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Hey, does anyone on here write poetry??  I'm not the best story-writer because I can never make up my mind on what plot I want, but poetry is definetly my thing!!   Are there any other people like me out there in the wide expanse of cyberspace??  If there are, I want to hear your poems!!  Also, can you tell me if my poems are any good??  Here are a couple:


"Star"

A glittering star shines brightest
When it's time comes nigh
Showing all the world
That it's about to die

So in the final moments
Of your time with me
Should show the whole wide world
What we're doomed to be




"My Heart is Under the Floorboards"


My heart is under the floorboards
Where it can feel no pain
It will not feel the sunshine
Nor will it feel the rain

My heart is under the floorboards
I put it there myself
'Tis better that it stay there now
Than result on someone's trophy shelf

My heart is under the floorboards
It stays there, stiff and stale
For if I wore it on my sleeve
T'wouldn't live to tell the tale

My heart is under the floorboards
Waiting for the one
Who cares enough to rescue it
And show it to the sun



Thanks for reading and be sure to post poems of your own and/or comments and suggestions on my poems!!

 

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Posted at: 4:17 pm on February 10, 2012

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WinningBrilliant10

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Awesome poems!!! I really like the second poem! :)
I also write poems. But most of my poems are based on books.
Heres the link if you want to see them: http://www.the39clues.com/messageboard/show/11502

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Posted at: 7:07 pm on February 10, 2012

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Wow, good job! Smiley Those are really good! I like writing poems too...maybe I'll post some later Smiley

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Posted at: 8:54 pm on February 10, 2012

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These are realy good!!! Please write more ASAP!! I like poetry , but I'm not very good at it. Are you wanting to be a writer or poet ?

-Hope :)

"Love is not a fight,but its something worth fighting for." -Love Is Not a Fight by Warren Barfield

 

 

 

 

 

 

Posted at: 9:57 pm on February 10, 2012

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    That is REALLY GOOD!!!! I write a little poetry as a pastime! My favorite of the two is: "My Heart is Under the Floorboards!" That one was great! I loved it! :D The only thing I would suggest is at certain small points the "beat" is slightly off. Other than that: Spectacular! 

Here's something small:

Gracefull Lily

Past the meadow full of sky,
Toward the mountains great and high.
Follow the stream with a silver glow,
Where she ends, not one man knows.
Under the shade of a willow tree,
A sweet small lily, sings to me.

She dips her head in humble bow,
Her gaze is fixed on the swift stream now.
But if you make the offering desired,
She sings lullabies, until she's tired.
All you need to do is find,
What she wants, is one of a kind.

She has water enough, that's not right.
You know already, that she has light.
She's no desire for jewels and bling.
It's not fame or glory 'tis another thing.
All she wants's love to be shown to her.
How to show lily love? I'm not sure.

What do you think of it?


 

Mary

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Posted at: 10:37 pm on February 10, 2012

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"The Infuriating Sun"
"Even in my darkest days
The Sun shines high
Caressing us with warmth
Before we almost die

And when disaster strikes
The Sun doesn't go away
It seems to mock those who lost
All they loved yesterday

Before all the worst moments'
The Sun is so bright
It seems to laugh evily
When there should be no light

But someday
We'll find safety under the Sun
We will be able to live happily
And we won't have to run"

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 7:02 pm on February 11, 2012

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"That Last Night"
"When I am too sacared to scream
One memory must come back it seems

One of bloodstained stone
Of mud where life has never grown
Of you going off alone
Leaving me on my own
That last night

Of my first kiss
A sweet shower of bliss
You holding me so tight
But nothing turning out all right
After the fight

Of me witing for days
In a desparate daze
Through the smoggy haze
But my hope to be razed
And nothing turning out all right

Its a long sad story that I've told you
If you think Its fiction than if only you knew
If you think its over then get a clue
I live in a city where nightmares come true
And I love you"

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 10:36 am on February 12, 2012

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"Love's Last Light"
"When the world drives me mad
With a cry so sad
And my life is bad

I think of two dark nights
A reunion and a fight
When love's last light
Worked out all right

And when the nights were done
All I can do was run
Or rejoice in the light of the Sun
Once love's Labour's lost, but now the're won

And what troubles me now
Is how
Long I see you now
And you say 'as long as they allow'

But you had to go
To where, nobody will know
You disspeared so
I'm left alone with my sorrows to tow

I was such a dope
And now I'm struggling up life's mountain slope
And I shouldn't have hope
But is it gone? Nope

And I know someday
One day
You'll kiss me like it had never passed a day
Like you did yestarday

When we were shoved into the bay
And all I could say
Was please stay
And you kissed me before you went away"

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

Yeshallknowthetruthandthetruthshallsetyefree

Posted at: 6:49 pm on February 16, 2012

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"Once Upon A Fairytale"

"Once upon a fairytale
There was a city in which good didn't prevail
And in that city was a girl with a sad, sad tale
Once Upon a fairytale

The girl was good and just
But she was doomed to be a TRUST
Always she must
Watch her back, the girl was good and just

One boy loved her kind heart
But this was a bad start
He tore it quite apart
The one boy that loved her heart

He never let her go that night
But there was a fight
And nothing turned out all right
Though he never let her go that night

He kissed her on that fateful day
His love not wanting to go astray
With her he wanted to stay
After he kissed her on that fateful day

This entire story is true
If you think I'm lying, then get a clue
Her city is this city where nightmares come true
And I should know this story is true

Because I am that girl with a heart of gold
Who wants her first kiss back if truth be told
The TRUST whose heart was sadly sold
The one who had a heart of gold

But I have learned that you can always hope
Even when you feel like a giant dope
They can tie you up with rope
But you can always have hope

That in this insane fairytale
Love can prevail"

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

Yeshallknowthetruthandthetruthshallsetyefree

Posted at: 6:19 pm on February 18, 2012

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Wow all of your poems are amazing!! Can you tell me what you think of this:
                     Darkness
its clouds surrounds me everday
always making me pay
this terrible dark world
always makes me want to hurl 

sick to my stomach i alwayes am
i can already feel it i'm a slaughter lamb
the excution date is so near
and i try not to cry the first tear

its way too hard to pretend
that my world isn't about to end 
this smile that covers my pain
it's all just a game 

Darkness why choose me
am i your favorite brand of tea
do u thirstly drink down my fear
and simply look at me with a leer

inside this darkness, there's no way out
no one ever hears, even when i shout 
all i do is look around
i'm inexplicably bound 

I'm not wierd...i'm gifted. Crazy... maybe do hear that voice? Star-crossed lovers 4eva. Roman/Greek(does it matter) purple panther

 

 

Posted at: 11:14 am on February 19, 2012

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"Poison Hate"
"Dreams from above
Behind the widow's grate
Sweet love
Followed by poison hate
You giving me a sweet kiss
At danger's gate
A shower of bliss
Followed by poison hate
The shining stars
I see twinkling way, way late
Lighting up my old scars
From poison hate
Me sad and alone
In a half - mad state
Fighting alone
Against poison hate"

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 5:46 pm on February 19, 2012

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The Little Girl
There is a little girl in my heart
Who belives in hope
She hasn't stopped from the start
Even when she looks like a dope
I ignore her now, but once upon a time...

A little girl stood here, innocent and beliving in love
But those times are in the distant past
Because life gave her a shove And any breath could be her last
Since then it has been a long, long while

She had been betrayed by the ones she let
Her golden heart remember
Though that choice they did regret
They turned her heart into an ember
But many remember the days her face was covered in slime

So many sorrows, yet
So much light
Her heart will be set
Open when the time is right
And I will once again feel the sweet smile

That who have seen me call it angelic
But it is only a relic
Of the little girl I am no more
But someday I will settle the score

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 9:51 pm on February 22, 2012

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When Children Go To War
Disaster comes and enimies run
When children go to war
Night will fall and drown the Sun
When children go to war

Courage dies
True love lies
Sad, pitiful, last  cries
The Sun will fail and darkness rise
When children go to war

Night will fall and drown the Sun
Heartbreaking betrayal will have begun
When children go to war

Enimies run
But count the cost
The battle's won
But love's labor's lost
When children go to war

A boy with a broken heart
His love and him were torn apart
The pain and anguish will start
A new battle
When children go to war

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 6:41 pm on February 23, 2012

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Tonight
The wolf has spoken
The bear has chosen
The dragon has breathed its fire
But I will never rise higher
The snake might bite
But I will always remember what happened tonight
The night was so sweet
One where frends would meet
But I wanted to hide
Because of the pain inside
From the day my hope died
And silently I cried
A flower tucked behind my ear
Vanished the answer that I fear
When I saw you here
Despite what it had seemed
It wasn't something I had dreamed
And you held me tight
Months after that awful night
Of the fight
Life turned out all right
And when I asked why you showed up from the mist
You shut my mouth with a kiss
The wolf might roar
But I have settled the score
Attack the bear might
The dragon may fight
The snake can bite
But I will never forget tonight

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

Yeshallknowthetruthandthetruthshallsetyefree

Posted at: 5:27 pm on March 3, 2012

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Ghost City

For somebody as smart as you
There are many things I wish you knew
In this city where there's always a place to go to
Here's how to find out what's true

If its the truth you want to see
Then go to where nature runs free
The human sights there may not be pretty
But this is where you can set off towards the ghost city

Go past the square where old blood still shows
And push off from the bank evil chose
The bank where no grass grows
Where no birds sit exept for the crows

Sail with the river's flow
Where it stops, nobody will know
Go past the post shaped like a crow
And to the beach with a silver glow

Go to the base of an old oak tree
At its base, sink down on one knee
Look up and see
The ghost girl that appeared as she did for me

Staring blankly into space
Of emotion, there isn't a trace
Then she will look down on your face
And ask why you are in this place

Say I want to know what is true
So i came down when the moon was new
And she will make a space for you
And tell you all she knew

"It has been a long time
Since that night when the crows would chime
The night we ran out of time
And somebody commited an awful crime

Bullets pierced the night
And all he did was fight
Many children died that night
Blood covered the stone at morning light"

You come back to me
And tell me what you now see
The terrible truth struck me
After I went down to the oak tree

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 3:42 pm on March 14, 2012

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I liked "My Heart is Under the Floorboards" better! It was really good :):):)

KATE 13: Gryffindor--(obsessed with HP) and Victor of the Games

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Those are all awesome! Here's mine,


Cahills Vs. Vespers or Cahills and Vespers

Vespers are evil, awful, and mean

They don't deserve anything but a tiny sardine
Cahills are bright, cool, and awesome
They should get nothing but flowers and blossoms
Gideon and Olivia had several children
Their friend, Damien Vesper, was sadly a villain
Jane, Thomas, Katherine, and Luke
Thinking about Vespers makes me want to puke
Silent, stealthy, and clever, they lead
Most think the Lucians act out of greed
Luke, Katherine, Thomas, and Jane
We will not stop 'til the Vespers are slain
Accomplished, creative, artists they are
The Janus's talent goes very far
Katherine, Jane, Luke, and Thomas
The Vespers, they can't keep a simple promise
Strong, brave, they love adventure
The Tomas's strength is too strong to measure
Thomas, Luke, Jane, and Katherine
The Vespers are ruthless is a place to begin
Curious, smart, their brains are brilliant
The Ekaterina's minds are rather resilient
And last but not least there is Madeleine Cahill
She wished Damien Vesper would just learn to chill
The Madrigals are watching, waiting for peace
Wanting nothing, but for the fighting to cease
The Cahills and Vespers have been fighting for ages
Who will win? I don't know, just keep turning the pages

Hope you liked it!

-Lightning1

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Posted at: 1:54 pm on March 22, 2012

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I just wrote another one,

The Dead of Night

The Vespers would destroy,
The Cahills just for joy,
If not for Amy and Dan,
Who complicate the Vespers plan.
A plan, a climb, a fail!
The hostages didn't prevail!
The Guardian almost lost,
But bought for a pricey cost.
Alistair Oh could die!
Amy didn't lie,
About the hidden location,
She gave the Vespers information.
Ian Kabra gone,
Searching for his mom.
Evan at Cahill Command,
Wouldn't except Sinead's demand.
In Argentina they are,
The hostages not near, but far!
An astrolabe recovered,
And Amy being smothered,
By several handsome boys,
Could they be but simple ploys?
Who the heck is AJT,
Arthur Trent, could it be?
Jonah's being pursued,
By something he cannot elude.
Hamilton meets his hero,
Whose honesty gets a zero.
Thanks to Atticus and Jake,
The deadline the Cahills did make.
And if I had a choice to see,
How cruel Vesper One can be,
And see his sense of drama,
I'd choose to lick the llama!


Again hope you liked it!

-Lightning1

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Posted at: 1:12 pm on March 26, 2012

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Raven, Raven, Standing Tall

Raven, raven, standing tall
Who now will fall
Two ways to love, two paths to choose
Who will lose
Little raven, walk the wire
Hide in the shadows, hide your fire
Live the life
Prevent the grief and strife
Little raven, ring out true
For we all depend on you

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 1:11 pm on April 14, 2012

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Once Upon A Cahill

Once Upon a Cahill
There was a girl from a mill
The secret she had always known
But all alone
Up on the hill

She was never free
Crying beneath an oak tree
A man came up to her
And acting so sure
He said "come along with me"

She now had a life
Away from grief and strife
But on that day she swore
A Cahill once more
To take the bullet, the pain, the knife

The promise she would keep
She was in far too deep
The boy by her side
Cried and cried
Beside the girl in forever sleep

Once there was...

Peace

Hope

Love

Truth

...but never for me,Ariel.Go to /9469 and see for yourself.

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Posted at: 1:19 pm on April 14, 2012

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