One Day at MB....Anne and Angel Cahill thought Of The BEST Amian story ,that will rock, to show all of yall.
Hey! Angel here,Well me and Anne have to plan some Ideas to do before we do the story,So wait if you can and then we will Create The BEST Amian EVA!!!
@Anne-So what do you Think?Let´s plan a crazy Amian story for our readers! I have 3 plot ideas on ways to make Amian happen:
1.Ian captures Amy to make Amy fall for Ian
2. Amy falls for Ian "Natrally"
3.Let Evan dumps Amy for Ian to sweep Amy off her feet.
So tell me if you like one of theese OR tell me Your Ideas. Answer soon to let Amian Happen!!!
- Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 4:13 pm on April 5, 2012
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ok i'm so sorry about this Angel- im changing Natalie's song.
It's for the last time though!!!!! THIS ONE IS SET IN STONE!!!!!
ill change it back to Poker Face.
@Vanessa thank you. i know when you hear the title your thinking " oh no that's inappropriate" and i know. i was planning on changing the words up a bit so it's not that......you know. but anyway just so everybody feels comfortable, im changing it back to Poker Face by Lady Gaga.
SET IN STONE:
Amy- Impossible
Ian- Pretending
Dan- Cooler Than Me
Natalie- Poker Face
Amy and Ian- The One That Got Away
Natalie and Dan- What is that Feeling
Once again thank you Vanessa!
Im very sorry for confusing you like this Angel! You're head is probably going crazy because of me!
right now im still doing my writing assignment from school (ironically XD) so i haven't got the time to write my part. ill be sure to post as soon as i can though. :)
BTW *sigh* its a shame nobody participated in the contest :/ But i really do like your back-up plan!!! ^_^
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 12:07 am on April 25, 2012
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Anne-That´s Okay.My head although does feel like it was spinnin´
but Alright those r the OFFICIAL songs.
Amy- Impossible
Ian- Pretending
Dan- Cooler Than Me
Natalie- Poker Face
Amy and Ian- The One That Got Away
Natalie and Dan- What is that Feeling
And I will be waiting til you post your POV.And did you guess my last POV of Sinead and that odd note?Don´t say who it is but I bet you know who it is....
And one more thing......WERE ON PAGE 2!!!!!!I know it´s just page 2 but I am exited*YAY!*Anyway*clears throat and giggle a little* ,Yeah I am bummed about the contest
but hey I hope the back up will be okay
! So POST your POV ASAP!!See ya soon!
-Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 1:42 pm on April 25, 2012
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Oh and thanks for helping us Vanessa!Your ideas were cool,plus the songs r really good.So Thanks Vanessa!
- Angel
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MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
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Posted at: 4:26 pm on April 26, 2012
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Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 7:16 pm on April 29, 2012
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@Angel: You're welcome! Always glad to help. :) . Please post more!
~Vanessa~
Writer~Dancer ~Vanessa~ Actress~Singer
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"Maybe I grew up." - Natalie Kabra
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Posted at: 12:44 pm on April 30, 2012
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@Vanessa-Thanks again and I will Post more but I am kinda worried Anne hasn´t posted in a while.....But I will put a POV Tommorow ASAP!
@Anne-Where r u? Still doing that Project?If ya r plase at least tell me if u can.And I am not rushing cause I will try to like try my best to countine the story with your abssence,but when ya can Post that when you´ll b back.
well that´s all I had to say I will Post my POV´s Tommorow! See ya soon!!!
-Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
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Posted at: 5:38 pm on May 1, 2012
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Amy goes to Italy for a school field trip. The whole 12th grade is going but Dan has to stay behind. It's this school convention that lasts 3 days. So like, Evan meets this girl and accidentally falls in love with her. Then Amy gets mad when she finds out and brutally breaks up with him that he goes home. So at the convention, Amy is all soft and vulnerable and Ian is there to comfort her and she learns the real Ian, not the haugty and cocky one that everyone knows. They fall in love and junk and by the time she comes home, she's all cheery again and the whole family isn't down with the idea of Ian+Amy . Then they learn to accept it and junk. Your choice!!
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17093, Awesome Amian!!
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Posted at: 6:20 pm on May 1, 2012
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@Angel..……………im so srry!
CST IS IN LIKE 6 DAYS!!!!!!!
CST ( California State Test)
My mind has been exploding and ive been edging to update this WHOLE PAST WEEK!!!!
I feel like im gonna die!
Im srry for tormenting you all like this!!!!!
I swear i feel so guilty i feel like bursting into tears!!!
There is alot of pressure on me that i practically spend all of my time studying since this is big for my grade.
Its like 11 at night right now and i am killing myself over not updating!
*bawling in disappointment* i really hate not finishing stuff that i started with other people like you....
On a brighter note ive been creating ideas in my head for this fabulous story of yours/ ours! Ive been getting ideas from my friends and all that. So that when i update( which im gonna DESPERATELY going to aim to do) ill probably have some good if not better ideas than before. :)
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 2:18 am on May 2, 2012
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@Anne-Oh! I totally get it I got SOL´s soon!50 questions on each SOL and I´m like what!?
It´s gonna be frighting but yeah I totally get it...
@JadeAgent64-was that a suggestion or something?
Ian´s POV
A lot of kids were starting o sing except me and amy."What´s your song?" She asks me with her beautiful Jade eyes staring at me with curiosity.I start to freak out,and for some odd reason I say " I-I don´t know yet.What about you?"Am I stuttering?Me? Ian Kabra stutter?She says with a smirk "You´ll find out soon."the bell rang.We went to Mr.Linny´s English class."okay class here is the asssiment-Write a poem about a person you really know well,has to ryme,and it has to be about how much you lke them but don´t say there names." Then me and Amy start our poem.I peak at her poem and it says,
He is always on my mind
I always melt when he is kind.
His smile is brighter than the sun.
And he´s always so fun.
"Who you writing about,Amy?" I blurt out loud.She turn to me and says "Evan,why?" My heart drops.I knew Evan he was so anoying,nerdy and had the worst style I´ve ever seen."Oh." I say trying to hide my hurt heart.I try to write about Amy but the bell rang before I could finish.I wish she could love me back...i think as I rush to my next class with a tear on my eyes and I quickly wipe off.
Evan´s POV
"The flight will be in three days." the attandant says.I nod,I was on my way to see Amy in person.I hear Saladin Mrrp really loud from the cage."Sorry pal,they won´t let you after last time when you scratched the old guys beard off." I tell him. Amy is gonna be so Surprised when I see her..... I think with a smile on my face.
Sinead´s POV
when I get out of my 5 hour boring plane ride,I see the note one more time.I sigh really loud,I can´t belive she has returned.i hink to myself. i go to Ned´s house,er mansion,He was there waitng for me.We hug and go in to his house."So have you heard anything from him or the police?" I say to him,he skakes his head puting his head on his hands."I think I know who did it." I say to him.He looks u and says "Who would do something like this?" He says.I show him the note and his eyes widen."You don´t mean....." He says his face pale.I nod and say"It´s Isabeal kabra."
That´s my POV´s your turn Anne if u can.Yes ladies and Gentelmaen it´s ISABEAL KABRA!
And I got some plans for her and a special person to unite........See ya soon!
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:27 pm on May 2, 2012
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Bump!:PI will post tommorow,Anne! Tell me when ya post K?
Well see ya soon,when ya can!:)
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 3:29 pm on May 6, 2012
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HI!!! Anne-Still doing the state test I see....Don´t worry Anne I will do my POV´s and if you can´t do yours tommorow, I will try to help ya!
Ian´s POV
As I left to my next class, I spotted Natalie."What is your problem with Daniel?" I say to her.She smirked and said "Hey he started it,but now I have to do as stupid and guess what his song is Cooler than me by Mike Poser or is it Posner?But it´s a bout an ego girl, I was so angry when he was singing that song about MUA in front of everyone!"I laughed but she smacked me with $1200 purse(That thing was hard as rocks)."OW,Hey don´t blame me that he hates you." I say.Then she makes a sour face and says "If he thinks he won he´s got another thing coming!".And like that she Shashayed(Sp?) off(Yes,Shasheyed).I just rolled my eyes and went to my class before the day is over.I decided since the class was boring me and I was in the back of the class, I pulled out my Ipod and lisened to my one favorite american song.Pretending by John Cedrick.Then the bell rang after the 3rd time I lisened to it.Like John I am Just pretending....I think to myself as I get out of the class.
Evan´s POV
After 2 days Sinead finally called."Hey Evan,I got some bad news." She says on the phone from who knows were
"Wait Sinead what happened?Where are you?What´s going on?" I said flabbergassted
"Okay one at a time.I´m at Oak Bluffs,Ma(The Cahill web).My brother Ted was captured by......Isabel Kabra." She said while I hear a person crying."Don´t worry Ned we´lll get him back"Sinead said to the person crying on the line but her voice sounded unsure."Tell Amy and Dan that I´m gonna be gone for a while..."Sinead said to me."Wait we can help!" I say to her."No,no We´ll be alright.I gotta go,call ya later Evan"And the line went dead.Poor Sinead...I think to myself
Sinead´s POV
After I hung up on Evan.I went to confort my brother Ned."Don´t worry We´ll get him back safe and sound." I say to him,conforting him."How?We don´t know where he is or how we gonna get him!" He says while crying more.I bit my lip,he´s right How can we? I think then suddenly the bell rang.I got up and opened the door to see a van sceech off and a letter on the floor.I in front of it a red shield with a sword and two snakes wraped on it,a Lucian crest.
????? POV??????
"We delivered the message." said the man.My lips curled up to a smile as I turn to the boy,Ted, who was still unconcious from the knock out gas."Good." I say to him and hung up.I then I booked the trip to England and retruned my visoin to the boy."Soon Cahills kids,I will get my revenge." I say to myself as I get ready to visit my son and daughter´s annual sing assiment....
*Dramatic Music* Guess who´s gonna crash the assembly for the sing-Off!?Hope ya like and Anne,If ya Have to do your CST, I get it and if ya like I will wait or do ur POVs(Which ever is fine by me).see ya soon!
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 6:06 pm on May 7, 2012
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I LOVE IT ANGEL!!!!!! i only have one more day of testing which is tomorrow, and so I WILL DEFINATELY UPDATE ON FRIDAY!!!!!!!!! OR MAYBE EVEN SOONER!!!!!!!! so yeah please wait until then :)
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 8:08 pm on May 9, 2012
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Yah, It was a suggestion. Sorry :/ I only read the first post and not the others.
L8er!!
17093, Awesome Amian!!
Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead- Benjamin Franklin
Jesus is my savior, not my religion
I am a Otaku. And I am proud of it.
Hetalia is the BEST!
Posted at: 4:26 pm on May 10, 2012
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Anne-Really?? Cool! And good luck on thoose CST,I´m rooting for ya!!!I´m gonna wait.
JadeAgent64-Oh,Thanks for the Suggestion but we got our plot but still I Really liked your suggestion!
See ya soon Anne!!
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:22 pm on May 10, 2012
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@JadeAgent: Do you want to write an Amian with me?
Noelle Cahill
Strange things did happen there,
No stranger would it be
If we met up at midnight
In the hanging tree.
Posted at: 8:46 pm on May 10, 2012
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Oh...my...GOSH!That was awsome!
I loved the extra you added to the song it was haralous.I really liked it!!
I might post Tommorow Anne but that POV was awsome!!TTYL!
-Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
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Posted at: 2:40 pm on May 13, 2012
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Im glad you like it Angel! I hope everyone else who read it liked it too. I wanted to add more lines to the rxtra parts of the lyrics and continue Dan's POV but my computer was on curfew so i didnt get too :/
I was planning to do the that thing with the lyrics on all of the characters songs so that readers can see how they feel and all while singing in front of everbody! Oh my goodness its gonna be a pain for my fingers to write out the concert! But its worth it!
I had so much fun just writing that piece! I cant wait to do more with you Angel!
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 12:16 am on May 14, 2012
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Anne I´m soo glad you think that!I love to do this Amian story with a great Writer like you!(I mean it!)So I guess it´s my turn...
Ian´s POV
When we went to Mr.Torrent´s class,I was nervous.Mr.Torrent told us that one of us had to present our song.We both were sient for a second then Amy spoke up,"I will do mine."I was shocked she hates public speaking much more,singing but she went up and the song started.
Impossible-Shontelle(Lyrics in this font and Amy´s own words/thoughts in this font!)I remember years agoSomeone told me I should takeCaution when it comes to loveI did, I did-------And you were strong and I was notMy illusion, my mistake stupid to belive your wordsI was careless, I forgot You were a snake I didAnd now when all is doneThere is nothing to sayYou have gone and so effortlesslyYou have won stop rubbing it in my faceYou can go ahead tell them TELL them you CobraTell them all I know nowShout it from the roof topsWrite it on the sky lineAll we had is gone nowTell them I was happy When you tricked meAnd my heart is broken because of you! All my scars are openTell them what I hoped would beImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossibleFalling out of love is hardFalling for betrayal is worst Especially from you.Broken trust and broken hearts That´s what you love to do just for powerI know, I know--------Thinking all you need is thereBuilding faith on love and words beliving a snakeEmpty promises will wear ones I thought were true,when the were fake!I know, I know--------And now when all is goneThere is nothing to sayAnd if you're done with embarrassing me fooling me On your own you can go ahead tell themTell them all I know nowShout it from the roof topsWrite it on the sky lineAll we had is gone nowTell them I was happyAnd my heart is brokenAll my scars are openTell them what I hoped would beImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossible!Ooh impossible (yeah yeah)I remember years agoSomeone told me I should takeCaution when it comes to loveI didTell them all I know nowShout it from the roof topsWrite it on the sky lineAll we had is gone nowTell them I was happyAnd my heart is brokenAll my scars are openTell them what I hoped would beImpossible, impossible Very impossibleImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossibleImpossible, impossibleI remember years agoSomeone told me I should takeCaution when it comes to loveI did..........
When she was done,people cheered her on,while I on the other hand stood there speechless.Amy turned to and said"Ian I-"But I cut her off "If you hated me sooo much why didn´t you just LEAVE instead of of doing this!"I yell at her.It shocked her."Ian."She says but my face turns sour.I then leave the class."Mr.Kabra!" I hear the teacher say but ignore him.I went outside and cry far from behind the school. I should HATE her,but I can´t why can´t I? She hates me but I love her,ARRRGH!! I hate myself and still love AMY!I think to myself as I sob more.Then I get up wipe the tears and go to my next class.Well I got somrthing for her in Mr.Linny´s class I think as I think of a twisted plan to get her back.
Hope ya like my POV and sorry but the Lyrics were are VERY long, I got them from a site called, it was actually a great place to get Lyrics!Well anyway I only did one POV cause I can NOT fit the others in this one so I will do Evan and Sinead tommorow,promise ASAP,cause I got some trick up my sleeve!TTYL!!
-Angel
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Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
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Posted at: 6:08 pm on May 14, 2012
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Oh no Angel the update was deleted.
I think I forgot to censor a few words! oh my goodness ill have to retype everything!
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 6:33 pm on May 14, 2012
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What?!-Oh man,sorry Anne that was one great POV even if it had one bad word.Sorry dude that you have to type it all over again.*pout with a frown*I can´t belive you have TYPE it all over AGAIN!
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 7:28 am on May 15, 2012
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Continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Farewell Ashoka Tano!
Amian
Luxoka
Jolilah
Chocolate + Dell= Yummy!
~Dell~
Posted at: 1:30 pm on May 15, 2012
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Thanks for commenting BulldogAgressive24!!
Evan´s POV
I went and called Amy but sadly it went to voice mail.I´ll call her later. I thought to myself,I was feeding Saladin outside of the Airport.He was like me,impacient.I wanted to see Amy now bu I have to wait a little longer.I was kinda worried about Sinead with her brother being captured and all.Then Saladin Mrrps really loud."Okay!Geeze Here´s your Red Snapper." I say to him.Saladin then calms down,This was going to be along wait.
Sinead´s POV
I was surprisedwhen I got the enovelope.I shut the door and went with my crying brother Ned."Who was it?" He says under his hands.I show him the enovelope and he almosted dropped it.i open it and there was a flash drive.I put it on the Computer.It was a video,it showed a screen with Two people,Ted who was uncouncious and Isabel."TED!" Ned yells,almost breaking my ear drums.Isabel smiles to us and says "Hello Starlings,it´s me Isabel Kabra you know the one you put in PRISON.I have plans for little Ted here,ones that won´t be pretty, but I might change my mind if you do a job for me......."
Cliffhanger!Hope ya like and Anne,Again bummer about the thread being deleted.Hope ya can re-do it and the next part when ya can.And a little spoiler,I got a poem for Ian to read to Amy but it will end very.....Can´t say no more:XAnyways See ya soon for the nest part of the Cliffhanger!See ya soon!
-Angel
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"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:39 pm on May 15, 2012
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Omgomgomgomgkeepgoing!!!
Noelle Cahill
Strange things did happen there,
No stranger would it be
If we met up at midnight
In the hanging tree.
Posted at: 9:15 am on May 16, 2012
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Pwease continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Farewell Ashoka Tano!
Amian
Luxoka
Jolilah
Chocolate + Dell= Yummy!
~Dell~
Posted at: 4:16 pm on May 17, 2012
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Just posting so I can find this again. BTW it's really good so far.
Major 1D fan.
I get chills when I watch the part where Harry sings his solo in What makes you beautiful, imagining I'm in the place of the girl in the video.
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BUMP!!!Hey Anne when ya gonna post(No rush)?If ya busy please let me know,so I don´t think Vespers Kinddnapped you!And Dell and other Readers thanks a MILLION for posting/reading,It means a lot to me!!TTYL!!
-Angel
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MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:50 pm on May 18, 2012
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This is ssoooooooooooooooooo Goooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!
Farewell Ashoka Tano!
Amian
Luxoka
Jolilah
Chocolate + Dell= Yummy!
~Dell~
Posted at: 8:58 am on May 19, 2012
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MMMMMOOOORRRRREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Louis Tomlinson
Niall Horan
Harry Styles
Liam Payne
Zayn Malik
One Direction
Posted at: 6:40 pm on May 19, 2012
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Angel im srry for the lateness of udates but ive been crammed with duties that my computer has been ice cold the past week. Im probably the worst writing partner huh? I think i will be able to update on monday or tuesday. Ive been trying to think of ways to make my POVs longer with the time i could do them in. :/
Sorry to everyone who has been waiting dor an update!
So Monday AND/OR Tuesday us when ill be able to update this week. Srry again for the wait guys! Im a horrible person!
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 1:50 am on May 21, 2012
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Anne,your NOT the worst partner ever.You kidding?You were the person who helped me in this story(and was the one who helped me/encouraged me on my old amian story,thanks a lot BTW) all the time you can,when you can I wouldn´t ask for another awsome writer/partner!(I mean it)I will wait til Mon or Tues for your POVs(I´m very paticent and I hope the readers r too)and I will do mine.So don´t say your a horrible person or I will cry.So post those POVs ASAP and I will show my-or should I say Ian´s Poem dedicated to a special someone........TTYL!!
-Angel
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There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 4:52 pm on May 21, 2012
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Amy's POV
" Ian!" I shouted but he didn't come back. The guilt started to seep in me, but then confusion took it's place. Why am I guilty? He deserved that feeling of betrayal! But remembering his crestfallen, extremely hurt brought the guilt back all together. Something inside me wanted to scream.
The rest of my classmates stayed silent as they looked at me with different expressions on their faces. Amused. Approval. Disgust. Disbelief. Bewildered. I could feel the heat rushing to my face as I bowed my head down. The bell rang and everyone was dismissed to go to our next classes.
I could hear people whispering with each other about the events that just happened. I avoided their gazes and headed into Mr. Linny's class. I stopped short when I saw Ian sitting in his usual seat, a rather blank but serious expression on his face. Without a word I sat down next to him and waited as people filed into class.
Natalie's POV
Here I am sitting in the auditorium sitting with an annoying dit next to me. Everybody around me was singing with their partners. I rolled my eyes. My first song choice was rejected by Mr. Terront because he said it was "inappropriate." So now I have no song to sing with the show in 4 days! My thought were interrupted by Mr. Terront's annoyingly booming voice.
"Well I can see that everybody at least has a song for their partners." I scoffed. "Would Mr. Cahill please come up here and demonstrate his song to the rest of the class?"
Everybodies eyes flew to Daniel as he meandered to the stage. I smirked. I couldn't wait to see him embarrass himself.
~*~*~*After Daniel Sings~*~*~*
Everybody stood up to applaud Daniel and some peole even started clapping him on the back. I on the other hand sat there glaring at him. How dare he sing such an offending and atrocious song about me?!
i start to notice that people were looking at me as if they were amused by me reaction. In turn, i glared at each and everyone of them and they all backed up. I smirked and suddenly the perfect song came to mind.
Dan's POV
Mr. Terront called me up and i strutted over to the stage. i took my Ipod out and connected it to the speakers. Mr. Terront gave me a questioning look and was probably going to ask me why i had an ipod at school and in my pocket, when the music started playing.
Cooler Than Me ( Lyrics in this font and thought in this font)
If I could write you a song
And make you fall in love,
I would already have you up under my arm. Hehe
I used up all my tricks,
I hope that you like this.
But you probably won't,
You think you're cooler than me. Whatever
You got designer shades, Prada!
Just to hide your face and
You wear them around like,
You're cooler than me.
And you never say hey,
Or remember my name. It's DAN!!!!
It's probably cause, you think you're cooler than me.
You got your hot crowd, apparently
Shoes on your feet,
And you wear them around,
Like they aint
But you don't know,
The way that you look,
When your steps
Make
That
Much
Noise. Noisy! Self-Centered! Cobra!
See I got you,
All figured out,
You need everyone's eyes just to feel seen. Again, Self-centered
Girl, you're so vain,
You probably think that this song is about you.
Don't you?
Don't you? Guess what? It Is!
If I could write you a song,
And make you fall in love,
I would already have you up under my arm.
I used up all my tricks, Not all of them yet!
I hope that you like this.
But you probably won't,
You think you're cooler than me.
You got designer shades,
Just to hide your face and Peek-a-boo!
You wear them around like,
You're cooler than me. yeah right
And you never say hey,
Or remember my name. D-A-N
It's probably cause, you think you're cooler than me.
You got your hot crowd,
Switching your walk,
And you don't even look when you pass by. Hmmmph!
But you don't know,
The way that you look.
When your steps make
That
Much
Noise. SHHHHHH!!!!
See I got you,
All figured out,
You need everyone's eyes just to feel seen.
Girl, you're so vain, you are
You probably think this song is about you.
Don't you?
Don't you? LOL
If I could write you a song,
And make you fall in love,
I would already have you up under my arm. oh yeah!
I used up all my tricks,
I hope that you like this. XD
But you probably won't,
You think you're cooler than me.
You got designer shades,
Just to hide your face and
You wear them around like,
You're cooler than me.
And you never say hey,
Or remember my name. D to the A to the N
It's probably cuz,
You think you're cooler than me. But you're not!! ~
And don't you dare act like you don't know,
Know what's up,
Cuz your nose is up. Snobby
I'm approaching up. (Yup)
Like I can't give you winter in the summer
Or summer in the winter
Miami in December
Trying to look bored in them diors.(Diors)
She probably is, eh, yeah
Was acting shallow until
She find out how deep that my pockets is. tsk tsk tsk greedy -_-
Mrs. pre-madonna, haha!
This is your reminder,
That I think you're fine.
But I'm finer. So true! Oh must i say more?
Cause it sure seems.
Cause it sure seems
You got no doubt
That you got no doubt.
But we all seem
We all seem
We got your head
In the clouds
If I could write you a song,
And make you fall in love,
I would already have you up under my arm.
I used up all my tricks,
I hope that you like this.
But you probably won't,
You think you're cooler than me.
You got designer shades,
Just to hide your face and
You wear them around like,
You're cooler than me.
And you never say hey,
Or remember my name.
It's probably cause, you think you're cooler than me. ~But your not!~
Right after I finished my song everybody gave me a standing ovatoin. I grinned like a 5 year old on christmas and gave a few bows. guys started slapping me on the back. Jared told me, "That was priceless! Look at her face!"
I saw Natalie's face and laughed but she started to glare at everyone looking at her. I smirked.
Point 1 for me and Point 0 for Cobra.
Yay! That was fun to write! I hope this sorta made up for my lateness!
Thanks Angel :)
Keep reading guys its gonna get way better :D
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 10:09 pm on May 21, 2012
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AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME!!!!That was.....AWSOME!The way you made Natalie look so...insulted and how Dan and Jared made fun of it.(Priceless!)I loved the way you made Amy feel Guity but that will go worse til you finally see my "oh-so special" Poem.....
Ian´s POV
I spotted Amy from the corner of my eye come in and I did my best not to look at her.Mr.Linny told us to do our poem and went to read his newpaper.Most of the kids in our class just chated and pretended to do the poems.I got from my seat to a desk two seats away from Amy,so she couldn´t see my Poem.I swear I heard her wince,anyway, After three hours Mr.Linny spoke to us."Would anyone like to share their poem?" I got up and said in a serious voice "I would."People´s eyes went to me,especially Amy´s. I got in front of the class and chanted my Poem-
The Girl
She was so swet,so nice.
So smart and percise.
But she was taken by another.
I scream why not me and not the other!
The Girl who broke my heart.
I know I hurt her but I wish we could restart.
I wish you could feel he way i feel,
But now i know for real that,
Now you hate me.
But I wish it wouldn´t be like this,if only she....
Wish that she didn´t belong to him.
Cause honestly I am now hurt and Grim.
The Girl who broke my heart,I´m sorry I am not perfect!
That ,to you, I am a reject!!
When I was done,the whole class stood silent for a momment then they chhered.The guys whistle and bannged the desk,the girls started to cry and swoon,touched by my poem.And Mr.Linny said "Mr.Kabra I must say well done!".I smirk to evryone,I turn to Amy but she wasn´t in her seat.Where could she have gone?I think but I was surronded by a bunch of kids saying complements about my poem.
Hey guys I hope you liked the Poem by Ian(Sorry,I know it´s not that great) and My POV.I will Post Evan and Sinead´s soon or at least tommorow, but Anne when will the sing thing be?Hope you can answer soon!Hope you like and Again Awsome POV Anne!TTYL!!!!
-Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:11 pm on May 22, 2012
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That was AMAZING! Plus where did Amy go, I gotta find out!
Um......
Amian
GLEE <3
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(Might not be on here so much...)
Posted at: 8:26 pm on May 22, 2012
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oh my goodness!!!
"Oh my......BOB!"
-A
Dauntless, Greek daughter of Kronos, District 4 Victor,Terces member, Gallagher Girl
R A N D O M !
Posted at: 9:23 pm on May 22, 2012
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U guys r really good writerkeep goingur story is great!!Bia
You promised that you'd never leave
Where are you now???
- By some really smart person.
Posted at: 9:29 pm on May 22, 2012
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More!!!! AAAWWWW!!! That was so sweet!!!
Louis Tomlinson
Niall Horan
Harry Styles
Liam Payne
Zayn Malik
One Direction
Posted at: 9:53 pm on May 22, 2012
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Keep going, guys. It's sounding great!
Noelle Cahill
Strange things did happen there,
No stranger would it be
If we met up at midnight
In the hanging tree.
Posted at: 12:25 am on May 23, 2012
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Omg!I saw the Awsome comments and THANK YOU,READERS!!I was soo shocked when I saw the cool respondse to our story,THANK YOU THANK YOU! And now for Evan and Sinead´s POV....
Evan´s POV
I have waited a lot for the day to visit Amy but they said I had to wait.Ugh!When I got home after 15 hours waiting for my tickets but there was too many people going to Europe the same time I want to go.Wonder why...(The Day of the Sing-Assiment Thing.)I woke up to a buzz in my ear,my phone.I woke up to get a call from Amy,Finally!I jumped up from my bed,really sleepy, and got my phone from my desk.When I picked up I heard Amy´s Voice,"Hey Evan I-"But I accidently dropped some,textbooks and stub my toe."YOW!!" I scream,Luckily I was alone in my house."Evan you Okay?!" I hear Amy say.I sat down and said "Yeah fine just stubbed my toe.I´m okay but how are you?Ian bugging you?"Amy stays silent then I hear sniffles."What´s wrong?" I say,worried that Ian did something to her."No-Nothing."Amy said but I could tell she was lying.I ask again and she cries more.Amy then started talking.....
Sinead´s POV
"What do you want Isabeal?" Ned says,in a harsh voice."Ned that is just a pre-recording ,she is not talking or lisening to us."I say to Ned softly.Then he turns red,and I try really hard not to laugh.Isabeal then starts to speak,"You must go to Europe and there you will be escorted to me by a man,Fredrick, to visit me.And then we will discuss our....... Nagosiation.Ta-Ta for now and I will see you soon."And with that the screen went black."Nooo TED!!" Ned screams to the screen."Ned!Screaming to the scream will not help.We have to go to Europe,we have no choice." I say to him.Then he nodds and turns to the screen with tears filling his eyes.Poor Ned...I think as I automaticly(Sp?) got tickets for our trip to Europe.Why does she want us to go to Europe? I think as I help Ned pack for tommorow...
*Gasps*What is Isabeal planning now???Hope ya like the POV(Sorry for the Cliffhangers, but they had to be done.But I will say this-there is a reason why Evan´s trip is same day as the sing-assiment,IDK what to call this sing thing
,It involes a Kabra.....But that is all I can say:X, for now,....) See ya soon Anne and Readers!!!
-Angel
Angel Cahill(AquaDragon1484)
"Don´t cry cause it´s over,SMILE becsuae it HAPPENED!"-Dr.Seuss
MUSIC IS MY LIFE!!!
There is NO WORD to describe how Awesome and Crazy I am!!!
Posted at: 5:19 pm on May 23, 2012
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Nice one Angel! Thanks btw :D ( awesome is spelled with an e, just saying :D)
Your poem is way better than any poem i could muster! I would never have thought of that!
As for the singing its in "4 days" in the character's world.
Thank for encouraging me Angel!
“Sleep,” he says. “I’ll fight the bad dreams off if they come to get you."
“With what?”
“My bare hands obviously.”
~Tobias & Tris
Posted at: 11:07 pm on May 23, 2012
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