Hey everyone, I'm trying to write an amazing Half-Blood story so give me some characters.
Just fill out this form: EXAMPLE (my character) Name: Jade Meadows Age:14 Greek or Roman: to be Determind Parent: To be Determind Looks: Long blond hair that looks like strands of gold in the daylight. Bright blue eyes. Tall and thin. Usually dressed in jeans and a tee-shirt. Personality: Light-hearted and fun to be around. Becomes presice and calm in serious times. Ablilitys: Can hit a bulls-eye easily and tell random facts about the future. Weapons: A small, jade ring tht sprouts into a sword and shield when the gem in pressed on. Special Fact: Was adopted since her real parents were killed in a fire. Remember that not a whole lot of people can be a son/daughter of Zeus, Hades or Posiden (or any of their Roman names). Otherwise, its not that special. Maximum can be 2 a god.
Lost daughter of Artimis; Rainshadow, warrior of Thunderclan; Gryfindor
CIA and FBI in training!!
Posted at: 8:28 pm on February 10, 2012
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CHECK THIS OUT!!!!!!!!!!
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-JAZ
Daughter of Artemis,
"Fire is catching,and if we burn,you burn with us!" -Katniss
R.I.P Rue,Prim,Cinna,Finnick,and everyone else who died in the Hunger Games
District 11 Victor
Vampire
Posted at: 11:11 am on February 20, 2012
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YOUR STORY ROCKS! Thank you for um..... portraying me in that way! You are amazing!
"Don't just keep secrets, guard them"-Me
DodgerDragon6- The One Who Has Been Broken
LOGAN SHADESON/BatBoy
Posted at: 4:46 pm on February 22, 2012
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Please write more I'm liking the story!
Cea-Cea
For my sister; you made the world go round.
Daisy Grace 2004-2008
You will forever be my sister. We love and miss you, Daisy.
This is the year you would have turned 8.
Posted at: 9:59 pm on February 22, 2012
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Hey guys, sorry I haven't been on for awile. Glad your liking the story. Here's chapter 3.
“Well, it seems my name is still remembered at dear, old Camp.” He spoke with sarcasm, but I could see hatred flash across his eyes. “Luke” Gracie tried to speak again, this time with more confidence. “What are you doing here?” “Oh, nothing in particular. I just wanted to tell everyone what a great time I had in the Underworld.” By the way Luke was addressing Gracie; I could tell that this wasn’t going to be a friendly visit.
“You see, down in the Fields of Punishment, they made me relive my past over and over.” Luke dismounted from his stallion and began to pace in front of us. “When my… ah…. ‘Rescuer’ came and got me out, I was at the age of 15. So now, I stand before you as younger but trust me, that doesn’t mean I’ve lost my charm with a sword.” He unsheathed a 3 foot sword from his belt and began rubbing it with a cloth. Half of it was silver, the other half was bronze and in the forest shade, it gleamed wickedly.
“Wait a minute.” Kendall, who was as white as a sheet, looked absolutely stunned by his story. “Percy told us that up on Olympus, you turned good or something… So why were you punished?” “Kendall, you were ten when this happened.” Luke seemed frustrated. “So I wouldn’t be talking. But you’re right, I did. That wasn’t enough to change the judges’ minds. They said that if I had never let Kronos infect my dreams” The temperature dropped some 15 degrees. “Then none of the war would’ve ever happened.”
Luke” Gracie looked more nervous than confident now. I think Luke’s seething was getting to her. ”Just tell us why you’re really here.” He looked at her and smiled crookedly. “I think you can guess, but because most of our company doesn’t know the prophecy,” He looked at me sharply. “Then I’ll have to explain it all. You see, my rescuer can’t free souls without a payment. That would make him look vulnerable. So when he heard about this powerful half-blood that would be able to slay a thousand demons at once, he knew what he wanted. He asked me to fetch this demi-god and bring her to him, after all, when you’re trying to raise an army to destroy; you need the strongest beings to be on your side. So here I am now, getting what my patron asked for.”
Then it hit me. Luke wasn’t talking about Gracie or Kendall or even Logan. He came to get me. Luke advanced towards Gracie and said “You’re out numbered. Give her to me now and no one will get hurt.” Gracie made an attempt to unsheathe an arrow, with had materialized in a container on her back, but Luke stopped her. “Do you really want to do that when one of your friends is unarmed?” She’s not” Gracie pointed to my hand. “Push on the gem, Jade.” I looked down and noticed my jade ring for the first time. It had been given to me by my real mother. Sometimes I had tried to take it off every once and awhile, but it kept reappearing on my finger, so I left it there. ‘Why would pushing on it help?’ I thought. But I did it anyway.
“Oh, gods.” The ring, which was smaller than most, expanded and separated it a jade shield with a bronze sword. The weight struck me as EXTREMLEY heavy and I almost toppled over from the sudden transformation. Yet, I forced myself to remain standing because it seemed like everyone in the entire freaking world was watching me. Some of the monsters even backed away and hissed at my new weapons. “Not unarmed” A demi-god about my age stepped out of the line that encircled us. “But she is untrained.”
“Which is why she will not be fighting.” The powerful voice rang out and made everyone nervous. I turned around to find it’s source to see the second most crazy thing today. A centaur ( at least, I think that’s what you call them.) stood atop a nearby hill, looking down with confidence. On his back was a sheath of arrows somewhat similar to Gracie’s and in his hand, a cross bow. “Now, it is you who is outnumbered.”
Tens of kids and goat-like people flooded into the clearing, all of them armed. Luke observed his opponents, as if comparing numbers. Finally, he said “It seems as though I am. Fine, I can wait.” He looked straight at me. “That camp won’t keep you safe for long.” Then, he remounted on his stallion and motioned his miniature army to follow him into the woods.
“Thank you, Chiron.” Gracie had the bow loaded in her hand still, as if suspecting another attack. “We’re lucky” Logan now stood beside me, his dark expression forever imprinted on his face. “that we predicted this happening.” “Yes” Chiron said “Though, the one thing we didn’t predict was Luke.”
Everyone was silent. “No one could predict that.” Kendall was recovering her color and now stood front and center. “Which is why we should keep moving. He could have a bigger army somewhere close.” “She’s right.” Gracie said “do we have any Pegasus?”
“We do.” Two girls, who looked all around the same age, stepped from the crowd of demi-gods. “We figured we’d need a quick escape” The first girl, who was taller than the other, spoke with pride. “So we brought just enough for everyone.” “Great.” Gracie said “I’ll get everyone situated while you guys get Jade a horse.” She turned towards me “Oh, and Jade, this is Rebecca and Alex. Can you guys have Jade meet Bennet, too? He’s best with the Pegasi.” They nodded. “Good. Jade, welcome to the world of a Half-Blood.”
Lost daughter of Artimis; Rainshadow, warrior of Thunderclan; Gryfindor
CIA and FBI in training!!
Posted at: 9:21 pm on February 29, 2012
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LUKE BATHED IN THE RIVER STYX!!!!!
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Posted at: 9:45 pm on February 29, 2012
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AMAZING! Just great! You are doing very well!
"Don't just keep secrets, guard them"-Me
DodgerDragon6- The One Who Has Been Broken
LOGAN SHADESON/BatBoy
Posted at: 7:14 pm on March 1, 2012
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So good!!! Keep writing!!!
For my sister; you made the world go round.
Daisy Grace 2004-2008
You will forever be my sister. We love and miss you, Daisy.
This is the year you would have turned 8.
Posted at: 10:47 am on March 2, 2012
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Great story!
"Beyblade is all about a Blader's spirit. I won't give in to a guy who has no respect for that, who thinks it's a joke."-Sora
The Vespers are going down!!!!
Posted at: 6:10 pm on March 4, 2012
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