Chapter One: Allie Simmons
Allie Simmons was walking home from school when it happened again, what continuously got her into trouble. A willow tree's branches were growing rapidly before her eyes and started swinging from side to side, knocking over a mail box and a power line. Allie started to jog away and her heavy backpack slammed against her. Her head swiveled from side to side; no one had noticed the strange happening yet, but someone would. She ran into a yard and moved a post in a fence.
She crawled through the opening and ran across the local park. Then she saw a bus pull up beside what she called home. The Local Child/Adolescent Orphanage had taken in children and teens since 1804. It was about as big as a church and it was old. The sides of the building were crumbling and the roof sagged. Allie joined in with the kids who piled out of the bus and kept her head down low. She heard taunts from one of the windows on the bus and turned to look.
"Hey! It's the nature freak!" the school's most popular, most nasty, most rich girl called out. Allie watched others peer out the windows to look at her and she flicked her hand inward. All the windows shot up and Little Miss Perfect's nose was slammed by one and made a satisfying snap. She suppressed a grin and laugh while others were laughing hysterically.
Allie heard screams and tore through the small crowd and flung open the door. She rushed upstairs and up another flight of stairs. She went to the door to her left and quickly climbed up her ladder and onto the top bunk of a bunk bed. She put her bag behind her head and groaned. She had let her anger get the best of her. She had just used...the thing. The power that scared her, the power that made her different, the power she wished she never had.
Just what was it? What did it make her? Why did she even have it? No one else knew. No one could help her. She had no family, no friends, no one to rely on. She sat up and opened her bag. She pulled out her homework and tried to get started on it while the others girls came into the room, talking and laughing. She couldn't wait to be eighteen. Then she wouldn't have to be here. Just three more years, she told herself while studying for biology class.
Hopefully, her problem would end by then.
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lol Katelin
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David!!!!!!!!! :D Thank you!!!!!!!!!! (Haven't talked to you in a while........Guess I should see how you're doin')
Emily, yeah, I've been working on it!!! Glad you found this story! I've been wanting you to read it, but forgot to ask.
So............either the mods are goin slow right now........or Kaleb hasn't posted yet.............
Hm.........................................................................................................................................
Also, I'm leaving next stinkin' week! For about a month. :( I might be able to post once or twice on here.......Depends on what the monsters say. Can't really say who the monsters are, but I don't seem them much and they won't want me on the computer typing sixty words a minute. (Which is my record so far) (One second per word.....now that I think about it, it sounds difficult.) :P
George, yeah.......I'm not really good at an evil laugh unless I'm playing Mario Kart and I push my bro or sis off the track and I win first.........And that doesn't happen often. :P Then, when it does, everyone just looks at me like I'm a creep. Well, I guess I am a creep........But, ya know what's even better? I'm a AWESOME creep! (Okay......sorry, that was weird)
Emily, yeah, I've been working on it!!! Glad you found this story! I've been wanting you to read it, but forgot to ask.
So............either the mods are goin slow right now........or Kaleb hasn't posted yet.............
Hm.........................................................................................................................................
Also, I'm leaving next stinkin' week! For about a month. :( I might be able to post once or twice on here.......Depends on what the monsters say. Can't really say who the monsters are, but I don't seem them much and they won't want me on the computer typing sixty words a minute. (Which is my record so far) (One second per word.....now that I think about it, it sounds difficult.) :P
George, yeah.......I'm not really good at an evil laugh unless I'm playing Mario Kart and I push my bro or sis off the track and I win first.........And that doesn't happen often. :P Then, when it does, everyone just looks at me like I'm a creep. Well, I guess I am a creep........But, ya know what's even better? I'm a AWESOME creep! (Okay......sorry, that was weird)
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haha
I am not good at evil laughs too. It sounds like a dog dying...! I am not that good at Mario Cart either. I keep on coming last. Once I came 11th and I was so happy.
Well I guess no one is perfect.
I am not good at evil laughs too. It sounds like a dog dying...! I am not that good at Mario Cart either. I keep on coming last. Once I came 11th and I was so happy.
Well I guess no one is perfect.
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Katelin- Yeah! So, recently, my sister found out that the church of christ wouldn't like her because she wasn't baptized into it, so she isn't going to the colledge she was gonna go to, my grandpa died(I am really sad, but it helps when I tell myself that I should be jealous. I mean, he gets to meet God! He's so lucky...), my dad almost shot our Justin Beiber cut-out(he's a police officer, so he has a gun), my mom almost cried(got frusturated. Long story.), and my sister sat on me. Twice! Yeah. My life is hectic. I wonder where you're going for the next month... I bet you're going to... See your grandparents? No? Okay, then it's definately the chicken store. No questions asked. I wanted you to read The adventures of 8 Cahills, if you ccaan. We haven't posted in a while...
EMILY! I made th new post!
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Can you say where you are going? (FOR A WHOLE MONTH?!?!)
And 60 words per minute is really good! But how long are the words?
And 60 words per minute is really good! But how long are the words?
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George, no worries..........no one on this earth is perfect......Well, maybe me. I'M JUST KIDDING!!!!!!!!! I am so far from perfect that it's in whole other universe. :P Normally, I will win or be close........but I can't always make sure my sibilings finish last and when I do.......It's victory time! :D
If you can listen to something you really love while playing, I think it might help you.
The past six times I've played in the past wee now, I've been listening to The Wanted & One Direction...........and I've one 1st place every time!!!!! Whooo hooo! :) Just think of 11th place as winning 1st place two times. :P When I lose something, I just say I'm the loser that's winning. :D
David,
Oh, I'm sorry! Wow, hectic, you're right. That's how life is for me too! Also, I'll be heading towards your neck of the woods for my trip. Then I'll go to about four different states.........visiting.......people. Your sis sat on you? Do you think she could do that to my bro for me? :P Just kidding. Anyway, the good thing about sisters is, it's really easy to get revenge on them. Hey, I have one and I am a girl, so I know these things.
Just do something that annoys her........a lot. :D A friend of the family passed away from cancer and I told her to say hi to Jesus for me. She did. :) Justin Bieber? Wow........Well, he's not that bad of a singer. He's just not my favorite. :P
Sierra,
What are long words? So far, I've typed words that I'm typing now in that time frame. :) (Sounds really confusing to me :P) I'm going to.........Well, different states in the U.S. to visit some people I never really see and they don't bother coming down to see me, so I'm hauled around through states to meet them. Etc, etc. Yeah, a wholish month. :P Actually, I'll be leaving the 8th of June. Then I'll be back at the end of June.
Sadly, they won't put up with my tendency to spend about an hour working on the computer. I consider it as kinda a job.......But that's not how they see it. They think it's a game......... :P Anyway,.............................................
On vacation Kaleb? Busy? Ooooooooooor did your post not go through? :P
If you can listen to something you really love while playing, I think it might help you.
The past six times I've played in the past wee now, I've been listening to The Wanted & One Direction...........and I've one 1st place every time!!!!! Whooo hooo! :) Just think of 11th place as winning 1st place two times. :P When I lose something, I just say I'm the loser that's winning. :D
David,
Oh, I'm sorry! Wow, hectic, you're right. That's how life is for me too! Also, I'll be heading towards your neck of the woods for my trip. Then I'll go to about four different states.........visiting.......people. Your sis sat on you? Do you think she could do that to my bro for me? :P Just kidding. Anyway, the good thing about sisters is, it's really easy to get revenge on them. Hey, I have one and I am a girl, so I know these things.
Just do something that annoys her........a lot. :D A friend of the family passed away from cancer and I told her to say hi to Jesus for me. She did. :) Justin Bieber? Wow........Well, he's not that bad of a singer. He's just not my favorite. :P
Sierra,
What are long words? So far, I've typed words that I'm typing now in that time frame. :) (Sounds really confusing to me :P) I'm going to.........Well, different states in the U.S. to visit some people I never really see and they don't bother coming down to see me, so I'm hauled around through states to meet them. Etc, etc. Yeah, a wholish month. :P Actually, I'll be leaving the 8th of June. Then I'll be back at the end of June.
Sadly, they won't put up with my tendency to spend about an hour working on the computer. I consider it as kinda a job.......But that's not how they see it. They think it's a game......... :P Anyway,.............................................
On vacation Kaleb? Busy? Ooooooooooor did your post not go through? :P
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Thanks katekin it worked! I listened to my sister fainting and I came first... Just kidding. But by some wonder I am so good now.
Maybe tou helped me some how... NAHH.
No but if Kaleb is on vacation why don't you continue for him?
Maybe tou helped me some how... NAHH.
No but if Kaleb is on vacation why don't you continue for him?
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sry. i'm dealing with writer's block, so i'm considering the next serious plot twist. not that i didn't like ur idea. but something really really bad needs 2 happen. once i figure out what, i'll b writing like crazy again lol. i'm going 2 do some serious brainstorming on that other thread, so tell me what u think
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Lol George! Bet your sis wouldn't like that much.............. :P
Kaleb, okay, good. You're much better at these huge, dramatic, mindblowing, explosive, horribly-gone-wrong plans than I am......I'm more the kind of person who writes melodramatic, sarcasticly insane, mushy feelings, romance stuff. :P
Kaleb, okay, good. You're much better at these huge, dramatic, mindblowing, explosive, horribly-gone-wrong plans than I am......I'm more the kind of person who writes melodramatic, sarcasticly insane, mushy feelings, romance stuff. :P
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Lol George! Bet your sis wouldn't like that much.............. :P
Kaleb, okay, good. You're much better at these huge, dramatic, mindblowing, explosive, horribly-gone-wrong plans than I am......I'm more the kind of person who writes melodramatic, sarcasticly insane, mushy feelings, romance stuff. :P Yeah, I'll look and tell ya what I think.
Kaleb, okay, good. You're much better at these huge, dramatic, mindblowing, explosive, horribly-gone-wrong plans than I am......I'm more the kind of person who writes melodramatic, sarcasticly insane, mushy feelings, romance stuff. :P Yeah, I'll look and tell ya what I think.
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Be yourself, the world needs oRiginaLity. ✌☮
Somewhere between you and despair, I fell in love with chocolate
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Sweet you guys!! I can't wait for the and I qoute 'huge, dramatic, mindblowing, explosive, horribly-gone wrong, melodramatic, sarcastically insane, mushy feelings, romance' rest of the story!! HURRY!! I CAN'T WAIT!!
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lol i wholeheartedly agree with u, Katelin
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Yes Kaleb, of course, you agree with me because I, for one, am always right. :P Just joking!!!! :D
Thanks Alex! I can't wait either! :D
Thanks Alex! I can't wait either! :D
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Luckily she's not on the MB :)
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Chapter Twenty Eight: The Beginning of the End (I think I may have used this chapter name already, but what the heck?)
"The time has come."
The words echoed around the cave, and the Wise One looked around, wondering where they were coming from. His gaze finally locked on the shadows towards the far end of the cave. They were somehow darker than normal, almost as though whatever light had been reaching it before had been sucked away.
"I'm tired of being merciful to you. The game that we've been playing with the humans is over. They are no longer a challenge for me. Therefore, your existence is only an obstacle to me. An obstacle to be destroyed."
Suddenly the Wise One found himself being hurled from the air. He landed hard, and his heart sank as the Dark stepped from the shadows, the temperature in the cave dropping instantly.
"Don't even try to negotiate with me," the Dark said. "You're words would be pointless. Just accept your defeat. And die."
The Dark pushed one of his hands forwards, and the Wise One slammed into one of the cave walls, cracks spreading from where he'd collided with it. He could feel the Dark's hatred now, and it scared him. The last time he'd battled the Dark, the Light Warper had been inexperienced, cocky, and arrogant. And he'd still been defeated. Now, the Dark was truly as powerful as he claimed. The Wise One new he didn't stand a chance.
"What will you gain from my destruction?" he called.
"An empire," the Dark replied, hoisting the Wise One to his feet and slamming his fist into the Wise One's face, once, twice, three times. Finally, he let the man drop, only to lift him again telekinetically and slam him into another wall.
"How could I possibly stop you?"
"Your influence of the Clashers, though weakened, is still present. Not even you know the exent of their powers, even though you pretend to be wise. You are an insult to all beings. You are willing to sacrifice everything for the 'greater good'. What is that anyway? Do you even know?"
The Dark punched the Wise One hard in the stomach. The Lighveon doubled over, and the Dark lifted his leg up, bringing his heel down viciously on the back of the Wise One's head.
"You are weak. You are almost insignificant. But I never make the same mistake twice. I won't allow you to live this time."
The Dark blasted the Wise One back telekinetically into the wall and held him in place.
I need to get out of here, the Wise One thought. It's no use trying to reason with him.
However, when he visualized the Capitol building in Washington D.C., nothing happened. Though the Lighveon couldn't see the Dark's face, he knew that the being was smiling.
"Do you really think I'd allow you to escape simply by teleporting? Do you really believe that I'm that stupid?"
"You're a monster!" the Wise One shouted, sending droplets of spit and glowing white blood flying in all directions.
"And you think you're better? You have used an entire raced of beings for your own gain. Your training of the Clashers is responsible for the loss of countless lives! And you think you're better than me? You're a fool, Yallasar."
The Dark smiled again, and the Lighveon knew that he was enjoying the look of shock on his face.
"Oh yes. I know your name."
Suddenly there was an intense pressure on the Lighveon's chest, and he looked down to see a speck of shadow on it, with tendrils that were growing.
"No!" he shouted.
"Yes," the Dark said. "You are the final barrier to be brought down. After you have been defeated, a new era will begin. An era of death and destruction. An era of darkness and wrath. It will be the Age of the Dark. But you won't see any of it, because you'll be dead. Funny. Now I'm almost beginning to regret the fact that I have to kill you. It would be much more fun for you to see it all, and then die."
The Wise One began to scream, as the tendrils of shadow began to feel like hot coals pressed against his chest. Then, he looked on in horror as he felt his body begin to deteriorate.
"You haven't won yet!" he screamed, as a roaring sound began to pick up. "The Clashers will defeat you!"
"They will try. But they will not succeed."
"Evil never triumphs!"
The Dark merely chuckled.
"That is very far indeed from the truth."
Then, darkness took the Wise One.
Katelin before you go crazy about the Wise One dying, go to the other page
"The time has come."
The words echoed around the cave, and the Wise One looked around, wondering where they were coming from. His gaze finally locked on the shadows towards the far end of the cave. They were somehow darker than normal, almost as though whatever light had been reaching it before had been sucked away.
"I'm tired of being merciful to you. The game that we've been playing with the humans is over. They are no longer a challenge for me. Therefore, your existence is only an obstacle to me. An obstacle to be destroyed."
Suddenly the Wise One found himself being hurled from the air. He landed hard, and his heart sank as the Dark stepped from the shadows, the temperature in the cave dropping instantly.
"Don't even try to negotiate with me," the Dark said. "You're words would be pointless. Just accept your defeat. And die."
The Dark pushed one of his hands forwards, and the Wise One slammed into one of the cave walls, cracks spreading from where he'd collided with it. He could feel the Dark's hatred now, and it scared him. The last time he'd battled the Dark, the Light Warper had been inexperienced, cocky, and arrogant. And he'd still been defeated. Now, the Dark was truly as powerful as he claimed. The Wise One new he didn't stand a chance.
"What will you gain from my destruction?" he called.
"An empire," the Dark replied, hoisting the Wise One to his feet and slamming his fist into the Wise One's face, once, twice, three times. Finally, he let the man drop, only to lift him again telekinetically and slam him into another wall.
"How could I possibly stop you?"
"Your influence of the Clashers, though weakened, is still present. Not even you know the exent of their powers, even though you pretend to be wise. You are an insult to all beings. You are willing to sacrifice everything for the 'greater good'. What is that anyway? Do you even know?"
The Dark punched the Wise One hard in the stomach. The Lighveon doubled over, and the Dark lifted his leg up, bringing his heel down viciously on the back of the Wise One's head.
"You are weak. You are almost insignificant. But I never make the same mistake twice. I won't allow you to live this time."
The Dark blasted the Wise One back telekinetically into the wall and held him in place.
I need to get out of here, the Wise One thought. It's no use trying to reason with him.
However, when he visualized the Capitol building in Washington D.C., nothing happened. Though the Lighveon couldn't see the Dark's face, he knew that the being was smiling.
"Do you really think I'd allow you to escape simply by teleporting? Do you really believe that I'm that stupid?"
"You're a monster!" the Wise One shouted, sending droplets of spit and glowing white blood flying in all directions.
"And you think you're better? You have used an entire raced of beings for your own gain. Your training of the Clashers is responsible for the loss of countless lives! And you think you're better than me? You're a fool, Yallasar."
The Dark smiled again, and the Lighveon knew that he was enjoying the look of shock on his face.
"Oh yes. I know your name."
Suddenly there was an intense pressure on the Lighveon's chest, and he looked down to see a speck of shadow on it, with tendrils that were growing.
"No!" he shouted.
"Yes," the Dark said. "You are the final barrier to be brought down. After you have been defeated, a new era will begin. An era of death and destruction. An era of darkness and wrath. It will be the Age of the Dark. But you won't see any of it, because you'll be dead. Funny. Now I'm almost beginning to regret the fact that I have to kill you. It would be much more fun for you to see it all, and then die."
The Wise One began to scream, as the tendrils of shadow began to feel like hot coals pressed against his chest. Then, he looked on in horror as he felt his body begin to deteriorate.
"You haven't won yet!" he screamed, as a roaring sound began to pick up. "The Clashers will defeat you!"
"They will try. But they will not succeed."
"Evil never triumphs!"
The Dark merely chuckled.
"That is very far indeed from the truth."
Then, darkness took the Wise One.
Katelin before you go crazy about the Wise One dying, go to the other page
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That was awesome Kaleb!
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@George: thanks!
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Saweet, but isn't Katelin gone for, like a month? Or am I early? Or late or something? I don't pay very close attention to a lot of things . . . my friends say I should be a natural blond a lot. NO OFFENCE TO ANYONE BLOND!!! I LOVE BLOND PEOPLE!!
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@Alex: yeah, i think she is
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@ kaleb: I haven't posted here yet, but I have been reading your story. Really great! But what's gonna happen now until livelyjade gets back?
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
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I love the story so much that I copied all that you have so far onto Pages (I have a Mac), and put your agent names on the first page so I can read it whenever I want! I even fixed spelling mistakes and stuff. =D LOVE IT!!! You guys should so publish.
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Daughter of Athena
Starcatcher
Undercover Madrigal
Whovian
Kingdom Keeper
District Four Victor
Proud Christian
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Evamy!
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@SlyCommando17: I think we'll have to wait. I think I need a little break anyway, to plan out what exactly is going to happen next.
@Hannah: We should. This is just our first try at writing together though, so I don't know if I'd try to publish this one. Our second attempt should be even better.
@Hannah: We should. This is just our first try at writing together though, so I don't know if I'd try to publish this one. Our second attempt should be even better.
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Alright, then. Ill keep an eye on this thread. Once again, this is a great story! You gotta continue when livelyjade gets back!
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
Posted at: 2:11 pm on June 8, 2012
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@Everyone: since nothing will really b happening on this thread for a little while, y don't u guys check out a new story that katelin and i r writing with spencer (BreakingHurricane5)? here's the link
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/24238
http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/24238
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Posted at: 11:45 am on June 9, 2012
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I did!
~*Sierra
~*Hunter, Reader, Montanan
~*Great Reads: /39475 by Leo,/42076 by Ariel, /39119 by Azure
~*/39226 is My Story
~*Lucian Assassin!
Posted at: 11:15 am on June 13, 2012
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I just need this post to get back on the first page of my post `cause this is almost on the 5 page and I am loosing track of it so....L8ter
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Posted at: 10:35 pm on June 21, 2012
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I'm thinkin'....................I'm thinkin'........... Hm............
Soooooooooooo I was thinking (starting to get sick of that word) about posting my chapter for the next part...........and yet......Nothing has hit me.
Normally, I just go along and wait until it hits me, smack dab in the face...............and it's not happening........
Anyway, I'll post later once something hits me. I need to do a little inspiration research. Time to bring out the big guns. (You really want to know what I'm talking about? I'm saying it's time for me to go watch some GI Joe! :D I'm thinking my next chapter will have a little beginning twister. Then Kaleb can put our recent ideas that we talked about together and make it into a total earth domination storm!)
See ya soon! :D
Soooooooooooo I was thinking (starting to get sick of that word) about posting my chapter for the next part...........and yet......Nothing has hit me.
Normally, I just go along and wait until it hits me, smack dab in the face...............and it's not happening........
Anyway, I'll post later once something hits me. I need to do a little inspiration research. Time to bring out the big guns. (You really want to know what I'm talking about? I'm saying it's time for me to go watch some GI Joe! :D I'm thinking my next chapter will have a little beginning twister. Then Kaleb can put our recent ideas that we talked about together and make it into a total earth domination storm!)
See ya soon! :D
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Posted at: 9:27 pm on June 26, 2012
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yay Kate can't wait for you to be back
George
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If you always say no, you'll never say yes - Ryan Higa
Hi Mom!
Posted at: 7:21 am on June 28, 2012
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Yay! Livelyjade is back! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!:):):):):)
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
Posted at: 2:37 am on July 2, 2012
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Anyone? I can't believe that his awesome story is going dead!! |:-(
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
Posted at: 10:21 am on July 4, 2012
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@SlyCommando17: Yes the story is awesome but it isn;t going to a end. Kate is still halfly in vacation mode and can't post much. If you look at her post she has posted less than 10 times since she has left. She needs time to relax. Everyone needs holidays sometimes, don't you think? Kate is also the next to post so Kaleb won't continue. And in her "See Ya Soon" post, she said that all her stories are going on hold. And as I said she is still on Vacation Mode. So hope that wasn't to complicated for you :D
BTW my name is George so you can call me that if you want :)
BTW my name is George so you can call me that if you want :)
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If you always say no, you'll never say yes - Ryan Higa
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Posted at: 9:15 am on July 5, 2012
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Now I'm offically back. :D And while I was on 'Vacation Mode' (:D), I wasn't with my main family. I was with other people and they wouldn't let me be on the computer all that much. :P Anyway, it's time for me to shut the computer down, brush my teeth, and hit the sack, but I'll try to post tomorrow morning. Something should hit me by then........................
Also, those of you who've read the Cahill Four........our second book of the series just started! :D
Also, those of you who've read the Cahill Four........our second book of the series just started! :D
Life is a song and your ♥ writes the lyrics
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Somewhere between you and despair, I fell in love with chocolate
Posted at: 10:01 pm on July 5, 2012
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That makes sense. I guess I should have looked if she has posted anywhere else before complaining a whole bunch.
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
Posted at: 12:24 am on July 6, 2012
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They might like it that you're complaining. That shows how good their story is.
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If you always say no, you'll never say yes - Ryan Higa
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Posted at: 5:58 am on July 7, 2012
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Awesome!
I am looking for a co-author for a story. Maybe two.
Preferred genre: Sci-fi or fantasy
Let me know if you r interested!
Posted at: 5:09 pm on July 7, 2012
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Hey, thanks for complaining. :D :P
I'm not exactly sure what's going to happen yet..................I need to think and I'm super busy today and probably won't have time to post. But I'll do it really soon! :)
I'm not exactly sure what's going to happen yet..................I need to think and I'm super busy today and probably won't have time to post. But I'll do it really soon! :)
Life is a song and your ♥ writes the lyrics
Be yourself, the world needs oRiginaLity. ✌☮
Somewhere between you and despair, I fell in love with chocolate
Posted at: 9:47 am on July 9, 2012
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@Katelin: take your time! i don't have much of anything at the moment either
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Posted at: 2:57 pm on July 11, 2012
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