Hi everyone I think it would be interesting to make up a story about what Evan thinks about Amian. I am a big Amian fan, so here goes! Please comment on what you think about it!
Evan's POV
It was a nice summer day at the Cahill Command Center (CCC). Evan stared out the window, thinking about the plans for the day. Amy had told him that today was the day of the "family" reunion, in which all the Madrigals come to their house and train for defeating the Vespers. This was one of Evan's first time actually being there, so he was excited to see where it went. Sinead suddenly opened the door. "Hey Evan, you might want to come down. Everyone is going to be arriving soon." Evan nodded at Sinead, and went downstairs with her. Amy, Dan, and Saladin were waiting for them. Saladin let out a Mrp at Evan, and snuggled into Dan's arms. "Amy, who's coming to the reunion?" Evan asked. Amy looked at him. "Didn't I tell you already? It's going to be Ian, Hamilton, Jonah, and the rest of us. We are all Madrigals." Evan sighed. "The Kabra kid has to come?" Amy glared at Evan. "Evan.........." "Ok ok, I'll live with it," Evan exclaimed. Sinead snickered with Dan. Evan could probably guess what they were thinking: Ha ha ha he's jealous of Ian! Evan fumed up inside, but kept calm on the outside. He would have to talk about this to Amy later. The doorbell suddenly rang, and Amy exclaimed,"They're here!"
To be continued....
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Evan's Side of Amian: The story by CatCommando
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Oh dear I'm not supposed to be on here right now, so sorry about it being so short!
Evan's POV
As Evan scurried around putting away his equipment, Amy hopped into the car to wait for him. When Evan finished dumping everything into the trunk, he got into the driver's seat and hit the pedal. The car screeched to life, and the two drove down the ever winding hillside. The ride back was silent, and Evan and Amy exchanged only a few words. That was fine for Evan, because he was way too busy with what to do next. Should he tell Amy the truth, or just keep lying? Evan decided to keep quiet for the moment, it would be too much for Amy to handle if he did tell her. Once the car roared onto the driveway of the Cahill mansion, Evan knew that it was time to make his next move: Confront the Kabra.
TBC............
Evan's POV
As Evan scurried around putting away his equipment, Amy hopped into the car to wait for him. When Evan finished dumping everything into the trunk, he got into the driver's seat and hit the pedal. The car screeched to life, and the two drove down the ever winding hillside. The ride back was silent, and Evan and Amy exchanged only a few words. That was fine for Evan, because he was way too busy with what to do next. Should he tell Amy the truth, or just keep lying? Evan decided to keep quiet for the moment, it would be too much for Amy to handle if he did tell her. Once the car roared onto the driveway of the Cahill mansion, Evan knew that it was time to make his next move: Confront the Kabra.
TBC............
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BUT EVEN MORE THE STORY...
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So sorry I haven't been on here lately to write more, but I'll come soon! Don't worry!
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Evan's POV
"Hey, Ames?" Evan called out.
"Yes?" she replied. "What do you need?"
"I'm going inside to do some stuff, so why don't you hang around the Cahill Command Center and work on some stuff?" Evan knew it was the perfect diversion in order to make his plans work. "Sinead needs your help, remember?"
"Oh yeah," Amy recalled, and she jumped off the truck and sprinted toward the CCC. "Take good care of yourself!" she yelled back while running.
"I will!" Evan replied, and he went inside after Amy dashed up the stairs to assist Sinead.
Now where did that Kabra go? Evan wondered. He quietly shut the door just in case Ian was near, then nearly jumped out of his body. Ian was standing right behind Evan, glaring at him with the fiersest gaze one could ever do. "It's time me and you had a little chat," Ian said in his british accent. "Come up to my room with me." And he turned around and beckoned for Evan to follow. Evan had no choice but to obey, so he went with Ian.
TBC......
"Hey, Ames?" Evan called out.
"Yes?" she replied. "What do you need?"
"I'm going inside to do some stuff, so why don't you hang around the Cahill Command Center and work on some stuff?" Evan knew it was the perfect diversion in order to make his plans work. "Sinead needs your help, remember?"
"Oh yeah," Amy recalled, and she jumped off the truck and sprinted toward the CCC. "Take good care of yourself!" she yelled back while running.
"I will!" Evan replied, and he went inside after Amy dashed up the stairs to assist Sinead.
Now where did that Kabra go? Evan wondered. He quietly shut the door just in case Ian was near, then nearly jumped out of his body. Ian was standing right behind Evan, glaring at him with the fiersest gaze one could ever do. "It's time me and you had a little chat," Ian said in his british accent. "Come up to my room with me." And he turned around and beckoned for Evan to follow. Evan had no choice but to obey, so he went with Ian.
TBC......
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Evan's POV
Oddly enough though, Ian turned away from the stairs leading to his room, and Evan wondered why. Where were they going? Ian then went to the door leading to the basement, unlocked it, and went inside. He turned around, motioned for Evan to follow, then descended. Evan gulped. This might not be as easy as he thought. When the two of them were in the broad basement room, Ian flicked on the lights and turned to face Evan.
"Listen, Tolliver." Ian began. "I know you did something to Amy. And I know it wasn't good. So what was it? If you don't tell me, then I suggest a proposal from me. You and I will compete for who's stronger, smarter, etc., so that whomever the champion shall be, he will win the girl. So, what is your answer?"
Evan didn't want to tell Ian the truth, nor did he want to compete against him. But somewhere inside of his heart, revenge was needed for him to be satisfied. And so, Evan chose his words carefully in answering the Kabra. "I won't tell you the truth, Kabra, so I accept your challenge. May the best man win." Evan held out his hand toward Ian, and he shook it. "May the best man win," Ian repeated.
TBC.......
Oddly enough though, Ian turned away from the stairs leading to his room, and Evan wondered why. Where were they going? Ian then went to the door leading to the basement, unlocked it, and went inside. He turned around, motioned for Evan to follow, then descended. Evan gulped. This might not be as easy as he thought. When the two of them were in the broad basement room, Ian flicked on the lights and turned to face Evan.
"Listen, Tolliver." Ian began. "I know you did something to Amy. And I know it wasn't good. So what was it? If you don't tell me, then I suggest a proposal from me. You and I will compete for who's stronger, smarter, etc., so that whomever the champion shall be, he will win the girl. So, what is your answer?"
Evan didn't want to tell Ian the truth, nor did he want to compete against him. But somewhere inside of his heart, revenge was needed for him to be satisfied. And so, Evan chose his words carefully in answering the Kabra. "I won't tell you the truth, Kabra, so I accept your challenge. May the best man win." Evan held out his hand toward Ian, and he shook it. "May the best man win," Ian repeated.
TBC.......
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more please
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more more more more more more MORE!!!
House of Anubis is AWESOME!!!
Beware, cause I'll PSYCH U OUT IN THE END!
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posting to find it l8r
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Thats why its called the present...
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Posting so I can find this later.
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Sorry I haven't been writing lately, but don't worry, it's coming!
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I'm baaaaaaaack!!!!! (Anyone miss me?) :) Well anyways, enjoy!
Evan's POV
And so the challenge had begun. Ian beckoned for Evan to come towards him, and he did. Ian began to walk forward and into a wall on the far side of basement, as it was empty. Evan wondered whether Ian was going to crash into the wall. Now THAT would be fortunate. Sadly though, Ian flipped open a secret panel concealed within the wall, pushed a button, and said, "Heads up, Tolliver!" Evan looked up, asking himself why Ian would say that, then screamed as the floor roared to life. It started moving downward, pushing Evan into the walls and floor. He tried to scramble up to where Ian was standing, a platform staying still, but it failed. Evan was panicking. He had to get out of here. Which way was out? The world started spinning. Everything was a blur of color. This is it, Evan thought. Good bye sweet and cruel world. Good bye Amy. Good riddance Kabra. Good bye...............And he blacked out.
TBC........
Evan's POV
And so the challenge had begun. Ian beckoned for Evan to come towards him, and he did. Ian began to walk forward and into a wall on the far side of basement, as it was empty. Evan wondered whether Ian was going to crash into the wall. Now THAT would be fortunate. Sadly though, Ian flipped open a secret panel concealed within the wall, pushed a button, and said, "Heads up, Tolliver!" Evan looked up, asking himself why Ian would say that, then screamed as the floor roared to life. It started moving downward, pushing Evan into the walls and floor. He tried to scramble up to where Ian was standing, a platform staying still, but it failed. Evan was panicking. He had to get out of here. Which way was out? The world started spinning. Everything was a blur of color. This is it, Evan thought. Good bye sweet and cruel world. Good bye Amy. Good riddance Kabra. Good bye...............And he blacked out.
TBC........
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I really like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I have one word for you...............enjoy! :)
Evan's POV
The first thing Evan heard was a muffled sound, something that was a cross between muttering, laughing, and screaming. His eyes fluttered open, and there was Ian's looming face, cracking up with emotion. Ian's face was streaked with tears, and for a moment Evan thought that he was crying because he thought Evan had died. Well, that thought went out like a candle in a second.
"Ha ha haaaaaa!!!!!! Oh Tolliver, you should've seen yourself! You were screaming and kicking all over, and I finally had the good nature to drag you over here on the floor before you got squashed like a flat pancake. Ha ha!!! I wish I could see that again! It was priceless!" Ian wiped off his face with a hankerchief, then returned his serious face. "Ah well, nothing ever lasts forever. So come along, welcome to our challenge arena!"
Evan was almost too furious at Ian for letting him think he was dead. I'll show him, Evan thought, and next time we'll see who's laughing his head off. But then again, curiousity overtook him. Evan glanced upward from the place where he was lying, and pulled himself up to get a better look. The carpet was exquisite and rich in a cream color. There were exercise machines of all kind, like bicycles that were on a fake track, treadmills, elipticals, weight lifting machines, and everything he could imagine plus more. The Kabra overdid himself, Evan had to admitt. Well, it was now time to start the challenge.
TBC......
Evan's POV
The first thing Evan heard was a muffled sound, something that was a cross between muttering, laughing, and screaming. His eyes fluttered open, and there was Ian's looming face, cracking up with emotion. Ian's face was streaked with tears, and for a moment Evan thought that he was crying because he thought Evan had died. Well, that thought went out like a candle in a second.
"Ha ha haaaaaa!!!!!! Oh Tolliver, you should've seen yourself! You were screaming and kicking all over, and I finally had the good nature to drag you over here on the floor before you got squashed like a flat pancake. Ha ha!!! I wish I could see that again! It was priceless!" Ian wiped off his face with a hankerchief, then returned his serious face. "Ah well, nothing ever lasts forever. So come along, welcome to our challenge arena!"
Evan was almost too furious at Ian for letting him think he was dead. I'll show him, Evan thought, and next time we'll see who's laughing his head off. But then again, curiousity overtook him. Evan glanced upward from the place where he was lying, and pulled himself up to get a better look. The carpet was exquisite and rich in a cream color. There were exercise machines of all kind, like bicycles that were on a fake track, treadmills, elipticals, weight lifting machines, and everything he could imagine plus more. The Kabra overdid himself, Evan had to admitt. Well, it was now time to start the challenge.
TBC......
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It's cool, your writing style is good, and you are definately playing off of the widely accepted idea that Evan is evil.
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AWESOME!!!
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awesome write more please
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Evan is mental! I like ian, but does the machiene make Amy forget about liking Ian or make her like Evan?
Can evan pretty please be killed off by the end?
Can evan pretty please be killed off by the end?
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I'm back! Thanks so much for the comments I'll keep going! :D
Evan's POV
A voice boomed onto the loud-speaker. "Ladies and Gentlemen, I now present to you, the ultimate training course for resolving problems! For short, UTCRP! For today's challenge, there will be a contest of speed. Each contestant will each take a bike, and start pedaling down the race track in an hour race. It will be like the marathon, with obstacles on the way. But don't be discouraged! There will be breaks in between too, so no one has a physical break-down. And now, please grab a bike and wait for further instructions." And the voice went off. Evan glanced at Ian, and asked where the voice was coming from. Ian told him that it was a computerized voice made to put random challenges each day, and that they better hurry. Evan nodded, and the two sprinted over to the bike lying on the track. Evan chose one that was navy blue with flames on the side, while Ian chose a bike that had a gold painted background with swirly designs that made Evan dizzy. Ian shook his head at Evan disapprovingly. "Tsk tsk Tolliver, your taste of fashion is SO tacky. I mean, flames? That was old when I was three." Evan fumed up, and almost said a sharp retort back, until the voice crackled to life again. "And now, welcome to the 1st annual UTCRP challenge! On your mark..............get ready.................get set...............................GO!"
TBC........
Evan's POV
A voice boomed onto the loud-speaker. "Ladies and Gentlemen, I now present to you, the ultimate training course for resolving problems! For short, UTCRP! For today's challenge, there will be a contest of speed. Each contestant will each take a bike, and start pedaling down the race track in an hour race. It will be like the marathon, with obstacles on the way. But don't be discouraged! There will be breaks in between too, so no one has a physical break-down. And now, please grab a bike and wait for further instructions." And the voice went off. Evan glanced at Ian, and asked where the voice was coming from. Ian told him that it was a computerized voice made to put random challenges each day, and that they better hurry. Evan nodded, and the two sprinted over to the bike lying on the track. Evan chose one that was navy blue with flames on the side, while Ian chose a bike that had a gold painted background with swirly designs that made Evan dizzy. Ian shook his head at Evan disapprovingly. "Tsk tsk Tolliver, your taste of fashion is SO tacky. I mean, flames? That was old when I was three." Evan fumed up, and almost said a sharp retort back, until the voice crackled to life again. "And now, welcome to the 1st annual UTCRP challenge! On your mark..............get ready.................get set...............................GO!"
TBC........
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keep going!!!
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OMG this is really good AWSOME!!!!!!! I wanna know what happen next so POST SOON!!!
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For everyone who was confused about the machine:
The machine was supposed to make Amy forget about all the bad things Evan did to her and not remember it so she would like Evan.
The machine was supposed to make Amy forget about all the bad things Evan did to her and not remember it so she would like Evan.
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A gunshot blank fired somewhere, and Evan and Ian were racing like cheetahs on the track. The world was a blur of color, and Evan was only thinking about two things: 1. Beat the Kabra and 2. Watch out for obstacles. That was all. Nothing more, nothing less. "I..........will............beat you!" Evan screamed at the blur that was Ian. "In your dreams, Tolliver!" Ian shouted back. Evan was furious, and almost missed the hazard sign in front of him. It stated that obstacles were coming up, but what kind? Evan risked looking up, and saw it. There. A boom echoed and the scraping of rock against rock was heard. Right above the two of them, a cliff protruded. And there were rocks the size of a small car hurtling towards them. Evan swerved to the right and left to avoid being hit, and Ian did likewise. Pebbles rained down everywhere. Evan jerked to the right to avoid an incoming rock, but he was too late. The rock scraped on his face. Pain exploded on him. He couldn't see. The world was turning red and black and all different colors. And the last thing he heard before he blacked out was Ian's laughter, "I told you! You'd never make it!"
TBC........
A gunshot blank fired somewhere, and Evan and Ian were racing like cheetahs on the track. The world was a blur of color, and Evan was only thinking about two things: 1. Beat the Kabra and 2. Watch out for obstacles. That was all. Nothing more, nothing less. "I..........will............beat you!" Evan screamed at the blur that was Ian. "In your dreams, Tolliver!" Ian shouted back. Evan was furious, and almost missed the hazard sign in front of him. It stated that obstacles were coming up, but what kind? Evan risked looking up, and saw it. There. A boom echoed and the scraping of rock against rock was heard. Right above the two of them, a cliff protruded. And there were rocks the size of a small car hurtling towards them. Evan swerved to the right and left to avoid being hit, and Ian did likewise. Pebbles rained down everywhere. Evan jerked to the right to avoid an incoming rock, but he was too late. The rock scraped on his face. Pain exploded on him. He couldn't see. The world was turning red and black and all different colors. And the last thing he heard before he blacked out was Ian's laughter, "I told you! You'd never make it!"
TBC........
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