Soo this is a story that Me (sapphirecat80) and Alli (turtleagent2) are writting together. Alli, I'll post more of the story asap. Here is the first part.
The town of Pixton had just blown up. The cities around it were afraid. The bomber was going to bomb one of them next. Just then....... POW!!!!!!!!!!!! There went the next city,Newtown. Which city was next? The cities were afraid. Some took cover. Some just stared in awe. Then a single radio said,"This is the bomber. Give me $500,000,000,000 and the bombs will be laid off for two days. Soon all radios were saying the message,then T.V.s followed by all other electronics.How would they collect that much money?
Maelee's pov. (may-lee)
I had just gotten to gran's house in Paxton when we all heard a BOOM then the world went black. The lights were back on in a minute or 2 then it happened again. A big BOOM we both ran outside and where the cities of Pixton and Newton were supposed to be, nothing, there was absolutly nothing there. I couldn't believe it. Pixton was my home. I had grown up in the same house, in the same neighborhood, then in just one instant. All of that was gone.
"GRAN!! Pixton is gone!!!"
"What??" she was a little hard on hearing, she beeing almost 98 years old.
"I said PIXTON IS GONE!!!"
"NO!"
"Yeah, it was blown up! Along with Newton!"
"Really?"
I finally broke down, the reason why I was here was to show Gran her new baby grandaughter, my sister. Me and little Abbigail were the only people who are residents of Pixton. . alive. I was now alone with only Abbi and Gran and myself. It was unreal! I kept going over my thoughts.
"Why oh why?" I kept asking myself. "I had wonderful friends and a wonderful family!" "WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!" I started crying. I decided that I would find whoever had even thought of blowing up Pixton and why oh why had the murderer asked for $500,000,000,000?? When the person Knew that No one had that much money. "I am going to find him and drag the answer out of him."
Kalee's Backstory - "Everyone ruined my life and now it's their turn for their lives to be ruined!"
"Wait! How did these people ruin you life?" asked Maelee.
"It all started 7 years ago. I was walking to school with all I owned-one dollar, a book, and three rolls- a bully-named Rex- from Pixton came up to me. He said 'Give me that backpack!' But I was not going to..."
" Is this all about a bully from Pixton?" Maelee interupted.
"No, now let me continue! But I was not going to give up all I had to a bully, so I ran past him as quick as I could and ran straight to school. Later that day, the same bully came up and tried to steal my lunch again. This time I told my teacher that the bully was trying to steal my lunch, but the teacher just stared at me. So more stuff like that happened and so I soon figured out that I could trust no one. The only person I ever trusted was my dad, who died."
"So you bomb all the cities because of some misfortune?" Maelee shouted,"I had friends there you know! You are an evil girl!"
"That's it! You and your town are gone!!" yelled Kalee.
If you want a character in the story then I'll post the app soon.
I'll post more as soon as I can Alli.
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Okay! Great! I'll put the story's link on my signature
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Hey SaphireCat! how old are u? I'll be turning 12 in may(is this allowed mods?)
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Sorry Alli!!!! My internet was down for over a week (is that allowed to say mods?) and I just recently got it back up. So I will continue asap. I am turning 13 in august, so just a bit older then you :) I will post more on the story as soon as I can, just not right now, sorry!!!
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for those who want a character in the story, I will post the app when I can, I am not able to do it right now, but I will post it asap!!
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Here is the App for the character. Make sure you put in whether you are a good guy, or a bad guy. And Alli, can you do one for Kalee? So that I know what to put her down as?
Here it is:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Hometown:
Backstory:
Bad guy or Good duy:
Here is my person's app as an example:
Name: Maelee.
Age: 16.
Gender: Female.
Personality: Outgoing and hyper before the bombing but after it, she is shy, quiet, and timid. She is serious, keeps to books after the bombing, and will do anything to keep those she cares about safe.
Hometown: Pixton.
Backstory: She had a wonderful life until a mysterious person blew up her hometown and two others.
Bad guy or good guy: Good guy.
Hope you guys keep reading the story! Updates to the story are coming soon!! But before I do it, Alli, can you post the app for Kalee??
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Here it is:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Hometown:
Backstory:
Bad guy or Good duy:
Here is my person's app as an example:
Name: Maelee.
Age: 16.
Gender: Female.
Personality: Outgoing and hyper before the bombing but after it, she is shy, quiet, and timid. She is serious, keeps to books after the bombing, and will do anything to keep those she cares about safe.
Hometown: Pixton.
Backstory: She had a wonderful life until a mysterious person blew up her hometown and two others.
Bad guy or good guy: Good guy.
Hope you guys keep reading the story! Updates to the story are coming soon!! But before I do it, Alli, can you post the app for Kalee??
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Name: Kalee Lane
Age:15
Gender: Female
Personality : Envious, Greedy, Selfish, Stuck up
Hometown: Pixton
Backstory: It was in her POV
Bad guy
Age:15
Gender: Female
Personality : Envious, Greedy, Selfish, Stuck up
Hometown: Pixton
Backstory: It was in her POV
Bad guy
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Posted at: 2:33 pm on April 10, 2012
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Thanks Alli :)
That will help a ton!!!
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Wow . . . That was some beginning! Tragity, and everything, that was very exciting! A great beginning :)
The only thing I can recomend right now is that you write like this:
"I can't!" I screamed.
"Yes you can!" Carrie said calmly grabbing my shoulders, and starring coldly into my eyes.
"How do you know?" I demanded.
Carrie released herhold on my shoulders and started to walk away. I watched her from where I was was, never letting my eyes off her; I couldn't trust her. She broke every promise she made carelessly.
Carrie turned back around at me and said, "If you won't do it yourself, then I'll make you."
Instead of:
"I can't!" I screamed. "Yes you can!" Carrie said calmly grabbing my shoulders, and starring coldly into my eyes. "How do you know?" I demanded. Carrie released herhold on my shoulders and started to walk away. I watched her from where I was was, never letting my eyes off her; I couldn't trust her. She broke every promise she made carelessly. Carrie turned back around at me and said, "If you won't do it yourself, then I'll make you."
That would make it clearer and easier to read.
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The only thing I can recomend right now is that you write like this:
"I can't!" I screamed.
"Yes you can!" Carrie said calmly grabbing my shoulders, and starring coldly into my eyes.
"How do you know?" I demanded.
Carrie released herhold on my shoulders and started to walk away. I watched her from where I was was, never letting my eyes off her; I couldn't trust her. She broke every promise she made carelessly.
Carrie turned back around at me and said, "If you won't do it yourself, then I'll make you."
Instead of:
"I can't!" I screamed. "Yes you can!" Carrie said calmly grabbing my shoulders, and starring coldly into my eyes. "How do you know?" I demanded. Carrie released herhold on my shoulders and started to walk away. I watched her from where I was was, never letting my eyes off her; I couldn't trust her. She broke every promise she made carelessly. Carrie turned back around at me and said, "If you won't do it yourself, then I'll make you."
That would make it clearer and easier to read.
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Thanks AS100
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Are you going to continue the story SapphireCat?
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Posted at: 12:05 pm on April 19, 2012
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yes I will Alli, I will post the continuation of the story as soon as I post this.
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Ok, so I haven't been as vigilant on this as I should have, and I am sooo sorry for that, but I've been busy!!! I will post more asap, and that is a promise.
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Maelee’s Pov.
“My town is already gone!!” I yelled. “Is there anything else that you have not taken from me??” I asked starting to cry. “My home, my family, my friends. All of those disappeared when you blew up Pixton.”
“Well, well, well. My work is finished.” Kalee said sarcastically. "Will you at least listen to me before you blow up another city?" I asked, desperate. "No, I don't think I will. But I will give you one chance to stop me. If you let me run then I will give you 2 weeks to track me down and stop me. Okay? You can even enlist some help, but you can not get the police involved. Or else." Kalee said. "Do you agree? I promise that I will not blow up any town yet. But if at the end of the 2 weeks and you have not found me then I will blow one up." She said with her hand in the air. "Alright. I will go right back to my house and leave you to go." I replied. "But if you hurt one of my family members, then deals off!"
I am sooo sorry that's late, and that it is short too. But Your turn Alli!!! And can you call me by my name Anne? And please make the next part longer to make up for the shortness of this one.
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I am sooo sorry that's late, and that it is short too. But Your turn Alli!!! And can you call me by my name Anne? And please make the next part longer to make up for the shortness of this one.
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Kalee's POV - "That little girl," I chuckled," to think she would believe such a big lie! Like I would run from her and her little friends! I have twelve atomic bombs at my place."
Sorry Anne, I have to get off! I'll continue later..
Sorry Anne, I have to get off! I'll continue later..
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I went down to my garage and loaded up one of my atomic bombs. As I said, her town was next. Just then, something came at me in a blur....
I woke up in a room. The light was almost blinding. Of course, the white room didn't help. I went to stand up, but I was chained to the chair. Someone - with blond hair, a white labcoat, and bright red high heels - stepped in the room and sat down on a chair behind a desk.
"I believe you are the bomber," she started," and I would like to ask you politely to stop. Now let's be reasonable. Will you?"
"Why should I? And don't tell me that pesky little girl told you about me! Ohh, if she did, I'll have my hands on her!" I shouted.
"The information about what that girl, Maelee's her name, is confedintial. Now why should you? Because I am trying to be reasonable with you. Now I see that jail may have to be another option..."
"No. No, jail is not an option. You don't understand. People have ruined my life, my... everything! Do you think I'm giving up that easily? Well, I can tell you I'm not. In fact.."
"Look, my time is running out. You make a decision. What'll it be?"
"I-I-I am not going to stop. Why are you doing this to me? What do those people matter to you? I mean take the people you love, but what do you care a bout the others?"
Your turn Anne! How was it?
I woke up in a room. The light was almost blinding. Of course, the white room didn't help. I went to stand up, but I was chained to the chair. Someone - with blond hair, a white labcoat, and bright red high heels - stepped in the room and sat down on a chair behind a desk.
"I believe you are the bomber," she started," and I would like to ask you politely to stop. Now let's be reasonable. Will you?"
"Why should I? And don't tell me that pesky little girl told you about me! Ohh, if she did, I'll have my hands on her!" I shouted.
"The information about what that girl, Maelee's her name, is confedintial. Now why should you? Because I am trying to be reasonable with you. Now I see that jail may have to be another option..."
"No. No, jail is not an option. You don't understand. People have ruined my life, my... everything! Do you think I'm giving up that easily? Well, I can tell you I'm not. In fact.."
"Look, my time is running out. You make a decision. What'll it be?"
"I-I-I am not going to stop. Why are you doing this to me? What do those people matter to you? I mean take the people you love, but what do you care a bout the others?"
Your turn Anne! How was it?
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Posted at: 9:24 pm on April 23, 2012
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ok, I just can't do it right now, I have to go. And please forgive me if I don't post more for a couple days, I've got a lot of stuff going on.
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just so you guys don't think that I'm abandoning this story or anything, I just haven't had much computer time lately. my family only has one computer right now.
But I WILL continue Alli!!!!
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here is the next part :) then it is your turn Alli!
Sarah’s POV. Ugh, that girl is very annoying. “Well, suit yourself. But just mind this warning. In your case jail is the better option. And keep a lookout for a Connor Hales, he could be a bitter enemy of yours if he isn’t already.” “Alright, I’ll keep that in mind. But don’t think that I will act on it. I don’t take warnings from enemies. I like giving them to my enemies.” Kalee replied with a smirk. I sighed. “Well, good bye.” I pressed the red button on my control board and she dropped through the floor.
Maelee’s POV.
“I can’t believe this. I really can’t!” I kept telling myself over and over as I paced back and forth across the room. I had just gotten in contact with Sarah Wheeler, a top secret scientist who had captured Kalee to give her a warning. “Connor Hales???” I stopped pacing, went over to the computer and looked up the name. A bunch of Connor Hales came up, all of them dead except for one. I clicked on the link to his name. On the page was a number and an address. Sarah said that Connor would be able to help me capture Kalee. She just hadn’t given me specific information about him. I made a quick decision. I wrote down the address and the number and grabbed Abbi, put her in her carseat and drove to Sarah’s. I would drop her off there to make sure that Abbi would be safe then I would drive over to Connor’s house. It wasn’t too far from Sarah’s house in New Castle.
After I dropped Abbi at Sarah’s house and made sure she was comfortable I called Connor, voicemail. The voice sounded like he was nice, and the voice sounded cute. I left a message saying that I was a friend of Sarah Wheeler and that she had suggested that I see you for some help with some things. “I will be there at 10:30 am.” I left my number and hung up. “Well, I hope this works.” I thought to myself. “Because it’s my only hope.”
Caleb’s POV.
“So that was weird.” I said to my best friend and roomate John Louis. “What?” He asked. “Someone named Maelee Day just called saying she is a friend of Sarah’s and that she’s coming over this morning. Sarah never told me anything about her.” “Well, when is she coming?” “In ten minutes.” “What??” “She said that it was really important that she meet me. She didn’t say why.” “Well, she’s a friend of Sarah’s right?” “That’s what she said.” I replied uncertainly. “Well then call Sarah and ask her if she has a friend named Maelee Day!” John replied exasperated. “Alright, alright.” I said, going to the phone. I dialed Sarah’s number. “Hello?” Sarah replied. “Hey Sarah, it’s me Caleb.” “Oh hey Caleb, what do you need?” “Have you heard of a Maelee Day?” “Why?” Her voice sounding hesitant. “Come on Sarah! What are you keeping from me?!?!?! And Why?!? I’m not two years old anymore sis!” There was a long pause on the other end. “Mom and Dad’s divorce was harder on you than it was for me.” She finally said. “That’s irrelevant Sarah!” I took breaths to calm myself down. “Now what do you know about Maelee Day? Please tell me that you are not trying to find a girlfriend for me.” John chuckled. I punched him in the gut. “No, I am not trying to find a girlfriend for you. Yes I know her-” “Meaning you looked her up and found her on lonly girls site, wanting a boyfriend.” I said. “Will you just listen to me?!?” Sarah said. “When she gets there, when will she get there by the way?” “In about five minutes.” “Good. Now let her in when she gets there. And just listen to her, ok? I won’t tell you anything beyond that. And has a girl named Kalee been by?” “No, am I supposed to be expecting her too?” Sarah sighed. “Good. Now if a girl calls you and says her name is Kalee, just tell her that she had her chance. Got that?” “Alright, alright. Bye Sarah.” I said. “Bye Caleb, make sure John is out of the house while she is there, and be safe.” She said, then hung up. “So what did she say? And dude, that was Hard.” John asked. “She said to let her in and to listen to her.” I replied. “Really??” John asked interested. “Yeah, and she’s going to be here in a minute. Sarah also said that you should go out of the house until she is gone.” “Really? Why?” “I don’t know man, but whatever Sarah says to do, we got to do it.” He harrumphed. “Fine, but-” he broke off because the doorbell rang. “I’ll get it.” I said to him. And ran to the door.
YOUR TURN ALLI!!!
Sarah’s POV. Ugh, that girl is very annoying. “Well, suit yourself. But just mind this warning. In your case jail is the better option. And keep a lookout for a Connor Hales, he could be a bitter enemy of yours if he isn’t already.” “Alright, I’ll keep that in mind. But don’t think that I will act on it. I don’t take warnings from enemies. I like giving them to my enemies.” Kalee replied with a smirk. I sighed. “Well, good bye.” I pressed the red button on my control board and she dropped through the floor.
Maelee’s POV.
“I can’t believe this. I really can’t!” I kept telling myself over and over as I paced back and forth across the room. I had just gotten in contact with Sarah Wheeler, a top secret scientist who had captured Kalee to give her a warning. “Connor Hales???” I stopped pacing, went over to the computer and looked up the name. A bunch of Connor Hales came up, all of them dead except for one. I clicked on the link to his name. On the page was a number and an address. Sarah said that Connor would be able to help me capture Kalee. She just hadn’t given me specific information about him. I made a quick decision. I wrote down the address and the number and grabbed Abbi, put her in her carseat and drove to Sarah’s. I would drop her off there to make sure that Abbi would be safe then I would drive over to Connor’s house. It wasn’t too far from Sarah’s house in New Castle.
After I dropped Abbi at Sarah’s house and made sure she was comfortable I called Connor, voicemail. The voice sounded like he was nice, and the voice sounded cute. I left a message saying that I was a friend of Sarah Wheeler and that she had suggested that I see you for some help with some things. “I will be there at 10:30 am.” I left my number and hung up. “Well, I hope this works.” I thought to myself. “Because it’s my only hope.”
Caleb’s POV.
“So that was weird.” I said to my best friend and roomate John Louis. “What?” He asked. “Someone named Maelee Day just called saying she is a friend of Sarah’s and that she’s coming over this morning. Sarah never told me anything about her.” “Well, when is she coming?” “In ten minutes.” “What??” “She said that it was really important that she meet me. She didn’t say why.” “Well, she’s a friend of Sarah’s right?” “That’s what she said.” I replied uncertainly. “Well then call Sarah and ask her if she has a friend named Maelee Day!” John replied exasperated. “Alright, alright.” I said, going to the phone. I dialed Sarah’s number. “Hello?” Sarah replied. “Hey Sarah, it’s me Caleb.” “Oh hey Caleb, what do you need?” “Have you heard of a Maelee Day?” “Why?” Her voice sounding hesitant. “Come on Sarah! What are you keeping from me?!?!?! And Why?!? I’m not two years old anymore sis!” There was a long pause on the other end. “Mom and Dad’s divorce was harder on you than it was for me.” She finally said. “That’s irrelevant Sarah!” I took breaths to calm myself down. “Now what do you know about Maelee Day? Please tell me that you are not trying to find a girlfriend for me.” John chuckled. I punched him in the gut. “No, I am not trying to find a girlfriend for you. Yes I know her-” “Meaning you looked her up and found her on lonly girls site, wanting a boyfriend.” I said. “Will you just listen to me?!?” Sarah said. “When she gets there, when will she get there by the way?” “In about five minutes.” “Good. Now let her in when she gets there. And just listen to her, ok? I won’t tell you anything beyond that. And has a girl named Kalee been by?” “No, am I supposed to be expecting her too?” Sarah sighed. “Good. Now if a girl calls you and says her name is Kalee, just tell her that she had her chance. Got that?” “Alright, alright. Bye Sarah.” I said. “Bye Caleb, make sure John is out of the house while she is there, and be safe.” She said, then hung up. “So what did she say? And dude, that was Hard.” John asked. “She said to let her in and to listen to her.” I replied. “Really??” John asked interested. “Yeah, and she’s going to be here in a minute. Sarah also said that you should go out of the house until she is gone.” “Really? Why?” “I don’t know man, but whatever Sarah says to do, we got to do it.” He harrumphed. “Fine, but-” he broke off because the doorbell rang. “I’ll get it.” I said to him. And ran to the door.
YOUR TURN ALLI!!!
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Great guys! :)
Hey everybody! There is a Writer President election going on right now, and I'm trying to get the word around. Anyone can vote and I would encourage you to! I am running for President and VP, but I'm not trying to pressure you to vote for me, only if you want to. (Though if you did vote for me I would appreciate it a lot; I can't lie). :)
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Hey everybody! There is a Writer President election going on right now, and I'm trying to get the word around. Anyone can vote and I would encourage you to! I am running for President and VP, but I'm not trying to pressure you to vote for me, only if you want to. (Though if you did vote for me I would appreciate it a lot; I can't lie). :)
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ok, and thanks for commenting!! I can't believe this is on the first page!!!!
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
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Posted at: 8:44 am on May 10, 2012
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Name: Cris
Age:10
Gender: Female
Personality: sarcastic, bad tempered, rough, tomboy,rude
Hometown: Pixton
Backstory: She's an orphan and lives in a dark alley with her pet dog Ruffer.
Bad guy or Good duy: Good
Age:10
Gender: Female
Personality: sarcastic, bad tempered, rough, tomboy,rude
Hometown: Pixton
Backstory: She's an orphan and lives in a dark alley with her pet dog Ruffer.
Bad guy or Good duy: Good
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Posted at: 8:52 am on May 10, 2012
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Alright, good character AJ5, I just need to make sure with Alli that it is fine :)
Alli! Are you going to continue???
Alli! Are you going to continue???
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Posted at: 10:39 pm on May 14, 2012
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hey alli, i'm going to continue the story if that's alright with you.
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Posted at: 10:50 pm on May 16, 2012
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Okay, sorry! I totaly forgot about this post! I'll continue:
Kalee's POV - Really who is that girl? What did I ever do to her? No one knows I'm the bomber, do they? All there questions are buzzing through my head as I sit, restrained in this chair. Days, it seems, pass by. When she left, I did get one bottle of water and a small loaf of bread, but they've almost ran out. Will I just sit here forever? I haven't slept since she left. Of course, I must stay awake, because the moment I'm off my guard, they'll surely finish me off. But one day, I slip off to sleep.....
Sarah's POV - "The suspect has fallen asleep. Repeat: The suspect has fallen asleep!" my radio blares.
"Well she won't be if you keep screaming into the radio!" I call back ," Lower the chair into the chamber. Secure her belongings, if you haven't already. That includes the items in her garage. I need these things done pronto! Oh and send our young recruit.."
"He quit."
"When? Why was I not informed about this?"
"Yesterday. And I ..."
"Just go and send her to our new test plant. Got it?" I say.
"Yes, Ma' am!"
Sometimes these men get out of whack. That's why I'm the top official in this business.
Cris's POV - I was walking along the alley when the lady cam up to me," Want a job, kid?"
"Uhh, sure. Do I get paid?" I asked.
"Yes, you get paid.Would your parents care if you left for a bit?"
"I-I've got no parents. Just my little dog, Ruffer," I say. Pretty much, Ruffer's all I can really say is mine. Somehow, I have his papers. Ruffer is mine and I am his.
"Can't keep the dog," the lady says.
"I can't! Why not!? If I go, Ruffer goes!" I say. I will keep Ruffer even if it means not having money, food, or a job.
Sarah's POV - I liked this kid's personality. But then the dog came in. I could keep the dog and the kid or nothing," What's your hometown, kid?"
"Pixton. By the way, the name's Cris."
Okay, more reassuring," Were you there during the bombing?"
"Ye~es! I was very scared, but I escaped."
He escaped? Smart kid! I needed him!
"You got the job!"
"Can keep the dog?" she asked.
"Yes."
Kalee's POV - Really who is that girl? What did I ever do to her? No one knows I'm the bomber, do they? All there questions are buzzing through my head as I sit, restrained in this chair. Days, it seems, pass by. When she left, I did get one bottle of water and a small loaf of bread, but they've almost ran out. Will I just sit here forever? I haven't slept since she left. Of course, I must stay awake, because the moment I'm off my guard, they'll surely finish me off. But one day, I slip off to sleep.....
Sarah's POV - "The suspect has fallen asleep. Repeat: The suspect has fallen asleep!" my radio blares.
"Well she won't be if you keep screaming into the radio!" I call back ," Lower the chair into the chamber. Secure her belongings, if you haven't already. That includes the items in her garage. I need these things done pronto! Oh and send our young recruit.."
"He quit."
"When? Why was I not informed about this?"
"Yesterday. And I ..."
"Just go and send her to our new test plant. Got it?" I say.
"Yes, Ma' am!"
Sometimes these men get out of whack. That's why I'm the top official in this business.
Cris's POV - I was walking along the alley when the lady cam up to me," Want a job, kid?"
"Uhh, sure. Do I get paid?" I asked.
"Yes, you get paid.Would your parents care if you left for a bit?"
"I-I've got no parents. Just my little dog, Ruffer," I say. Pretty much, Ruffer's all I can really say is mine. Somehow, I have his papers. Ruffer is mine and I am his.
"Can't keep the dog," the lady says.
"I can't! Why not!? If I go, Ruffer goes!" I say. I will keep Ruffer even if it means not having money, food, or a job.
Sarah's POV - I liked this kid's personality. But then the dog came in. I could keep the dog and the kid or nothing," What's your hometown, kid?"
"Pixton. By the way, the name's Cris."
Okay, more reassuring," Were you there during the bombing?"
"Ye~es! I was very scared, but I escaped."
He escaped? Smart kid! I needed him!
"You got the job!"
"Can keep the dog?" she asked.
"Yes."
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Posted at: 1:05 pm on June 6, 2012
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ooohhh. I have some more that I want to post that won't conflict with what you've writen alright? As long as you post more I'll post it, alright?
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
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Posted at: 8:19 am on June 7, 2012
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just one thing Alli before i post the next part, Cris is a girl. Just saying. and i'll post the next part asap. I've created another new character, every story of mine HAS to have a bit of romance in it, alright Alli??
I'm glad your finally back :)
I'm glad your finally back :)
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
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Posted at: 8:41 pm on June 7, 2012
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Okay!
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Posted at: 4:50 pm on June 9, 2012
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awesome, sorry I haven't been on in forever, I just haven't had a chance to get on here.
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
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Posted at: 10:46 pm on June 13, 2012
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Maelee’s Pov.
“Hi, my name is Maelee Day, well I guess you got my message.” I said to introduce myself. “Yeah, I got it.” He replied. “So, do you want to come in” He asked. “Sure.” I said, going in. “So, that’s my friend John over there.” He said, pointing to a guy in one corner of the room. “Hey, listen, I’m going to go to the store. Text me if you need anything.” John said. “Ok, see you John.” Caleb said.
We sat in silence for 10 minutes. Then I said. “So, you know Sarah?” “Yeah, she’s my sister.” “Wait, what?” “Our parents split when we were young, I stayed with my dad, she stayed with my mom.” “Oh,” I said. “So what did Sarah send you to me for?” He asked with annoyance. The expression on my face grew grim. “Have you heard of the mysterious person who is going around, blowing up cities?” I asked. “Yeah.” “Well, Pixton, one of the towns that blew up,” “Yeah” “that was my home.” I said. “Oh.” He said, surprised. “I’m sorry.” “It’s alright. But now I am out to stop her.” “Her??” “Yeah, I had an encounter with the bomber. Her name is Kalee Lane.” “Kalee Lane?” “Yeah, why?” “Nothing.” “Anyway, we talked. And she said that if I let her go then she would give me 2 weeks to track her down and find her. Or else she would blow up another city.” I finished. he was speechless for a few seconds. “Wow. And if you don’t want my help then you’re crazy!” “That’s the part I can’t figure out. Your sister sent me to you, but didn’t tell me what you do!” He was startled. “Really? She didn’t tell you what I could do?” “No,” I said, confused. “Why? What can you do?” “I’m a brainiac. A lot of girls think I’m cute, but when they get to know me. They go away.” He said with embarrassment in his voice. “Oh, so could you help me?” I asked. “You would be crazy to not let me help you Maelee!” He said. I smiled brightly. “Awesome.” “Alright, come on.” Caleb walked over to the kitchen. “You hungry?” He asked. “Yeah!” I said, realizing that I hadn’t eaten for a while, and was starving. “You can tell me the whole story over a sandwich. Peanut butter and jelly?” He asks. “Sure, so you and Sarah are sisters?” I reply with a question. “Yeah,”
Sorry that was kind of short, I've hit a writer's block :(
But now it's your turn Alli :)
Anne.
“Hi, my name is Maelee Day, well I guess you got my message.” I said to introduce myself. “Yeah, I got it.” He replied. “So, do you want to come in” He asked. “Sure.” I said, going in. “So, that’s my friend John over there.” He said, pointing to a guy in one corner of the room. “Hey, listen, I’m going to go to the store. Text me if you need anything.” John said. “Ok, see you John.” Caleb said.
We sat in silence for 10 minutes. Then I said. “So, you know Sarah?” “Yeah, she’s my sister.” “Wait, what?” “Our parents split when we were young, I stayed with my dad, she stayed with my mom.” “Oh,” I said. “So what did Sarah send you to me for?” He asked with annoyance. The expression on my face grew grim. “Have you heard of the mysterious person who is going around, blowing up cities?” I asked. “Yeah.” “Well, Pixton, one of the towns that blew up,” “Yeah” “that was my home.” I said. “Oh.” He said, surprised. “I’m sorry.” “It’s alright. But now I am out to stop her.” “Her??” “Yeah, I had an encounter with the bomber. Her name is Kalee Lane.” “Kalee Lane?” “Yeah, why?” “Nothing.” “Anyway, we talked. And she said that if I let her go then she would give me 2 weeks to track her down and find her. Or else she would blow up another city.” I finished. he was speechless for a few seconds. “Wow. And if you don’t want my help then you’re crazy!” “That’s the part I can’t figure out. Your sister sent me to you, but didn’t tell me what you do!” He was startled. “Really? She didn’t tell you what I could do?” “No,” I said, confused. “Why? What can you do?” “I’m a brainiac. A lot of girls think I’m cute, but when they get to know me. They go away.” He said with embarrassment in his voice. “Oh, so could you help me?” I asked. “You would be crazy to not let me help you Maelee!” He said. I smiled brightly. “Awesome.” “Alright, come on.” Caleb walked over to the kitchen. “You hungry?” He asked. “Yeah!” I said, realizing that I hadn’t eaten for a while, and was starving. “You can tell me the whole story over a sandwich. Peanut butter and jelly?” He asks. “Sure, so you and Sarah are sisters?” I reply with a question. “Yeah,”
Sorry that was kind of short, I've hit a writer's block :(
But now it's your turn Alli :)
Anne.
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
Posted at: 1:09 am on June 23, 2012
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Nice Story...I'll give you a thunbs up for that...
Will you please check out mine, If you have time ? http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/21554
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Posted at: 10:03 am on June 26, 2012
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Thanks AgentAssassin1548 :) and I'll check out your stories.
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
Posted at: 12:56 am on June 29, 2012
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Name: Kanya Tomislav
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Personality: Courageos, kind
Hometown: Newton
Backstory: Parents were killed in the bombs and I was taken prisoner
Bad guy or good guy: GOOD
Other: Tiny for 10, fast runner, good at archery
Age: 10
Gender: Female
Personality: Courageos, kind
Hometown: Newton
Backstory: Parents were killed in the bombs and I was taken prisoner
Bad guy or good guy: GOOD
Other: Tiny for 10, fast runner, good at archery
I will miss you, Morgan/Emma Jane.
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Posted at: 6:39 pm on July 3, 2012
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I will miss you, Morgan/Emma Jane.
Creator of the Nifty Award
Aramay, sister to Aragorn
Agent 7 of ♥'s
Animare
Daughter of Kronos
Red, the blood of angry men
Posted at: 1:22 pm on July 5, 2012
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