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Three new poems from me :)

TalentedWolf25

Branch: Janus

I posted a poem a while ago and a lot of people said they liked it and I should write more so I have and I picked the two best ones and am posting them now :)
My first one:

When the world ends

When I told you that the world will end,
You laughed and kept writing your email, pressed send.
You told me that it won’t happen, that there’s nothing at all to fear,
“Except maybe if your being chased by a bear.”
I tried to explain that “Despite what you say, it will.”
You smiled and said “Child I’m telling you, the chances are nil.”
I sighed, there was no point in trying.I said, “When it does, don’t crawl back to me crying.”
I went away, left you alone, in peace,
You just sat there and typed, emailing your niece.
My words were not even considered by your brain,
You watched me leave in barely hidden disdain.
And now the time has come, the world is in distress.
I can see your face clearly in the middle of the mess.
A mask of pure horror it is, and it’s pleasuring to see,
As you stare up at the giant waves coming from the sea.
The earth shakes, the sky darkens, fear takes a hold.
All the people scream in terror as their blood runs cold.
Meanwhile, I’m sitting here away from it all, further than any other could go.
I’m sitting back and laughing, yelling “Ha! I told you so!”

My mum said this was the most sadistic poem she'd ever read but I don't care xD

My second poem:

Watching

Wings fluttered, feathers glided as the bird passed overhead.
An unsuspecting target as he aimed and shot it dead.
The forest raged, the river flowed, the wild carried on.
Completly uncaring that the little bird was gone.
Here in the wild, birds die everyday.
It didn't even mourn when another was sent away.
Not a peep his shoes made when he came to collect his prize,
Gone was all emotions in the hunters gleaming eyes.

I don't know if this poem sounds finished or not but I like it like this so I'm keeping it like this. Comment if you know why I called this watching? ;P

Third poem (this is a lot lighter than the others Smiley

):

Monkey buisness (I could make a better title but I can't be bothered)

Hanging from a tree branch, Playing on the limbs,
brown fuzzy creatures,
making quite a din.

Eating all the fruit,
from the apple trees.
Chattering between themselves,
voices filled with glee.

They rampaged through the garden,
tore through the door.
And ate and ate and ate and ate,
till they couldn't eat no more.

Oh those silly monkeys,
aren't the greatest guests.
Perhaps I should return them,
and find a pet who likes to rest.

PLEASE COMMENT :D tell me if you like them or one of them. Constructive critisism welcome. :)

I LIKE PIE :D

...Akward silence turtle...

Don't give me that look -.-

I'M NOT WEIRD YOU ARE!!!!

Posted at: 12:34 am on April 8, 2012

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Three new poems from me :)

AgentAqua403

Branch: Janus