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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Ok so I decided to start this earlier because I got so bored!!! ;)
Agian it's another Percy Jackson and Heroes of Olympus story.
If you didn't read my first part to this you might want to read that one first. "TO BE IN MY STORY BE THE FIST TO POST!" under my posts.
Here are the people already in this one:
-Rebecca
-Lily
-Joey
-Elis
-Alex
-Brenden
-Luna
-Grace
-Kayla
-Beth
So I need FIVE more people. First five people will be in it.
Here's the App.
Name:
Age:
Boy or Girl:
Looks:
Personality:
Parent:
Greek or Roman(Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter) And how long have you been there:
Abilities:
Weapons:
Other:
Here's MINE:
Name: Mariana
Age: 15
Boy or Girl: Girl
Looks: Darkbrown hair, darkbrown eyes, tan colored skin, hieght: 5'1, slim build, white smile
Personality: "go with the flow" kind of person, easy going, friendly, clever
Parent: Apollo
Greek(Camp Half Blood) or Roman(Camp Jupiter) And how long have you been there: Greek; Camp Half Blood; 4 years
Abilities: heal people, magically put peolpe into a deep sleep by singing to them, plays music.
Weapons: Hair clip that can turn into an archery bow, and a quiver of arrows
Other: Summer camper most of the time.
Here are the kind of Characters I need: (just put it with your App.)
A newcomer, (like someone who is undetermined, and new)
A Hunter of Artimis
Another traiter (but we don't think you are, and I don't mean this in a mean way, you like forced to)
I'll post the first chapter once people sign up!
-Mariana, your author
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Posted at: 3:53 pm on April 20, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Yeah everyone who's in the story so far can do their own POV. It would mean alot if you could do this. I have to go study now (for Spanish and Writing) ugh. Then I have to study History, Biology, Literature, and Alegebra. ARGH!!!!! I be back on Thursday.
-Mariana
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Posted at: 8:50 am on May 19, 2012
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Fantastico!!! Good luck on your tests!
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A Victory without Danger
Is a Triumph without Glory -
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Posted at: 8:07 pm on May 19, 2012
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See you Thursday then.
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“Older Siblings were born first so that they can protect the little ones that come after”
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Posted at: 8:21 am on May 20, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
O_O JadeJasmine is you name Maja Quinn? Because someone in my class had a 104f fever?
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Posted at: 2:20 pm on May 20, 2012
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Good post!
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Posted at: 1:50 am on May 21, 2012
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DolphinAmethyst: Uh, no, my name is Mariana. Just sayin'. But yeah, I'm 15, if that clears it up for you.
@ Everyone else: I survived my first day of exams, now for 3 more days. *ugh* So can you guys do your POV's. PLEASE!
-Mariana
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Posted at: 12:01 pm on May 21, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Tatum's POV
Capture the flag. I have WAY better stuff to do than this game. I sat at the back of the crowd, who were all complaining about the game. I sat thinking. This is all to strange. That Mariana girl is getting on my nerves. I was told that someone would come, someone who would...NO I say to myself be patient, wait for the right time.If I'm going to have my revenge, then I'll need to be careful. If I want the plan to proceed...Then something happens up front where Chiron is trying to calm everyone. That Eliana was claimed. she's Athena's daughter. "Oh, boy." I said out loud "This is not going as planned." Then I stomped back to camp.
I'm sorry it's short, but it's a POV.
Cea-Cea
Capture the flag. I have WAY better stuff to do than this game. I sat at the back of the crowd, who were all complaining about the game. I sat thinking. This is all to strange. That Mariana girl is getting on my nerves. I was told that someone would come, someone who would...NO I say to myself be patient, wait for the right time.If I'm going to have my revenge, then I'll need to be careful. If I want the plan to proceed...Then something happens up front where Chiron is trying to calm everyone. That Eliana was claimed. she's Athena's daughter. "Oh, boy." I said out loud "This is not going as planned." Then I stomped back to camp.
I'm sorry it's short, but it's a POV.
Cea-Cea
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 2:47 pm on May 21, 2012
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! Yoo Hoo!!!!! I am ALL DONE WITH SCHOOL!!!!! Summer vacation here I come!!!!!!! So happy!!!
I am finnally done with freshman year!!! I feel like celebrating! CAKE AND ICECREAM FOR ALL!!!
Yum, that was good! I'll write the story all little later, but right now I have to go run around the house a couple times out of excitment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs down the street and jumps into the nieghborhood pool* no, seroiusly, that's were I'm going right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-MARIANA
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Posted at: 10:26 am on May 24, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
OH congratz!!! Did you like my POV?
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 3:06 pm on May 24, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
That was fun! Yeah, I actually went to the pool!!
Anyway, Thank Cea-Cea. And yeah!! I loved your characters post!!! It's ok if it was short, it just shows what your character is like. Thanks!
Gotta go! I'll post in a few minutes!
-Mariana
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Posted at: 4:42 pm on May 24, 2012
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LUCKY!!!!!!!! I, at the end of the year, have to be sick due to allergies. THERE IS A REASON I LIKE WINTER!!!!!!! Yeah, I have heavy duty allergies. I just had a field trip where we got to do archery, rock climbing and team building exercises... I hacked up quite a lot of mucus.
Lets just say I hate cottonwood, pollen, dust, mold, etc.
Lets just say I hate cottonwood, pollen, dust, mold, etc.
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A Victory without Danger
Is a Triumph without Glory -
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Posted at: 10:29 pm on May 24, 2012
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*sigh* you guys are so lucky! I'm going back to school next week. Well... My summer started on Christmas break so I guess it's not so bad... CONTINUE!!!!
~Beth
A Writer~ I believe words spur action
A Reader~I believe the words unspoken are the most important
A Dreamer~ I believe the higher your goals the higher your star will rise
Posted at: 11:58 pm on May 24, 2012
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We don't get out until the 8th! But that is not so long! This week I think tom. I will be at a girl scout thing. I'm not sure.
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Posted at: 8:07 am on May 25, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Well I have good news and bad. The Good news: My summer vacations finally here, so I'll be able to write more for 3 months. Bad news: I'm leaving tommorow to go all the way to Michigan for family bussiness. And we are driving the whole way there!!! Across the country, and two days sitting next to my brother in the car!!! What did I do to deserve that?!?! And I won't always have internet, so please be patient. I'll be gone for six days!! :( Just when I thought I could write again. Oh well, I least I'll "see the country".
I have to make this quick today and PLEASE EVERYONE DO THEIR POV AFTER THIS!!!!!
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A nighmare answers my question:
Well, after Eliana was claimed, Luna and Annabeth lead them to the Athena cabin. Everyone congradualted her and stuff, and then went to their cabins for the night.
I went to cabin 7, Apollo, and flopped right onto my bed exhausted.
But somthing kept bothering me, Beth's dream. But little did I know that I was about to have dream, no nightmare, of my own.
It started in a dark place. I couldn't really see anything, only the monsters quarding the entrance. And someone else, Grace.
She was pacing the room in front of three figures. "Your lucky I didn't find your other friends. But then again, I'm am glad I found such useful people." I saw who she was talking to. Elisha, Kayla, and Lily. I tried to call out to them, but found I had no voice. They were tied up and couldn't move.
"Lily," Grace started out taling in a sweet voice, but then turned cruel, "Did you honestly think that Romans and Greeks could work together?"
"We already did, didn't we?" Lily replied sarcasticly. Grace scoffed.
"Kayla, a Roman but goes to a Greek camp, it's a real shame that you sided with them." Grace told her.
"What does it matter to you. You never come to camp anyway, You help Gaea!" Kayla screamed.
"Watch what you say," Grace warned,"Who knows what might happen."
She walked over to Elisha, "And my half-sister, you of all people, I thought, would join me."
"You don't deserve to be called that. And I would never become a traitor like you!" Elish said coldly.
"But why? You would give up such an honor and power like this?"
"HONOR!?!?" Elisha shouted, "You are a slave to Gaea! That's NOT the honor I would like. You disgrace us all, You're a traitor. A monster!"
Grace pionted her swrod at Elisha's throat, but she showed no fear.
"Watch your tongue. You and your friends destroyed that army, but I have a new plan. And this time you won't stop us. I have even more help than before"
"Then why keep us here?" Kayla asked.
"Because," Grace said, "You are still valuable to our cause."
And then Grace looked right into my eyes.
I woke up with a start. Sweat drenched my face. It was true, an Grace was starting somthing else. And she had more help? This wasn't good. I had to do somthing, and I started thinking of a plan.
The only thing I could think of that would stop her, is to rescue the three of them. Chiron would never let me go. But if I don't tell him, I could just go on my own. I began packing, taking only necesary things. My bow and arrows, hunting knive, water bottle, money, jacket, and some first aid supplies. I quickly got dressed in t-shirt, jeans, and boots. I strapped my quiver of arrows on my back and had my bow in hand. I slung the duffle bag over my shoulder and headed out.
It was still dark outside, which was good, no one would see me. We were never to leave the cabins at night, but this was an emergency. I qiuetly ran through camp and into the woods. I was right at the magic boundaries when someone pushed me to the ground.
"Hey! wh-" I yelled but the person covered my mouth. Luna. She had heard a noise that was footsteps. We both stood up and readied our weapons. Joey, Alex, and Brenden stepped out of the bushes. Rebecca came right behind us. They looked surprise to see us all here. They had bags at their side too.
"What are you all doing here?" Alex asked.
"I was just going to ask that" said Luna.
"Well, I'm here because-" Joey started.
"A dream." I blurted out. Everyone gasped.
"You too?" Rebecca said. All heads nodded. We all had the same intention. To save Elisha, Lily, and Kayla.
"So I guess we're all going on another quest again?" Brenden asked.
"Yup" I said.
"What about Chiron, he'll definatly know somtihngs wrong when we're ALL gone." Alex said
"Don't worry," said Luna, "I told Elisha to cover for me as best she could. As soon as she knows we all are gone, she'll make somthing up"
"We better hurry then." Joey said, "Times running out, Grace is starting to form her revenge."
"Why, what do you mean?" I asked. He pointed to a group of monsters on top of the hill, gaurding our way out.
"Let's go!" And we all ran the other way, hoping the monsters wouldn't see us. We all were on a quest again, but this time, We were doing it to help a friend and stop an enemy.
-Mariana
P.S. EVREYONE PLEASE DO YOUR POV!!!!!!
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Posted at: 10:04 am on May 25, 2012
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AWESOME!!! Have fun on your trip!
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 11:41 am on May 25, 2012
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I'll help with the POVs, because you asked. I still can't belive that you got out so early.
James's POV
It was late at night, and I still couldn't sleep. I tried to rest, yet none came. I did the only thing that calmed me down.
James's POV
It was late at night, and I still couldn't sleep. I tried to rest, yet none came. I did the only thing that calmed me down.
James: Lucian Luitenant
A Victory without Danger
Is a Triumph without Glory -
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Posted at: 1:43 pm on May 25, 2012
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Aww! I wish I lived in Cleveland! Your the state right above me! Why couldn't you come to Ohio? That would be awesome!
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Posted at: 3:39 pm on May 25, 2012
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Oh yeah, am I Hunter of Artemis? Please reply soon!
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Posted at: 3:51 pm on May 25, 2012
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Nice chapter! Have a nice trip! I'll continue off of it.
James's POV
Right after Eliana got claimed, we all had to go to sleep. I couldn't at all. I just couldn't calm down. The only thing that calmed me down was swordfighting, and that meant I had to sneak out, which gets you nowhere except trouble. That has to one of the reasons why I snuck out of my cabin. I grabbed my sword and my weapons. I then headed out to the arena. Once I got there, I went to work. I hacked, slashed, sliced, and cut. It was bliss. Right when I was about to strike, I heard voices. It was Mariana, Brenden, Joey, Alex, and Rebecca! They had to be going on a quest. Without me! I went over to Cabin 6. I rapped on the door.
"Hey Eli, Mariana is sneaking out to go on a quest!"
Eliana stumbled out. "What?! She sneaks out to go on a quest and doesn't invite me? We are going."
We follow Mariana past the camp borders. I sneak up on Mariana and tap her on the shoulder.
"Going somewhere," I say with mischeif in my eye.
Alex said, "James! How do you know we were out?!
" I have my ways. Now, we are going on the quest."
Mariana said, " Okay, but sit down. This may take a while."
James's POV
Right after Eliana got claimed, we all had to go to sleep. I couldn't at all. I just couldn't calm down. The only thing that calmed me down was swordfighting, and that meant I had to sneak out, which gets you nowhere except trouble. That has to one of the reasons why I snuck out of my cabin. I grabbed my sword and my weapons. I then headed out to the arena. Once I got there, I went to work. I hacked, slashed, sliced, and cut. It was bliss. Right when I was about to strike, I heard voices. It was Mariana, Brenden, Joey, Alex, and Rebecca! They had to be going on a quest. Without me! I went over to Cabin 6. I rapped on the door.
"Hey Eli, Mariana is sneaking out to go on a quest!"
Eliana stumbled out. "What?! She sneaks out to go on a quest and doesn't invite me? We are going."
We follow Mariana past the camp borders. I sneak up on Mariana and tap her on the shoulder.
"Going somewhere," I say with mischeif in my eye.
Alex said, "James! How do you know we were out?!
" I have my ways. Now, we are going on the quest."
Mariana said, " Okay, but sit down. This may take a while."
James: Lucian Luitenant
A Victory without Danger
Is a Triumph without Glory -
Pierre Corneille
Posted at: 5:22 pm on May 25, 2012
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Please go to this: show/20431. We still need to talk about it.
Please go to this: show/20431. We still need to talk about it.
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Rebecca's POV:
The worst dream I have had besides the other dream of me getting tortured to eat, seaweed. I packed up a duffle bag with clothes, money, drachmas, a pocket knive, and I grabbed my travel sized tent. I got dressed in a tank top with my jacket, shorts, and my converse. I was the only one in my room, so I couldn't awaken anyone. I grabbed my sunglasses and then headed out. I walked slowly, but my feet were tired so I lazily glided from the ground. Then I heard some voices and started to run in the same direction. All of us were standing there surprised to see all of us. I wasn't that surprised. Half-bloods can share the same dreams. Like one time, I was camping with Thalia and we shared a tent, and we had a dream that had chocolate cake, so we both started gnawing at eachothers arm! We ran to where the monsters were, but trust me, we are going to be in big monster trouble.
The worst dream I have had besides the other dream of me getting tortured to eat, seaweed. I packed up a duffle bag with clothes, money, drachmas, a pocket knive, and I grabbed my travel sized tent. I got dressed in a tank top with my jacket, shorts, and my converse. I was the only one in my room, so I couldn't awaken anyone. I grabbed my sunglasses and then headed out. I walked slowly, but my feet were tired so I lazily glided from the ground. Then I heard some voices and started to run in the same direction. All of us were standing there surprised to see all of us. I wasn't that surprised. Half-bloods can share the same dreams. Like one time, I was camping with Thalia and we shared a tent, and we had a dream that had chocolate cake, so we both started gnawing at eachothers arm! We ran to where the monsters were, but trust me, we are going to be in big monster trouble.
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Posted at: 9:08 am on May 27, 2012
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Lucy's POV
I had a feeling someone was going to sneak out of camp. I had no idea why but I used my gift to appear at the camp border. When I appeared there Mariana, Brenden,Joey,Alex,Rebecca,the new girl I think her name is Eliana, and James were all sitting on a log. "What are you doing here you should be at your cabin sleeping!"I said frustrated because I like to follow the rules most of the time. "Oh, I think I should ask you the same."James said. "I had a feeling that someone was going to sneak out of and it appears I was right. Now tell me why your out here."I said sternly. "Ok I'll tell you. Some friends have been kidnapped by the woman we fought last year. Grace. Were going to save them from her."Mariana said. "You really think you can take on Grace by yourself? Really do you even now were they are? Have you stuided were her minions are and plan an attack? I said thinking that if they didn't know this they wouldn't stand a chance. "Well we don't know exactly where there at but we think we have a good idea where there at."Mariana said. "But even if you go to where there at how are you going to fight her helpers? She probably has a lot of monsters pertecting her."I said in disbelievf that they thought they could do it on there own. "We can do it."she said almost as stern as me. "Ok if your going to do this I'll help but you have to follow a plan that I know will work." "What is the plan?"Eliana asked. "I'll take you where she is with this gift I have ok. If where seen then I quickly get you and your friends back to camp." "It's a good plan but this gift you have is it how you can appear everywhere?"Mariana asked. "I have lots of gifts but we can get your friends back all you have to do is grab my arm."I replyed. I held out my arms. They all grabbed it. In a moment we where where Mariana friends were. We were surrounded by monsters with there swords at our throats
I had a feeling someone was going to sneak out of camp. I had no idea why but I used my gift to appear at the camp border. When I appeared there Mariana, Brenden,Joey,Alex,Rebecca,the new girl I think her name is Eliana, and James were all sitting on a log. "What are you doing here you should be at your cabin sleeping!"I said frustrated because I like to follow the rules most of the time. "Oh, I think I should ask you the same."James said. "I had a feeling that someone was going to sneak out of and it appears I was right. Now tell me why your out here."I said sternly. "Ok I'll tell you. Some friends have been kidnapped by the woman we fought last year. Grace. Were going to save them from her."Mariana said. "You really think you can take on Grace by yourself? Really do you even now were they are? Have you stuided were her minions are and plan an attack? I said thinking that if they didn't know this they wouldn't stand a chance. "Well we don't know exactly where there at but we think we have a good idea where there at."Mariana said. "But even if you go to where there at how are you going to fight her helpers? She probably has a lot of monsters pertecting her."I said in disbelievf that they thought they could do it on there own. "We can do it."she said almost as stern as me. "Ok if your going to do this I'll help but you have to follow a plan that I know will work." "What is the plan?"Eliana asked. "I'll take you where she is with this gift I have ok. If where seen then I quickly get you and your friends back to camp." "It's a good plan but this gift you have is it how you can appear everywhere?"Mariana asked. "I have lots of gifts but we can get your friends back all you have to do is grab my arm."I replyed. I held out my arms. They all grabbed it. In a moment we where where Mariana friends were. We were surrounded by monsters with there swords at our throats
Just as in ancient times our history is written in the stars and so be it for the Future.
Posted at: 4:08 pm on May 27, 2012
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I am finally in Michigan!! Oh and Rebecca, I went through Ohio. And I accually live in Florida. I'm in the hotal room right now and only have a few minutes left!
Great work on the POV's!
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Luna's POV:
As Annabeth and I took Eliana our new half-sister to the Athena Cabin, I came up with an idea that would blow her mind away.
"Hey Annabeth," I said. "Why don't you go to the Cabin, I would like to show Eliana something for a moment."
Annabeth laughed, "Okay, just make sure you two don't get in trouble or anything and I'm serious about that too."
I nodded my head furiously and grabbed Eliana's hand. From behind I heard Annabeth's footsteps walking towards the Athena's Cabin.
"Where are we going?" Eliana asked.
"I'm taking you to a place where no one usually finds me," I said. "Plus I think you'll simply love it."
We walked for only a few minutes until we arrived at my favorite hiding place. To put it simple, it was located in the woods, surrounded by tree nymphs, and sometimes nymphs of all kinds. When I walked up, a tree nymph named Juniper greeted me.
"Hi Luna," she said. "Whose your new friend?"
"Her name is Eliana," I said. "I'm just taking her to see the animals here."
I turned around to find Eliana waving, I turned back to Juniper and asked her if it was okay for Eliana to go. Juniper being my friend nodded her head, I turned and waved Eliana to come. When we walked through a labyrinth of trees we finally started to walk through some vines that concealed my favorite spot.
"I heard from Mariana that you can talk to animals," I said.
"Um, yeah," she said sounding uncomfortable.
As we came to the last wave of vines, Juniper and I held the vines like a curtian and I said, "Well, welcome to my paradise."
The vine of curtians were pulled back and animals of various kinds were there. Bunnies, mice, foxes, dingos, deers, bears, jaguars, and many others. Eliana stood there in awe, I looked at her and smiled, "Well I'll introduce you to my 'other' family."
I showed Eliana around the premises of the place, I could tell she was excited for meeting some of the animals.
"Glaucus," I called.
Gliding down towards my shoulder was my owl friend Glaucus which means owl in Greek. He landed gracefully on my shoulders and somewhat bowed towards Mariana.
"Ah another Γητευτής των ζÏŽων," Glaucus said. "It is nice to meet you, as you know from Luna my name is Glaucus which means owl in Greek." Eliana looked puzzled, she looked at me and asked, "What does Gi̱tef̱tí̱s to̱n zó̱o̱n mean?"
"It means 'Animal Charmer' in Greek," Juniper said.
I nodded my head, "Glaucus how is little Lu doing?"
"She is doing fine, she is now watching the hatchlings," Glaucus said. "I must go, Lu needs me to watch them now."
Glaucus flew away, I waved him good-bye, Juniper went back outside so no one would where we are, and Eliana wandered around the place talking to the animals.
I knew from the moment I saw her, she was an Animal Charmer like me; but the one thing I don't like is how can she breath underwater. Poseidon and Athena still hate each other from the claiming of Athens; I need to watch this one carefully, but right now I'll just relax.
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As Annabeth and I took Eliana our new half-sister to the Athena Cabin, I came up with an idea that would blow her mind away.
"Hey Annabeth," I said. "Why don't you go to the Cabin, I would like to show Eliana something for a moment."
Annabeth laughed, "Okay, just make sure you two don't get in trouble or anything and I'm serious about that too."
I nodded my head furiously and grabbed Eliana's hand. From behind I heard Annabeth's footsteps walking towards the Athena's Cabin.
"Where are we going?" Eliana asked.
"I'm taking you to a place where no one usually finds me," I said. "Plus I think you'll simply love it."
We walked for only a few minutes until we arrived at my favorite hiding place. To put it simple, it was located in the woods, surrounded by tree nymphs, and sometimes nymphs of all kinds. When I walked up, a tree nymph named Juniper greeted me.
"Hi Luna," she said. "Whose your new friend?"
"Her name is Eliana," I said. "I'm just taking her to see the animals here."
I turned around to find Eliana waving, I turned back to Juniper and asked her if it was okay for Eliana to go. Juniper being my friend nodded her head, I turned and waved Eliana to come. When we walked through a labyrinth of trees we finally started to walk through some vines that concealed my favorite spot.
"I heard from Mariana that you can talk to animals," I said.
"Um, yeah," she said sounding uncomfortable.
As we came to the last wave of vines, Juniper and I held the vines like a curtian and I said, "Well, welcome to my paradise."
The vine of curtians were pulled back and animals of various kinds were there. Bunnies, mice, foxes, dingos, deers, bears, jaguars, and many others. Eliana stood there in awe, I looked at her and smiled, "Well I'll introduce you to my 'other' family."
I showed Eliana around the premises of the place, I could tell she was excited for meeting some of the animals.
"Glaucus," I called.
Gliding down towards my shoulder was my owl friend Glaucus which means owl in Greek. He landed gracefully on my shoulders and somewhat bowed towards Mariana.
"Ah another Γητευτής των ζÏŽων," Glaucus said. "It is nice to meet you, as you know from Luna my name is Glaucus which means owl in Greek." Eliana looked puzzled, she looked at me and asked, "What does Gi̱tef̱tí̱s to̱n zó̱o̱n mean?"
"It means 'Animal Charmer' in Greek," Juniper said.
I nodded my head, "Glaucus how is little Lu doing?"
"She is doing fine, she is now watching the hatchlings," Glaucus said. "I must go, Lu needs me to watch them now."
Glaucus flew away, I waved him good-bye, Juniper went back outside so no one would where we are, and Eliana wandered around the place talking to the animals.
I knew from the moment I saw her, she was an Animal Charmer like me; but the one thing I don't like is how can she breath underwater. Poseidon and Athena still hate each other from the claiming of Athens; I need to watch this one carefully, but right now I'll just relax.
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'Insanity it's like floating on air
Psychopathy a carefree life
Insanity an illusion that cannot end
Captivity unable to run away'
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Thanks everyone who did their POVs!!! I am still here in Michigan. I saw alot of my family yesterday, and 50 people I had no idea who they were!! But apperantly, Im related to them.
Some awkward moments with some "relatives":
-One guy comes up to me, "Ah, You're Billy's kid!" and gives me a huge wet kiss! Eww!!!!
-One woman comes up from behind me and just feels my hair
-My cousin keeps patting me on the head like I'm 4.
Anyway... could someone add the people who were not in hte story yet? Please, cuz they have been waiting a while!!!!! Thank you, and please forgive me.
-Mariana
Some awkward moments with some "relatives":
-One guy comes up to me, "Ah, You're Billy's kid!" and gives me a huge wet kiss! Eww!!!!
-One woman comes up from behind me and just feels my hair
-My cousin keeps patting me on the head like I'm 4.
Anyway... could someone add the people who were not in hte story yet? Please, cuz they have been waiting a while!!!!! Thank you, and please forgive me.
-Mariana
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Dude, your family is crazier than mine. One is a 15 year old geek who is 5'3, his brother who is just a weirdo, and a cousin and aunt who live in the driveway of my grandma's because she can't hold a house. And, I love Florida! I stayed at the Nick hotel! It was awesome!
Comin Back Baby, Comin Back.
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Hey guys sorry but now I'm back I'll read all the POVs I missed.
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Okay so Eli and I are best friends in real life, and she can't post her part right now, so she asked me to do it. So this is really CobraAzure40/Eliana's pov... I'm just her little messenger pigeon!!!
Eliana's Pov
Yesterday~
When Annabeth and Luna were taking me to our cabin, to tell you the truth, I was getting really excited! There were so many different mythical creatures here. All of the ones that I had only read about! I was asking them so many questions, then Luna all of a sudden took me to the most magical place in the world. And I had to be given permission from a tree nymph to go in! How freaking amazing is that?
When we went through the vines, my breath was snatched away……any animal I could think of was there! Apparently I was taken there because Mariana had told Luna that I could talk to animals, and she thought I would like it.
And after she introduced me to Glaucus, I looked at her, “You are an animal charmer? So that is what I am too?” I asked.
She nodded, “Yup, look around if you want!”
I squealed, and hugged her, “Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!”
She laughed, “No problem, over here is Ashtur, a puma. I think you might like him.” She told me walking over to the most beautiful black puma I had ever seen. I stared wide eyed at him, knelt to the ground.
He started purring, “Hello my dear.” I giggled, “Hello Ashtur.” To tell you the truth I couldn’t think of anything to say, here was a beautiful animal and I was shell shocked!
He gave a rumbling laugh, “Don’t worry, come with me.” And he led me over to where Cornilulius the jackrabbit was, and so many other amazing creatures. I looked back at Luna and she was watching me with a gentle smile, I grinned at her.
“Go on! Have fun.” She told me. Everywhere I walked it felt like there was joy radiating from these beautiful creatures, I talked to so many!
Then not paying attention to where I was going I nearly walked into a tree, “Whoops, sorry about that!” I was about to go round, when I noticed that the darling was crying, a tree nymph to be exact, I frowned, “What's the matter?”
She sniffed and nodded her head towards the monkey in her branches holding a flower wreath in his hands and chattering. “Kimku stole my flower wreath! And he won’t give it back.” I smiled at her, she was quite beautiful, she was a willow. No wonder, I wish I was a beautiful as she is…….oh well.
“I’ll get it back for you.” I walked over under the monkey, “Kimku, please give back-“I looked over at the nymph; “What is your name?”
“Sympia”
“Pretty name, anyway," I started, turning back to Kimku, "Please give it back?” He looked at me like I was crazy. Then I thought of something, digging around in my jeans pocket I found an earring that I hadn’t been able to find the match for. And held it up, “I’ll give you this if you give her back her wreath!”
He thought about it for a while…..and then jumped down from the tree, “Only if you give it to me first.” He bargained, I thought about it, then nodded, gave him the earring, and surprisingly he gave me back the wreath!
I smiled with my mouth closed, and said, “Thank you very much kind sir.” With a bow, then gave Sympia back her wreath.
She smiled shyly, “No, you take it. You have proved yourself to be worthy, instead of getting mad for my sake, you made peace.” I thanked her and placed it on my head.
Luna walked over, “It's time to go,” I said goodbye to Ashtur, and he promised to see me later. And as we were walking back to our cabin, she explained to me, “That was a process, they always do that to newbies, when I first came, and they did that to me too. Except I gave him a piece of gum, the only thing I had….and he swallowed it.”
I laughed, and then she joined in, “That was one of the best things I have ever seen in my life! Thank you so much for taking me Luna.” I said as I gave her a hug.
“Of course, we stick together. You can go back if you want……” She looked at my face, then gave a chuckle, “Of course you do….” And she went on to show me where I would sleep. As soon as I dropped into my bunk I fell fast asleep.
Today~
Running through the nights incidents in my head I made up a list; I had been woken up by James, in the middle of the NIGHT nonetheless, told that I was going to go on a mission, (freaky right? In a good way), I was told the details, and the fact that Mariana, Brenden, Rebecca, Joey, and Alex, all had a dream, So I tried to listen, and calculate everything in my head. At least I wasn’t the only one who hadn’t had the dream, James didn’t dreamt it either.
I shook my head, sometimes in the past few days I almost felt like Mariana was slipping away from me, we hadn’t talked in a while. And I was surprised that she didn’t let me in on the dream……or the mission. But I threw away the thought, everything was fine. They were going to go and take on this woman called Grace, who had apparently attacked everybody last summer…….. some of their friends had been kidnapped too. I looked up to the sky and gave a silent prayer of thanks that James had taken the time to wake me up.
After everybody had explained everything, one more person had joined us. A girl named Lucy had a feeling that we were at the border of the camp, and turns out she has this teleporting gift that she can take herself to another place if she just focuses on it. To tell you the truth I wasn’t that surprised, I was Athena’s daughter after all!
I shook myself back to the present time, just as Lucy was saying, “Everybody grab on to each other.” We all took hold of one another’s arms, I found myself holding on to Mariana and James’ hands.
I looked at Mariana, she smiled, “Don’t worry, it’ll be fine. Just don’t rush into battle once we get there, listen. ”
I laughed, “I am not scared, I am freaking out………and I can handle myself. Don’t worry.” She squeezed my hand and murmured something to Alex.
I told James, “Thanks, for you know, not leaving me behind.”
He nodded, “No problem, it wouldn’t be the same if you weren’t here. We all need to stick together.” I was just about to ask him why he said that when…..WHOOSH!
I blinked. the next thing I saw was a circle of monsters all around us, with swords at our throats. I gulped, felt a split second of fear, NO. FAGH DO BUTT BOGADH ANOIS Eli! (Which is Irish for get your butt moving now) looked at everyone else, they were standing still and strangely looking up. I was about to ask why we weren’t charging when I felt breath on my head, I sniffed. And winced, I smelt rancidness, moldiness, and disgustingness to tell you the truth. I slowly looked up, and gasped! I saw the most beautiful dragon, and he was glaring at me. I felt almost giddy, no one told me there were DRAGONS!!! I told my dad they were real! Ha! I waved at him, but hesitated and thought, wait, or is he a girl? I don’t want to get him upset…..er, it.
So I asked it; “Hey. Um, would you mind calling off these lovely beasts?” Then leaned over to Mariana and whispered, “I still think every animal is beautiful, but these monster thingies really should brush their teeth.” She looked at me and franticly shook her head. I looked around, everybody looked really scared, don’t get me wrong I was freaking.
She whispered urgently, “Stop it you dummy, you could get us killed. Be quiet and be ready to run when one of us says.” But when I looked round at a full 380, I saw nobody else other than us. I frowned, shouldn’t their friends be here? I mean, how could Grumpy Grace know that we were here? We got here in a split second!
Then I looked up at the Dragon, it still wasn’t responding, I rolled my eyes flew up a bit and thonked it on the head, “HElllooooooo isn’t anybody home?” It moved its eye towards me. I screamed and shot backwards, with my handy dandy……wait, WHY did I DO that?! I looked down at the ground; all of the monsters were STILL not doing anything? I came down to the ground, and addressed everybody, “Um, guys, I think they are all frozen somehow.”
Then Mariana yelled, “WHAT!!?! And where is everybody? Nobody but us is here!! WHERE DID SHE TAKE THEM?! And WHY were you acting like a IDIOT?! You could have gotten us all KILLED!”
I sighed, “Listen, calm down.”
Then Rebecca started tearing up, “Why aren’t they here, I saw them?”
James looked bewildered, and then I said, “Wait, you saw them here? And Lucy was supposed to take us to where they were……”
Lucy looked up, “Are you saying that I am a traitor?!”
I shook my head quickly, “No, no, No! But why are the monsters frozen, I was thinking that maybe Grace knew we were coming before we even knew it!”
Alex frowned, “But I saw them too, they were right where we are now. And how would she be able to get them somewhere in less than a second?”
Brenden started walking around inspecting the monsters, “Well, I guess we should find out.”
Alex looked closely at one, “They don’t have any ice on them, but they have horrible grimaces on their faces…..like they were actually going to kill us. Or maybe they…….I have no idea.”
James rolled his eyes and walked over to a weird looking thingy, I grimaced, “What on earth is that?”
He shrugged, “I have no idea.” He took a dagger from the monsters hand, “And why would it be carrying this?”
Rosie/Eli
Eliana's Pov
Yesterday~
When Annabeth and Luna were taking me to our cabin, to tell you the truth, I was getting really excited! There were so many different mythical creatures here. All of the ones that I had only read about! I was asking them so many questions, then Luna all of a sudden took me to the most magical place in the world. And I had to be given permission from a tree nymph to go in! How freaking amazing is that?
When we went through the vines, my breath was snatched away……any animal I could think of was there! Apparently I was taken there because Mariana had told Luna that I could talk to animals, and she thought I would like it.
And after she introduced me to Glaucus, I looked at her, “You are an animal charmer? So that is what I am too?” I asked.
She nodded, “Yup, look around if you want!”
I squealed, and hugged her, “Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!”
She laughed, “No problem, over here is Ashtur, a puma. I think you might like him.” She told me walking over to the most beautiful black puma I had ever seen. I stared wide eyed at him, knelt to the ground.
He started purring, “Hello my dear.” I giggled, “Hello Ashtur.” To tell you the truth I couldn’t think of anything to say, here was a beautiful animal and I was shell shocked!
He gave a rumbling laugh, “Don’t worry, come with me.” And he led me over to where Cornilulius the jackrabbit was, and so many other amazing creatures. I looked back at Luna and she was watching me with a gentle smile, I grinned at her.
“Go on! Have fun.” She told me. Everywhere I walked it felt like there was joy radiating from these beautiful creatures, I talked to so many!
Then not paying attention to where I was going I nearly walked into a tree, “Whoops, sorry about that!” I was about to go round, when I noticed that the darling was crying, a tree nymph to be exact, I frowned, “What's the matter?”
She sniffed and nodded her head towards the monkey in her branches holding a flower wreath in his hands and chattering. “Kimku stole my flower wreath! And he won’t give it back.” I smiled at her, she was quite beautiful, she was a willow. No wonder, I wish I was a beautiful as she is…….oh well.
“I’ll get it back for you.” I walked over under the monkey, “Kimku, please give back-“I looked over at the nymph; “What is your name?”
“Sympia”
“Pretty name, anyway," I started, turning back to Kimku, "Please give it back?” He looked at me like I was crazy. Then I thought of something, digging around in my jeans pocket I found an earring that I hadn’t been able to find the match for. And held it up, “I’ll give you this if you give her back her wreath!”
He thought about it for a while…..and then jumped down from the tree, “Only if you give it to me first.” He bargained, I thought about it, then nodded, gave him the earring, and surprisingly he gave me back the wreath!
I smiled with my mouth closed, and said, “Thank you very much kind sir.” With a bow, then gave Sympia back her wreath.
She smiled shyly, “No, you take it. You have proved yourself to be worthy, instead of getting mad for my sake, you made peace.” I thanked her and placed it on my head.
Luna walked over, “It's time to go,” I said goodbye to Ashtur, and he promised to see me later. And as we were walking back to our cabin, she explained to me, “That was a process, they always do that to newbies, when I first came, and they did that to me too. Except I gave him a piece of gum, the only thing I had….and he swallowed it.”
I laughed, and then she joined in, “That was one of the best things I have ever seen in my life! Thank you so much for taking me Luna.” I said as I gave her a hug.
“Of course, we stick together. You can go back if you want……” She looked at my face, then gave a chuckle, “Of course you do….” And she went on to show me where I would sleep. As soon as I dropped into my bunk I fell fast asleep.
Today~
Running through the nights incidents in my head I made up a list; I had been woken up by James, in the middle of the NIGHT nonetheless, told that I was going to go on a mission, (freaky right? In a good way), I was told the details, and the fact that Mariana, Brenden, Rebecca, Joey, and Alex, all had a dream, So I tried to listen, and calculate everything in my head. At least I wasn’t the only one who hadn’t had the dream, James didn’t dreamt it either.
I shook my head, sometimes in the past few days I almost felt like Mariana was slipping away from me, we hadn’t talked in a while. And I was surprised that she didn’t let me in on the dream……or the mission. But I threw away the thought, everything was fine. They were going to go and take on this woman called Grace, who had apparently attacked everybody last summer…….. some of their friends had been kidnapped too. I looked up to the sky and gave a silent prayer of thanks that James had taken the time to wake me up.
After everybody had explained everything, one more person had joined us. A girl named Lucy had a feeling that we were at the border of the camp, and turns out she has this teleporting gift that she can take herself to another place if she just focuses on it. To tell you the truth I wasn’t that surprised, I was Athena’s daughter after all!
I shook myself back to the present time, just as Lucy was saying, “Everybody grab on to each other.” We all took hold of one another’s arms, I found myself holding on to Mariana and James’ hands.
I looked at Mariana, she smiled, “Don’t worry, it’ll be fine. Just don’t rush into battle once we get there, listen. ”
I laughed, “I am not scared, I am freaking out………and I can handle myself. Don’t worry.” She squeezed my hand and murmured something to Alex.
I told James, “Thanks, for you know, not leaving me behind.”
He nodded, “No problem, it wouldn’t be the same if you weren’t here. We all need to stick together.” I was just about to ask him why he said that when…..WHOOSH!
I blinked. the next thing I saw was a circle of monsters all around us, with swords at our throats. I gulped, felt a split second of fear, NO. FAGH DO BUTT BOGADH ANOIS Eli! (Which is Irish for get your butt moving now) looked at everyone else, they were standing still and strangely looking up. I was about to ask why we weren’t charging when I felt breath on my head, I sniffed. And winced, I smelt rancidness, moldiness, and disgustingness to tell you the truth. I slowly looked up, and gasped! I saw the most beautiful dragon, and he was glaring at me. I felt almost giddy, no one told me there were DRAGONS!!! I told my dad they were real! Ha! I waved at him, but hesitated and thought, wait, or is he a girl? I don’t want to get him upset…..er, it.
So I asked it; “Hey. Um, would you mind calling off these lovely beasts?” Then leaned over to Mariana and whispered, “I still think every animal is beautiful, but these monster thingies really should brush their teeth.” She looked at me and franticly shook her head. I looked around, everybody looked really scared, don’t get me wrong I was freaking.
She whispered urgently, “Stop it you dummy, you could get us killed. Be quiet and be ready to run when one of us says.” But when I looked round at a full 380, I saw nobody else other than us. I frowned, shouldn’t their friends be here? I mean, how could Grumpy Grace know that we were here? We got here in a split second!
Then I looked up at the Dragon, it still wasn’t responding, I rolled my eyes flew up a bit and thonked it on the head, “HElllooooooo isn’t anybody home?” It moved its eye towards me. I screamed and shot backwards, with my handy dandy……wait, WHY did I DO that?! I looked down at the ground; all of the monsters were STILL not doing anything? I came down to the ground, and addressed everybody, “Um, guys, I think they are all frozen somehow.”
Then Mariana yelled, “WHAT!!?! And where is everybody? Nobody but us is here!! WHERE DID SHE TAKE THEM?! And WHY were you acting like a IDIOT?! You could have gotten us all KILLED!”
I sighed, “Listen, calm down.”
Then Rebecca started tearing up, “Why aren’t they here, I saw them?”
James looked bewildered, and then I said, “Wait, you saw them here? And Lucy was supposed to take us to where they were……”
Lucy looked up, “Are you saying that I am a traitor?!”
I shook my head quickly, “No, no, No! But why are the monsters frozen, I was thinking that maybe Grace knew we were coming before we even knew it!”
Alex frowned, “But I saw them too, they were right where we are now. And how would she be able to get them somewhere in less than a second?”
Brenden started walking around inspecting the monsters, “Well, I guess we should find out.”
Alex looked closely at one, “They don’t have any ice on them, but they have horrible grimaces on their faces…..like they were actually going to kill us. Or maybe they…….I have no idea.”
James rolled his eyes and walked over to a weird looking thingy, I grimaced, “What on earth is that?”
He shrugged, “I have no idea.” He took a dagger from the monsters hand, “And why would it be carrying this?”
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I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Back home, back to my own bed *stokes the pillows*, back to my own room, and back to finishing this story!!!!! Ok, so the POV's are getting slightling confusing, so no has to do them anymore. I'll try to figure out a way to combine them into my chapters. Oh, and Luna went with us, I can't just leave her out. I'll write later, after I eat some REAL food, (besides McDonalds).
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Finally! Your back! I just have one more day left but it's only an hour-day. Just keep writing!
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@everyone!: I just want to clear up a few things about the story. 1: Grace is a kid like us, duaghter of Hecate. 2: Luna went with us on the quest, and had the dream. Got that?
Ok, now my turn...
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I looked at the frozen monsters. They all were in an attacking position right where we were. As if they knew we were coming, but that was almost imposible. We came so quickly, wihout warning. I had the courage to go up to one of them and touch their frozen bodies. It was rock, they were trappeed in rock. But if they were planning to attack us, why had they been turned into stone? The question hung in the air...
Arguments were breaking out about what had just happened.
"You could've led us here on purpose!" Alex shouted.
"Me?! I thought you guys knew where they were! It's not my fault!" Lucy defended herself.
"Well, then who?" Rebecca said, "It's kind of obvious they aren't here!"
"But they were." Joey says, he was knelt down next to somthing. We all look at him with suspicious looks.
"What do you mean?" Eli asked.
Joey pointed to footprints in the dirt, a coil of rope, and a hunting knife. I bend down to get a better look. The footprints were obviously from sneakers, not from monsters.
"This hunting knife, it looks familiar..." Rebecca says.
"Oh come on" James says.
"No," Luna speaks up, "She's right, look at the markings." We all gather in to get a better look "It's Elisha's hunting knive"
"So they were here, but now they're gone?" Brenden says, confused. We all were.
"See?" Lucy said, "It's not my fault" she laughs a bit nervously. I have my suspicions about her. But was it her fault or not? Argh, I was so confused! I couldn't trust anyone, not yet anyway.
"What do we do now?" Alex asked, "We don't know where Grace brought them this time."
Everyone pondered on this. We were stuck between decisions.
"We could go back to camp" Lucy said.
"No, I can't leave knowing that Grace has them." I said.
"She's planning to use them for her own good!" Rebecca says.
"Hers? Or Gaea's" Eli says.
"Exactly." I say, "We can't give up now"
"Then let's just camp here for the night and figure out what to do in the morning." Joey says. We all agreed, but there wasn't many hours left of night, and I knew that I wouldn't get any sleep. All of us walk a mile away from the frozen monsters. (No one was keen on sleeping near them, even if they were solid rock). We set up everything we had and laied down for the night. So when I finally closed my eyes, I thought I would acctually get a good rest, no more dreams.
But that's me we're talking about, and with this stuff, I'm usually wrong. And this time I was wrong.
continue later...
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Posted at: 5:44 pm on June 4, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Oh, and I would really apperciate it if I had moer GUYS in the story. Thanks :)
-Mariana
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Posted at: 5:45 pm on June 4, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Hello, may i join too?
Name: Julius Lupine
Age: 14
Boy or Girl: Boy
Looks: looks exactly like his twin, but has white spiky hair, tan skin, 5 foot 5, white shirt with an aviator jacket, long skinny straight blue jeans, and black converse sneakers
Personality: Can be a bothersome to his twin, easy going, smart, and somewhat protective of his twin
Parent: Athena
Greek or Roman(Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter) And how long have you been there: Greek; has been in Camp a year after Luna was there
Abilities: Can only talk to inanimate objects, when flustered he would speak in rapid Spanish
Weapons: Blue flamed incrested sword, but prefers a small dragon like dagger
Other: He may seem like an easy going guy, but her actually is a small little demon. He wishes his twin to be safe, the last time he saw her cry was when her boyfriend Hunter (son of Hephaetus) disappeared without a trace.
Name: Julius Lupine
Age: 14
Boy or Girl: Boy
Looks: looks exactly like his twin, but has white spiky hair, tan skin, 5 foot 5, white shirt with an aviator jacket, long skinny straight blue jeans, and black converse sneakers
Personality: Can be a bothersome to his twin, easy going, smart, and somewhat protective of his twin
Parent: Athena
Greek or Roman(Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter) And how long have you been there: Greek; has been in Camp a year after Luna was there
Abilities: Can only talk to inanimate objects, when flustered he would speak in rapid Spanish
Weapons: Blue flamed incrested sword, but prefers a small dragon like dagger
Other: He may seem like an easy going guy, but her actually is a small little demon. He wishes his twin to be safe, the last time he saw her cry was when her boyfriend Hunter (son of Hephaetus) disappeared without a trace.
'You are my lady
I am your servant.
Destiny divided pitiful twins.
If it's to protect you, I'll become evil for you'
-Servant of Evil: Kagamine Len
Posted at: 12:42 am on June 5, 2012
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Thanks Julius for signing up! A few more guys wouldn't hurt though.
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My dream started like this...
I saw Grace again but I had no idea where she was this time. She seemed to be in the middle of...nowhere. Elisha, Kayla, and Lily were tied up again. They looked beaten and tired.
"So, your friends somehow found out where we were, hmm?" Grace adressed Elisha. But she just smiled mischieviously. "You thought that they would be able to save you, didn't you? Haven't you remembered. I have more authority and power than you!"
"No. You think you're all powerful, but really you are nothing but a coward." Elisha said coldy.
I couldn't tell, but I thought I saw a hint of fear. But it quickly turned into a snarl.
"Then I guess it wasn't you who created that dream for them."
"No" Elisha said.
"Don't you lie to me!" Grace yelled. Ok, so maybe Grace was mean before, but this? This was just being a monster. She had changed, ALOT.
"I swear it wasn't! If it was, I would've happily taken credit for it."
"But it was you that put that last spell on my guards?" Grace interrigated.
Elis scoffed, "Yeah, who else would've turned your monsters into stone?"
"You listen to me!" Grace said, "You only obey my orders, or else your friends will have a VERY hard time. Get it?"
They all stayed motionless, not wanting to agree with her.
"Why Grace? Why have you become a traitor?" Kayla said, "I thought you would have been different."
"Be queit!"
"Don't you want to go back to your old life at camp? Not having to worry about all this?" she continued.
"Stop, you don't-" she stumbbled on her words. You could tell, that her mind was becoming confused.
"What about just being a regular person again, enjoying life, not working for Gaea." Then I saw what Kayla was doing. As she distracted Grace, she grabbed Lily's sword from behind her back. Kayla cut through the rope and jumped to her feet.
"You little pest!" Grace yelled. She thrust her hand out just as Kayla lifted her sword. Kayla clutched her side and fell to the ground. Grace had put a spell on her. Rope was magicaly tied around Kayla again, as she was unable to move.
"Let this remind you again how much I can rule over you." Grace said.
"Your friends won't be able find us again. And you will have to do what I say."
"Are you so sure?" Lily asked, a hint of a smile showed on her face.
Grace eyes grew wide and then became angry. I wanted to scream, because I could swear she was looking right at me. She raised her arm.
The dream faded.
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-Mariana
continue later...
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Posted at: 3:03 pm on June 5, 2012
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Good posts Mariana !!!!
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~~AG III
Posted at: 1:24 am on June 6, 2012
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Awsome! Thats why I love this website! Some many people here are SOOOOO Talented in writing!!!!
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Posted at: 9:37 am on June 6, 2012
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To be in my SEQUEL, be the first to post!!!!! First 5 people will be in it!
Love it! Remember I'm bad too!
Princess Cea-Cea
An author in training
Gallagher Girl
Daughter of Poseidon
Live,Laugh,Love and CAHILLS!!!
Cahills v. Vespers!!!
DREAMS…can come TRUE
WWJD?
This is SO 200 characters!
Posted at: 2:14 pm on June 6, 2012
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You have to be one of my favorite writers on the MB. Long live Mariana! Viva la Mariana!
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A Victory without Danger
Is a Triumph without Glory -
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Posted at: 3:30 pm on June 6, 2012
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