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Chapter 1 The Lost Member of Cahill.

      My name is Thomas Kingstone. My age is 12 years old and i got a letter in the mail last week. I opened it up and i couldnt belive my eyes. It was a golden ticket. I didnt get why i got it. It told me to go to a place all the way in Boston. I had no parents so i walked over there. I just got there after many people left. I was the only one there.
      Suddenly, a shadowy fiqure emurged from behind a tree. He said " Hey you there. whats your name?". " T-T-Thomas Kingstone." I replied. "Come with me" He whispered. I followed him into a deep dark chamber. There he gave me a paper which was worth 100,000 dollers in a bank. He whispered "You may also take one of the 39 clues". I took the clue and he burned up the paper. Luckily, I remembered the numbers on the paper. I read the paper which said Resolution: The fine print to guess Seek out Richard S__.  Soon enough, I smeled smoke. I found a fire in the library.
      Later, an old man leaped out from behind the books. I was shocked. I couldn't see anything but the outline of him. He rushed out of the house and left me there. "Crash" a part of the building landed on my hand. "Ouch" I couldn't get up and smoke filled my lungs. Quickly, I shoved the rock off my hand. "The old man mustv'e left his book" I thought to myself. I picked up my book and ran out of the house. I looked inside and found out that it was Poor Richard's Almanack. "This must be something conected to the main clue"I thought "I must go to Parris".  Then, I heard voices. I looked inside the entrance and saw to kids, probaly 11 and 14. I ran out and saw the 2 kids outside looking at a man in black. I found 2 wheels a handle to a sword and a metal pole with a surf board. I quickly made a scooter and scootered near a black jet with the name of Ian and Natile on both sides. "Crash" I fell right on top of thier jet and made a scratch. "What the!" yelled a voice.  "Who did this!" yelled another voice. Two other kids, a boy and a girl, rushed over to me.  "H-H-Hi" i said nevously. "Crack" they smashed a bottle on my head knocking me out.

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Chapter 2 I make a daring escape.
     
     I woke up in a cell not to big. I sighed. "Ever since this clue hunt began" I started " I cant go one, just one, day without being tortured." 2 kids emerged from the shadows. "Well,Well,Well what do we have here." answered a voice. I took a closer look. "Ian and Natalie?" I questioned. "Right!" answered Ian. I grinned a little. "Why are you grining?" Natalie asked. "Because" I excaimed " There's a mud bomb right next to you!" Natalie looked to her side and a bomb blew up and mud splashed right into her face. I got up and swung the chair right at Ian. He stumbled backwards while Natalie rubbed her eyes to get the mud out. I ran for my life. "Get him!" Natalie screamed. I grabbed a parachute on the rail and open the sky diving door.
     A few seconds later, I jumped off. Natalie and Ian were right on my trail. The only thing i could do was release the parachute. I quickly released the parachute and fell. I landed near an airport and saw the two kids from the fire in the mansion.  I found a note near a parked car. "Must of been thier car" I muttered to myself. I picked up the note and it had diffrent times on it. 11:00 Am 12:00 Pm 1:00 Pm.    "This is the times of the planes leaving to Parris" I said to myself. I put the times into my shirt pocket. I ran over and into the airport. I couldnt belive my eyes. The last plane was almost leaving in 30 minutes. I got tickets which took 25 minutes and i got onto the plane. "Phew" I sounded realived. Just then, I saw the 2 kids again but this time with name tags. Thier names are Amy and Dan."They must have an aupair" I whispered inside my head. "Nellie? Thats a wierd name." They sat behind my seat. I took out the Almanack and read it. I saw a note inside a page that read Follow Franklin, First Clue. Maze of Bones. "Maze of Bones? Whats that?" I opened my laptop that I had in my backpack. Then i searched Maze of Bones. "Ewwww. Ok. Thats what I get for leaving it on images" I said. I put it on everything and saw some information. "Maze of Bones" I exclaimed "A maze in which there are 1,000 bones of dead bodies. You can visit them in Parris, France."
     A few hours later, the plane arrived at Parris. I got my luggage and put my laptop in my backpack. I found a box in it and opened it. My eyes widened. "100 bucks" I almost shouted. I rented a room in a hotel that was 10 dollers per day. I got room 36 on the top floor. I heard fans screaming outside my door. I opened it and there were fans. They were there for this popstar called Jonah Wizard. I found out where the Maze of Bones were that night.

    

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Hello people . It's me Dolphin and i was wondering if you guys would like to rate my story with the comment. I mean some thing like 1-10 or make it look like this====> 5/10. Anyway thats the best thing i could do. Also if you want to be in the story as a Vesper spy or my friend then just fill in this application====
> Name:
   Age:
   Appearance:
   Personality:
   Family: Vesper or Cahill or you can do you're own family
   Best skill: Exsample: Brains,Reflexes,Inventing,Strength,or even spying or Music
   Cahill  Branch: Tomas Lucian Ekat Janus
Vesper branches: ?1 ?2 ?3 ?4

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Chapter 3 The Paris Catacombs(aka. The Maze of bones)
     I woke up again with screaming Fans to Jonah Wizard next door. I've had it enough with this. I opened my door and screamed at the fans.  Apparantly, they left. "Thank you god" I whispered to myself. I walked downstairs with all my luggage and stuff so I just checked out. After what felt like forever, I finally made it to the Catacombs. Then, I saw Amy and Dan with thier Au-pair, Nellie, being chased by the Kabras coming twoards here."Oh great now i got some company" I thought. I jumped inside the Catacombs and ran for my life. The more I ran the darker it got. Soon the room was only lit by a small crack above me. It was only pointing to a pair of skulls."What? This must be the time Franklin was in. What he left just numbers!1.2.3.4.5 thats it!"I shouted I heard some foot steps coming to the room.
     As quickly as I could,I sliped into a crack in the wall and saw Amy,Dan and Nellie looking around the room. They spotted the skulls and said something I could't hear behing the wall.Ian and Natalie Kabra jumped out and scared them. Amy and Dan and Nellie ran off as soon as the old guy (no offence Alistar) tackled them.I saw my chance to escape and did but, something bad happened.Ian grabbed me by the ankle and Natalie shot me with a dart. The last thing I heard was "Oh Alistar leave before we do the same thing to you like this poor little child". With that I layed unconcinous on the floor.
     Woke up again, this time in a large torture chamber. I was tied to a bed with two other girls."Oh you have got to be kiddin me Reagon"said the girl from the left of me. The other girl probaly Reagon replied back"God how can we get defeated by the Kabras Madison" I couldn't help thinking that I was in a torture chamber with 2 girls named Madison and Reagon."Would you please shut up people!"I shouted at them"I'm trying to escape here".  I loosened up and and the ropes got untangled. I sliped pout and droped on the floor. Ian and Natalie emerged from another room."How did he get out!" cried Natalie and Ian the same time.I decided to kick them in the face but I just gave them a knock out punch."Oh my god, are they really that weak?"I thought."Hello?"Madison said"Were still tied". I untied them and opened the door."Umm"I started"How do we get down from here?". Madison and Reagon stared at each other.Then, they both shouted"parachuting!!!" I stared at them both. I slaped my forhead.There was only two parachutes.I tried to get one but, Madison and Reagon jumped off with them."Thats just great"I said"So great".
     Ian and Natalie woke up right behing my back."Ok"Ian said"You want death or you want to live."To live"I screamed. I fliped over them and kicked them in the face and blood leaked out of Ians nose and onto Natalies dress."You will pay"scream Ian and he pushed me off the plane. I fell and broke my spine when Reagon and Madison reached thier boat.Then the world faded into darkness.

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Hey, Hi, remember me? Clover Hasse? You made a Hunger Games RP and LEFT IT!! I am so mad, because I check back to see if you were ever going to post the story and you didn't. If you don't post by the 30th, I'm going to alert everyone who joined the RP that I am going to take over that RP. Just to recap, don't post by the 30th I'm telling everyone who joined that I am going to take over the RP. What I mean by take over is. I will now make the ruled of the games, write the chairoit P.O.Vs, choose who's bloodbathed, who wins, and much more.
-Clover H.

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"Ingenuity above all"- Katherine Cahill "Smartness before vanity" -me

I may not be a Tomas, Madrigal, or Janus... but I am beautiful, even without their skills

 

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Tick...Tock...Tick...Tock... Eyes on the clock... Tick... Tick... Time is Slick... Tock...Tock... Time Never Locks.

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"Ingenuity above all"- Katherine Cahill "Smartness before vanity" -me

I may not be a Tomas, Madrigal, or Janus... but I am beautiful, even without their skills

 

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    Hi Thomas! I read through your story and I think it's pretty good! On a score of 1-10 I'd say you're a 6 1/2. While reading it I enjoyed the constant action the story has! It makes the story interesting and that's what I think you did best! :D 
   I would recommend that you make your statements clearer. For example:

"I don't believe you!" I shouted.
"Why not?" Ian grinned, "She truly is dead, though not by my hand. Oh no!"
"You are not worthy of trust." I stated.
Ian glared at me and I suddenly didn't feel so strong anymore.

Instead of:
"I don't believe you!" I shouted. "Why not?" Ian grinned, "She truly is dead, though not by my hand. Oh no!""You are not worthy of trust." I stated.
Ian glared at me and I suddenly didn't feel so strong anymore.

And I would also recommend you add a bit more detail. Not too much, but not to little.
For example:

I leaned against the wall and wiped my brow from exhaustion.

As appose to:

I felt tired.

Those are just ideas. I really enjoyed your story and think that you should definitely continue. You have talent and practice makes perfect! :)




CatchingAmazing385: Just to let you know, you posted in the Symbols font, and it showed up in Greek. I'm just letting you know because I've done it before and it took me forever to figure it out! 




Mary~ Inspired by the past. Writer of the present. Author of the future.
  

 

MUSICMUSICMUSICMUSIC

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MUSICMUSICMUSICMUSIC      Would he say he's in L-O-V-E?

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Thanks Mary. I'm gonna put you in the clue hunt if you want to. You could be a Vesper of a assasin hired by Ian or Natalie to kill me. What ever just read my application.


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Chapter 4 Landed right on the bullseye...in fact right on the Holts Boat 
     I've landed right on the Holt's boat. Madison and Reagon were staring at me and I was getting creeped out. 
"Good your awake."Madison said "I hope your feeling better."I was still starting to cover my back, It hurted like walking on coals. 
"Umm why is there lots of wires on my?" I asked them. Reagon grinned evily and pressed a button. I was shocked like being hit with a lighting bolt. "Ow, What was that for?"
"Oh nothing..."Madison answered as she wrote something on a clip board. Reagon brought out another freekish set of wires and tried to put them on me.
"Ugh stay still."She exclaimed. I grabbed the wires and put them on her. Then, I grabbed her remote and pressed the button. She was shockedlike I was and fell to the ground with her hair sticking up.


Ugh got to go to bed now. Post more on this later.     

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Name:Grace
Age:14
Looks: Long blond hair, Green eyes, Tan and tallish.
Personality: Laughs at peoples misfortion, Funny, Most of the time uncalm
Family: Little bro, little sis, Mom and dad
Best skill: Lying, playing my clarinet and Free running
Vesper Branch: There is n Vesper branches, Once your a Vesper your family. Yes, I'm a Vesper.
Rate: 6/10

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“Older Siblings were born first so that they can protect the little ones that come after”

 

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SpiritedRogue i'm gonna put you in this chapter or later on as a spy. And i'm gonna put ur last name as Vesper. If i don't put you in you can put a code last name for you...

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Nah, Go ahead and call me Grace Star. Why? Vesper means star. *laughs* I love saying that!

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"Ha ha. Take that" I laughed
"What did you do to her!"Screamed Madison.
"Oh nothing but, just electricute her"
"Is she suppose to be breathing out foam?"
"Uh No."I grabbed the remote again and pressed the button. She jumped up with a start and punched me in the chest."Really just a punch in the chest?"
"Hun? How did he not get hurt by my punch?"asked Reagon."Dude are you just joking? Cause if your not joking i'm gonna go insane."
"Uh no, I'm not joking." She fell to the ground saying she was going crazy.
"No really it didn't hurt?"asked Madison"Because I might go insane to."
"Uh no. It really didn't hurt." She fell down saying she was crazy to and I got off the bed and took some of there ninja stars."Sweet dreams guys"I said and swam to shore.
     As soon as I got back to Paris, I found a note waiting for me at my room. It said to meet someone at the allyway and to make sure i'm not followed. I 'borrowed' a nice clean sword righ near the allyway and went to meet the mysterious guest.As soon as I got into the allyway a cage slamed down right on top of me.
"You shouldn't of came here without someone Cahill. Now you will be demolished by my nice tigers"said a women's voice. I turned around and saw two tigers heading right towards me. The more closer they came the tinier they got.
"Really,kittens. You should of brought Lions or something"I said. 
"Now Cahill if you try to move you will be attacked by Lions."
"Ok so I just stay here and play with the baby tigers?"
"Ugh they were not what I wanted. but, if you give me the first of the thirty-nine clues you will only be knocked out for a while to give us time."
"Fine the first clue is honey.And what is a Cahill?Is it a word for hideous monsters?"
"No and Lions attack!!!"I quickly drew my sword and stabbed the lions. I ran after the figure and she dropped a name tag.
"Grace Star also known as Vesper?"I muttered. I picked up her name tag and put it in my pocket.
"Yo Yo Yo man whats up"said that annoying dude Jonah Wizard
"Do I know you?"I asked him
"Dude you don't know my...I'm Jonah Wizard, the rapper.Does it ring a bell?"
"Nope all I know is that annoying pop singer who lives in the room next to mine. I can't even get many sleep without being woke up by hundreds of fans"
"Oh then, do you know the Holts?"
"The Holts yea they tried to expirement on me!"I walked away angerly and bought a cresont with my money. I hated this clue hunt but, the prize is world domination.
   

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I have tiger kittens? THATS SOO CUTE!!!

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Chapter 5 I figure out something about the Vespers...and it's not pretty.
     I went back to my hotel and saw another note on the door.
"Ugh when will they all stop with this stupid clue hunt."I muttered. I looked at the note and it said: Dear Thomas Kingstone, You may have outsmarted the Vesper spy, Grace Star, but you will never fool the Vesper council. I almost gasped. Grace Star was the one trying to kidnap me with Tiger Kittens.
"Idiots."I muttered"They don't know who thier messing with. I layed in bed and thought about the note.Then I thought about the clue I got. Resoulution: A fine print to guess seek out Richard S____. Resoulution can be an anagram I thought. Iron Solute?. "Wait, Iron Solute. R-e-s-o-u-l-u-t-i-o-n. Yep thats the clue."I muttered.
     I heard someone mummbling outside the door. I checked and it was Ian and Natalie with Jonah and Reagon and Madison talking. I only could hear some of thier consveration outside.
"You know Jonah, Reagon, Madison. Me and my Ian are trying to find this kid who escaped from us like 5 times since this whole clue hunt started."Exclaimed Natalie.
Madison replied"You know Natalie is that the boy who escaped from us when we tried to experiment on him."
"You experimented on him?!?". Natalie started backing away. "Why were you doing that?"
"Because"Reagon started." He might of helped us with the clue hunt. We don't know what branch he is from in the Cahill family. He might just be useful."
Jonah sighed "He called annoying since my fans kept waking him up."
Ian was shocked. "You mean he's in this building?"
"Uh yeah he's right next door." I never should of gave him my hotel room number or anything. Ian started to take out a lock picking set. Who even takes a lock picking set! I took my cell phone and some of the ninja stars in my bag. I put back my cell phone and got ready to throw my ninja stars.
"Ugh how does he do theese locks? It's so hard to pick lock." Ian complained.
"Oh come on Ian"Madison muttered"Let me handle it." She stepped back and kicked the door down. I threw my ninja stars at Ian.
He ducked and said"Really Idiot. Thats all you got?"
"Oh no. It's just that there coming back at you and you friends here."I countered. Ian's head was bonked with the part of the ninja star so he wasn't stabbed and everybody else was the same. I couldn't believe Natalie had fallen down right on top of Ian."What Idiots."
     Unfortuantly, Reagon and Madison had not been knocked and had my ninja stars. The only other weapong I could think of was my sword , but I lost it fighting Grace Star.

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If you want to be in the story as a Vesper spy or my friend then just fill in this application====
> Name:
   Age:
   Appearance:
   Personality:
   Family: Vesper or Cahill or you can do you're own family
   Best skill: Exsample: Brains,Reflexes,Inventing,Strength,or even spying or Music
   Cahill  Branch: Tomas Lucian Ekat Janus
Vesper branches: ?1 ?2 ?3 ?4

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Chapter 5 I figure out something about the Vespers...and it's not pretty

     I could of jumped out the window ,but I would of been dead. Reagon, Jonah,and Madison were still there and I wasn't so sure If they were gonna kill me or not. I grabbed my pack and picked up a hard cresont and threw it at Jonah. Unfortuantly, Madison caught it and crumbled it to dust with her hand. I was dead meat until I smelled something strange. Madison, Reagon, and Jonah fell to the ground snoring away and I recognized the smell. It was suppose to be sleeping gas. My eyes started to get droopy. I knew it was Vespers and took out a cloth. I wrapped it around my mouth and nose so I couldn't breath the gas.
"Ugh you again?"I asked as Grace Star entered the room.
"How did you? Never mind"Grace mummbled"She took out a twenty inch bamboo stick and aimed it at me.
"Oh great. A bamboo stick. Whoopdedoo." I kicked the stick right out into the air and caught it. I twirled it so Grace couldn't even touch me because it was going so fast.Suddenly, she kicked my leg and I dropped the stick. Then, she reached for the cloth protechting my mouth and nose from breathing the gas. She tore it off and I started to get a little tired. At last, I fell to the ground almost lifeless.
     I woke up with Grace Star and some other people looking at me. One of them was pointing a gun at me.
"Ok Thomas, You are gonna tell me what the real first clue is for the Master Syrum. If you don't you will get shot and die."Grace repeated 2 times. I looked at the woman holding the gun. The other woman had a gun to the side of her belt.
"Let me guess?"I guessed."Vesper Spies?" Grace nodded and took out somewhat of a tazer. She pressed the on button and a red lazer emerged. I looked at the women holding the gun and thought quickly. I kicked the gun out of her hand and smashed the chair infrount of Grace's head. The last Vesper Spy took the tazer and shoved it right into my head. It stung and I fell to the ground. AGAIN

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Thats what you get for messing with the Vespers! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! ...Yeah, My evil laugh sucks.

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Posted at: 5:34 pm on May 19, 2012

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I'll try to find more people. Just a sec...

Grace

 

 

Bleach

 

“Older Siblings were born first so that they can protect the little ones that come after”

 

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Posted at: 2:00 pm on May 21, 2012

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Hello?

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Posted at: 4:41 pm on May 24, 2012

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good

Awsome

Might be coming back

Vesper(maybe)

um...

Posted at: 9:28 pm on May 24, 2012

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I'm reading this!!! It's @w3s0m3!!! please continue! *Reads to bottom of the page, realizes that there isn't anymore posts yet.* NOOOOO!!!!!! THE HUMANITYYY!!!!



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Posted at: 11:27 pm on May 24, 2012

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Okay guyz. P.S.Check every other post if you want to be in the story. P.P.S. Thx so much for reading this. I'll get on it.

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Posted at: 3:08 pm on May 25, 2012

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Umpth. Actually, Vesper suspects(ones with only one name and aren't initials are already confirmed) are:
V1:AJT/IK/DR/???
V2:AJT/IK/MR/ET/???
V3: ET/MR/IK
V4:Sandy Bancroft
V5:Luna Amato
V6:Cheynne Wyoming(Spot now open due to Cheynne's failed mission's...'Consequence'.)



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Posted at: 7:14 pm on May 25, 2012

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Yeah! Lets do this! *pumps fist into the air*

Grace

 

 

Bleach

 

“Older Siblings were born first so that they can protect the little ones that come after”

 

Soul reaper

Posted at: 5:41 am on May 26, 2012

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Name grady
Age 12
Personality rebelious funny
Family cahill
Skill spying
Branch lucain 

Grady Cahill 

Master of spying leader of c.i.a

Spec ops trooper

Posted at: 8:39 am on May 26, 2012

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Cool story, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes in it. 

Leader of SMART

Researcher in Cahill Council!

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I'm Awesome! Just admit it!

 

  

 

 

 

 

Posted at: 12:34 pm on May 26, 2012

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cool

House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!

Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!

Posted at: 8:46 am on May 27, 2012

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Dude cool story!!! Props, props!
@ Grace Vesper=Star Yes you say that ALOT

Lucian Janus

UChild of God

Resident of District 9

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Honarary Vesper

Follower of Fang

Cerus (Cera) Cahill

 

Posted at: 12:45 pm on May 29, 2012

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Chapter 6 I meet Casper and Cheyenne Wyoming
     I sat in a jail cell and stared at a poster that said DONT MESS WITH THE VESPERS. I heard a small clattle like keys. I turned around and stared at the lock. Then, a shadow appeared and unlocked the door. In the dim light I could see the face of a young man.He was probably a Vesper like Grace.
"You, come with me" he said and tied my hands up with a rope. I took out a small piece of metal and quickly tried to cut the rope. He stared at my hand and slapped the metal out of my hand.
"Hey!"I said"I was using that!". I kicked him in the shin and smashed my hands into his face.
"Cheyenne!!"He yelled"Come get this kid!! He kicking me and he won't stop it!" I kept kicking him and a girl, about his age, came.
"Casper, he's only a kid and he's already hurting you?I can't believe i'm realated to you."she said. She grabbed my arms and slammed me into the wall. I yelped in pain and kicked her right into the face.
"Man how is he this flexible and kicks this hard??"Cheyenne asked. She took out some more rope and tied them around my ankles. Casper and Cheyenne sighed at the same time and dragged me into a room filled with tourture chambers. Casper looked around and looked at me.
"You wait here until are so called boss Grace Star comes in here."he said.
     He left the room with Cheyenne and shut the door.Suddenly, lasers sealed the door so I couldn't get out. I looked at all of the toutures and picked up a broken one.
"Hey is this glass??"I asked myself. I picked up the shiny piece of glass and threw it at the lasers. The lasers repelled into the power grid and shut down. I ran up to the door and opened it.
"Cheyenne get that twerp!!!"shouted Casper as he spotted me in the pathway. Cheyenne popped out of nowhere and whacked me into the wall. I grabbed a bow leaning on the wall,probably for display, and loaded it with a metalbar. I let go of the string and Cheyenne went flying into a jailcell knocked out. Casper took out a sword inside a pack in the wall and slashed me. Blood leaked down my chest and I grabbed another metalbar. I aimed it right at Casper and let go of te string again. Casper fell to the ground with a dent in his arm.
     "Oh Grace!!!I defeated your henchman and i'm leaving!!"I yelled into a video camera. I escaped wherever I was at.
"Okay since I have 1 clue,which is Iron Solute, I need...38 more."I sighed."And I have no idea where the next clue is." I stared in silence at the sun. I heard some plane buzzing and looked up. On the side of the plane was two letters. Ian and Natalie Kabra.
"Oh for crying out loud. Ian and Natalie!!! You guys are never gonna catch me you know that!!!"I yelled at them.
     All I got in reply was a gernade bombing down at me. Instead of blowing up, it exploaded the ground beneath me. I fell into the pit as Ian parachuted down with a bucket of cement.
"Really Ian. Your gonna burry me in cement."I started."I can get out you know." I did a split as a jumped and my legs became a stick and blocked me from falling back down. From that point I climbed up and flipped right out of the pit.I picked up a small stone and threw it at Ian. It bonke his parachute and he fell into the dirt and mud. I ran behind a rock and saw 5 sphere-shaped stones with symbols. I started turning them and they began to look like a T. As soon as it was a T, a hidden passage opened up into the stone. I ran in and the door sealed into darkness.

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Posted at: 7:57 pm on June 3, 2012

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Sorry for not posting. I posted at least 10 times on a laptop and it still didn't show. I didn't know why I am gonna post Chapter 7 on the next post.

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Posted at: 4:14 pm on June 4, 2012

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k, Laptops sorta suck don't they?

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Posted at: 7:36 am on June 7, 2012

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marking this so i can read the rest later. this is great thomas! btw, please check out the story board marked "i want to write an awesome story but i need some help. sign up here!!" i posted somethibg i want you to see and we can start writing soon. great to have you on the team!
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