxi” to make it ironclad clear, but I don’t think that’s necessary.)

122 - How dare Dan mock The Beatles???    

The nerve!

134 - "I'd say he misses his mom. But I don't think Isabel is missable.' NO PERIOD! Comma! Haha.  

Again, this was a style choice. The short sentence set off those words in a punchier way.  Because it was dialog, I was intending for the reader to “hear” the way Sinead was saying the words — with an end-of sentence pause, followed by a full-sentence punchline!

141 - 'eye to eye for the first time since the gauntlet' Shouldn't Gauntlet be capitalized? That was the name of the place, after all.  

”Gauntlet” is a noun, in this case a variation of “gantlet,” which means “a challenge.”

159 - See above...Gauntlet wasn't capitalized. 
160 - I love Ian's GPS LOL  

Thanks!

Vesper One's Message - Dissappointed in Vesper One...'Hello Cahills!' Hey, Vespy? It's ''Hello, Cahills!'  

Me too!  (And I didn’t write that part ... )

Again, thanks for taking the time and caring so deeply about the writing!

SIGNATURE backward is ERUTANGIS.  My signature is actually a signarel.

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I am once again completely blown away by your responses.  You had me laughing, crying, and gasping.  I think we have the best writing team around!  Here are my responses to your responses.  (Which, I guess, would make them reresponses.)

ActressExpert1
: Now, that made me laugh.  You have a twisted sense of humor, the very best kind.
 
 
DragonLucian15: This is a creative take on this idea!  I like the way you have dreamed up a solution to the hostage mystery and used Evan’s personality to get him into a very Evan-like fix. 
 
SapphireIvy5: Lost in the art museum bathroom!  I feel for poor Evan.  You packed a lot into this short piece.  I want to know who was on the other end of the deOssie phone! 
 
TornadoAuthor1: Very tense and exciting — with such high stakes!  My only suggestion would be to use paragraphs; it will open up the story and make it easier to read.  Otherwise, nice work! 
 
BlackWolf360:  First, I love “half-lidded enthusiasm” — so very Ian!  And what a clever and spooky ending.  I don’t think anyone has ever involved Saladin in such a creative way.  I give you a similar suggestion to the one above: please use paragraphs, especially with dialog.  You do need a new paragraph with each person’s lines of dialog, OK? 
 
InfiltratingClassified19:  Sooo sad!  And very very excitingly written.  You really have a flair for action.  And I hope Amy has a very good dentist. 
 
EaglePurple20:  This is definitely the most adorkably Evanescent entry of all.  Put a smile on my face. 
 
LightningCatacombs1: I like the popcorn motif.  This is very funny and unexpected. 
 
OrangeBalloon2: Wow!  Talk about a cliffhanger.  You had me hanging on every word.  Now what?? 
 
JetAgent17: Welcome!  These writing prompts are for you to include in stories of your own.  You’re welcome to join in! 
 
AquaDragon501: Ah, beautifully done.  I like the testament to the strength of Amy and Dan’s bond.  And I especially like the last line! 
 
AmazingYellow6: I like the simplicity and the tension.  Good work!  Just keep in mind your spelling, OK?  (“Know” should be “no”; “poliece” should be “police”; “immeadiatly” should be “immediately.”)  Also, if Amy was shrieking from the bottom of the stairs, she would go up the stairs, not down. 
 
CobraDark48: You really shift moods well here, from tension to humor back to tension again!  Just be sure to check your spelling and use paragraphs, to make your piece easier to read, OK? 
 
BoatFighting2: A nice, unexpected take on this prompt!  Just a couple of small things.  When Amy agrees to go with Even to the movies, his first reaction probably wouldn’t be “I’ll stay here,” because she has just agreed to go out, not stay still.  So you’d need to have Amy ask him to wait while she goes upstairs.  Also, at the end, I think Amy would actually go into the smoke to try to find Evan before calling 911, don’t you? 
 
BlackStorm65: This is full of mystery, with a skillfully spooky atmosphere.  And yes, I do indeed remember you, and thanks so much for giving me your wonderful book.  I expect to attend your author visit at Mrs. Nelson’s someday! 
 
WinningBook4:  Wow, that’s right out of an action-adventure film.  And poor Evan and Sinead!  This is fast-paced and exciting.  You could afford to add some more detail and also don’t be afraid to dig into how the characters are feeling.  (Also, check your spelling ... ) 
 
SecretAlliance10: Thanks for your heads-up, but as I wrote before, I’ve been so maxed out from the book tour — plane travel, car travel, school visits, bookstore visits, explorations, making videos, writing blog posts, answering guestbook posts, reading and commenting on hundreds of writing-prompt responses, managing to keep up with my own family — that I simply have no more bandwidth for reading stories, excerpts from novels, etc.  As you can imagine, a lot of people ask me to do this, and to be fair I would have to say yes to everyone, which would make my feeble brain implode! 
 
JadeJasmine7:  “he probably just went out to find a life” — ha!  That made me laugh.  And a very spooky ending.  Cookies or not! 
 
ReadingLavender9: Oh no, the demise of Evan!  I have a feeling this event has created a machine of vengeance named Amy! 
 
MysteryDragon60: This shows a good sense of point of view, and I like the way you allow the characters to take the time to think though what’s happening.  But I confess I don’t understand the ending.  What did Ian say to Amy to make her suddenly give up her shock at Dan’s statement? 
 
BlackStorm42: Whoa — this is positively Shakespearean in its tragic scope.  Who’s left to carry on the story? 
 
AngryEagle3: I like that you set this in an unusual but specific place (the café), and your Hamilton comment was right on the money!  Good, tense ending, too.  Just watch the spelling — and you meant “Vespers who had found their way,” not “have found.” 
 
AmethystButterfly167: This was scary and skillfully written.  I like the note (which was exactly right for V1), and your deep sense of Amy’s character through use of detail.  Good work. 
 
MonkeyTiger2:  Cliffhanger of all cliffhangers!  I’m breathless! 
 
PlatinumSwimming1: Ha!  Your writing is as clever as your card.  I enjoyed this. 
 
AmethystInfrared1: This is sophisticated writing.  I’d recommend taking more time to introduce the characters.  I wasn’t sure who the names were — CJ, Christie (same as CJ?), Annie.  I was able to piece them together by the end, but it really makes more sense to lay it all out earlier.  You have a rich sense of dramatic scope, and a deep imagination.  You don’t want the readers’ puzzlement over the identities to distract from the high quality of the writing.  I’m wondering if these are excerpts from a longer piece.   
 
DeviousDragon151:  You know how to build tension in a scene.  This is atmospheric and full of good detail.  I especially like “The sound of licking lips and then a cold, rough voice like steel.” — spooky! 
 
AquaButterfly926: I really like the humor, the light touch, and the surprise ending.  You have a good sense of surprise!  I would recommend using more detail.  I needed a clearer vision of what exactly was happening and where the characters were.  One moment Amy was shouting upstairs to Evan and the next moment she was beside him.  Also, she begins as “Amy” but then becomes “I.”   
 
AmberSaladin12:  Oh, I like this — Evan on a rogue mission.  An original take, for sure.  This really makes Evan into an important character! 
 
HorsePink30: Ha!  Flattered to be a character.  I always wanted to be in fiction.  This is fun, thanks!  (Just watch the spelling though ... remember if you can spell Lerangis, you can spell anythign.  I mean, anything.) 
 
VioletBemused2:  Paintball — yes!  I am glad you thought of this.  It’s refreshing.  I like the suspense, but do use paragraphs to make the dialog piece easier to read, OK? 
 
DolphinAgent59:  Very dramatic!  An alternate history to the Ian event in Book 3 — clever. 
 
AmberProud9:  Eeek.  Positively Edgar Allen Poe-ish!  This will keep me scared for the rest of the day. 
 
CovertSpecialist21:  Awww.  This brought a smile to me face. 
 
PonyAqua15: And I’m glad you did give it a try!  This was the first story making Evan into Vesper 1. Spooky. 
 
WolfLucian2:  Ah, a slice of life at the Cahill Command Center.  This one made me very hungry. 
 
ArrowStrong100: Well, this has everything — tension, emotion, a sense of humor (Dan’s “That reminds me of the first time you tried to wear makeup!” cracked me up), good characterization, a tight plot, and a neat cliffhanger.  You have my best wishes on what will be a glorious writing life. 
 
ButterflyActress33: Aha — the Vesper Evan!  I am detecting a trend.  This was spooky and full of suspense.  You take your time to get as much tension as possible, keeping the reader at the edge of his/her seat.  And I like that you dig in to the emotions of the characters.  Great work. 
 
SilverArt28: Uh-oh, bad bad Ian!  Things will be getting crowded in the hostage cell.  You’ve got me wondering what happens next! 
 
MetalDragon74: The first to tackle two prompts in one post!  These are brief but full of suspense. 
 
AgentBreeze32: Aha!  The suspense is killing me!  Hope Dan knows what he’s doing! 
 
DancingWolf5:  Good dramatic focus on the Wyomings here!  Scary scene.  See what happens when Cahills go off to Boston?  (And btw, the spelling is Cheyenne.) 
 
CatDecoding12:  Aw.  Cute scene. 
 
RedPuppy47:  Whoa — now that’s an unexpected plot twist!  Taking the 39 Clues into completely new territory! 
 
CapitalCelebrating1:  An appearance from Vesper One, but you won’t say who he is!  Sneaky.  And scary! 

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Posted at: 5:09 pm on May 15, 2012

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Your right, Peter, I'll try harder to really understand the character and figure out what they would do. THanks!!

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Whoops, as I posted, another scary entry slipped in, from TopazVivacious2, who introduced chloroform into Amy's life.  Poor Amy!

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Posted at: 5:19 pm on May 15, 2012

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I'm thirteen, and I want to be either a writer or an editor when I grow up get older :D
Thank you so much for looking at this!  I figured you'd have an explanation behind it all, but I just wanted to make sure :D
However I did find one that was indeed a true error, although since one of my friends borrowed the book, I can't remember the page number.  I remember it said 'The sound of a chain saw' or something like that...but chainsaw is one word.  And trust me, I would know.  I wrote a whole 'drabble' about a chainsaw.
Thanks, again!  It means a lot that you would take the time to respond :D  Like I said, I wanna be a writer when I get older. (Although I have a detective novel in the works that's going swimmingly!)  So it feels awesome to have a real author go over my grammar style and tell me what all I need to change!

Thanks,
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Peter Lerangis I LOVE YOU!!!  At first I was interested in 39 clues because rick riordan wrote one. Now I am a total fan!! The reason really is that you meet CHRIS D'LACEY!!! C'mon that's amazing!!!! Plus I have The Dead Of Night.     Hrrrr.Smiley

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OMG!!!!I SAW YOU AT BAM (books a million) on may 8!!!!!!!!! My name is Rachael and you might remember me!(girl with light brown hair talked about the 39 clues message board a lot...)

Rachael~

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knows secret of the ring

Wanted by Vespers

help me....

 

 

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YUMMY SEASONED WAFFLE FRIES!In Love

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@Peter thanks I'm still wondering about Jackson Hole.... if you could plz explain ?
I really was improvisin since I was rushing. Glad it made someone's day brighter 

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Thanks, SteelBone2!  Re the noun "chain saw": that spelling is correct according to the source used by most of the U.S. publishing industry, Webster's 11th New Collegiate Dictionary.  If you used it as a verb, it would be spelled "chainsaw," but the noun form is indeed "chain saw."  Best of luck with your detective novel.  With your passion for the language, I'm sure it will be a great success!  Many thanks for writing, and for taking the time to point out these various passages!

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LOL, reading the response to the typos was pretty cool. I'll definitely keep that in mind when writing ;)


Thanks! :) I was going for something tense and creepy. As I often do... But I just reread it and found four typos and a missing comma. -_-  Thanks for the response! :)

Ciao. Nice to meet you~ I love to draw, dance, write, and certainly read! It's my favorite past time~ Obviously I love 39 Clues or I wouldn't be here.

 

Janus for the win!

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Yet another American grammar difference. Over here it's 'Chainsaw'.

That's rubbish, rubbish! Where's the green frog?

~ Mark Hadlow

 

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EaglePurple20: You wondered why, on page 56 of The Dead of Night, Jake asked Casper and Cheyenne if they had a brother named Jackson Hole.  Casper and Cheyenne are the names of cities in the state of Wyoming.  So the names "Casper Wyoming" and "Cheyenne Wyoming" are kind of like having the names "Chicago Illinois" or "Dallas Texas."  Jake is mocking them, because Jackson Hole is the name of another city in Wyoming. 

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*Points to Red* See?  He agrees with me LOL
Thanks again, Peter!  I so didn't know that chain saw could be two words!  That'll come in handy later down the line...(My detective novel is creepy...you got a problem with that?  lol) 

~Ashley

 

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It can be chain saw, but chainsaw is more common. Chainsaw or chain saw can be used for anything, not just one for a noun and one for a verb. Where exaclty are you getting this information?

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Another EURO-AMERICAN difference in grammar.  Color is American and colour is European.

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*Points to Jason and Red* Hey, I like you guys XD

~Ashley 

 

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Ekat Crest

yo iam ekat i am smart iam a builder but iam not brave like a tomas iam not artistic like a janus iam not cunning and sharp like a lucian iam not a keeper of peace like a madrigal

but may i try

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Thanks, Peter! Though I just realized that one of Ian's thought is not in italic. Oops.

I have a couple of other stories on the MB, and if you want, you can check them out. Here is my first one:

http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/14393

I am fully aware that there are a couple of mistakes in my story. Again, it was my FIRST.   


Oh, and I have a question! Are you going to write anymore Cahills vs. Vespers books? 

Janus Crest~Vanessa~Janus Crest   

PS: I have a question! Are you going to write anymore Cahills vs. Vespers books?  
 

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Thank you so much Mr. Peter Lerangis! And think you for posting all these prompts! They are a lot of fun. :) 

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Peter, I'm Lauren and I'm SOOOO close to finishing my latest and possibly my LONGEST novel so far, it's over 138, 000 words and over 500 pages of A4 pages. It's the first novel of my second series and once I finish it, I'm going to submit the manuscript. Below are links to sneak peeks of the novel...could you PRETTY PLEASE read them and tell me what you think on here. Now you have to remember that they are unedited versions, but I have edited the entire manuscript after I posted them. So I have fixed any grammer mistakes.

http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/13140






http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/13947









http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/17659


New: http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/22376              
   


  

PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376             

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OMG PLEASE REPLY TO THE FIRST MESSAGE I PUT ON THIS!!!!!! THE ONE ABOUT BAM(books a million) ON MAY 8, 2012!!!!!!I WAS THE GIRL LIGHT BROWN HAIR TALKED ABOUT 39 CLUES A LOT!!!! PLEASE RESPOND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Then the world blew up and they all died. THE END.


Mines definately the best.

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@Peter Aah. I see. Cuz a person interpreted as a code for a bad word or something to throw at them. Thanks for clearing that up...I was so confused...I have to brush up on my history. Back to the textbooks :C.. :P....do u hv book recommendations? 

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@FireDragon113: Totally, the BEST story anyone could have written. XD.

Janus Crest~Vanessa~Janus Crest

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Then the world blew up and they all died via penguin. THE END.

I win, Jason :P

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Once again, FD, I am amazed by your optimism.

That's rubbish, rubbish! Where's the green frog?

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Then the world blew up and they almost died. But hope was not all lost, for they had... icecream! Wait, never mind. Dan ate it all. THE END.

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FireDragon113 ~ LOL. A revised version :D

Ciao. Nice to meet you~ I love to draw, dance, write, and certainly read! It's my favorite past time~ Obviously I love 39 Clues or I wouldn't be here.

 

Janus for the win!

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Then the world blew up and they almost died. But hope was not all lost, for they had... ice cream! Wait, never mind. Dan ate it all.  Then out of the blue, Darth vader showed up and used The Force to get some cool Force Ice Cream.  After they ate it, Darth Vader revealed that he is actually a penguin. THE END.

*Peter Lerangis stares at Ashley and Jason like they've gone nuts*
*Ashley walks away silently*

~Ashley  

 

 

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Mr. Peter Lerangis,

I have a question: When you first sit down to write a story what do you do first? And what do you do after that? I have heard people say that when they are writing a story they write a rough draft at some point. Do you do that, and if you do, could you give me an example of one?

Thank you so much for taking the time to post on the MB! I think it's awesome and I'm sure many others agree. :)

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Amy looked down to see Even and Dan fighting over...A penguin? No, A penguin with a snow cone. Then When they all looked up at Amys enraged face the world blew up. THE END.

Eat that,
Grace

 

 

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Thanks Peter! I always love it when I make people smile!

 

MyKala

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To sacrifice and bleed,

For hungry souls, I spend my life

To meet their every need.

-Bryan Davis, An Oracle's Call

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Thank you. Ian is one of my favorite characters and I try to represent him [and the others] correctly.
As for Saladin, he seems smart enough to pull that. The Cahill Cat. [Or Vesper Cat, there have been speculations...]
I'll be sure to do that. Thanks for pointing it out.
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In the arms of the water again it will lie

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Ooops! I didn't realise you did reply to me on this post before I posted the links, sorry :(

PLEASE READ AND REVIEW THESE! show/12433 (summaires) show/13140 show/13947 show/17659 show/22376             

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I just realzed; I'm having a cyber-duel with Peter Lerangis on how the word 'chainsaw' is spelled.

~Ashley 

 

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"Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Then the world blew up and they almost died. But hope was not all lost, for they had... ice cream! Wait, never mind. Dan ate it all.  Then out of the blue, Darth vader showed up and used The Force to get some cool Force Ice Cream.  After they ate it, Darth Vader revealed that he is actually a penguin and I stole all his chocolate and shoved a yogurt in his face and he died. THE END.

I win!
XDXDXD

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“Evan!” Amy Cahill shrieked from the bottom of the stairs. She waited a moment, but there was no answer. Amy looked down to see Even and Dan fighting over...A penguin? No, A penguin with a snow cone. The penguin grinned and took of its head tv styled. OMG it was...Ian Kabra??? He got down on one knee, holding a ring pop. Then When he looked up at Amys enraged face the world blew up. THE END.

Beat this...

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That's rubbish, rubbish! Where's the green frog?

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