Hello people.
We (that´s to say Wendy, Andrea and me) are starting a Cahill story.
Sooooo I guess I better start:
Ana´s POV:
"Oh Andrea, come on!!" I said with a laugh. We were walking out of the Movie Theater. It was a cool winter night and we were having a great time together.
"You´ve GOT to be kidding me" Wendy had an incredulous expression on her face. "How could that movie scare you?!"
"Well...the bad guy kept reminding me of the V" Andrea said defiantly.
We made our way toward the street where Wendy lives talking and joking. So none of us saw the car following us, nor did we noticed that the driver had one of those black ninja-masks on his face.
When we reached her house I saw the shadow on the upper window.
"Hey, Wendy. Didn´t you say that your parents weren´t here???""Yeah, why??"Suspicious started forming in my brain. To late did I reallized the man in the window was holding something. A gun!!"Watch it!! He´s got a....." Was the last thing I shouted before everything went black.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I woke up to find myself sprawled on the sidewalk. Next to me Andrea was still unconcious."Andry, wake up" I shaked her until she opened her eyes."What......""No idea.....wait where´s Wendy??"How did I do so far.I am not sure but next it´s going to be either Andrea or Wendy :PAna C
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"I want to see my face in that toilet bowl"
"I'd love to see your face in that toilet bowl"-HOA
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Posted at: 9:12 pm on December 30, 2011
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Ana's POV:
Ok first of all, Atom exagerated the "bursted to tears" part. I did NOT cry…ok maybe I shread a tear, but nothing else!!!!
So where were we? Oh, right:
"Anyone know how to drive?"
Imediatly I get all exited (I'm weird that way) and snatched the keys from Atom's hand.
"I KNOW HOW TO DRIVE!!"
"Of course not Ana" said Andrea looking frightened (poor girl, 5 years with me and still not used to my freaking-weird-way-of-acting)
"Yes I do…come on, how hard can it be?!" I said running out the front door. Don't get me wrong, but I was really exited about getting to save Wendy.
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"I don't know wether this is a good idea" said Atom as we all buckled-up.
What is it with people that they just simply don't seem to believe me?
Gotta go
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"I want to see my face in that toilet bowl"
"I'd love to see your face in that toilet bowl"-HOA
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Posted at: 3:31 pm on January 23, 2012
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Thank you everyone! Should I just wait a little longer to post my POV? I don't know what to do next with mine.
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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Cahills will win in the end!
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Posted at: 9:49 pm on January 23, 2012
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@Ana:"NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO" -Cars crashes after two seconds-
@Wendy BRAINSTORM! :P
@Andrea HURRY AND HELP ME YANK THE WHEEL FROM ANA!!!! :P :P :P :P :P
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Posted at: 4:40 pm on January 24, 2012
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You guys make me the day :P
Angela thanks for posting!
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Posted at: 7:01 pm on January 24, 2012
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Hahahahaha Atom
Soooooo sorry 4 not having posted sooner.I think it´s´Wendy´s turn, but if you really can´t think of anything you can ask Andrea to continue.
Har har har I´ve got the car wheel!!!
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"I'd love to see your face in that toilet bowl"-HOA
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Posted at: 8:44 pm on January 24, 2012
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Wendy's POV: I couldn't let them inject me with anything, poison or no poison. It was too important for me to stay awake. I could hear their footsteps as they walked closer to me. Someone grabbed my arm and held it still so they could inject me. All of a sudden, I swerved the other way, causing the person holding my arm to let go. "Get her!" one of them yelled. I heard heavy footsteps as someone ran to the other side of the table. I waited until I knew they were close enough to grab me, and then I swerved back the other way. Big mistake. I felt a prick in my arm and a sting of pain. I'd swerved straight into their needle! Pain shot up my arm. I gritted my teeth. I was not going to pass out again. I tried to resist, but I could feel myself falling into that hole of darkness. "Nighty-night!" one man whispered tauntingly.
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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"It's not my fault; I'm just the author!" -Me (Wendy)
Posted at: 7:15 am on January 25, 2012
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Hey guys, I guess it's my turn :P
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Andrea's POV:
"I don't know wether this is a good idea" said Atom as we all buckled-up.
"I have a bad feeling about this." I said, while watching my phone.
"You always have bad feelings Andry! C'mon how bad can I possible drive?"
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Ana was actually driving a car! I know she was good at x-box but not that good.
All was going well.
"Ana watch out!" Atom shouted.
A 30 meters train was infront of us!
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Sorry if it was too short but I wanted to write more...It just that I have friend problems.....
GTG
Andry
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Posted at: 7:20 pm on January 25, 2012
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That was cool, Atom.
Hey, has anyone seen Ana? I've been waiting for her post . . .
Well, catch you later. GTG,
Angela (a.k.a. OperativeExplorer2)
P.S. Can I advertise? To everyone: please check out the threads in my signature. Thanks.
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Posted at: 9:05 am on January 26, 2012
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Thanks Angela!
Atom I guess it is your turn.
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Posted at: 7:48 pm on January 27, 2012
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Hi guys
Ana´s Pov:
You know I´m really not sure what happened afterwards.
I was really driving a car, and I was totally happy..................which is bad when when I have to concentrate since I am an airhead and I get exited easily.
I remember the feeling of happines that took over me. It was so cool that I didn´t noticed anything.
I knew that Andrea and Atom where talking in loud voices, but I didn´t notice anything wrong until Atom shouted...
"ANA WATCH OUT!!!"
Then I saw it. A 30 meter train going as fast as the wind coming closer, closer and closer at increasing speed.
I, as you can guess, was paralysed with fear. And not until the last moment did I remember that it was ME on the wheel. I was in-charge.
Well, what would you have done??
I couldn´t do anything!! The train was WAY to close!!
So I did the only thing that came natural: I closed my eyes and jerked the wheel toward the left as hard as I could.
Thankfully WE survived................I am not speaking for the car.
Ana
"I want to see my face in that toilet bowl"
"I'd love to see your face in that toilet bowl"-HOA
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Posted at: 9:55 pm on January 27, 2012
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Andrea - Hey, no prob. . . Where do you live?
To all four writers - KEEP IT UP! I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Bye, then. In here, it's already night. I have to sleep, so, bye!
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Posted at: 9:40 am on January 28, 2012
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Ok guys sorry.
I thought that Andreas post was Atom´s............so ignore my POV if you want.
Ana
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"I'd love to see your face in that toilet bowl"-HOA
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Posted at: 11:28 am on January 28, 2012
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Ana you write soo good!
:)
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Posted at: 1:55 pm on January 28, 2012
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Who's turn is it? I'm confused!
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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Posted at: 11:18 am on January 29, 2012
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Guys! My account is having problems :(
I made other account WriterCoaster1
So,if I logge in with the other account,Remember Its me!
'Andrea
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Posted at: 7:22 pm on January 29, 2012
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Why are you guys confuesd? Isn't the order like this:Ana, Wendy, Andrea, Atom
Ana was the one who currently posted, which means it's Wendy's turn.
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Posted at: 6:57 am on January 30, 2012
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I'm following Ana's POV
ATOM'S POV
I knew for one that Ana was the worst driver in the world now. I mean, she had 5 minutes to notice she was on the train tracks! Me and Andrea yelled, but of course, she didnt here us. And now, our car was busted against a tree. I jumped out and slammed the door shut. "ANA!" I said angerly, and i saw Ana peek her head out of the broken car window. "Hey, at least were alive!" Andrea said, trying to avoid a fight.I ignored her and proceeded to punch Ana in the face, breaking her nose. "OWWW!!!" She said, then tried to kick me. but, as she was STILL in the car, it hit the car door. "OOOWWWWW!!!" She said again, and Andrea had to help her out. I felt bad, yes, but it wasnt my priority to be with these girls. All i was here for was to get the girl, then come back before a nuclear bomb enters D.C. It was then i recived a kick to the Jaw. "Now were even." Said Ana, and then put a bandage over her broken nose. "YOU TOO, FORGIVE EACH OTHER, NOW." Andrea said, and me and Ana couldnt help but smiling. "You sound just like my mom." Ana joked, and we burst out laughing. "Ok guys, i got a truck not far away, but this time, I'M DRIVING." I said, and was off...
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Posted at: 10:38 am on January 30, 2012
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Atom I guess you are next....but I am not sure..
-Andrea
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Posted at: 6:04 pm on January 30, 2012
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I think it's your turn Andry. We changed our order for a bit, that's why I was confused.
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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"It's not my fault; I'm just the author!" -Me (Wendy)
Posted at: 7:27 am on January 31, 2012
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hey guys, can i write something? i read others stories and they give me inspiration. im a writer, but before i came on here i didnt get so many great ideas. so thanks, you guys. ;)
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Posted at: 10:58 am on January 31, 2012
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Wendy thanks for telling me is my turn! :P Really I wasn’t sure who was next.
Here is Andrea’s Pov:
"Ok guys, I got a truck not far away, but this time, I'M DRIVING." Atom said.
After 1 hour.................
"I’m tired" Ana said, while walking on the street.
"Atom I thought you said NOT FAR AWAY" I started to say.
Imagine walking and never stopping. We were supposed to find a truck, a big one I guess, but we didn’t found anything.
"Now how are we supposed to find Wendy?" Ana took out a map, which was actually a miracle. "Atom, this is your entire fault!!!!"
Atom raised his voice "Excuse me, but who is the one who just crash the car?" he said angry.
"Guys stop fighting!" I shouted "You think I’m happy about Wendy being kidnapped? You think I love to walk for like an hour without stopping or complaining?"
"Ern...........yes?"
"Well no. I hate not having a clue of where is Wendy. And seriously I hate to walk." I felt released “So, if I can handle it, I guess you could to."
"Calm down Andry, I guess we stop complaining for a while. If that’s what you want." Ana said, trying to calm me down.
"Yeah, I’ll try not to mess with Ana" Atom said with a laugh.
"Or should I say: I’ll try not to mess with Atom" Ana corrected.
"No Ana! I am the one who messes with you!" Atom said "Remember?"
Before they could say anything I said "Guys!"
"Oh yeah, sorry" Both Ana and Atom said at the same time :P
And we all kept walking
"Hey, I guess I found something" I said.
A truck. But it looked as if someone had been there, VESPERS was my first thought, but I wasn’t sure.
"Should we be worried about this?" Ana sounded serious. (Wow 2 miracles in a day!)
"I don’t know if we should, but we have to investigate about this. I mean, what if they where VESPERS?" Atom answered.
"Well, while you guys investigate, I will eat a sandwich" I was totally relaxed: D
"Nitwick, are you serious! You are a total bipolar!" Ana laughed
"Well, I do have my moments!" I told her "Besides I can’t be frustrated all time, I know I’m a little, but I also am an exciting girl, you’ll never know what comes next."
"That’s what I like about you, but seriously a sandwich!!!!"
"Guys, we don’t have time to discuss" Atom interrupted. "And I will like to eat a sandwich"
"Are we forgetting something?" Ana asked
"That we don’t have money to buy sandwiches?" I was still thinking of food.
"No, Wendy!" Ana reminded us "The reason we came here....."
"Argh! I said. I was angry at myself because I really wanted a sandwich, L but I knew Wendy was first.
Hope you like it :P
It was a little long because my last Pov was way to short!
BTW-I need to eat a sandwich!!!! Yeah I’m a bipolar girl :P
-Andrea
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Posted at: 8:22 pm on January 31, 2012
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hey HammerJunior1!!!
I don´t know?? You should ask Andrea, Wendy and Atom since I would practically say YES to anyone, so you better ask THEM!!!
Ana
PS: If anyone was interested, my nose is ok :P
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Posted at: 8:46 pm on January 31, 2012
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Hey, junior writers. Just checking out what was new in this story. And it's so AWESOME! Continue please!
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Posted at: 9:28 am on February 1, 2012
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Hey guys.
Fun fact: You know, it IS real!!! I DO call Andrea Nitwick as a joke.
Ana
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Posted at: 5:37 pm on February 1, 2012
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Hey guys! It came out wrong :P
here is the correct one.
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Andrea's Pov:
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After 1 hour.................
"I’m tired" Ana said, while walking on the street.
"Atom I thought you said NOT FAR AWAY" I started to say.
Imagine walking and never stopping. We were supposed to find a truck, a big one I guess, but we didn’t found anything.
"Now how are we supposed to find Wendy?" Ana took out a map, which was actually a miracle. "Atom, this is your entire fault!!!!"
Atom raised his voice "Excuse me, but who is the one who just crash the car?" he said angry.
"Guys stop fighting!" I shouted "You think I’m happy about Wendy being kidnapped? You think I love to walk for like an hour without stopping or complaining?"
"Ern...........yes?"
"Well no. I hate not having a clue of where is Wendy. And seriously I hate to walk." I felt released “So, if I can handle it, I guess you could to."
"Calm down Andry, I guess we stop complaining for a while. If that’s what you want." Ana said, trying to calm me down.
"Yeah, I’ll try not to mess with Ana" Atom said with a laugh.
"Or should I say: I’ll try not to mess with Atom" Ana corrected.
"No Ana! I am the one who messes with you!" Atom said "Remember?"
Before they could say anything I said "Guys!"
"Oh yeah, sorry" Both Ana and Atom said at the same time :P
And we kept walking......
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"Hey, I guess I found something" I said.
A truck. But it looked as if someone had been there, VESPERS was my first thought, but I wasn’t sure.
"Should we be worried about this?" Ana sounded serious. (Wow 2 miracles in a day!)
"I don’t know if we should, but we have to investigate about this. I mean, what if they where VESPERS?" Atom answered.
"Well, while you guys investigate, I will eat a sandwich" I was totally relaxed: D
"Nitwick, are you serious! You are a total bipolar!" Ana laughed
"Well, I do have my moments!" I told her "Besides I can’t be frustrated all time, I know I’m a little, but I also am an exciting girl, you’ll never know what comes next."
"That’s what I like about you, but seriously a sandwich!!!!"
"Guys, we don’t have time to discuss" Atom interrupted. "And I will like to eat a sandwich"
"Are we forgetting something?" Ana asked
"That we don’t have money to buy sandwiches?" I was still thinking of food.
"No, Wendy!" Ana reminded us "The reason we came here....."
"Argh!" I was mad at myself because I really wanted a sandwich. But Wendy was first.
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-Andrea
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Posted at: 6:33 pm on February 1, 2012
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Is it my turn now?
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Posted at: 7:25 am on February 2, 2012
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I.Say.No. I'm sorry, but that spelling doesnt make me happy. (As the only boy writer, i'm the hardest to impress)
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Posted at: 6:00 pm on February 2, 2012
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Wendy I guess It is your turn!
-Andrea
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Posted at: 6:23 pm on February 2, 2012
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Wendy's POV: Even though I'd tried to resist, it hadn't been enough. Eventually, I was forced to give up and pass out again. The next time I woke up, I was completely exhausted. Whatever those Vespers had given me was probably not supposed to kill me, they would want me alive as bait, just to exhaust me, play with me, and mess with my mind. It was doing all of the above. First, I thought I was still lying on the lab table I had been on before. This time, the room was completely empty. I wasn't blindfolded, gagged, or tied up, so I could look around the room this time. It was some sort of lab. By the way it felt, I thought it was underground somewhere. Surgical instruments littered the floor, and bright blue cabinets lined the walls. Suddenly, the room started swaying, then spinning, then slowly darkening. I didn't resist this time; I just let myself pass out.
The second time I woke up, I was in a different room. I had a little more energy, but not enough to do anything. It looked like I was in some sort of bedroom. I could tell that I was still underground. The bedroom was furnished with plush, velvet couches, and beautiful red tapestries. I was lying on a gorgeus bed that had curtains hanging down around me. The bed was made of a velvet green, and the curtains were a lighter green. To me, it looked like I was lying under a weeping willow tree. Slowly, I sat up. I could hear voices in another room. The voices were getting closer. I cocked my head and tried to hear what they were saying. Finally, I picked up a few words. "She's too aware," one voice said. "I know," another replied. "They are getting closer too. We should move." "No," the first voice answered. "We will stay right here and let them come to us. The Cahill they want will be heavily guarded. Just let them try to save her." That was too much. The room started spinning, swaying, and slowly darkening again. With an annoyed sigh, I passed out once again.
The third time I awoke, I felt like all the poison was gone. Almost all of my energy had returned, and I felt almost as good as new. For the third time, I had moved. Now, I was in some sort of prison cell. I was still underground, that I could tell, but I also knew that I was heavily guarded now. There was a small window near the ceiling, but I couldn't reach it. The room was completely empty. I stood up, then sat back down. All I could do now was hope. Hope that Ana and Andrea were on their way. Hope that they could make it through the Vespers' defenses. And hope that I wouldn't die of boredom before they reached me. What felt like days later, but I'm sure it was only hours, one of the walls swung open. I turned to face that direction and saw...something that surprised me like never before.
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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Posted at: 11:47 am on February 3, 2012
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uhhh.... thanks. glad your nose is ok. uh. i guesss.. other people, can i write with you? thanks! -susie
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Posted at: 3:46 pm on February 3, 2012
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Cool it's good so far!
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Posted at: 7:38 pm on February 3, 2012
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Wendy,what did you saw!!!! I am freak out...need to read more :P
Atom what did you mean by: That spelling doesn`t makes me happy. (my spelling?) If its mine tell me, so I can improve it :P
Ana! Who turn is it?
Listening to: I`d Lie (Taylor Swift)
-Andrea
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Posted at: 10:19 pm on February 3, 2012
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nice story!
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Posted at: 3:27 pm on February 4, 2012
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I think it's yours Andry because we skipped you before. And all of you will just have to wait to find out what I saw until my next turn...
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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Posted at: 10:38 am on February 5, 2012
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Errrr......guys?? bad news:
Andrea is busy doing who-knows-what and she might not be able to post this WEEK!!!..........or at least, thats what she told me
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Posted at: 5:16 pm on February 7, 2012
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So...who's going to post?
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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Posted at: 7:49 am on February 8, 2012
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If you want, I´ll post.
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Posted at: 7:02 pm on February 9, 2012
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Hi! I'm Back!!!!
But still I can't post my part now,I am way to busy.
Sorry :(
I just came here to say HI!
Ana you could post instead of me.
I will post in the weekend,when I am NOT making my Book In A Bag.
GTG
-Andrea
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Posted at: 8:41 pm on February 9, 2012
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Someone just post!
Name: Wendy Age: 13
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"It's not my fault; I'm just the author!" -Me (Wendy)
Posted at: 12:00 pm on February 12, 2012
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