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As you know, I write tons of stories. Today, I add a new one to my resume. Here it goes!
Amy's POV
Amy sits on the back porch of the mansion. Disturbing thoughts fill her head. Ian or Evan? Ian or Evan? she thinks.
Amy calls Nellie, who is at a party. "Hey, Nellie," she says.
"Hey kiddo!" Nellie replies over the loud voices at the party. "What's up?"
"Well, I have some romance problems," Amy says. "I feel pressured to choose who I should date. Who should it be? Ian or Evan?"
"Oh, I know the only person who can decide that!" Nellie cries as Amy's face lights up. "You. You have to decide. I can't help you with these problems. You need to work it out yourself. Hey, the guy I like just got here. Gotta go!"
Amy slammed the phone down and put her head in her hands. What could she do?
Ian's POV
"I need you!" Ian Kabra says to the wall. He is down on one knee. "No... Amy, please! Give me one more chance! No... Without you, my heart breaks. No... URGH!!! WHO KNEW THAT CHOOSING A PHRASE TO PROFESS YOUR LOVE FOR AMY WOULD BE SO HARD?"
"I did!" Natalie says. "I told you that before you snuck into your room with a list of lovey-dovey phrases!"
"H-how long have you been standing there?" Ian asks.
"Long enough to take a video!" Natalie says with a smirk. "And post it on the Message Board AND Amy's FaceBook!!!"
"I'M GONNA GET YOU!!!" Ian screams, chasing Natalie.
"Ooh!" Natalie says. "2 thousand likes on the MB and 2 MILLION likes on FaceBook! Awesome!"
Evan's POV
"Mom, I'm going on FaceBook!" Evan says. "If I find any comments on Amy from you, I'm gonna be mad!"
Evan first goes to Amy's page. "Why is Kabra's little sis posting here?" Evan clicks on the video. Ian's voice comes out of the speakers. He is professing his love for Amy!!!
"Oh my..." Evan posts a comment: She's mine!!! then runs out the door.
AMY!" he screams as he bursts through the door.
"Evan, what's wrong?" Amy asks.
"Watch... this..." Evan gasps. Amy's jaw drops lower and lower until the video is over. "Did you two... have something going on? Are you cheating???"
"Evan, no!" Amy yells. "He's liked me since-"
"Did you date him?" Evan yells back.
"No!" Amy screams. "Well, technically, but it was 2 years, 7 months, and 14 days ago. Plus, we were in Korea!"
"I'm sorry, Amy, but I don't know if I can trust you!" Evan says. Amy shakes her head. "YOu weren't going to tell me about the Cahills. You didn't tell me you and Ian had a thing going. You kept track of how long it had been. Until I find out Ian's not dating you, WE'RE THROUGH!"
Evan storms out the door and Amy runs upstairs.
How was it? Quick question: should I do first person or third person? The next part will be in first person so you can see if I'm good at that. Thanks for reading!
-Jimmy
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Posted at: 7:14 am on March 17, 2012
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Posted at: 8:19 pm on April 5, 2012
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Posted at: 10:53 pm on April 5, 2012
(Jk)Please I am BEGGING POST more........NOW!
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Posted at: 6:22 pm on May 18, 2012
Um......
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Posted at: 8:15 pm on May 18, 2012
Farewell Ashoka Tano!
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Posted at: 8:26 pm on May 18, 2012
Major 1D fan.
I get chills when I watch the part where Harry sings his solo in What makes you beautiful, imagining I'm in the place of the girl in the video.
Posted at: 12:35 pm on May 19, 2012
:o I THOUGHT BRENT WAS A GUY! IT SAID ON THE LAST CHAPTER ON THE FIRST PAGE ON THIS THREAD, BRENT SAID, "This is Valerie, My boyfriend" Eeew.... I'm just kidding. I know you meant girlfriend, hopefully. I like the fanfic but, um.. I don't like the Sinead+Evan. I always thought Sinead+Jake. I absolutely do not approve of Sinead+Hamilton. Sinead should be with someone her age, like Jake who is also in College. If Sinead was 16 also, then I'd totally go for Sinead+Evan and Sinead+Hamilton. The guy should always be older or the same age but born at a earlier month. But this is still good. Sorry for complaining.
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Posted at: 2:37 pm on May 19, 2012
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Posted at: 6:17 pm on May 19, 2012
Major 1D fan.
I get chills when I watch the part where Harry sings his solo in What makes you beautiful, imagining I'm in the place of the girl in the video.
Posted at: 9:46 pm on May 22, 2012
This is absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD!!!!!!!!
PLEASE CONTINUE
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Posted at: 6:56 pm on December 3, 2012